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人教版九年级上学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(重点知识+难点易错点)
专题15 单元话题满分范文16篇

1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．针对现在学生坐姿不正确，玩电脑、看电视时间过长的现状，你想发明一种特别的椅子来解决这些问题。假设下周你们学校的英语俱乐部将举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“I want to invent ...”。请你根据下面的要点提示用英语写一篇演讲稿为比赛作准备。
要点提示：
1. 材料是木头；
2. 座位与靠背安装有感应器(sensor)。没有坐直的时候，椅子会提醒学生；坐在椅子上超过一小时，椅子也会发出噪音。
要求：
1. 演讲稿需包括以上要点提示，也可适当增加内容；
2. 80词左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I want to invent a chair
Hi, everyone. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our life. I think we students can also invent something.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】I want to invent a chair
Hi, everyone. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our life. I think we students can also invent something.
Today I'm glad to be here to talk about what I'd like to invent-a chair that's good for students' health. It will be made of wood. There will be two sensors in it-one on the seat, and the other on the back of the chair. When the student doesn't sit straight, the chair will remind him. If he sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won't stop until the student stands up and leaves.
That's all. Thank you!
【详解】
这是一篇主题为“I want to invent ...”的演讲稿。介绍自己想要发明一种特别的椅子。短文用第一人称形式，时态以一般将来时态为主。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文，其次考生可根据所提供的要点提示去写作。文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型之一There will be two sensors in it-one on the seat, and the other on the back of the chair.里面有两个传感器，一个放在座位上，另一个放在椅子的后面。这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物。高分句型之二If he sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise.如果他在椅子上坐了一个多小时，就会发出响声。这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时。
2．假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点：1. 端午节的时间（农历五月五日）、来由（纪念屈原）；
2. 活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛（时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况）。
参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar
注意：1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days. It’s a great honor for me to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival.
Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals in China. It’s on May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragon Boat Festival has a long history, which is in honor of the great ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan.
We will make zongzi and watch the dragon boat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dongpo lake which is not very far from my home.
If you are interested in it, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
本文属于应用文体，介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如it is a great honor for me to do sth, one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a long history, far away from, hesitate to do以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
3．假如你是李明，学校广播英语节目的主持人，收到了一封读者来信,谈到了他学英语的一些困难。一 他记不住单词。二 他听力很差。三 他害怕用英语和别人交谈，他害怕别人嘲笑他的错误。请写一封回信，对于记单词，提高口语，听力这三方面给出建议， 开导这位读者，字数不少于80，可发挥一，二条阅读，写作方面的学习方法。
My dear friend:
You have trouble in learning English. You can’t remember new words. Why not
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【答案】My dear friend:
You have trouble in learning English. You can’t remember new words. Why not talk to your teachers and classmates and ask for help? By telling them your problems, they might know how to help you improve your English.
Secondly, you should do more practice of English listening, speaking, reading and writing every day. A lazy man can not learn English well because learning a language needs a lot of practice.
Last but not least, I suggest that you should stick to reciting words and good articles. That way, you will know what to write and what to say when you do writing and speaking. Only through this way can you make progress in learning English.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】
本文是一封英语书信
【详解】
英语信件的主体一般分为三个部分
第一部分：问候语并交代写信的目的：针对朋友的问题提出以下建议。
第二部分：信的主体部分：具体介绍三种学习英语的方法。
第三部分：祝福语，希望我的方法对你有帮助。
4．向你的笔友Mike介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来过春节。内容如下：
1. 春节是中国最重要的节日， 它有时在一月份到来,有时在二月份到来。
2. 今年的春节将在１０天以后到来，我们全家将会团聚。
3. 我们现在正忙着为它做准备。我每天打扫房子，和妈妈一起购物 ，帮妈妈做一些传统食　　物，例如：元宵（riceballs）,年糕(ricecakes)，豆腐（toufu)。
4. 在除夕夜，我祖父母，我叔叔一家将来我们家吃饭。我们将熬夜迎接新年。我和堂兄弟们将燃放鞭炮(play firecrackers)，看电视。
5 .我希望你能来和我们一起过春节，体会中国的传统文化。
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【答案】Dear Mike,
I would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China. It is our most important festival. Sometimes it comes in January, and sometimes in February. The Spring Festival this year will come in ten days. Our family will get together. Now we are busy preparing for it. I clean the house and go shopping with my mum every day. Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on. On New Year’s Eve, my grandparents and my uncle’s family will have dinner with us. We will stay up late to welcome the New Year. My cousins and I will set off fireworks and watch TV.
