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    专题10 工作与职业

    1.(2021·山东菏泽·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

    After a long day, Zhang Tian finally got back to his small room, feeling tired. He had started working at seven in the morning, and it was eight in the evening now. He had to prepare his lessons for the following day. This is a typical day for Zhang Tian. Coming to Guizhou Province to teach has been quite an experience for him.

    Zhang Tian graduated from university and got a teacher's certificate last year. His parents, like most, hoped he would go to a big city to find a teaching job. Likewise, his friends all left his hometown for work in Shanghai or Beijing. Zhang Tian felt differently, however. He wanted to start a new lifestyle. He had met wonderful teachers from small villages during his early school years and he was inspired by them to go and teach where he was needed the most. For that reason he applied for and became a volunteer teacher in a village school. Bringing with him lots of books, clothes, and two pairs of trainers, Zhang Tian travelled to the village with an eager heart. He imagined all sorts of exciting things about living independently and teaching in a village.

    However, not everything lived up to Zhang Tian's hopes. The school had just three teachers and Zhang Tian was the only English teacher. The other two local teachers were responsible for maths and Chinese. The school was much smaller than he had expected, with only three classrooms. In front of the classrooms, there was a playground which got dusty on windy days and muddy on rainy days. Living in the village was also more challenging than he had thought. The power and water supplies were unstable, so he could only shower every three or four days, and he had to learn how to cook.

    注意.开头已给出;2.所写词数应为150左右。

    Paragraph 1

    The thought of leaving once flashed through his mind.

    Paragraph 2

    Zhang Tian's first service year is almost over.

    2.(2021·湖北·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完畅的短文。

    I was lucky to have an interview with a famous international bank after graduation. I really appreciated this chance. So 1 spent a lot of time preparing very carefully I prepared for all the possible questions ahead. As a result, 1 got the job. While my classmates were still struggling to get a job, I had succeeded in getting one, which made me feel very proud of myself.

    After one month of hard training, Today was my first day at work to show the results of the training. I got up as usual, but I decided to skip doing exercise as I did not want to take the risk of arriving at the office late on my first day. I went through my morning routine and spent a lot of time deciding what to wear. I definitely wanted to make a great impression right from the start. Finally, I settled on the white suit with a tie.

    I waved to say goodbye to my mother and set off cheerfully towards the bus stop. But l Saw a bus leaving the stop just as I turned around the corner. Now I would have to wait for another 15 minutes, even though time was very precious. I stood there patiently. 15 minutes passed and then 30 minutes, and there was no sign of the bus. Now what could 1 do? I had to reach the office on time. I saw a motorcycle approaching, but as I tried to stop it, the driver sped on without even a glance. It was then that a car stopped near me and a man waved to me. He said, “Aren’t you working at the bank at Nariman Point? My office is in the same building. Can I give you a ride?”

    I was uncertain at first but then forced myself to get in as I was going to be late. Gradually, I realized that we were not on the familiar route to my office. I asked the man to stop the car, but he did not listen to me and told me to shut up.

    注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

    2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

    Paragraph 1.

        I had no other option but to keep my mouth shut.

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    Paragraph 2.

        He told me that he was my boss.

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    3.(2021·湖北·麻城市实验高级中学模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。

    In 1989, fresh out of high school, I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months. In those days in Pakistan, there were limited options: becoming a doctor or an engineer, or entering the financial world after getting a business degree. I wasn't interested In engineering, so that I was left with medicine or business. I couldn't decide.

    My uncle, an influential person in the family, suggested that I do a work placement to experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital. After that, I could make a decision. It seemed like a brilliant idea.

    I was accepted for a month's placement at a foreign bank in Karachi. I got a feel for how the world of finance functioned, made new friends, and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work surroundings.

    The month passed rapidly, and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi. The experience couldn't have been more different. The hospital had an intense environment. The days started early( at 7 am, compared to 9 am at the bank), and were filled with endless duties. And the night calls! This was crazy, working all day, through the night, and again the next day.

