Welcome Unit单元话题满分范文必背-必修第一册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Welcome Unit单元话题满分范文必背

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1．（2021·山东·济宁市兖州区教学研究室高一期中）假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：

1、校园环境和教学设施；

2、师生给你的印象；

3、给学校的两点建议。

注意：1、词数 80 词左右；

2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数；

3、内容可适当发挥，要注意行文连贯。

Hello, everyone,

I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months………….

【答案】One possible version:

Hello, everyone,

I’m honored to stand here to tell you something about my school life in the past two months.

Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. The advanced equipment in the classroom is just brilliant and it helps our teachers make their classes lively and interesting.

My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them. Fortunately, my teachers and classmates are all friendly and enthusiastic. I have already made several new friends here. However, the food in the cafeteria is very poor and I hope it can get improved. Besides, we are extremely busy doing homework every day. How I wish we could have more time for physical exercise!

Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。

【详解】

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你叫李华，新学期开学两个月了，你的英语老师要求你在英语课堂上用英语和同学们交流一下你到新学校后的感受。交流内容要求包括以下要点：1、校园环境和教学设施；2、师生给你的印象；3、给学校的两点建议。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，校园环境和教学设施；第二段，师生给你的印象；给学校的两点建议。第三段，表示感谢。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: a woody garden，take a walk，breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery，advanced equipment,   keep up with, friendly and enthusiastic, get improved，physical exercise。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: Fortunately，However, Besides。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:where引导的定语从句 Our school is very beautiful with a woody garden, where we can take a walk, breathing the fresh air and enjoying the pleasant scenery. so…that 引导的结果状语从句My classmates are so excellent and diligent that I have to work extremely hard to keep up with them。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

2．（2021·北京四中高一期中）假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。最近你的英国笔友Jim写信告诉你最近他学习压力很大。请你给他回信并提供一些关于如何处理压力的建议。内容包括：

1. 表示理解和关心；

2. 提出具体建议(不少于两条)；

3. 鼓励并表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice. As a senior high school student, none of us is having an easy time, but we still can do something to successfully get through the next three years.

The most important thing you should do is to take good care of yourself. Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends. As for study, it is essential to find out what needs to be done. Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.

Anyway, don’t push yourself too hard. I hope you will make progress in your study.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友回信，就如何处理学习压力这一问题表示理解和关心，给对方提出建议。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

压力：stress→pressure

建议：advice→suggestion

照顾：take care of→look after

重要的：essential→important

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.

拓展句：Then make a schedule and set time for each subject, which will ensure you enough time to review.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends.（运用了whenever引导时间状语从句）

3．（2022·全国·高一课时练习）假如你是某校高一6班学生李华，学校英语社团(the English society)现在要招募新成员，你有意参加该社团。请用英文给社长Johnson写一封自荐信。

内容提示如下：

1.写作目的，愿意参加；

2.个人情况介绍(兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等)。

注意：

1.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2.词数：80左右。

【答案】Dear Johnson，

I'm Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 1.I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society.I'm willing to join it.

I'm interested in English and have a good knowledge of it.Having learnt English for more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently.What's more, I'm good at singing songs, telling stories and making speeches.Above all, I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.

I'm looking forward to being accepted.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求考生给社长Johnson写一封自荐信，申请加入学校英语社团。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.说明写作目的，愿意参加；

2.个人情况介绍(兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等)；

3.期待回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

Be glad to do；be willing to do sth.；be interested in；have a good knowledge of；for more than ten years；communicate with；what's more；be good at；make speeches；above all；get along with；enjoy doing sth.；work with；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I'm Li Hua from Class 6, Grade 1.

2.I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society.

3.I'm willing to join it.

4.I'm interested in English and have a good knowledge of it.

5.Having learnt English for more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently.

6.I'm good at singing songs, telling stories and making speeches.

7.I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.

8.I'm looking forward to being accepted.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表并列补充关系：What’s more；above all

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English society. （that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Having learnt English for more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently.

(having leant为现在分词的完成式作状语)

4．（2021·四川·雅安中学高一阶段练习）假定你是李华．你的英国笔友Jenny询问你进入高中后的学习和生活情况。请用英语给他 回一封信，主要内容包括：

1．学校印象；

2．校园活动；

3．学习情况。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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【答案】Dear Jenny，

Knowing that you are interested in my new school life， I felt delighted to share it with you．

It's my honor to be admitted to this school． The first time I entered the campus， devoted teachers， friendly classmates and the beautiful scenery fascinated me a lot． Colorful activities and recreations， such as sports meeting， speech contests are always held to cultivate our personalities and strengthen our friendship． What's more， I can put my heart into study in harmonious cooperation with my classmates， which makes the school life here unforgettable．

How about your school life？

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给英国笔友Jenny写一封信，介绍你的高中生活和学习

情况。 该信应该明确三方面的内容：1．学校印象； 2．校园活动； 3．学习情况。

【详解】

这篇作文内容非常贴近学生的生活，难度不大。考生可以根据自己的实际情况，介绍高中生活和学习情况。文章应以现在时态为主，间或夹杂着过去时态。考生可以先根据要点提示列出大纲，然后对大纲进行遣词造句，细节等方面的扩展。

【点睛】

所给范文要点齐全，条理清楚。长短句交叉使用，表达自然顺畅。适当运用了一些较好的句式，例如：定语从句（which makes the school life here unforgettable）；被动语态（Colorful activities and recreations， such as sports meeting， speech contests are always held）；非谓语动词（to cultivate our personalities and strengthen our friendship），为文章增色不少。

5．（2022·江西省靖安中学高一阶段练习）假设你是李华，你收到朋友李磊的信，他告诉你他不适应高一数学老师讲的课， 在学习数学方面有些困难，以至于跟不上其他同学，因此他感到非常着急。请你给李磊写一封信，想办法帮助他解决这方面的困难。

参考词汇：适应adapt to

要求：1. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Lei,

I have got your letter.______________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Li Lei,

I have got your letter. And I am very glad that you believe me. I have known you have some difficulty in learning Maths because can’t adapt to what your maths teacher teaches. Don’t worry about it.