I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们给Mike写一封信，向他介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来中国一起过春节。题目中有非常清楚的提示，我们可以依据这些提示的内容，用正确的英语表达，可以根据需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实。写作前，应仔细阅读题目中的提示，理清文章的主要结构和主体，确定文章应使用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态和一般将来时，第一人称来叙述，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子，选择恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句式结构以简单句为主，使叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求向好友Mike介绍了中国的春节。春节是学生们非常熟悉的节日，因此文章中可能用到的词汇和句型都是学生们比较熟悉的，在写作时，学生们会感觉比较得心应手。这篇短文对这个节日的介绍总体非常的完整，内容也很充实，包含了题目中要求的所有要点。短文中使用了一般现在时和一般将来时，谓语动词形式准确，句式结构简单，叙述清楚，符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范，语言得体，正确使用了名词单复数、形容词和副词以及介词。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.、Now we are busy preparing for it.、Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on.、We will stay up late to welcome the New Year、I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.等等。
5．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名中学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a Person with Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例(时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法)；
2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议(至少两点)。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a Person with Good Manners
It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Be a Person with Good Manners
It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be trained to be persons with good manners.
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in our daily life，enjoy dinner in a restaurant，try to do，refuse to do，listen to me，laugh at sb.，in fact，be proud of，in my opinion，be polite to others等。同时特殊句式It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.和In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion,/ Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1.介绍你生活中的变化：
（1）过去安静内向，现在性格外向开朗；
（2）过去不喜欢运动，现在喜欢打乒乓球、游泳；
（3）过去讨厌学习，害怕考试，现在努力学习。
2.谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要求：1.包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.100词左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies！It has been two years since I went to the middle school. _______________________________
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【答案】Some Changes in My Life
How time flies！It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot.
I used to be quiet and shy，but now I'm more outgoing than before because I have made lots of new friends. I used to dislike sports，but now I like playing ping-pong and swimming. I think it's a good chance for me to relax. I used to hate study. What's more，I was afraid of failing the exams. Now I study hard. I believe I can pass the exams.
I'm very glad that everything goes well. The harder I work，the luckier I will be.
【详解】
1.题干解读：时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
2.例文点评：本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的标题。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：used to be quiet and shy；more outgoing than before；made lots of new friends；be afraid of doing sth.。
句型：It has been two years since I went to the middle school.；I used to be quiet and shy，but now I'm more outgoing than before because I have made lots of new friends.；My life has changed a lot.
7．假如你有一位同学叫Jack,他在生活和学习方面与过去有很大的不同。请根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下他的进步。
过去
现在
起床晚,经常上课迟到
早早起床读英语,按时到校
上课说话,不听课
认真听讲,记笔记
晚上不学习,玩游戏
晚上在家认真学习,有问题向父母寻求帮助
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注意:1.词数80~100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】I have a classmate.His name is Jack.He used to be a problem student.But now he is one of the best students in our class.In the past years,he used to get up late and was always late for school.But now he gets up early and reads English every morning.He gets to school on time every day.In class,he used to talk with others in class.He didn’t use to listen to the teachers.But now he is very careful in class and takes a lot of notes.In the evening,he used to play computer games or watch TV at home.But now he studies and does his homework carefully.When he has problems,he asks his parents for help.What’s more,he used to fight with other students,but now he usually helps students who are in trouble and gets on well with his classmates.
【详解】
写作思路：本文可以分为三个部分，首先开头点明主题，说明变化的发生；接下来陈述变化的具体细节，在此环节可以今夕对比进行，注意句子的时态运用要正确；最后针对变化进行总结。本篇文章首先I have a classmate. His name is Jack. He used to be a problem student. But now he is one of the best students in our class.点明本篇文章的主题，说明Jack现在有了很大的变化；然后利用He used to…but now…句型陈述具体的变化，按照文章要求逐一说明，层次分明，思路清晰，其中还用到What’s more 使得文章具有连贯性。
8．请根据下列提示写一篇短文。词数：80左右。
提示：1.今天是Millie的生日。Millie的妈妈给她买了一件白衬衫、一条粉红色短裙和一双白色的鞋子。
2.衬衫是丝绸的，产自杭州，穿起来很舒服。裙子是棉的，鞋是皮革的，都产自上海。衬衫和鞋很相配。
3.Millie很喜欢它们。穿上它们，她看起来很漂亮、很时髦。
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【答案】例文
Today is Millie’s birthday. Millie’s mom bought her a white blouse, a pink skirt and a pair of white shoes. The blouse is made of silk. It was made in Hangzhou. It’s comfortable to wear. The skirt is made of cotton and the shoes are made of leather. They were both made in Shanghai. The blouse matches the shoes very well. Millie likes them very much. She looks pretty and modern on them.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这个一篇提纲作文，介绍了Millie的生日，根据所给材料写出正确的短文。
2.例文点评：这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：buy sb. sth.；be made of；be made in；looks pretty and modern。
句型：It was made in Hangzhou. It’s comfortable to wear.； The skirt is made of cotton and the shoes are made of leather.。
9．升入九年级之后，你有没有经常和父母争执周末是否可以外出活动？请以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends?”为题，根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
1. What’s your parents’ opinion?
2. What’s your opinion?
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends?