    I began thinking about my two experiences. The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere, better working hours and less stress. The hospital was full of excitement and unpredictability, but the studying and training was difficult. It seemed that the business option was going to win out.

    Near the end of my month at the hospital, I was driving home after an especially busy night call. In front of me was a public bus, with college students sitting on the top. As the driver weaved through (穿梭) traffic, I could see the boys shaking from side to side.

    Paragraph 1:

    Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus.

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    Paragraph 2:

    The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces.

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    4.(2021·甘肃省民乐县第一中学高一期中)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

    As a stay-at-home mom for 26 years, KC just turned 50 and she wanted to seek a job. She was not just looking for something to do. Putting four kids through college had left her severe financial problems and getting a job was a must!

    From childhood, all KC wanted to be was a mom. "That's all. I'm just a mom who stays at home with my children and creates a good and comfortable home for my family." She was not sure why that ambition(夙愿) was so strong for her. "My mom worked full-time, so I did not see her often. Maybe because I wished she had been at home with me," KC said. So after the birth of her first child, KC gave up her job and spent the next 26 years taking care of her children. But after such a long time, she wanted to find a job.

    She realized the difficulty of the situation. When she sent a resume that had a 26-year gap, she knew it was lucky if she could get an interview, let alone an offer. Besides, her education was also one of the obstacles (障碍). The fact that she didn’t go to college was a disadvantage.

    So after her own experiences, she advised others, "Get a college degree! You needn't change the thing about being a stay-at-home mom, but do something — no matter how small — to keep your skills up to date. There are so many choices these days that it will be easy to do while you're a full-time mom."

    KC would still like to get a degree and then she discussed it with her husband. Her husband thought that she needed to go to a tutorial school. She agreed. KC wanted to keep up with current technology so she took classes to learn to use software.

    注意:续写词数应为150左右。

    Paragraph 1 :

    In the class, she was the oldest student.

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    Paragraph 2 :

    From her own experiences, she realized the importance of education.

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    5.(2021·全国·高三专题练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

    I was a writer, but yesterday the boss told me he decided to fire me. That was wrong, because I created many great articles for our company. I didn't want to let the news upset my children, so I invited my wife to a restaurant we often went to.

    I walked into the restaurant, surprised by how empty it was. Not too long after, I saw Carrie walk in. “Where are the kids?” I asked. "At Mother's." Carrie said. "So what did you want to tell me?" she asked curiously. "Well when I tell you, you can't break down." I said. She nodded hesitantly.

    “Well, ... my boss said ...he would fire me if I couldn't come up with a good story.” "What! You've been working there for 5 years since your best friend Jack left there. Although later Jack tried to invite you to work with him, you refused. You could basically run the place!” She shouted. "I know, I know.” "How can he just fire you like Jack?” She looked at me with worry in her eyes. "What about the kids? How will we pay for the house? How will we ..." I cut her words off and promised. "I'll find a new job. Any job will do as long as it pays." Suddenly a man across the diner said, "My friend is looking for a new writer ... someone that can really tell and show the story.” "Where can I find him?” I asked. "He's got a shop down the street with a big yellow sign on the top." he says. "Thank you so much!" Carrie said thankfully as we left the restaurant.

    “There!” Carrie pointed to a big yellow sign reading, "The Daily Dispatch". "I've heard about this place!” I said turning to Carrie. t4This is the worst newspaper company here!” I complained. “Well I guess I should go in for an interview. A bad job is better than none." I sighed. "George, I don't want you to do something you hate." “Well at least I can make some money if I have a job."  said.

    注意:

    1.续写词数应为150左右;

    2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

    As I stepped in the door, the strong smell of ink hit me right in the face.

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    As I sat down in a shabby (破旧的)chair, I heard a breaking sound.