I think the following may be of help to you. Firstly, you’d better listen to the teacher carefully in class and practise more. You can ask your Maths teacher to explain what you can’t understand after class. You should be confident and believe in yourself. I think you can make it .Finally , you can communicate with your classmates and get some advice on Maths.

Best   wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于提纲类作文，要求用英语写一封回信。

【详解】

要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】

本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如：have some difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难，adapt to适应。还使用了宾语从句And I am very glad that you believe in me.和宾语从句.I think you will adapt to it and do well in it in future.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。

6．（2022·贵州黔东南·高一期中）假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

 1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

 2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

 3.学会其他：考生自拟。

注意：1.词数80左右；

 2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。

Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

_________________________________________________________________________

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Thank you!

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

Thank you!

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

在个人来看： Personally→In my opinion

此外：In addition→ what’s more

和……相处好：get along well with →get on well with

参加：participate in→ take part in

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

拓展句：Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently, which were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】 It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】 I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

7．（2022·江西·南昌市外国语学校高一阶段练习）假定你是李华，下学期你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生到你所在的高中学习一年。请写信向Jim表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。要点如下：

班级学生数量不同

课堂上课方式不同

在校时间长短不同

注意：1.词数100词左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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【答案】Dear Jim，

I’m more than glad to know that you are going to be an exchange student in our high school for a whole year!

Next, I’d like to introduce some differences between Chinese and American teaching and learning.

First, we have more students in each class than you do. In China, the number of students in each class is usually more than 50.

Second, we have different teaching styles. The teachers usually give lectures in the class and the students will set down what the teachers have said.

Third, the time when we stay at school is much longer than yours. We may spend at least 8 hours at school each day.

That’s all I’d like to share. I can’t wait to meet you!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

下学期美国朋友Jim将作为交换生到李华所在的高中学习一年，要求写信向Jim表示欢迎，并简要介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。要点包括：班级学生数量不同，课堂上课方式不同，在校时间长短不同。

【详解】

第一步：根据提示可知，本文是给朋友的一封信，介绍中国教育和美国教育的不同。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I’m more than glad to know……exchange student ,introduce some differences, the number of, different teaching styles, can’t wait to meet you.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句that you are going to be an exchange student in our high school for a whole year!和what the teachers have said.定语从句when we stay at school和I’d like to share.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

8．（2022·贵州·毕节市实验高级中学高一阶段练习）假设你的美国笔友John来信想了解你们学校和你在学校的学习生活情况，请给他写一封回信。包括以下要点：

1. 对学校做简要介绍(拥有80多年历史)；

2. 学校的设施(拥有现代化的教学楼、办公楼；学校环境优美等)；

3. 教师们爱岗敬业、和蔼可亲。

参考词汇：作简介：make a brief introduction; 学习和生活情况：learning and living condition

现代化的：modern; 爱岗敬业的：diligent and dedicated; 和蔼可亲的：amiable

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【答案】Dear John,

Thanks for your letter. How is it going with you? In your letter, you asked me about our school. Let me make a brief introduction about my learning and living condition.

My school has a history of about 80 years. However, it doesn’t lack of modern teach buildings or offices in our school. Besides, the environment in our school is good. There are many trees in our school. And you can see no trash on your road to teach buildings. Last but not least, my teachers are all diligent and dedicated. They are very conscientious. Meanwhile, they are amiable, you can ask them for help at anytime.

I’m looking forward to meeting you in our school. If you have time, welcome to my school.

Yours

【解析】

本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友回复邮件，介绍自己的学习和学习状况。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分总

   开头给出问候，引出主题。中间段描述主要内容，结尾段表示期待回复

要求：

1. 问候和引入主题

2. 主要内容

1) 对学校做简要介绍(拥有80多年历史)；

2) 学校的设施(拥有现代化的教学楼、办公楼；学校环境优美等)；

3) 教师们爱岗敬业、和蔼可亲。

3. 期待对方回复

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

make a brief introduction; learning and living condition; modern; diligent and dedicated; amiable; conscientious

第三步：连词成句

1. Let me make a brief introduction about my learning and living condition.

2. However, it doesn’t lack of modern teach buildings or offices in our school.

3. My teachers are all diligent and dedicated. They are very conscientious.

4. Meanwhile, they are amiable, you can ask them for help at anytime.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的固定搭配，如make a brief introduction; learning and living condition等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

9．（2022·黑龙江·牡丹江一中高一阶段练习）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理想的高中生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完成短文。

1.在校学习情况；

2.老师与同学；

3.学校活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【答案】I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream high school. As far as I can imagine, First of all, in high school I should have a good study environment so that I can obtain sufficient knowledge. This study environment should encourage students to learn to think, analyze and understand the daily life.

The teachers there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons. In addition, I’ll have lovely and caring classmates. We’ll compete in our study and be close friends in our daily life. In our free time, various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience, such as parties and competitions, I’m sure my high school life will be rich and colorful.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇说明文。

【详解】

根据提示可知，本篇为说明文，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①在校学习情况；②老师与同学；③学校活动；④自己的感受。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：good study environment（好的学习环境），friendly and knowledgeable（友好的和知识渊博的），build up our courage and experience（增强勇气和增长阅历）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。

【点睛】

本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。

so that的结构使用，First of all, in high school I should have a good study environment so that I can obtain sufficient knowledge.

非限制性定语从句的使用，The teachers there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons.