高中英语Unit 6 Earth first精品ppt课件

Period Five　Writing—Writing a persuasive letter

本单元的写作目标是“劝说信”。劝说信要求就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题劝说某人采纳自己的建议或看法。可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作：

第一部分：引入话题。写信人首先需要说明写信的主要目的。如果需要的话，也可以大致作一下自我介绍。

第二部分：阐述理由。这是劝说信的主体和核心部分。写信人需要在这部分有条理地列出自己的理由。理由要客观，真实，有说服力，要重点突出，层次分明。同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功力，以便更好地展现自己的立场。

第三部分：总结全文。重申自己的核心观点，提出希望。这部分要注意语言的简练和冲击力，切记冗杂拖拉的表达。

1．引入：

(1)I am writing to...

(2)These days we are often told that...But is this really the case...

(3)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...

(4)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(5)Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that...

(6)I was very worried when I heard that...

2．阐述：

(1)Here are my reasons.First of all，I think it would be better if...

(2)On the one hand...，on the other hand...

(3)Moreover.../What’s more...

(4)However.../Instead...

(5)Here I’d like to give my advice on...

(6)I would like to suggest that.../If I were you，I would...

3．总结：

(1)All things considered...

(2)As far as I’m concerned...

(3)Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.

(4)I do hope that...

假如你是李华，请你给你校所有学生写一封80词左右的说服性信函，说明环境的重要性，现在存在的问题并提出合理建议，希望同学们行动起来保护环境。

注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

审题

写作要求是给全体同学写一封信，劝他们行动起来，共同保护环境。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。

3．主体人称：人称应该以第一人称为主。

谋篇

第一段：应开门见山，引入话题。

第二段：阐述理由，给出建议。

第三段：总结全文，发出希望。

核心词汇

1．照顾take care of

2．污染pollution

3．灾难disaster

4．环境environment

5．循环利用recycle

6．对……做贡献make a contribution to

连词成句

1．我们都生活在地球上，这儿是我们的家园。(用定语从句)

We all live on the earth which is our home.

2．我们只有一个地球。

We have only one earth.

3．我们必须照顾好地球。

We must take good care of the earth.

4．保护环境是我们的责任。(it作形式主语)

It’s our duty to protect our environment.

5．我们应该要求政府控制工厂的污染。(ask)

We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

6．如果每个人对环境保护作出贡献，地球将变得更加美丽。(条件状语从句)

If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment，the earth will become much more beautiful.

句式升级

1．请用so将句2和句3合成一句话。

We have only one earth so we must take good care of it.

2．请把句5改为定语从句。

We should ask our government to control the pollution which is from the factories.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Dear Everyone，

We all live on the earth which is our home.We have only one earth so we must take good care of it.There are three problems on our earth，which are pollution，disaster and illness.

It’s our duty to protect our environment.First，we should save every drop of water，such as turning off the taps after using it.Second，we should save energy，such as turning off the lights when we leave，doing more walking and so on.Third，we should ask our government to control the pollution which is from the factories.

Let’s act now to save our environment.If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment，the earth will become much more beautiful.

Yours，

Li Hua