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    6.(2021·全国·高三专题练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写成两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

    Hopelessly I was being with a class of wild senior year girls as they threw paper and shouted loudly with laughter. No one seemed to care about who would step into the classroom, let alone listen to me. And being a teacher was the last choice of my occupations. I wanted to be a writer. But when I arrived in London, teachers in this community were badly needed.

    However hard I tried to manage a normal teaching , their facial expressions told me that it was in vain. For the previous 2 months, as soon as the bell finally rang, I rushed to the staff room, red with anger. The other teachers weren't surprised. "That's Top Naughty, the most difficult class in the whole school."

    But I was reluctant to give up. I decided to abandon formal teaching and lessons. Instead, I brought topics for class discussions. Two of the liveliest talks were: the arguments they had with their parents and their choices when being in dilemma. For the first time in my memory they were serious, sharing about their lives and behaving as a mature adult. I was fascinated. Therefore, I had them write about themselves. As time went on, their essays became a bridge between us. I admired their humor, determination and perspective, and meanwhile I thought they appreciated my interest in their lives.

    The musical My Fair Lady (窈窕淑女) was playing in the West End, I asked if they'd like to see the musical. They thought I was joking and did not take it seriously, since no teacher had ever suggested taking them out. A few weeks later, Top Naughty and I were sitting in a theatre. They loved the music and the main character who changed herself from the wildest to the most elegant. It was the highlight of their year, and they talked about it for the rest of their last year.

    Near the end of their senior year, someone knocked on the door of the staff room

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    After a 3-month summer vacation, an letter send by the school arrived when I was packing my luggage.

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    7.(2022·湖南岳阳·高一期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

    I felt so nervous. It was the day of my interview. I woke up early just to make sure I would have time to get prepared. It felt like a normal Monday, but for me, this day was very important. There was a lot of pressure.

    After showering, I put on the outfit I had carefully chosen and laid out the night before. I looked at my reflection in the mirror. “You can do this,” I encouraged myself. I ate breakfast and fed my cat. I made my way to the bus stop and waited patiently. Aside from the rapid tapping of my right foot, no one could tell that I was so nervous.

    When I arrived at my stop, I walked to the office. The building was so tall and I felt small in its shadow. But I also felt hopeful. This will be a great opportunity, I thought. And what is there to lose? Looking down at my watch, I noticed that I was early. This allowed plenty of time to review my resume (简历) and further prepare myself for the interview.

    The doors of the building were impressive, all steel and glass and very modern.

    When I walked in, someone showed me the waiting area and offered me a cup of coffee. After a few moments, a man in a nice suit told me to join him. As we walked toward the elevators, I began to feel anxious. The palms of my hands began to sweat. It seemed like an hour had passed before I heard the “ding” of the elevators opening.

    We got into the elevator, full of men and women dressed to the nines.

    “It’s quite a large office,” the man said to me. I chuckled nervously. I could feel myself getting warmer. I couldn’t wait to hear that comforting “ding” that signaled an escape.

    As the elevator climbed, I again nervously checked my watch. Just as I looked down, it happened.

    Paragraph 1:

    The elevator came to a stop between floors.

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    Paragraph 2:

    I thought that this must be the worst interview ever.

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    参考答案

    1The thought of leaving once flashed through his mind. If he returned to big cities ,he would live comfortably and get highly paid and his parents would be happy.But he gave it up and managed to find ways to deal with the challenges. To make schcool life colorful for his students , Zhang Tian introduced more interesting subjects such as music, arts ,geography. Tough as life is ,he has enjoyed with the children.What makes him most satisfied is that his students are able to read speak and write in English and become confident in learning the language.The villagers treats him as one of them.

