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专题07 闲暇活动-备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)
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备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练
(高考模拟+名校真题)
专题07 闲暇活动
1．（2021·江苏镇江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
“Hey, man, I’m hungry,” I said. “I’m going to go get something to eat.”
My friend Gabe smiled and warmly responded, “Alright, but you’re crazy. I can’t stop. The weather’s so good! Look for me here at the bottom of this lift (滑雪者用的上下缆车) when you’re done. I’m gonna go take some more runs.”
I released my bindings and began to walk in the direction of the smell of hot pizza. I shouted over my shoulder, “I’ll catch up to you later.”
I didn’t think twice about those few little words at the time. My friend Gabe and I had been snowboarding all morning. I was too hungry to take another run, so I decided to eat something at the lodge.
After a quick slice of pizza in the lodge, I would soon be back on the mountain with my friend. But taking a break from this snow-capped playground was just not something Gabe would do. He continued back to the crowded life line with a sparkle (火花) in his eyes. I remember thinking: that guy is never going to stop riding, not on a day like this at least.
As I waited for my mom at the lodge, I saw Mona, the other kid Gabe and I had been riding with that day, was standing by the parking lot and she looked beat. As I got closer, I saw that she had tears in her eyes.
There was nothing left for Santa to say except,
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As his mother glanced up, she noticed that Santa, the elves, and even the cameraman had tears in their eyes.
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2．（2021·江苏淮安·高三期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As mountains go,1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn’t particularly grand. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming self-satisfied with its steep,slippery cliffs(悬崖) , resulting in countless injuries and even deaths.
Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak’s record.Therefore, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the vista; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the cliff with her husband.
When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two turned to continue on their way. Suddenly,he heard a heavy dull sound, he told the Cornell Daily Sun. Then he heard something chilling: “Paula! Paula!” a man yelled wildly. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was no-where to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees.Grant told his mother,“I hate to say this, but they’re probably going to find a body.”
Uncertain they could help, Grant and his mother headed down the trail. But when he saw hikers still searching, he decided to lend a hand. “My young dumb brain was like, ‘I can do it,’” he says.After assuring his mother that he would be safe, he made a long and difficult journey alone, hoping he wasn’t too late.
After 15 minutes of scrambling over the large rock, pushing past prickly(多刺的)brush,and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rocky.
The woman had fallen about 75 feet.
Unexpectedly,she was alive.
“Paula!” Grant shouted.“Paula.Is that you?”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The woman barely responded.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top.
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3．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a cold winter. After work, I returned home. I started to take my coat off, when my son Justin ran through the door of his room. He shouted, “Dad! Dad! I’m going to play baseball tonight.”
“Where at?”
“I don’t know! It’s downtown somewhere. Dad, it’s just downtown. We’ll find it.” I pulled my jacket back on. He took the baseball glove. It fit his left hand; he was left handed—not a good match. “So where are we going?” I asked.
“ I don’t know, Dad.”He ran to the door. “It’s downtown.” Saint John was not a big city. There were only a few blocks in either direction. “ I think it’s in the south end, Dad.” My son stared at me and held his glove. “ We’ll find it.”
We crossed the city center and entered the south end. We saw a few kids with gloves on their hands. “ I guess we’re heading in the right direction, son. Those kids look like they are ready for a baseball game.”
Justin’s eyes were sparkled with excitement, “ See? I told you, Dad.”“ I always believe in you, Justin.” I replied with a big smile. We found the field. The wind froze the parents through to the bone, but the kids failed to notice it. Their minds were on baseball.
It was a rag-tag group of boys and girls, just enough to form three teams. It was a poor league and there were no uniforms. They were lucky to have shirts that matched. They played in T-shirts and jeans. The young kids had no idea where the ball was to be thrown. I would have laughed, but my son was one of the ones throwing the ball to the wrong base. The three teams battled with each other, won and lost. The coaches, who were actually just elder kids, were patient. It was a game and they treated it that way. At the same time, they taught and encouraged the younger players.
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I heard that they would take part in the city baseball competition the next summer.
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Nine months later, in winter, they attended the second city baseball competition.
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4．（2019·全国·高一课时练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I recently attended a Little League baseball game held in Nassau County. It turned out to be a lesson on how not to parent a Little Leaguer.
I went there to watch a family friend play ball. School was winding down, and it was possible that stress levels would below, especially on the ball field. These kids were supposed to be having fun. But why did they look so angry? Why were the parents so tense? These were 11-and 12-year-old children, not professionals. But it seemed that the parents were not aware of that.
Some of the kids looked miserable. Both coaches were shouting at their players. With every pitch (投), every catch and every swing of the bat came sounds of “No, not like that!” or “Better keep that up, son!” After a while , it seemed to have a negative effect on the kids.
In the fifth game, after a player missed a play on the infield, a man told the boy, “Pay attention to the action! Get your head in the game!” The player responded, “Dad, it’s just a game, and I’m exhausted!”
I thought to myself how embarrassing that must have been for both of them. It’s been years since I was on the field, but I played in many different sports leagues as a kid. I recall how competitive some parents were when it came to watching their children. And it’s fine to want your children to win. Winning is important.
But winning is not everything. Is that the message you want to get across to your child—to win at all costs, and to put fun second? Because that is certainly what it seemed like, and that’s not the healthiest environment for a kid, not in Little League, anyway.
I played for and against my share of competitive coaches. But at the baseball game, the parents seemed to care about the outcome much more than their kids. Arguments over whose kid was the better pitcher and calls missed by the judge often broke out between parents in the stands.
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It seemed as if the kids weren’t the ones who got up on Saturday morning to go and play with friends.
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They’re just kids. Let them be kids.
5．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Craig watched his old sister, Riley, and her friend Liz race up and down the lake on their skates, avoiding other hockey(曲棍球) players. Their skate blades looked like silver smoke. When the game was over, the girls skated up to the bench where Craig was sitting. Craig asked Riley what skating felt like.
“When I go really fast, I feel like I am flying,” she said.
That is silly, thought Craig. Flying is something birds do in the air, not something people do on ice skates.
Then he watched Riley go back out on the ice. She skated around and around the edge of the lake with her arms pumping and her scarf trailing behind her. Soon she went so fast that her arms looked like wings and her scarf looked like a feathery tail. Maybe skating really was like flying.
When Riley sat down to take her skates off, Craig said, “I wish I could fly.”
Riley retied her skate laces and bent next to Craig. “Get on my back,” she said, and Craig did. Riley started skating, but Craig didn’t feel like he was flying. It just felt like a skating piggyback ride.
“You are too heavy,” Riley said, “I can’t go fast when I am carrying you.” She skated slowly back to the bench. Craig got off her back. “Even if you could go fast, I wouldn’t be flying.” he said sadly. “I need skates to fly.”
Riley didn’t say anything on the walk home, but a few days later she asked Craig if he wanted to go skating.
