专题05 书面表达20篇（期末必考话题）-九年级英语上学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（牛津上海版）

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牛津上海版九年级上学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(期末必考话题)
专题05 书面表达20篇
1．（2021·上海黄浦·九年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Changes of my weekend”（以“我周末生活的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
随着“双减”政策的落实，同学们的周末也发生了欣喜的变化，你们有了更多自主的时间来安排丰富多彩的周末活动，例如：阅读、运动和外出游玩等。请以“Changes of my weekend” 为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。谈谈你的周末生活较之前有了哪些变化，这些变化对你的影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】                                                              Changes of my weekend
Some great changes of my weekend have taken place since the double-reduce policy was carried out.
I used to take plenty of courses during the weekend, most of which were related to test. However, my weekend’s life is not occupied by courses any longer now. I can concentrate more on my hobbies, including skating, reading, and swimming. Moreover, I feel much more relaxed than before.   
Study is one of the most important part in our life, but not test. In my view, more time should be spent on what you are interested in. In the near future, I wish our weekend’s life will be more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇命题作文，要求以“Changes of my weekend”为题。
②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”为辅。
③提示：考生应撰写自己的周末生活较之前发生了哪些变化，这些变化对自己产生了哪些影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。此外，字数应不少于60词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，撰写受到“双减”政策的影响，自己的周末生活发生了很大的变化。
第二步，撰写周末较之前发生的变化以及这些变化对自己产生了哪些影响。
第三步，给出一些建议以及谈谈自己的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②be occupied by被占用
③be related to与……相关
④concentrate on 专心于
⑤including包括
[高分句型]
①I used to take plenty of courses during the weekend, most of which were related to test. (定语从句)
② more time should be spent on what you are interested in. (被动语态以及宾语从句)
2．（2021·上海市民办新复兴初级中学九年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “That day, I made a/an ________”. (以 “那天我……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
生活中的每一次体验，每一段经历都为你的成长助力。那天，你或许交了一个朋友，或许许了一个愿望，或许做了一次新选择……，请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。
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【答案】例文：
That day, I made a choice
Life is full of choices, and there was an important and memorable choice in my life.
When I graduated from my junior high school, I had to make a choice: to be a through-train student or to be a senior high school student. I was very aware of my strengths and weaknesses. I loved learning history and geography, and I was interested in politics. I didn’t want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. So through painful thinking, I chose to be a senior high school student.
I never regretted the choice. I am proud of myself — a senior high school student who is enjoying the pleasure of learning, not only textbook knowledge but also other important things. Learn to choose, to change your destiny, to change your life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要求以“That day, I made a/an ________”为题，分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先补全题目，确定主题，然后开篇点题，引出下文；
第二步，根据主题，分享一段自己的经历；
第三步，书写结语。具体写自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②graduate from毕业于
③be aware of知道
④be proud of以……而骄傲
[高分句型]
①I didn’t want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②I am proud of myself — a senior high school student who is enjoying the pleasure of learning, not only textbook knowledge but also other important things.（who引导的定语从句）
3．（2021·上海市徐汇中学九年级期末）Idols can serve as important role models in our lives, so it’s very important to choose the right ones. We should celebrate people who teach us important values that can help guide us on the road ahead. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of choosing the right idol”（偶像是我们生活中重要的榜样, 所以选择一个正确的偶像相当重要。我们应该称赞那些能教会我们正确价值观, 引领我们前行的人。请你结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。以“选择正确偶像的重要性”为题, 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文）。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
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【答案】例文
The importance of choosing the right idol
Idol is a kind of spirit for us, is a model and yardstick to learn. The spirit of our idols influences us.  
When I was young, my favorite idol was Lei Feng.  His pictures were plastered all over the walls of my room. Whenever I met difficulties in life and study, I would think of uncle Lei Feng’s deeds. When I entered middle school, my grades were not good at first. But inspired by Lei Feng’s spirit, I began to study hard. Finally, I was admitted to the ideal university with excellent results. So I feel it is very important to choose the right idol, it can make a great change in my life.