    Zhang Tian's first service year is almost over.What should he do next? He can choose to return to big cities where he can achieve his value. However, looking at the eyes of the children and thinking the poor life of the villagers, he decides to do something more. He is content that he can make a difference to their life. He has been thinking to contact charity organizations for help. And he will teach villagers how to sell local products online so that they can improve their living conditions, which he thinks will be of benefit to children's life. After a long consideration, he chooses to stay for another year. At least now, he wants to stay. Maybe next year he will choose to leave .Who knows?

    【分析】

    本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了大学毕业生张天在贵州一所乡村小学支教的情况,生活工作条件都很差,以及他决定留下来之后的工作。

    【详解】

    1.段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容离开的想法也曾经在脑海中闪现。可知,第一段可描写张天的思想斗争及最后的决定。由下一段首句“Zhang Tian's first service year is almost over”可知,他留下来了,可以继续写他留下来之后所做的努力。

    由第二段首句内容张天的第一年志愿者支教工作就要结束了。可知,第二段可描写他又要重新面临是走还是留的选择以及他的决定。
    2.续写线索:生活工作都很艰苦决定留下来努力改善-成绩支教结束-又一次决定

    3.词汇激活行为类
    决定:decide to stay/determine to remain

    努力:improve studying conditions/introduce interesting subjects.

    成果:enjoy learning

    情绪类
    ①.感谢:showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
    ②.积极:positive attitude/act positively/make a difference

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1] If he returned to big cities ,he would live comfortably and get highly paid and his parents would be happy.(虚拟语气)

     [高分句型2]. Tough as life is ,he has enjoyed with the children.as引导让步状语从句,部分倒装)

    [高分句型3]. What makes him most satisfied is that his students are able to read speak and write in English and become confident in learning the language.what引导主语从句;that引导表语从句)

    [高分句型4]. And he will teach villagers how to sell local products online so that they can improve their living conditions, which he thinks will be of benefit to children's life..which引导非限制性定语从句)

    2Paragraph 1.

        I had no other option but to keep my mouth shut. I was scared. I didn’t know what to do. I forgot all I had learned from the training about measures to deal with an emergency. But to my surprise, the man finally stopped the car in front of the bank building, after taking another shorter route. I didn’t expect that I would be able to reach the bank safely and punctually. I asked the man who he was.

    Paragraph 2.

        He told me that he was my boss. All that had happened was just a test. Unfortunately, I didn’t pass it. He said that if I was intelligent enough to be selected and employed by an international bank, I should not have taken such a risk and trusted a stranger offering a ride. Although I had prepared for everything, I still lost the precious chance to work. From this experience, I realized that the thing that matters most is whether you can apply what you have learned to your job. Moreover, success is not only in the interview, but also in the details of life.

    【分析】

    通过所给文章可知,作者毕业之后通过了一家著名银行的面试,之后又通过了培训。准备正式上班的这天,作者精心地做好了准备,但是迟迟等不来公交车。这时,一辆私家车停在作者面前,车主声称和作者在同一栋大楼上班,可以载作者一程。犹豫之下,作者最终上了车。但是很快作者就发现车没有开在往常熟悉的上班路线,作者意识到了危险想要下车,却得不到允许。

    【详解】

    1.段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容我没有其他选择只好闭嘴。可知,第一段可描写作者意识到危险之后的心理活动和事情出乎意料的发展。
    由第二段首句内容他告诉我他是我的老板。可知,第二段可描写作者在经历了有惊无险的乘车之后发现,这只是老板对自己的入职考验,作者也因为轻易相信陌生人而没能得到最后的工作机会。
    2.续写线索:停车被拒——忐忑——出乎意料——考验——失去机会——感悟
    3.词汇激活
    行为类
    学习:learn from/draw lessons from
    处理:deal with/cope with
    到达:reach/get to
    情绪类
    害怕:scared/frightened
    吃惊:surprised/shocked
    【点睛】
    [高分句型1]I forgot all I had learned from the training about measures to deal with an emergency.(省略关系代词的定语从句)
    [高分句型2]I didn’t expect that I would be able to reach the bank safely and punctually.that引导的宾语从句)
    [高分句型3]Although I had prepared for everything, I still lost the precious chance to work.although引导的让步状语从句)