“To watch?” he asked. “No, to skate,” she said cheerfully. “Mom and I found a pair of my old skates. They might fit you.” The skates were a little big, but when Riley stuffed newspaper in the toes, they fit. Craig couldn’t stop smiling. He didn’t want to take them off, but he had to so he could walk to the lake. Riley and Liz went with him. They carried their hockey sticks and a wooden chair. Hardly had they got to the lake when Craig put his skates back on and Riley helped him onto the ice.
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Then she put his hands on the back of the chair.
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After a while, each girl took one of Craig’s hands.
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6．（2021·江苏镇江·高一期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was not uncommon to see a person like me in an amusement park, who held purses, cellphones and sunglasses while others enjoyed themselves riding roller coasters. I admitted their courage, but refused to challenge myself.
One day when we were at the Happy Amusement Park in Seattle, my friends tried to get me to ride a roller coaster. But the click, click, click of the cars climbing up the tracks made me scared. The stop at the top, before falling with people's screams, seemed terrible.
My friends were still trying to persuade me, and I was saying no as usual, when I suddenly saw a familiar face, one I had never seen in real life. It was Raine, a popular young tennis star at the top of her game, who was my heroine. I pulled out a pen and the only paper that I could find and walked to her.
She was making her way through a rope that led to a ride called the Loudest Scream. I was running fast because I didn't want to miss the chance to meet her face to face, but I was also a bit nervous. So I waited at the exit to calm down and get closer to her as she came off the ride.
Several minutes later, she got out from the exit, laughing and talking with her brother. I focused on her walking toward me. She walked past. It was more difficult to talk to a star than I thought, but I had to take the chance. I called her name, not very confidently, but more like a question, “Raine?” She turned around. Our eyes actually met. “Would you mind signing for me?” I asked, handing the pen and paper toward her. Her hand wrote over the paper and she said, “You are the first person who has recognized me in the park so let's take a roller coaster together.”
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Her warm invitation actually filled me with mixed feelings.
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My friend came up and asked, “Are you sure you will take the Loudest Scream?”
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7．（2020·全国·高二课时练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Adventures Through the Gorge
We put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.It was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay.
Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,I saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.It was beautiful.
As we moved farther down the river,I heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.It seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.It felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;I thought I was going to die.It was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom.
After we got through the rapids,I was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.It was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.It took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump off the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in.
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.
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8．（2020·山东·高三期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On one sunny afternoon in August, Riley and I were over the moon when Mom and Dad said we were renting an RV for family camping trip because our family hadn’t been out for several months. Mom researched nearby areas for a long time and finally zeroed in on a campground up in the mountains, about five hours away from our home. We packed everything we’d need—sleeping bags, tents, chairs, sunscreen, and about a million other things—into the RV and headed off to the mountains.
On the way, Riley and I talked happily about what we would do in the evening: singing, dancing around the fire, enjoying the moon, and a million other things. Arriving at the campsite, Dad drove past a small office building but then hit the brakes when he saw someone run out and wave for him to stop. Apparently, we needed to stop to register for our campsite.
After registering at the front office, Dad drove the RV down to the camping area and parked. “Riley, Sean, you need to help set up the site,” Mom said. We all pitched in, dragging out our camp chairs, and other supplies, and soon we were ready to kick back and relax. Sitting at the picnic table, I popped opened a bag of chips.
“Let’s get some music going,” Dad said. “Hey, where’s the electrical hook-up?” “Oh, boy,” Mom said, “We are in the tents-only area, where there’s no electricity. We’re not even supposed to be in this area with an RV.” We had no choice but to choose another camping site.
Twenty minutes later, we’d broken camp and packed everything back in the RV. Mom drove around the campgrounds until we spotted other RVs and then pulled to a stop. After we unpacked everything, I sniffed and was immediately slammed with the most horrible stench I’d ever smelled in my entire life. “We’re right near the dumpsters!” I groaned. What to do next? Again we had no choice but to find a new one.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 开头已给出。
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We quickly shoved everything back into the RV, and drove to a different spot.
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Dad finally laughed and said, “It’s time to start enjoying this camping trip. Let’s get a fire started.”
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参考答案
1．There was nothing left for Santa to say except, “Nelson, I am sure that your Daddy is in Heaven, looking down today, and loves you and your Mom very much, and is very proud of you.” As Nelson scampered down and ran towards his mother, he turned to Santa and said, “If you can, will you tell my Daddy that I love him too, that I miss him, and that I am trying my best to be the man of the house and watch after Mommy.” As Nelson grabbed his mother's hand, he said, “Santa told me that he was sure that Daddy loved us both.”
As his mother glanced up, she noticed that Santa, the elves, and even the cameraman had tears in their eyes. The mother then turned to Nelson, put her arms around him and said, “I know your Dad loved us very much and is watching over us.” Nelson's last words as they continued on their way were, “Maybe someday I will grow up to be just like him.” She turned to him, smiled, and said, “I truly hope so. He was a wonderful husband and Dad.”
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友Gabe去滑雪，Gabe觉得天气挺好想多滑几圈。因为滑了一上午的雪，作者觉得很饿，在回到小木屋吃完披萨。当作者在小木屋等待妈妈的时候看见了一个Mona在停车场哭泣。圣诞老人对尼尔森说他的爸爸在天堂正在俯视着下面，爸爸为他她感到自豪。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“圣诞老人没有什么好说的了，除了”可知，第一段可描写圣诞老人告诉尼尔森他爸爸想说的话。
由第二段首句内容“他的妈妈抬头看的时候，她注意到圣诞老人、小精灵们，甚至摄影师的眼里都含着泪水。”可知，第二段可描写尼尔森的母亲对他说的话。
2.续写线索：自豪——爱爸爸——照顾妈妈——眼含泪水
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跑向：run towards/run to
②抓住：grab/grapple
情绪类
①极好的：wonderful/excellent
②自豪的：proud/beamish
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As Nelson scampered down and ran towards his mother, he turned to Santa and said, “If you can, will you tell my Daddy that I love him too, that I miss him, and that I am trying my best to be the man of the house and watch after Mommy.”（状语从句）
[高分句型2] There was nothing left for Santa to say except, “Nelson, I am sure that your Daddy is in Heaven, looking down today, and loves you and your Mom very much, and is very proud of you.”（现在分词做状语）
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The woman barely responded. She was clearly hurt and almost mad. Grant called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more. Afraid that in her muddled state of mind, she might tumble off the outcropping to her death, Grant crawled on all fours up a tight, narrow path, gaining traction by digging into the dirt with his fingers and feet until he reached Paula. She was moaning and barely making sense. Her head, arms, and legs were bleeding. Securing himself against a tree, Grant gently put her hand in his and tried to keep her mind off the pain by peppering her with questions.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top. To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher. Rescuers at the summit lifted the stretcher to the top and then carried her to a waiting ATV. Eventually, Paula and her husband would be flown by helicopter to a hospital
【分析】
本文以格兰特和他的母亲一起爬山为线索展开。讲述了格兰特开学前一周，和他的母亲一起爬斯阔峰，一名叫宝拉的穿粉色衣服的女士和她的丈夫正在悬崖边旁攀爬。突然，宝拉从悬崖边摔下去了。格兰特和几个徒步者开始去寻找她，后来格兰特在一块岩石上发现了宝拉，他打了911报告了位置，陪着宝拉直到救援人员赶到，用直升机把她送往医院。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那个女人几乎没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写格兰特发现宝拉受伤了，格兰特打911申请救援，设法靠近宝拉，并陪着她等候救援。
②由第二段首句内容“大约45分钟后，第一批救援人员到达山顶。”可知，第二段写第一批救援人员赶到，用担架抬宝拉到山顶，等待直升机来接宝拉送往医院。
2.续写线索：发现宝拉受伤——拨打911——陪着宝拉等待救援——救援赶到——等待直升机将宝拉送往医院。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回应：respond/reply /answer
②.到达：arrive on/reach
③.抬：lift/promote
情绪类
①.发疯的，混乱的：mad /crazy
②.糊涂的：muddled / confused/ chaotic
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.（由连接副词where引导的地点状语从句）
[高分句型2].