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文：
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends?
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons. Teenagers should also have enough time to have a good rest on weekends. Also, teenagers are supposed to help their parents do some housework.
In my opinion, we teenagers need to go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax ourselves after a busy week. And we can share ideas with each other. What's more, we can also take some exercise together to keep healthy. So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends?”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈父母和自己各自的看法。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主来叙述，写作时要写出父母的观点及自己的观点，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
10．假如你叫李华，你校英文报下一期专栏的话题是“讲述一件令人难忘的事情”。请根据下面提供的开头部分，发挥你的想象力就此话题续写该短文，然后向该专栏投稿。
要求：1. 文中使用情态动词表示推测的句子至少两句；2. 文中应体现你由恐惧到惊喜的情感变化过程。3. 词数90左右。开头部分已给出，但不计入总词数。
I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be. It couldn't be my father or my mother, because they had gone to their friend's party. They said they would come back home late. It couldn't be a thief, either. A thief would feel afraid and be very quiet. Perhaps it could be my neighbor. He may have come back home from work. He always works late in the office. I said to myself, “Be brave! There's nothing to be worried about.” Then I opened the door and all my friends were there saying “Happy birthday”. I thought they'd forgotten! How excited I was!
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下令你难忘的事情。所提供的材料中列举了开头部分：I had a frightening and exciting experience last Thursday night. After finishing my homework, I was going to bed. Just then, I heard the sound of footsteps outside my door. I wondered who it could be. ，主要从你由恐惧到惊喜的情感变化过程去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
I wondered who it could be. 我想知道它是谁。这是一个宾语从句，I wondered 是主句，后面的是宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
It couldn't be my father or my mother, because they had gone to their friend's party. 不可能是我爸爸或妈妈，因为他们去参加朋友的聚会了。这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…。
11．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态
适用音乐
听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑
流行音乐
放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度
乡村音乐
平静
困倦、疲劳
摇滚音乐
振奋
孤独、悲伤
你的观点……
你的观点……

写作要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。
参考词汇：摇滚音乐rock music
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one's moods.____________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Research has shown that music has an important effect on one's moods.So people use different kinds of music to change moods.If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music.After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed.Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over­excited, they can listen to country music.After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful.Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music.After they listen to it, they will feel excited.Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music.After I listen to it, I feel happy again.Music is so wonderful.I like it very much.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍人们用不同的音乐来调节不同的心情。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：So people use……，they can listen to……，they will……，I feel……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，接下来介绍如何使用不同的音乐调节不同的心情，最后指出我喜欢音乐。此处have an effect on, be crazy about, listen to, very much等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
12．俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇文章，投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物。
（写作要点）
礼仪
第一次见面通常握手
跟年长的人说话要用Mr.和Mrs.
饮食
在茶会(tea party)上只能喝茶，不喝咖啡或果汁
城市
伦敦(London)，约两千年历史
利物浦(Liverpool)，在18世纪以工业闻名
注意事项
在公共场合不要大声说话
……(请再列举1～2点)
（写作要求）
1.词数90左右；
2.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中须包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺、连贯；
4.不能照抄原文，文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
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The golden rule is：Watch the other people. Do as they do.
【答案】Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example. People usually shake hands when they meet for the first time. We should say Mr. and Mrs. when we talk with older people. People can only drink tea at a tea party, but not coffee or juice. In addition to the customs, we need to know about the history. London has a long history of about two thousand years. Liverpool is famous for industry in the 18th century. When we are in Britain, we can't talk loudly in public. And we should stand in a line when we wait for buses or trains. The golden rule is：Watch the other people. Do as they do.
【详解】
试题分析：这是材料作文，介绍英国的习俗和历史。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【写作亮点】这篇短文语句通顺，条理清晰，表达准确。特别连词In addition to运用，使文章表达更具条里性，过度自然，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
13．进入九年级之后，学习的压力越来越大，请你就英语学科向同学们介绍自己学习英语的经验或好的学习方法。词数80~100。内容包括：
1. 描述当前同学们的学习情况；
2. 介绍2~3条英语学习的经验或方法。
How to learn English well？
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【答案】How to learn English well？
Now we are in Grade 9，many students feel nervous about their study. They have too much pressure from their parents and teachers. Many students find it difficult to learn English well. English is becoming harder and harder. They can't get high marks in tests. Some students even fail in the English test. They feel bored in English class，so that some of them feel sleepy in class.