    3Paragraph 1:
    Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus. He hit the road face down and roller over. He lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus drove away quickly. The cars directly behind the bus braked to avoid the boy,but none stopped. I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain, he could die soon. I stopped my car. I lifted his unconscious body into my car with the help of some passers by, and then raced back to the hospital. Since I wasn't allowed into the operation room, I drove home.
    Paragraph 2:
    The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. The mother held my hands and started weeping. "Son, you are an angel," she repeated over and over again. After comforting her, I went over to the boy. He managed to smile and squeezed my hand. No words were spoken between us —none were needed. I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the most fabulous mood I had ever experienced. I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life.

    【分析】

    本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在毕业后,在叔叔的帮助下分别体验了银行和医院的工作。作者认为银行的工作相对轻松,而医院的工作繁忙且不可预知,因此,他在这两个工作中摇摆不定。有一天,他在一场交通事故中救助了一个受伤的男孩并及时将他送进了医院。在他第二天去看望男孩的时候,男孩的家人非常感激。最后,他明白了自己之后的工作方向。

    【详解】

    1.段落续写:

    第一段首句内容突然,一个男孩从公共汽车后面掉了下来。可知,第一段可描写作者如何救助受伤的男孩。

    由第二段首句内容第二天,当我去医院看那个男孩时,他的家人都站了起来,脸上带着感激的微笑。可知,第二段可描写作者去医院看望男孩,男孩的家人非常感激,作者的心理得到了满足和宽慰,且明确了自己之后的工作方向。

    2.续写线索:(男孩的)危机——营救——看望男孩——男孩家人的反应——感悟

    3.词汇激活

    行为类

    男孩遭遇危机:hit the road/dash against the road

    营救:lift his unconscious body into.../carry his stiff body into...

    情绪类

    高兴:in a state of excitement/with a sense of excitement

    心情:the most fabulous mood/in high spirits

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1]. I knew that if the boy was bleeding into his brain, he could die soon. (虚拟语气)

    [高分句型2]. No words were spoken between us —none were needed. (被动语态)

    4One possible version:

    Paragraph 1:

    In the class, she was the oldest student. But she worked hard and almost devoted all her time to study. KC often read related books till midnight, because she wanted to keep up with the times. Besides, she bought a computer to learn some common office software. At the same time, she made up her mind to prepare for the interview in order to get an ideal job.

    Paragraph 2:

    From her own experiences, she realized the importance of education. She thought everyone shouldn't give up studying. She wanted the young to make full use of time and chances to go to college. By learning, they could get better chances to realize their own dreams.

    【分析】

    这是一篇记叙文。做了26年家庭主妇的KC把四个孩子送进大学后,自己陷入了经济困境,想找一份工作。但是学历短板和26年没有工作使她很难找到工作。在和丈夫交流后,KC决定继续学习来提升自己的技能。

    【详解】

    段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容在班里,她是年龄最大的学生。可知本段可描写虽然作者年龄大,但是和其他学生一样有学习的热情和动力。

    由第二段首句从她自己的经历中,她认识到教育的重要性。可知本段可描写KC以自身经历为范例,告诉大家接受教育的重要性。

    续写线索:班级里最年长的学生刻苦学习准备面试认识到教育的重要性告诫年轻人

    词汇激活

    行为类

    1)努力学习:work hard/study hard

    2)投入:devote … to …/contribute to/put one’s heart into

    3)跟上:keep up with/keep pace with/catch up with

    4)下定决心:make up one’s mind to do/determine to do

    5)充分利用:make full use of/take advantage of/make the best of

    情绪类

    1)努力:hard/diligently

    2)理想的:ideal/perfect/desired

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1] KC often read related books till midnight, because she wanted to keep up with the times.because引起原因状语从句。)