To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher.（运用了动词不定式to reach them作目的状语）
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I heard that they would take part in the city baseball competition the next summer. I was surprised. With only a few months left, how could they make it? The kids even were throwing the baseball to the wrong base. But they were determined to do so. From that day on, the kids got together every weekend to practice baseball. And the young coaches taught them patiently. Six months later, the kids finished the competition and got last place. My son was upset. That night, I had to hold and comfort him, telling him that it would be better the next time.
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Nine months later, in winter, they attended the second city baseball competition. Most of the kids were back. The same coaches encouraged them. The kids were familiar with each other. They knew each other’s strengths and weaknesses and tried to help each other. My son was there. He did a good job. The team went to the finals and won second place this time. The young players, the coaches and all the parents there cried with joy.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章以故事发展为线索，讲述了一个寒冷冬日的傍晚，儿子让作者带他去打棒球。他们穿过小城，来到南边，发现了一群孩子在打棒球。他们球技不好，甚至连专业的教练都没有，却非常有热情。
【详解】
1.段落续写。
①由第一段首句内容“我听说他们明年夏天要参加城市棒球比赛。”可知，下文可以描述作者的担忧，以及这次比赛的结果（失败）。
②由第二段首句内容“九个月后的冬天，他们参加了第二届城市棒球比赛。”可知，下文可以描述他们经过长时间的训练，球技提高，有了默契，这次比赛取得了好结果。
2.续写线索：准备夏天参加比赛——作者担忧——比赛失败——安慰儿子——参加冬季比赛——取得好成绩——众人激动兴奋
3.词汇激活
行为类
①成功：succeed/make it
②决心做某事：be determined to do/ decide to do/ make up one's mind to do
情绪类
①惊讶：surprised/ shocked/ astonished
②伤心的：upset/ sad/ heart-broken
③耐心地：with patience/ patiently
【点睛】
[高分句型1] That night, I had to hold and comfort him, telling him that it would be better the next time.（句中运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]With only a few months left, how could they make it? （句中运用了with复合结构）
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It seemed as if the kids weren’t the ones who got up on Saturday morning to go and play with friends. Instead, the parents were expecting too much of their kids and pushing them too hard. They were not aware how stupidly they were behaving and totally ignored the feelings of the kids. I’m not saying these were bad parents. But I found it hard for the kids to have fun in the game.
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They’re just kids. Let them be kids. Parents pay league fees so that their children can play a sport, join a team and make new friends. At that age, winning is not the most important thing. What matters most is having fun. It is normal for some kids to play better than others because each kid is good at doing different things. It is wise of parents to let their kids enjoy the game and learn a thing or two. If not, then join an adult league of their own, and leave their kids out of their fantasies.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者最近参加了一场小型棒球联盟比赛，作者去那里是为了看一个家族朋友打球，在看球的过程中作者发现很多父母对孩子要求很高，把输赢看的更重要，大多数孩子很痛苦，根本感受不到打球的乐趣。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看起来周六早上起来和朋友玩的不是他们。”可知，第一段可描写这些来打球的孩子看起来不是来和朋友玩的，而是父母对孩子们要求太高，孩子失去了乐趣。
②由第二段首句内容“他们只是孩子。让他们做自己。”可知，第二段可描写作者希望父母们能明白对于孩子最重要的不是赢而是玩的开心。
2.续写线索：父母期望值高——没有意识到——希望父母意识到——享受比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类
①逼得太紧：push them too hard /put too much pressure on them
②没有意识到：not aware /unaware/unconscious
③重要：matter/count
情绪类
①开心：having fun / having a good time
②愚蠢地：stupidly /foolishly
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[高分句型1]. They were not aware how stupidly they were behaving and totally ignored the feelings of the kids.（由连接词how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. It is normal for some kids to play better than others because each kid is good at doing different things.（it作形式主语和because引导的原因状语从句）
5．Then she put his hands on the back of the chair. “ Hang on to this and you won’t fall.” she said. His feet trembling, Craig tried to move cautiously with his hands grabbing the chair firmly. Riley and Liz cheered him on as he started to move forward. But Craig slowly lowered his head, frowning, as he inched along and he even couldn’t skate without the chair. This wasn’t like flying at all. Realizing his frustration, Riley patted his shoulder and comforted, “ It take practice. Someday you will.” Then she winked at Liz and whispered something to her.
After a while, each girl took one of Craig’s hands. “ Someday you will fly on your own,” Riley said. “ But today Liz and I will help you.” They started skating, pulling Craig with them. The girls went faster and faster , and so did he. Craig felt the wind touching his face merrily with brilliant sparkle in his eyes. When he looked down, his skate blades looked like a sliver light. “ I am flying!” he yelled, and the words blew away in the wind like a bird’s happy song.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Craig看到姐姐们在冰上打曲棍球时就像飞一样，而Craig在莱利背上感觉不到自己在飞，感觉就像骑在溜冰背上一样。Craig穿上滑冰鞋，在莱利的帮助下上了冰。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后她把他的手放在椅背上。”可知，第一段可描写教Craig如何在冰上滑动。首先抓紧这个椅子，就不会掉下去。Craig的脚在颤抖，试图谨慎地移动，他的手紧紧抓住椅子。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，每个女孩都拉着克雷格的一只手。”可知，第二段可描写姐姐们帮助他在冰上滑动，并告诉他有一天他会独自像飞翔一样滑冰。
2.续写线索：抓紧椅子——试图滑动——难过——安慰——帮助——飞起来
3.词汇激活
行为类
紧紧抓住：Hang on to /catch firmly
小心移动：move cautiously / carefully move
大喊：yell/shout/at the top of one’s voice
情绪类
高兴的：happy /delighted/joyful
小心谨慎地：cautiously /with cautiousness
【点睛】
[高分句型1] His feet trembling, Craig tried to move cautiously with his hands grabbing the chair firmly.with的独立主格结构）
[高分句型2] But Craig slowly lowered his head, frowning, as he inched along and he even couldn’t skate without the chair.（句中as引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型3] When he looked down, his skate blades looked like a sliver light.（句中when引导时间状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Her warm invitation actually filled me with mixed feelings. On the one hand, I felt extremely excited that I was the only fan who got the priceless opportunity. I admired Raine very much and was eager to stay with her a little longer. On the other hand, I was scared of riding a roller coaster. The thought of having a try nearly pushed me to the verge of collapse. However, I must take the chance and it didn’t take much time to make my final decision. Mustering my courage, I nodded firmly and went to the roller coaster with her.