I think everyone needs an idol to support their beliefs.  Because the excellence of our idols drives us forward.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The importance of choosing the right idol”为题，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时文章要紧扣题目的要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
4．（2021·上海·九年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic "_________ help(s) me grow"(以"_________帮助我成长"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长、一个朋友等，你也曾经经历过很多事，如一次比赛、一项活动等，这些人与事让你变为更好的自己，帮助你成长。请选择其中某件事或某个人，以"_________help(s) me grow"为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。
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【答案】例文：
Mary helps me grow
Looking back on the past three years’ study, there have been many difficulties for me, not only in study but also in life. There was an unforgettable experience.
It was the first time that I didn’t pass an important exam. At that time, I was so depressed that I could hardly control myself. After knowing that I was in a bad mood, my friend Mary spent all her free time companying me and never stopped encouraging me. With her encouragement, I tried my best to study. Finally, I succeeded in making progress. I realized how important a good friend was to me.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于话题作文，主要是以“________ help(s) me grow”为主题展开描写，内容可以自行发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要讲述某人或某事如何使你成为更好地自己、帮助你成长。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
5．（2021·上海市莘光学校九年级期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Everyone has a dream” (以“每个人都有梦”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)
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【答案】例文
Everyone has a dream
Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers can’t teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most of their time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Everyone has a dream”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。写作中注意介绍自己的梦想是什么，为什么想实现这个梦想以及你要为这个梦想做出什么努力等，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．（2020·上海市川沙中学南校九年级期末）Writing.（作文）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on playing computer games”（以“我对玩电脑游戏的看法”为题, 写一段不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。）
Suggested questions：（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What is your opinion about playing computer games?
2. Why do you think so? （Give at least two reasons）
3. What suggestions will you give about playing computer games?
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【答案】例文
Different people have different ideas about playing computer games. Some people think that playing computer games is good, but others hold the opposite opinion.
In my opinion, I think playing computer games is not good. On one hand, playing computer games can waste you a lot of time, which you can use in your study or rest. On the other hand, when you play computer games, you must spend a long time staring at the screen，and it’s harmful to your eyes.
But if you want to play computer games, you must manage your time well. After playing computer games, you can do eye exercises to relax your eyes.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目为命题作文，内容围绕“我对玩电脑游戏的看法”展开，内容要包括题目中所提示的三方面内容。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段提出不同的人们对于玩电脑游戏的不同看法，第二段提出作者自己的看法并陈述理由，第三段针对玩电脑游戏提出建议。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称有第一人称、第二人称和第三人称；时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in one’s opinion；on one hand；on the other hand；a lot of；eye exercises。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句；spend time doing sth.；be harmful to。
7．（2021·上海静安·九年级期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic "_________ makes me grow" (请以"_________让我成长"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
在你的学习和生活经历中，其成长过程肯定有来自自己的拼搏和坚持，还会有来自外力的辅助，它们可能是鼓励、帮助、甚至有批评。请你结合自己自身的感受，选取给你印象最深，影响最大的，理解、经历和感悟。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】例文
Failure makes me grow up
I had difficulty in math when I was in Grade 8.However hard I tried,my math grade was still bad.Later,I failed to pass an important examination.It's very painful for me. Before I decided to give up,it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson.Failure is the mother of success.What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely.With her encouragement,I was not afraid of math.Finally,my math grades improved.Since then, I have been confident in myself. Up to now, my math has been very good. I don't meet with any difficulty in doing anything.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，以“_________ makes me grow”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。注意，需要把题目补充完整。本文时态主要是一般过去时。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，表达条理清楚连贯，语言流畅。写完以后，再阅读一遍，检查语法和单词拼写是否有错误。
2.例文点评：例文符合题目要求。时态使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，没有语法单词拼写错误，运用了合适的连接词或过渡词，文章思路清晰，富有逻辑性。
3.高分亮点：
（一）短语和连词的使用：have difficulty in；when；before；decide to；give up；give a hand；Failure is the mother of success；with her encouragement；finally；up to now等。
（二）句型：(1) I had difficulty in math when I was in Grade 8．(2)However hard I tried，my math grade was still bad．(3) Before I decided to give up，it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson．(4) What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely等。
8．（2021·上海徐汇·九年级期末）Writing (作文):
Write at least 60 words to introduce the elective you have attended at school.
请以“My favorite elective”（我最喜欢的选修课）为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文介绍你在学校参加过的印象深刻的选修课。谈谈该课程的学习内容以及你的学习体会。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
【答案】例文
My favorite elective
My favorite elective is self-defense course. It is one of the most popular electives in our school. It teaches us how to protect ourselves in time of danger. In my opinion, it’s useful and necessary for us students, especially for girls to master self-defense skills. Besides, students can take the opportunity to build up their strength. As far as I know, many more students plan to take self-defense course next term.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，要求根据题目要求写一篇短文，讲讲自己最喜欢的选修课。写作内容涵盖课程的学习内容及自己的学习体会并紧扣主题适当发挥。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，例文开篇点题，说明自己最喜欢的选修课是什么，接下来讲述了该课程的学习内容，之后又发表了自己对该课程的一些看法，并结合题目要求做了适当发挥。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：especially；besides；in one’s opinion；in time of；take the opportunity to do sth.；build up；as far as I know。
句型：宾语从句；it’s + adj.+ for sb. to do sth.句式。
9．（2021·上海·九年级期末）Writing（作文）
Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “Protecting Our Environment”.（以“保护我们的环境”为题写话，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，词数不少于60个。）
Suggested points:
*What do you think of our environment now？
*What will you do to help to protect our environment？
Protecting Our Environment
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【答案】例文
Protecting Our Environment
With the development of economy, the environment is becoming worse and worse. So in our daily life, we should do something to protect the environment, such as throw the waste things into the dustbin, use the things that will not pollute the environment, plant more trees instead of cutting down trees, protect and save water resources, collect the waste batteries instead of throwing them away, collect bottles and paper for recycling. Factories mustn’t let their dirty smoke into the air, either. We have only one earth so we should fight pollution to keep it clean and make it the best place for us to live.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，要求围绕所给话题写一篇关于环境保护的作文，写作时要紧扣提示要点并进行适当发挥，适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目中的提示要点进行写作，指出了环境问题的现状及如何在日常生活中保护环境，并进行了适当发挥。例文中简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：so；mustn’t；either；fight；with the development of …；worse and worse；such as；throw … into …；instead of；cut down；throw … away。
句型：that引导的定语从句；so连接的并列句。
10．（2021·上海·九年级期末）Writing（作文）
Complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “A Little More Fresh Air, Please”. （以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符号不占格。）
Expressions for reference:（以下短语仅供参考:）
plant trees, drive cars, walk more, pollute, haze（霾）
Little More Fresh Air, Please
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【答案】例文：
Little More Fresh Air, Please
It’s our duty to protect our environment. As the students of this city, we can walk more to go out, we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible. It’s helpful to keep the air clean.
What's more，we can call on the whole society to plant more trees. We should live a low-carbon life. If each of us tries our best to protect our environment，I believe we can avoid the haze weather and enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers.
I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment. In this way, I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇的海报。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；再根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡平稳、自然流畅。
2.例文点评：本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：keep the air clean，call on sb. to do，what's more，take care of，In this way
句型：It’s our duty to do…，It’s helpful to do…，I hope+宾语从句，I believe+宾语从句
11．（2021·上海金山·九年级期末）Writing (作文):
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The change(s) ______ (a person) has brought me" (以某某给我带来的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文；标点符号不占格)
我们的生活总是被不同的人影响着、改变着，请选择你身边给你留下深刻印象的人，来写写她/他给你带来的变化。
注意：1. 请先把文章标题补充完整；如填上my father，a boy等，不要填写具体姓名。
2. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不事评分。
【答案】The change my English teacher has brought me
No words can describe my thanks to my English teacher.
When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English. One day. she asked me to go to her office after school. She listened to my problems patiently and encourage me to keep studying hard. We made a plan for my English study. After that, she started to help me from time to time. Finally, I made great progress in English.
I thank her very much for all the help she has given me.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，介绍某人给你带来的变化。本文叙述曾经发生的事情时用一般过去时，表达个人观点时用一般现在时。介绍个人遇到的问题时用第一人称，介绍别人给你的帮助时用第三人称。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：come into, be poor at, ask sb to do sth, listen to, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress等。
高分句型：I thank her very much for all the help she has given me中help为先行词，在定语从句she has given me中作宾语，关系代词that作宾语时可以省略。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如come into, be poor at, ask sb to do sth, listen to, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
12．（2022·上海·九年级期末）英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言，请以“Why Do We Study English?”为题，谈谈学好英语的重要性。请根据提示，写一篇阐述英语重要性的文章。80词左右。
提示：1．英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言，全球有5亿多人把英语作为母语使用。
2．世界上大约有3亿人把英语作为第二语言来学习和使用。
3．英语是一门国际化语言。中国的发展和与其他国家交流的增加，激励着更多的中国人学英语。我们要学好英语，把我们的国家建设得更美好。
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【答案】例文
Why Do We Study English?