    [高分句型2] She thought everyone shouldn't give up studying.that引起的宾语从句,省略了that。)

    [高分句型3] By learning, they could get better chances to realize their own dreams.by doing sth.介词短语作方式状语。)

    5One possible version:

    Paragraph 1:

    As I stepped in the door, the strong smell of ink hit me right in the face. “Hello! What can I do for you?” a man inside asked. “Hello. I’m looking for a job.” I said as we shook hands. “Wait a minute. I will get the boss.” He said quickly. As I looked around, I could tell this place needed some serious arranging. The desks were covered with dust with some old computers on it. The printer looked like it was about to give out, some old newspaper piled in the corners.

    Paragraph 2:

    As I sat down in a shabby (破旧的) chair, I heard a breaking sound. Before I knew it, I was on the floor. I quickly stood up as the boss entered the room. I looked up and we were both surprised. “Jack!” “George!” Next, Jack told me he had started the company himself but he didn’t manage it well without outstanding writers and now he extremely needed a man like me. That evening, Jack, Carrie, my children and I had a great meal in that restaurant. Fortunately, I got a job.

    【分析】

    本文以中心事件为线索展开,讲述了作者失业后又重新找到作家职业的经历。

    【详解】

    1.段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容我一跨进房门,一股浓烈的墨水味迎面扑来。可知,第一段可描写作者到面试地点的所见。

    由第二段首句内容当我坐在破旧的椅子上,我听到一个破碎的声音。可知,第二段可描写作者偶遇熟识竟然是急需有才华作家的老板。

    2.续写线索:到面试地点——杂乱的办公地——出乎意料——对方急需才华作家——找到工作——全家饭店庆祝

    3.词汇激活

    行为类

    得知:learn/tell

    看起来像:seem/ look like

    管理:operate/manage

    情绪类

    惊讶:surprised/ amazed

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1]As I looked around, I could tell this place needed some serious arranging. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)

    [高分句型2]Next, Jack told me he had started the company himself but he didn’t manage it well without outstanding writers and now he extremely needed a man like me. (运用了省略了that引导的宾语从句)

    6One possible version:

    Near the end of their senior year, someone knocked on the door of the staff room. The two most rebellious girls in Top Naughty came in smilingly, with a large bunch of flowers in their hands. “We are here to say goodbye to you, sir and believe we are big girls now.” Carefully and contently , I looked at my big girls, confirming that they wanted to express their thanks to me. I was proud to know I had touched their lives, and they had also touched me. I enjoyed teaching and getting along with teenagers.

    After a 3-month summer vacation, an letter send by the school arrived when I was packing my luggage. I unfolded the letter and it read, “We are delightedly to tell you that you are so qualified to be a teacher here. Hope that you can accept our offer.” Silently I sat on the edge of my bed, leaving my luggage untidy on the floor. For so long a time, I have been reluctant to admit that teaching wasn’t my dream career. But now I must say that teaching wasn’t the end of my writing career; it was the beginning.

    【分析】

    本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在不得已情况下,选择做了老师,而且面对的是全校最顽皮的学生。作者常常被他们气的无计可施,但是作者没有放弃,他决定放弃正式的教学和课程,而是给出话题让学生讨论,让他们写关于自己的文章,这些文章成了作者和学生们沟通的桥梁。作者甚至还带学生们去看音乐剧。

    【详解】

    1. 段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容高三快结束时,有人敲门。可知,第一段可描写有学生来找作者,表达感谢。

    由第二段首句内容三个月的暑假过后,我在收拾行李时收到了学校寄来的一封信。可知,第二段可描写学校通知作者有资格在学校继续做老师,作者意识这份工作对自己的意义。

    2.续写线索:学生进来看望作者——表达谢意——作者很自豪——打开学校来信——信中表达对作者认可——作者的感受

    3.词汇激活

    行为类

    ①.进来:come in/get in/enter
     

    ②.打开:unfold/open

    ③.通知:tell sb. sth./inform sb. of sth.
     