My friend came up and asked, “Are you sure you will take the Loudest Scream?” “Yes,” I answered without hesitation. She was rather surprised, with her mouth open and eyes widened. After all, she had spent years trying to persuade me but in vain. Fears of heights and moving too fast seemed unimportant to me now. Although I screamed during the entire time like a girl being chased by a hungry wolf, spending a good time with my idol made all of it worthwhile and my fear was miraculously overcome. And since then, I have lived in a world where I am a bit braver.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在游乐场的一次经历。在游乐场一向害怕去玩过山车的作者和朋友一起去了西雅图的快乐游乐园，偶遇了自己心目中的英雄——网球明星Raine，不想错过能与她面对面交流的机会，作者鼓足勇气索要签名，而Raine则向作者提出一起坐过山车的提议。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她的热情邀请实际上使我百感交集。”可知，第一段可描写作者复杂的心情，一方面想要抓住能与她多呆一会儿的机会，另一方面讲述自己对于过山车的害怕，但最终还是会答应她的邀请。
②由第二段首句内容“我的朋友走过来问：‘你确定要坐过山车吗？’”可知，第二段可描写朋友对于我要坐过山车的惊讶和作者坐上过山车之后的感受，以及心境变化，不再害怕，变得勇敢。
2.续写线索：兴奋和纠结——决定坐过山车——朋友惊讶——坐过山车的经历——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住机会：take the chance / seize the opportunity
②做最后的决定：make my final decision / make up one’s mind finally
③克服：overcome / conquer
情绪类
①兴奋的：excited / thrilled
②害怕的：scared / afraid / frightened
③惊讶的：surprised / amazed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. On the one hand, I felt extremely excited that I was the only fan who got the priceless opportunity. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. And since then, I have lived in a world where I am a bit braver. (由关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句)
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.The raft raced down the rapids.Water was splashing on the rocks,letting out louder noise.Screaming all the way down,I saw white water all over.I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out.If a little careless,we might hit one and get turned upside down.In the blink of an eye,we turned around the last huge rock,entering a small calm ride.When we settled at the bottom,I wanted to go back up and do it all again.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.“What did you think about that Category V rapids?” my dad asked.“I was super nervous at first.But when we hit the bottom,I wanted to do it once more.” “Would you say you become more confident of yourself?” he continued.“Yes,I would say I become much more confident of myself.” I smiled.We walked towards our campsite.
【分析】
本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述了作者与爸爸游览三峡险境，一开始跟着导游坐木筏前进，慢慢地接近一级级的急流，直到五级，作者与爸爸对三峡的险峻感到非常震撼，这次体验让作者变得更加勇敢，自信，并且还想再次体验。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段内容“大约三分钟后，第五类急流要来了。”可知第一段续写的内应该是在到达第五类急流之后发生的事情。
②由第二段内容“在冲下所有的急流后，我不在害怕了。”可知第二段续写应该描述冲下急流后发生了什么，以及作者和爸爸对本次体验的感想。
2.续写线索：接近五级急流——在五级急流的体验和感受——冲过急流之后——体验的感悟，变得更加勇敢和自信。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①移位：turn around/rolling over/up and down
②考虑：think about/ consider/feel like
③接触：get to/touch/hit
情绪类
①信心：become confident about/ brave/courageous
②恐惧：frightened/fear/horror
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out. (由because引导原因状语从句。)
[高分句型2]. But when we hit the bottom, I wanted to do it once more. (由when引导时间状语从句。)
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We quickly shoved everything back into the RV, and drove to a different spot. After making sure there were no bad smells, or any other problems, we unpacked all the things—and set up our campsite—again. When Mom tried to plug in the extension cord, she couldn’t find the electrical hook-up, and that’s because it was on the other side of the RV! We’d parked in the wrong direction. Dad climbed in the RV and started to turn it around. Pop! There must have been a sharp rock because now the RV had a flat tire. “What do we do now—call for help?” Mom asked.
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Dad finally laughed and said, “It’s time to start enjoying this camping trip. Let’s get a fire started.” Facing the dilemma, we had to follow Dad’s advice. Quickly, a fire was started, and we sat by it, relaxing ourselves from a day’s exhaustion. In the quiet mountain, under the starry sky, Dad and Mom began to sing, adding pleasant music to the unforgettable night. Though we had several setbacks, it was the best family camping trip I’ve ever had.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，8月的一个阳光明媚的下午，父母开着租来的房车带作者和Riley去露营，作者和Riley很开心。到了营地，大家开始搭建露营地，但发现这个地区没有电，家人别无选择的离开了营地；车行二十分钟后，发现其它房车，停车查看情况，却闻到了最可怕的臭味，附近有垃圾堆，作者和家人别无选择地再次离开。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我们迅速地把所有的东西都塞回房车里，开到另一个地方，所以本段应该写到了另一个露营地所发生的事情。第二段开头是：爸爸终于笑了，说:“是时候开始享受这次野营旅行了。让我们生火吧。”,本段应该写遇到了一些挫折后，家人一起战胜了挫折，这是作者和家人有生以来最棒的一次家庭露营旅行。
注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，要检查续写内容是否符合题目要求。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：When Mom tried to plug in the extension cord, she couldn’t find the electrical hook-up, and that’s because it was on the other side of the RV! 这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句和because引导的表语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如make sure ;turn around等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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专题07 闲暇活动
1．（2021·江苏镇江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
“Hey, man, I’m hungry,” I said. “I’m going to go get something to eat.”
My friend Gabe smiled and warmly responded, “Alright, but you’re crazy. I can’t stop. The weather’s so good! Look for me here at the bottom of this lift (滑雪者用的上下缆车) when you’re done. I’m gonna go take some more runs.”
I released my bindings and began to walk in the direction of the smell of hot pizza. I shouted over my shoulder, “I’ll catch up to you later.”
I didn’t think twice about those few little words at the time. My friend Gabe and I had been snowboarding all morning. I was too hungry to take another run, so I decided to eat something at the lodge.