In fact，English isn't so hard if you find good ways. First，improve your spoken English by reading aloud or listening to tapes in the morning. Second，we should take notes carefully in class. If you have any question，ask the teacher for help. Our teachers are patient with us.
Remember "Practice makes perfect"，so we must do some grammar exercises in our free time. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Learning from our mistakes is important.
Learning is a lifelong journey. It's normal to meet difficulties along the way. Never give up！
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于说明文，介绍学习英语的方法。本文时态主要是一般现在时。本文应分为三段，第1段描述当前同学们的学习情况，第2和3段介绍学习经验，最后总结。认为阅读材料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，根据提纲写作。
2. 例文点评：例文采用三段式，第1段描述当前同学们的学习情况，第2和3段介绍学习经验，最后总结。本文时态使用正确，表达条理清楚，运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：in fact，get high marks，take notes，be patient with, in our free time, give up等。
固定句型：Many students find it difficult to learn English well./ It's normal to meet difficulties along the way.
目的状语从句：They feel bored in English class，so that some of them feel sleepy in class.
条件状语从句：In fact，English isn't so hard if you find good ways.
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
14．B．大作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
1. 内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；
（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；
（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
2. 写作要求：
（1）内容包含以上要点；
（2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：60~80词；
（3）书写工整、规范, 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My Favorite Chinese Festival




【答案】My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“我”最喜欢的中国节日。所提供的材料中列举了本次征文活动的主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。主要从（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. 在春节前夕，所有家庭成员都喜欢吃各种各样的食物，如：饺子和鱼。
On the eve of the Spring Festival,是介词短语做时间状语。
different kinds of：不同种类的；such as：例如。这些短语的运用，增加了语感，丰富了文章的内容。
【高分句型二】
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，更能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性。这句话运用了not only…but also…,“不但……而且……”。体现了作者的写作功底扎实。
15．俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准玩电脑游戏等。请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My family rules”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：1. 家里有哪些家规； 2. 对家规的感受； 3. 对父母的建议。
要求：词数100左右。
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【答案】例文
My family rules
My parents are very strict with me，and they have made some basic rules that I must obey. Firstly，I must get home and finish my homework on time after school. Secondly，I cannot play computer games，even in my free time. Thirdly，I have to do some chores，such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom. If I break one of them，I will be punished. But thanks to these rules，I can live a healthy and regular life.
I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while. It will make me relaxed.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My family rules”为题，写一篇短文。提示：1. 家里有哪些家规； 2. 对家规的感受； 3. 对父母的建议。要求：词数100左右。第二段叙述“守株待兔”这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。
2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, Secondly, Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。
3.高分亮点：
短语：are very strict with；after school；play computer games；such as；make me relaxed。
句型： 定语从句they have made some basic rules that I must obey.条件状语从句If I break one of them，I will be punished.宾语从句I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while.
【点睛】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First, Secondly, Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
16．节目《朗读者》备受欢迎。阅读使人明智、使人放松、使人充实，你喜欢阅读吗? 请你以"Reading is very important"为题,写一篇有关阅读的短文。要点:
1. 阅读的益处; 2. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间、地点、购书方式等）; 3. 你的阅读体会; 4. 你的阅读计划; 5. 号召大家多阅读。
提示:
1. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
2. 短文中应包含所有要点;
3. 词数100左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading is very important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
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【答案】Reading is very important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I often read newspapers and magazines,from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world. I also read my favorite books such as storybooks and novels,which make me relax and happy. On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed. I used to buy my favorite books at the bookstore, but now I usually buy them online.
Summer vacation is coming. I plan to read more English books to improve my English ability. I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates. It's time for us to take up a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us. Let's do more reading together.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲作文。内容是以"Reading is Very Important"为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。
2.例文点评：例文采取三段式，用第一人称来写作。开头就点明阅读的重要性，第二段就具体列举了自己与阅读的故事，从而进一步说明阅读的重要性，最后写了自己关于暑假的阅读计划，号召大家阅读。
3.高分亮点：
短语：around the world 全世界；and so on 等等；make sb+adj 让某人怎样；spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事；share sth with sb 和某人分享某某。
句型:
1．I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy．such as 例如，and so on等等；which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite books。
2．And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．before going to bed是省略句，完整表达是before I go to bed。
3．It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us．It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了；because 引导的原因状语从句。