    情绪类

    ①.感谢: express their thanks/show one's gratitude/be grateful

    ②.自豪:be proud to do/take pride in doing
     

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1]. Carefully and contently , I looked at my big girls, confirming that they wanted to express their thanks to me. (由现在分词confirming作状语;由that引导宾语从句)

    [高分句型2]. We are here to say goodbye to you, sir and believe we are big girls now. (believe后出现省略连接词that所引导的宾语从句)

    [高分句型3]. For so long a time, I have been reluctant to admit that teaching wasn’t my dream career. (that引导宾语从句)

    7Version 1

    The elevator came to a stop between floors. My nervousness turned into fear at once. But I immediately realized that it was better to act than to just stand. First, I pressed the emergency button. Then I asked people to lean their backs against the wall of the elevator and adjust their breathing. But suddenly, a man jumped up and down irritably. “What a terrible elevator!” he said angrily. I rushed to stop him. “Please stop! It could be very dangerous. We should calm down and wait for help!” Fortunately, everyone calmed down then. We just waited and waited. I felt anxious and checked my watch.

    I thought that this must be the worst interview ever. Obviously, I would be late, and I thought that the interviewers couldn’t be in a good mood. Finally, the rescuers arrived, and as soon as the door opened, I prepared to run to the office. But all of a sudden, a hand rested on my shoulder. I turned around and saw the man smiling at me. “Don’t worry, young man. You’ve done a good job. Congratulations on passing the interview.” I chuckled in surprise.

    Version 2

    The elevator came to a stop between floors. Not knowing what was wrong, everyone in it got nervous quickly. Someone pressed the emergency button, and we were told that it would take the rescue team at least an hour to complete the repair work, which meant we had to be trapped in this narrow and hot space, waiting. Hearing this, people were anxious, and I couldn’t help worrying about the interview. With the clock ticking, I fell into desperation.

    I thought that this must be the worst interview ever. I was so frustrated that my well-prepared resume wouldn’t work. Just when I gave up hope, the beautiful “ding” sound set me free from those messy thoughts. A receptionist in a suit stopped me after I had stepped out of the elevator and informed me of another interview opportunity because of the incident. At that moment, I could hardly describe my excitement. Life is just like a box of chocolates, and we never know what we will get. So don’t quit hoping even in the face of difficulty.

    【分析】

    本文以面试为线索展开,讲述了作者在面试前一天晚上的准备工作以及正式面试之前的紧张心情。作者在进入电梯后,发生了意想不到的事情。

    【详解】

    1.段落续写:

    由第一段首句内容电梯在几层楼之间停了下来。可知,第一段可描写作者在电梯突然停止之后所做出的安全自救行为。

    由第二段首句内容我想这一定是史上最糟糕的面试了。可知,第二段可描写作者因为之前在电梯里面的表现,面试通过了。

    2.续写线索:感到恐惧——按紧急按钮——让人们把背靠在电梯上——调整呼吸——幸运的是,大家都镇定了——营救人员到达——突然,一只手搭在作者肩膀上——恭喜作者通过面试——感到惊讶

    3.词汇激活

    行为类

    按紧急按钮:press the emergency button/push and hold the emergency button

    让某人做某事:ask sb. to do sth./let sb. do sth.

    调整呼吸:adjust the breathing/regulate the breathing

    镇定:calm down/keep one’s head

    到达:arrive/make it

    通过:pass/get through

    情绪类

    恐惧:fear/dread

    幸运地:fortunately/luckily

    惊讶地:in surprise/in amazement/in astonishment

    【点睛】

    [高分句型1]

    But I immediately realized that it was better to act than to just stand.that引导宾语从句)

    [高分句型2]

    Finally, the rescuers arrived, and as soon as the door opened, I prepared to run to the office.as soon as引导时间状语从句)


     

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