After a quick slice of pizza in the lodge, I would soon be back on the mountain with my friend. But taking a break from this snow-capped playground was just not something Gabe would do. He continued back to the crowded life line with a sparkle (火花) in his eyes. I remember thinking: that guy is never going to stop riding, not on a day like this at least.
As I waited for my mom at the lodge, I saw Mona, the other kid Gabe and I had been riding with that day, was standing by the parking lot and she looked beat. As I got closer, I saw that she had tears in her eyes.
There was nothing left for Santa to say except,
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As his mother glanced up, she noticed that Santa, the elves, and even the cameraman had tears in their eyes.
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2．（2021·江苏淮安·高三期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As mountains go,1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn’t particularly grand. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming self-satisfied with its steep,slippery cliffs(悬崖) , resulting in countless injuries and even deaths.
Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak’s record.Therefore, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the vista; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the cliff with her husband.
When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two turned to continue on their way. Suddenly,he heard a heavy dull sound, he told the Cornell Daily Sun. Then he heard something chilling: “Paula! Paula!” a man yelled wildly. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was no-where to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees.Grant told his mother,“I hate to say this, but they’re probably going to find a body.”
Uncertain they could help, Grant and his mother headed down the trail. But when he saw hikers still searching, he decided to lend a hand. “My young dumb brain was like, ‘I can do it,’” he says.After assuring his mother that he would be safe, he made a long and difficult journey alone, hoping he wasn’t too late.
After 15 minutes of scrambling over the large rock, pushing past prickly(多刺的)brush,and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rocky.
The woman had fallen about 75 feet.
Unexpectedly,she was alive.
“Paula!” Grant shouted.“Paula.Is that you?”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The woman barely responded.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top.
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3．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a cold winter. After work, I returned home. I started to take my coat off, when my son Justin ran through the door of his room. He shouted, “Dad! Dad! I’m going to play baseball tonight.”
“Where at?”
“I don’t know! It’s downtown somewhere. Dad, it’s just downtown. We’ll find it.” I pulled my jacket back on. He took the baseball glove. It fit his left hand; he was left handed—not a good match. “So where are we going?” I asked.
“ I don’t know, Dad.”He ran to the door. “It’s downtown.” Saint John was not a big city. There were only a few blocks in either direction. “ I think it’s in the south end, Dad.” My son stared at me and held his glove. “ We’ll find it.”
We crossed the city center and entered the south end. We saw a few kids with gloves on their hands. “ I guess we’re heading in the right direction, son. Those kids look like they are ready for a baseball game.”
Justin’s eyes were sparkled with excitement, “ See? I told you, Dad.”“ I always believe in you, Justin.” I replied with a big smile. We found the field. The wind froze the parents through to the bone, but the kids failed to notice it. Their minds were on baseball.
It was a rag-tag group of boys and girls, just enough to form three teams. It was a poor league and there were no uniforms. They were lucky to have shirts that matched. They played in T-shirts and jeans. The young kids had no idea where the ball was to be thrown. I would have laughed, but my son was one of the ones throwing the ball to the wrong base. The three teams battled with each other, won and lost. The coaches, who were actually just elder kids, were patient. It was a game and they treated it that way. At the same time, they taught and encouraged the younger players.
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I heard that they would take part in the city baseball competition the next summer.
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Nine months later, in winter, they attended the second city baseball competition.
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4．（2019·全国·高一课时练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I recently attended a Little League baseball game held in Nassau County. It turned out to be a lesson on how not to parent a Little Leaguer.
I went there to watch a family friend play ball. School was winding down, and it was possible that stress levels would below, especially on the ball field. These kids were supposed to be having fun. But why did they look so angry? Why were the parents so tense? These were 11-and 12-year-old children, not professionals. But it seemed that the parents were not aware of that.
Some of the kids looked miserable. Both coaches were shouting at their players. With every pitch (投), every catch and every swing of the bat came sounds of “No, not like that!” or “Better keep that up, son!” After a while , it seemed to have a negative effect on the kids.
In the fifth game, after a player missed a play on the infield, a man told the boy, “Pay attention to the action! Get your head in the game!” The player responded, “Dad, it’s just a game, and I’m exhausted!”
I thought to myself how embarrassing that must have been for both of them. It’s been years since I was on the field, but I played in many different sports leagues as a kid. I recall how competitive some parents were when it came to watching their children. And it’s fine to want your children to win. Winning is important.
But winning is not everything. Is that the message you want to get across to your child—to win at all costs, and to put fun second? Because that is certainly what it seemed like, and that’s not the healthiest environment for a kid, not in Little League, anyway.
I played for and against my share of competitive coaches. But at the baseball game, the parents seemed to care about the outcome much more than their kids. Arguments over whose kid was the better pitcher and calls missed by the judge often broke out between parents in the stands.
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It seemed as if the kids weren’t the ones who got up on Saturday morning to go and play with friends.
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They’re just kids. Let them be kids.
5．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Craig watched his old sister, Riley, and her friend Liz race up and down the lake on their skates, avoiding other hockey(曲棍球) players. Their skate blades looked like silver smoke. When the game was over, the girls skated up to the bench where Craig was sitting. Craig asked Riley what skating felt like.
“When I go really fast, I feel like I am flying,” she said.
That is silly, thought Craig. Flying is something birds do in the air, not something people do on ice skates.
Then he watched Riley go back out on the ice. She skated around and around the edge of the lake with her arms pumping and her scarf trailing behind her. Soon she went so fast that her arms looked like wings and her scarf looked like a feathery tail. Maybe skating really was like flying.
When Riley sat down to take her skates off, Craig said, “I wish I could fly.”
Riley retied her skate laces and bent next to Craig. “Get on my back,” she said, and Craig did. Riley started skating, but Craig didn’t feel like he was flying. It just felt like a skating piggyback ride.
“You are too heavy,” Riley said, “I can’t go fast when I am carrying you.” She skated slowly back to the bench. Craig got off her back. “Even if you could go fast, I wouldn’t be flying.” he said sadly. “I need skates to fly.”
Riley didn’t say anything on the walk home, but a few days later she asked Craig if he wanted to go skating.
“To watch?” he asked. “No, to skate,” she said cheerfully. “Mom and I found a pair of my old skates. They might fit you.” The skates were a little big, but when Riley stuffed newspaper in the toes, they fit. Craig couldn’t stop smiling. He didn’t want to take them off, but he had to so he could walk to the lake. Riley and Liz went with him. They carried their hockey sticks and a wooden chair. Hardly had they got to the lake when Craig put his skates back on and Riley helped him onto the ice.
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After a while, each girl took one of Craig’s hands.
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6．（2021·江苏镇江·高一期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was not uncommon to see a person like me in an amusement park, who held purses, cellphones and sunglasses while others enjoyed themselves riding roller coasters. I admitted their courage, but refused to challenge myself.
