外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 2 Making a difference优质课课件ppt

Period Five　Writing—Writing a biography

本单元的写作目标是“写一篇人物传记”。人物传记主要是介绍某人的基本信息及其事迹。一般是介绍人物的童年、少年、青年、中年及老年的成长经历(包括生活、工作和学习)，末尾一般总述人物的功绩成就，也可以在记叙成长经历的同时加入一些议论。一般需要注意以下几点：

1．说明介绍这个人的原因；

2．选择这个人的主要成就、重要事件并按照事件发生的顺序进行介绍；

3．进行简要评论并总结全文。

1．He was from a poor peasant’s family.

2．By the age of 14，he had taught himself advanced mathematics.

3．...started learning...when he was only...

4．Of all my favorite scientists，I admire him best.

5．In my opinion，...is one of the most popular...in the world.

6．At one point，...

7．He is a worthy person for us to learn from.

8．He is loved and respected by us all.

9．She will always be remembered as a great woman.

10．He is such a learned person that we...

请根据以下提示介绍我国第一飞天女刘洋。

1．1978年10月出生，1997年8月入伍。

2．2012年6月16日和另外两名宇航员乘神州九号宇宙飞船进行太空飞行，2012年6月29日返回，成为中国第一飞天女。通过这次太空飞行她为中国航天事业的发展做出了巨大贡献，受到很多人的崇拜。

3．善良友好，勤奋自信。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

审题

写作要求是介绍女飞行员刘洋。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇人物传记，写作中应注意人物传记的常规格式。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。

3．主体人称：由于是介绍一个人物，所以应该用第三人称。

谋篇

第一段：开门见山，引入话题——介绍女飞行员刘洋。

第二段：介绍其具体事迹。

第三段：总结全文，进行评价。

核心词汇

1．参军join the army

2．第一个做某事的人the first person to do sth.

3．为……做贡献contribute to...

4．因为……而被崇拜be admired for...

连词成句

1．众所周知，刘洋是中国第一个遨游太空的女飞行员。(astronaut，visit outer space)

We all know that Liu Yang is the first woman astronaut to visit outer space in our country.

2．这次旅行很伟大，使得她成为遨游太空的中国第一个女飞行员。(make)

This trip was very great and it made her the first Chinese woman astronaut who has visited outer space.

3．虽然刘洋成就斐然，但是她仍然很谦虚，这给我们留下了深刻印象。(achieve，modest，impress)

Although Liu Yang has achieved a lot，she is still so modest and it has impressed us greatly.

句式升级

1．根据要求改写句1

(1)As we all know，Liu Yang is the first woman astronaut to visit outer space in our country.(as)

(2)It is known that Liu Yang is the first woman astronaut to visit outer space in our country.(it作形式主语)

2．用现在分词短语改写句2

This trip was very great，making her the first Chinese woman astronaut who has visited outer space.

3．用非限制性定语从句改写句3

Although Liu Yang has achieved a lot，she is still so modest，which has impressed us greatly.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

As we all know，Liu Yang is the first woman astronaut to visit outer space in our country.She was born in October 1978 and joined the army in August 1997.On June 16,2012，she traveled into space as well as another two astronauts on Shenzhou Ⅸ spacecraft and safely returned on June 29,2012.This trip was very great，making her the first Chinese woman astronaut who has visited outer space.Through this space flight she contributed greatly to China’s space development and she was also admired for it.

Although Liu Yang has achieved a lot，she is still so modest，which has impressed us greatly.