人教版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life多媒体教学课件ppt

建议信

本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。

[基本框架]

1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。

2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。

3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。

[常用词块]

be worried about担心

have trouble/difficulty(in) doing sth.做某事有困难

share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物

follow the advice遵从建议

advise/recommend sb. to do sth.建议某人做某事

overcome the difficulty克服困难

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．I'm sorry you have trouble in...

2．I am writing to share some advice with you.

3．You have asked me for my advice about...

4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning...

5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestions.

★正文佳句

1．I think it would be a good idea if...

2．In my opinion，it would be wise to...

3．I suggest that you should...

4．In my opinion，you'd better...

5．I advise you to...

6．If I were you，I would...

7．Why not...？/Why don't you...?

8．How about...？/What about...?

★余味结尾

1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.

2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail.

3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.

假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jane的来信。她在信中说，她刚进入高中，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信，信的内容应包括如下要点：

1．向Jane表示问候和安慰。

2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：

(1)同学遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们；

(2)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；

(3)其他建议。

注意：1.词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jane，

I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering high school.__________

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Yours truly，

Li Hua

【学生习作】

【升格作文】

Dear Jane，

I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering high school.I'd like to give you some suggestions about it.

In fact your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it.There is also something that you can do to change this situation.Firstly，help your classmates when they are in trouble.Then，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school，which will help you understand each other better.Finally，as far as I am concerned，often communicate with your classmates about your life and study.

I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART­TO­HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为“Worried”的同学的求助信。该同学在信中向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n．脾气；情绪

Hi “Worried”，

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.__________

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Yours，

Jamie

[参考范文]

Hi “Worried”，

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.  The truth is that everyone has one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry too much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips.

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as usual.

Yours，

Jamie