One day when we were at the Happy Amusement Park in Seattle, my friends tried to get me to ride a roller coaster. But the click, click, click of the cars climbing up the tracks made me scared. The stop at the top, before falling with people's screams, seemed terrible.
My friends were still trying to persuade me, and I was saying no as usual, when I suddenly saw a familiar face, one I had never seen in real life. It was Raine, a popular young tennis star at the top of her game, who was my heroine. I pulled out a pen and the only paper that I could find and walked to her.
She was making her way through a rope that led to a ride called the Loudest Scream. I was running fast because I didn't want to miss the chance to meet her face to face, but I was also a bit nervous. So I waited at the exit to calm down and get closer to her as she came off the ride.
Several minutes later, she got out from the exit, laughing and talking with her brother. I focused on her walking toward me. She walked past. It was more difficult to talk to a star than I thought, but I had to take the chance. I called her name, not very confidently, but more like a question, “Raine?” She turned around. Our eyes actually met. “Would you mind signing for me?” I asked, handing the pen and paper toward her. Her hand wrote over the paper and she said, “You are the first person who has recognized me in the park so let's take a roller coaster together.”
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Her warm invitation actually filled me with mixed feelings.
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My friend came up and asked, “Are you sure you will take the Loudest Scream?”
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7．（2020·全国·高二课时练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Adventures Through the Gorge
We put the raft in the calm,cold water.I looked down.The water was like a mirror.It was a foggy morning,so I could barely make out what was down the river.When we took our places in the raft,I was in the back with my dad right across from me.Our tour guide was telling us the basics of rafting,and it seemed she was patronizing us!I was terrified.Since I was in the back,I was sure I would be the one to fall out.But I have always been an optimist,so I thought it would turn out okay.
Then I looked up and saw a big,gray cloud.I looked down at the river,and it started to get louder and closer to us;soon raindrops pelted us.Once we moved out of the rain,the clouds faded away,and the sun was shining down on us for the rest of the day.As I looked around,I saw the monstrous,green trees standing over me.It was beautiful.
As we moved farther down the river,I heard the water flowing gracefully.When we moved deeper into the gorge,it got louder and louder.This was our first rapids.It seemed that we were approaching the rapids slowly,but we were at the top of the rapids in the blink of an eye.It felt like time frozen.I was so excited and nervous;I thought I was going to die.It was a bumpy ride down.Getting splashed with water,we raced up and down the rocks.There was not a patch of dry skin on us by the time we hit the bottom.
After we got through the rapids,I was so excited!Going down made me feel I could do anything.Our tour guide told us we were going to approach Category V rapids.It was more intense than the Category I rapids,and I got a little more nervous.It took us a little while to get to the rapids because we had to go down a long river.We were allowed to jump off the raft and swim down the river until we had to get back in.
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.
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8．（2020·山东·高三期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On one sunny afternoon in August, Riley and I were over the moon when Mom and Dad said we were renting an RV for family camping trip because our family hadn’t been out for several months. Mom researched nearby areas for a long time and finally zeroed in on a campground up in the mountains, about five hours away from our home. We packed everything we’d need—sleeping bags, tents, chairs, sunscreen, and about a million other things—into the RV and headed off to the mountains.
On the way, Riley and I talked happily about what we would do in the evening: singing, dancing around the fire, enjoying the moon, and a million other things. Arriving at the campsite, Dad drove past a small office building but then hit the brakes when he saw someone run out and wave for him to stop. Apparently, we needed to stop to register for our campsite.
After registering at the front office, Dad drove the RV down to the camping area and parked. “Riley, Sean, you need to help set up the site,” Mom said. We all pitched in, dragging out our camp chairs, and other supplies, and soon we were ready to kick back and relax. Sitting at the picnic table, I popped opened a bag of chips.
“Let’s get some music going,” Dad said. “Hey, where’s the electrical hook-up?” “Oh, boy,” Mom said, “We are in the tents-only area, where there’s no electricity. We’re not even supposed to be in this area with an RV.” We had no choice but to choose another camping site.
Twenty minutes later, we’d broken camp and packed everything back in the RV. Mom drove around the campgrounds until we spotted other RVs and then pulled to a stop. After we unpacked everything, I sniffed and was immediately slammed with the most horrible stench I’d ever smelled in my entire life. “We’re right near the dumpsters!” I groaned. What to do next? Again we had no choice but to find a new one.
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2. 开头已给出。
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We quickly shoved everything back into the RV, and drove to a different spot.
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Dad finally laughed and said, “It’s time to start enjoying this camping trip. Let’s get a fire started.”
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参考答案
1．There was nothing left for Santa to say except, “Nelson, I am sure that your Daddy is in Heaven, looking down today, and loves you and your Mom very much, and is very proud of you.” As Nelson scampered down and ran towards his mother, he turned to Santa and said, “If you can, will you tell my Daddy that I love him too, that I miss him, and that I am trying my best to be the man of the house and watch after Mommy.” As Nelson grabbed his mother's hand, he said, “Santa told me that he was sure that Daddy loved us both.”
As his mother glanced up, she noticed that Santa, the elves, and even the cameraman had tears in their eyes. The mother then turned to Nelson, put her arms around him and said, “I know your Dad loved us very much and is watching over us.” Nelson's last words as they continued on their way were, “Maybe someday I will grow up to be just like him.” She turned to him, smiled, and said, “I truly hope so. He was a wonderful husband and Dad.”
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友Gabe去滑雪，Gabe觉得天气挺好想多滑几圈。因为滑了一上午的雪，作者觉得很饿，在回到小木屋吃完披萨。当作者在小木屋等待妈妈的时候看见了一个Mona在停车场哭泣。圣诞老人对尼尔森说他的爸爸在天堂正在俯视着下面，爸爸为他她感到自豪。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“圣诞老人没有什么好说的了，除了”可知，第一段可描写圣诞老人告诉尼尔森他爸爸想说的话。
由第二段首句内容“他的妈妈抬头看的时候，她注意到圣诞老人、小精灵们，甚至摄影师的眼里都含着泪水。”可知，第二段可描写尼尔森的母亲对他说的话。
2.续写线索：自豪——爱爸爸——照顾妈妈——眼含泪水
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跑向：run towards/run to
②抓住：grab/grapple
情绪类
①极好的：wonderful/excellent
②自豪的：proud/beamish
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As Nelson scampered down and ran towards his mother, he turned to Santa and said, “If you can, will you tell my Daddy that I love him too, that I miss him, and that I am trying my best to be the man of the house and watch after Mommy.”（状语从句）
[高分句型2] There was nothing left for Santa to say except, “Nelson, I am sure that your Daddy is in Heaven, looking down today, and loves you and your Mom very much, and is very proud of you.”（现在分词做状语）
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The woman barely responded. She was clearly hurt and almost mad. Grant called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more. Afraid that in her muddled state of mind, she might tumble off the outcropping to her death, Grant crawled on all fours up a tight, narrow path, gaining traction by digging into the dirt with his fingers and feet until he reached Paula. She was moaning and barely making sense. Her head, arms, and legs were bleeding. Securing himself against a tree, Grant gently put her hand in his and tried to keep her mind off the pain by peppering her with questions.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top. To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher. Rescuers at the summit lifted the stretcher to the top and then carried her to a waiting ATV. Eventually, Paula and her husband would be flown by helicopter to a hospital
【分析】
本文以格兰特和他的母亲一起爬山为线索展开。讲述了格兰特开学前一周，和他的母亲一起爬斯阔峰，一名叫宝拉的穿粉色衣服的女士和她的丈夫正在悬崖边旁攀爬。突然，宝拉从悬崖边摔下去了。格兰特和几个徒步者开始去寻找她，后来格兰特在一块岩石上发现了宝拉，他打了911报告了位置，陪着宝拉直到救援人员赶到，用直升机把她送往医院。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那个女人几乎没有反应。”可知，第一段可描写格兰特发现宝拉受伤了，格兰特打911申请救援，设法靠近宝拉，并陪着她等候救援。
②由第二段首句内容“大约45分钟后，第一批救援人员到达山顶。”可知，第二段写第一批救援人员赶到，用担架抬宝拉到山顶，等待直升机来接宝拉送往医院。
2.续写线索：发现宝拉受伤——拨打911——陪着宝拉等待救援——救援赶到——等待直升机将宝拉送往医院。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回应：respond/reply /answer
②.到达：arrive on/reach
③.抬：lift/promote
情绪类
①.发疯的，混乱的：mad /crazy
②.糊涂的：muddled / confused/ chaotic
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.（由连接副词where引导的地点状语从句）
[高分句型2].
To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher.（运用了动词不定式to reach them作目的状语）
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I heard that they would take part in the city baseball competition the next summer. I was surprised. With only a few months left, how could they make it? The kids even were throwing the baseball to the wrong base. But they were determined to do so. From that day on, the kids got together every weekend to practice baseball. And the young coaches taught them patiently. Six months later, the kids finished the competition and got last place. My son was upset. That night, I had to hold and comfort him, telling him that it would be better the next time.
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Nine months later, in winter, they attended the second city baseball competition. Most of the kids were back. The same coaches encouraged them. The kids were familiar with each other. They knew each other’s strengths and weaknesses and tried to help each other. My son was there. He did a good job. The team went to the finals and won second place this time. The young players, the coaches and all the parents there cried with joy.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章以故事发展为线索，讲述了一个寒冷冬日的傍晚，儿子让作者带他去打棒球。他们穿过小城，来到南边，发现了一群孩子在打棒球。他们球技不好，甚至连专业的教练都没有，却非常有热情。
【详解】
1.段落续写。
①由第一段首句内容“我听说他们明年夏天要参加城市棒球比赛。”可知，下文可以描述作者的担忧，以及这次比赛的结果（失败）。
②由第二段首句内容“九个月后的冬天，他们参加了第二届城市棒球比赛。”可知，下文可以描述他们经过长时间的训练，球技提高，有了默契，这次比赛取得了好结果。
2.续写线索：准备夏天参加比赛——作者担忧——比赛失败——安慰儿子——参加冬季比赛——取得好成绩——众人激动兴奋
3.词汇激活
行为类
①成功：succeed/make it
②决心做某事：be determined to do/ decide to do/ make up one's mind to do
情绪类
①惊讶：surprised/ shocked/ astonished
②伤心的：upset/ sad/ heart-broken
③耐心地：with patience/ patiently
【点睛】
[高分句型1] That night, I had to hold and comfort him, telling him that it would be better the next time.（句中运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]With only a few months left, how could they make it? （句中运用了with复合结构）
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It seemed as if the kids weren’t the ones who got up on Saturday morning to go and play with friends. Instead, the parents were expecting too much of their kids and pushing them too hard. They were not aware how stupidly they were behaving and totally ignored the feelings of the kids. I’m not saying these were bad parents. But I found it hard for the kids to have fun in the game.
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They’re just kids. Let them be kids. Parents pay league fees so that their children can play a sport, join a team and make new friends. At that age, winning is not the most important thing. What matters most is having fun. It is normal for some kids to play better than others because each kid is good at doing different things. It is wise of parents to let their kids enjoy the game and learn a thing or two. If not, then join an adult league of their own, and leave their kids out of their fantasies.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者最近参加了一场小型棒球联盟比赛，作者去那里是为了看一个家族朋友打球，在看球的过程中作者发现很多父母对孩子要求很高，把输赢看的更重要，大多数孩子很痛苦，根本感受不到打球的乐趣。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看起来周六早上起来和朋友玩的不是他们。”可知，第一段可描写这些来打球的孩子看起来不是来和朋友玩的，而是父母对孩子们要求太高，孩子失去了乐趣。
②由第二段首句内容“他们只是孩子。让他们做自己。”可知，第二段可描写作者希望父母们能明白对于孩子最重要的不是赢而是玩的开心。
2.续写线索：父母期望值高——没有意识到——希望父母意识到——享受比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活行为类
①逼得太紧：push them too hard /put too much pressure on them
②没有意识到：not aware /unaware/unconscious
③重要：matter/count
情绪类
①开心：having fun / having a good time
②愚蠢地：stupidly /foolishly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. They were not aware how stupidly they were behaving and totally ignored the feelings of the kids.（由连接词how引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. It is normal for some kids to play better than others because each kid is good at doing different things.（it作形式主语和because引导的原因状语从句）
5．Then she put his hands on the back of the chair. “ Hang on to this and you won’t fall.” she said. His feet trembling, Craig tried to move cautiously with his hands grabbing the chair firmly. Riley and Liz cheered him on as he started to move forward. But Craig slowly lowered his head, frowning, as he inched along and he even couldn’t skate without the chair. This wasn’t like flying at all. Realizing his frustration, Riley patted his shoulder and comforted, “ It take practice. Someday you will.” Then she winked at Liz and whispered something to her.
After a while, each girl took one of Craig’s hands. “ Someday you will fly on your own,” Riley said. “ But today Liz and I will help you.” They started skating, pulling Craig with them. The girls went faster and faster , and so did he. Craig felt the wind touching his face merrily with brilliant sparkle in his eyes. When he looked down, his skate blades looked like a sliver light. “ I am flying!” he yelled, and the words blew away in the wind like a bird’s happy song.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Craig看到姐姐们在冰上打曲棍球时就像飞一样，而Craig在莱利背上感觉不到自己在飞，感觉就像骑在溜冰背上一样。Craig穿上滑冰鞋，在莱利的帮助下上了冰。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后她把他的手放在椅背上。”可知，第一段可描写教Craig如何在冰上滑动。首先抓紧这个椅子，就不会掉下去。Craig的脚在颤抖，试图谨慎地移动，他的手紧紧抓住椅子。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，每个女孩都拉着克雷格的一只手。”可知，第二段可描写姐姐们帮助他在冰上滑动，并告诉他有一天他会独自像飞翔一样滑冰。
2.续写线索：抓紧椅子——试图滑动——难过——安慰——帮助——飞起来
3.词汇激活
行为类
紧紧抓住：Hang on to /catch firmly
小心移动：move cautiously / carefully move
大喊：yell/shout/at the top of one’s voice
情绪类
高兴的：happy /delighted/joyful
小心谨慎地：cautiously /with cautiousness
【点睛】
[高分句型1] His feet trembling, Craig tried to move cautiously with his hands grabbing the chair firmly.with的独立主格结构）
[高分句型2] But Craig slowly lowered his head, frowning, as he inched along and he even couldn’t skate without the chair.（句中as引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型3] When he looked down, his skate blades looked like a sliver light.（句中when引导时间状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Her warm invitation actually filled me with mixed feelings. On the one hand, I felt extremely excited that I was the only fan who got the priceless opportunity. I admired Raine very much and was eager to stay with her a little longer. On the other hand, I was scared of riding a roller coaster. The thought of having a try nearly pushed me to the verge of collapse. However, I must take the chance and it didn’t take much time to make my final decision. Mustering my courage, I nodded firmly and went to the roller coaster with her.
My friend came up and asked, “Are you sure you will take the Loudest Scream?” “Yes,” I answered without hesitation. She was rather surprised, with her mouth open and eyes widened. After all, she had spent years trying to persuade me but in vain. Fears of heights and moving too fast seemed unimportant to me now. Although I screamed during the entire time like a girl being chased by a hungry wolf, spending a good time with my idol made all of it worthwhile and my fear was miraculously overcome. And since then, I have lived in a world where I am a bit braver.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在游乐场的一次经历。在游乐场一向害怕去玩过山车的作者和朋友一起去了西雅图的快乐游乐园，偶遇了自己心目中的英雄——网球明星Raine，不想错过能与她面对面交流的机会，作者鼓足勇气索要签名，而Raine则向作者提出一起坐过山车的提议。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她的热情邀请实际上使我百感交集。”可知，第一段可描写作者复杂的心情，一方面想要抓住能与她多呆一会儿的机会，另一方面讲述自己对于过山车的害怕，但最终还是会答应她的邀请。
②由第二段首句内容“我的朋友走过来问：‘你确定要坐过山车吗？’”可知，第二段可描写朋友对于我要坐过山车的惊讶和作者坐上过山车之后的感受，以及心境变化，不再害怕，变得勇敢。
2.续写线索：兴奋和纠结——决定坐过山车——朋友惊讶——坐过山车的经历——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住机会：take the chance / seize the opportunity
②做最后的决定：make my final decision / make up one’s mind finally
③克服：overcome / conquer
情绪类
①兴奋的：excited / thrilled
②害怕的：scared / afraid / frightened
③惊讶的：surprised / amazed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. On the one hand, I felt extremely excited that I was the only fan who got the priceless opportunity. (由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. And since then, I have lived in a world where I am a bit braver. (由关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句)
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About three minutes later,the Category V was coming.The raft raced down the rapids.Water was splashing on the rocks,letting out louder noise.Screaming all the way down,I saw white water all over.I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out.If a little careless,we might hit one and get turned upside down.In the blink of an eye,we turned around the last huge rock,entering a small calm ride.When we settled at the bottom,I wanted to go back up and do it all again.
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After racing down all of the rapids,I was no longer scared.“What did you think about that Category V rapids?” my dad asked.“I was super nervous at first.But when we hit the bottom,I wanted to do it once more.” “Would you say you become more confident of yourself?” he continued.“Yes,I would say I become much more confident of myself.” I smiled.We walked towards our campsite.
【分析】
本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述了作者与爸爸游览三峡险境，一开始跟着导游坐木筏前进，慢慢地接近一级级的急流，直到五级，作者与爸爸对三峡的险峻感到非常震撼，这次体验让作者变得更加勇敢，自信，并且还想再次体验。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段内容“大约三分钟后，第五类急流要来了。”可知第一段续写的内应该是在到达第五类急流之后发生的事情。
②由第二段内容“在冲下所有的急流后，我不在害怕了。”可知第二段续写应该描述冲下急流后发生了什么，以及作者和爸爸对本次体验的感想。
2.续写线索：接近五级急流——在五级急流的体验和感受——冲过急流之后——体验的感悟，变得更加勇敢和自信。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①移位：turn around/rolling over/up and down
②考虑：think about/ consider/feel like
③接触：get to/touch/hit
情绪类
①信心：become confident about/ brave/courageous
②恐惧：frightened/fear/horror
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I was so nervous because there were five big solitary rocks sticking out. (由because引导原因状语从句。)
[高分句型2]. But when we hit the bottom, I wanted to do it once more. (由when引导时间状语从句。)
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We quickly shoved everything back into the RV, and drove to a different spot. After making sure there were no bad smells, or any other problems, we unpacked all the things—and set up our campsite—again. When Mom tried to plug in the extension cord, she couldn’t find the electrical hook-up, and that’s because it was on the other side of the RV! We’d parked in the wrong direction. Dad climbed in the RV and started to turn it around. Pop! There must have been a sharp rock because now the RV had a flat tire. “What do we do now—call for help?” Mom asked.
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Dad finally laughed and said, “It’s time to start enjoying this camping trip. Let’s get a fire started.” Facing the dilemma, we had to follow Dad’s advice. Quickly, a fire was started, and we sat by it, relaxing ourselves from a day’s exhaustion. In the quiet mountain, under the starry sky, Dad and Mom began to sing, adding pleasant music to the unforgettable night. Though we had several setbacks, it was the best family camping trip I’ve ever had.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，8月的一个阳光明媚的下午，父母开着租来的房车带作者和Riley去露营，作者和Riley很开心。到了营地，大家开始搭建露营地，但发现这个地区没有电，家人别无选择的离开了营地；车行二十分钟后，发现其它房车，停车查看情况，却闻到了最可怕的臭味，附近有垃圾堆，作者和家人别无选择地再次离开。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我们迅速地把所有的东西都塞回房车里，开到另一个地方，所以本段应该写到了另一个露营地所发生的事情。第二段开头是：爸爸终于笑了，说:“是时候开始享受这次野营旅行了。让我们生火吧。”,本段应该写遇到了一些挫折后，家人一起战胜了挫折，这是作者和家人有生以来最棒的一次家庭露营旅行。
注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，要检查续写内容是否符合题目要求。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：When Mom tried to plug in the extension cord, she couldn’t find the electrical hook-up, and that’s because it was on the other side of the RV! 这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句和because引导的表语从句；本文也使用了一些固定词组，如make sure ;turn around等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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