English is the most widely used language in the world. It’s spoken by more than 500 million people as their mother tongue. About 300 million people use English as a second language. With the development of China, more and more communications between China and other countries take place, which encourage the whole nation to learn English. English is becoming more and more important in our daily life. Therefore, we should try our best to learn it well and make a contribution to building our country better.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Why Do We Study English?”为题，结合提示内容谈谈学好英语的重要性。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍英语的现状，说英语的人数以及学英语的作用。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
13．（2021·上海市民办新复兴初级中学九年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My personal hero”. （以“我眼中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Daisy’s class was asked to write about their personal heroes. Her father was excited to find out that she had chosen him. “Why did you pick me?” He asked. “Because I couldn’t spell Arnold Schwarzenegger （阿诺施瓦辛格）,” she said.
人们心目中的英雄各不相同，因为每个人选择的理由不同：可以是上面小朋友的爸爸；可以是在新冠（COVID-19），牺牲了时间甚至是生命的医护人员；也可以是不顾安危，谁是真正的英雄？请结合身边的实例（听到，看到或自己的亲身经历），谈谈你对英雄的诠释。
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【答案】例文
My personal hero
Hi, everyone. The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is 84 years old and he comes from Xiamen. He was brave and not afraid of the virus. He never worried about his own safety. He suggested shutting down Wuhan. His advice has saved thousands of lives. I want to be a doctor in the future. I want to save lives like Zhong Nanshan. I hope I can make a contribution to our country in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己心目中的英雄。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。文章开头先点题，介绍自己心目中的英雄是谁，接着介绍他的英勇事迹，最后表达哲理感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．（2021·上海松江·九年级期末）Some students take an active part in after-school clubs. Recently, as Grade Nine students, they feel too busy to care about so many activities. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Is it time to give up everything except study?”　(以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切?”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference.　(以下问题仅供参考)
1.What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs?
2.Why? Please give two reasons to support your ideas.
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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【答案】参考例文
Most children take part in after-school clubs. Activities include sports, language learning, music, and math classes. It seems that many Grade Nine students who take part in after-school clubs feel too busy to care about so many activities. In order to have more time to study, some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. I think it’s wrong to give up everything except study. First of all, in the after-school club, we can do what we like, which makes us relax and study better. We can discuss with each other when we have problems in study or other aspects. I don’t think it is just a waste of time to take part in after-school clubs. Instead, it is good for our growth.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，议论文写作，写作时可以就话题发表自己的看法，然后就你的观点给出至少两点理由。
写作指导：应用第一、三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时。首先简单叙述所给材料内容，叙述要条理清晰，应用第三人称，然后给出观点，以及就你的观点给出理由，发表观点应用第一人称。写作中注意叙述顺序，多种句式的使用，符合逻辑关系。保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。
15．（2021·上海市进才中学北校九年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Besides study, I also pay attention to_____” (以“除了学习，我还关注……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
亲爱的同学，除了学习，你还关注什么？你为什么关注它？你是怎么做到的？对它的关注给你的生活和学习有什么影响或作用？
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Besides study, I also pay attention to ____________
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【答案】例文
Besides study, I also pay attention to the environment
There is no doubt that we students should pay more attention to our study. However, if we ignore the importance of the environment, we will have many difficulties in gaining knowledge.
First of all, when there is too much noise, we will not be able to concentrate on what we are thinking about and our mind will be greatly disturbed. What’s more, air pollution may make us feel sick. As a result, we may be so weak that we will have neither enough energy nor a clear mind to learn what we want.
Above all, we should try to take immediate methods to protect the environment so that it can provide us with a better environment for living and learning as well.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“除了学习，我还关注环境”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍如何保护环境；最后总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
16．（2021·上海浦东新·九年级期末）Write a passage in at least 80 words on the topic “Here’s a New Start”. (请以“这是一个新的开始”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的作文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：岁月的长河中，我们所做的每件事情，都如同随手洒下的种子，在时光的滋润下，那些种子慢慢的生根、发芽、抽枝、开花，最终结出属于自己的果实。人的生命只有一次，但生活可以每天不同。你有了什么新的开始呢？你为此做了什么准备呢？打算怎么努力或改变呢？请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感受。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)
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【答案】例文：
Here’s a New Start
Last week, I was taking a walk along the road when I happened to see a man drawing a picture by the river. I was so impressed by that beautiful picture that I made up my mind to learn to draw.
After I discussed this with my parents, they were so supportive and they bought me the paper and brushes immediately. In order to improve my drawing skills, I have made some plans. First, I am going to watch some videos of masters’ painting so as to learn some skills and, most importantly, improve the sense of beauty. Second, I am going to take part in the school’s painting club where I can learn some basic painting skills.
I believe I can make a difference as long as I work hard.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以“Here’s a New Start”为题，根据提示中的问题写一篇不少于80词的英文作文，内容是关于你的新开始和你为这个新的开始所做的准备和努力。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作；首先先结合自身经历表述清楚你的新开始是什么，然后再介绍你为新开始所做的准备和努力，文章重点应放在后半部分的准备和努力上，最后再用一到两句话表明自己的决心作为文章的结尾；文章重点部分的写作可使用连接词（如First），这样使得文章层次清晰，逻辑连贯；最后写作完成时应保证文章内容完整、行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
17．（2021·上海嘉定·九年级期末）在日常的生活与学习中，我们应该具备一些解决问题的能力。请结合一次自身经历，说说你是如何解决那个问题的，并分享一下你的经验：如果未能解决，也请谈谈你从中获得的教训。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）
have difficulty in…
enable me to…
help me realize...
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【答案】例文
Everyone will meet a difficulty during his life, especially for a student. I used to have difficulty with my homework.
For example, last year, I could’t work out a maths problem. In front of a difficulty, different people have different attitudes. I asked my teacher to help me. He helped me solve my problem. I know if I have problems, I will turn to my teachers and classmates for help. This experience makes me know the importance of thinking over the problems.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假设自己在生活中遇到难题，结合一次自身经历，问题成功解决就写一下经验；如果没有解决，那写出自己得到的教训；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据内容要求，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
18．（2021·上海·九年级期末）Writing（作文）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “A Real Friend”（以“真正的朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯，标点符号不占格。
Use the following points as guide.（短文须包含下列要点。）
*What do you usually do with your friend？
*In your opinion, what should a real friend be？
*Give your reasons.
A Real Friend
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【答案】[例文]
A Real Friend
We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend. I usually go shopping and watch movies with my friend on weekends, sometimes we go to book stores to buy some books. And during holidays, I always travel around the city with my friend.
If you ask people how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot. But not all of them are real friends. What is a real friend? A real friend is someone who you can talk about anything and show up the moment you need. Some other friends are just for drinking and eating, and they will not help you if you are in trouble.
When we make friends, the real one is what we need.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，题目已经给出要点，根据所给要点提示完成文章即可。文章时态可用一般现在时或将来时。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，首段除开篇点题外，对要点一即“What do you usually do with your friend”进行了描述，第二段则是对什么是真正的朋友展开叙述，第三段结尾再点题。全文思路清晰，叙述流畅，使用了一些高分短语和句型为文章加分不少。
3.高分亮点：
短语：travel around，show up，in trouble。
句型：like to do sth.句型，if引导的条件状语从句，who引导的定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句。
19．（2020·上海嘉定·九年级期末）In at least 60 words, write a letter to the person you want to express your thanks. 请以"A thank-you letter to ________"为题，写一封不少于60个词的感谢信，标点符号不占格。
2020年是不平凡的一年，在这段特殊的日子里，你一定感受到了父母、老师、朋友或是一些陌生人给你带来的温暖和感动，请结合自己的经历，写一封信给他（他们），表达你的感激之情。
The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)
thank…for     be moved by      provide...with
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【答案】例文
A thank-you letter to my mother
Dear mom,
How time flies. I am going to be a high school student soon, and you are in your forties. Here I’d like to sincerely say thanks to you.
When I was a little girl, you told me that human nature was kind and the world was full of truth, goodness and beauty. As I grew up, I found that life was not as good as imagination, it also had a lot of difficulties and setbacks. When I wanted to quit, you told me not to give up easily and to go ahead bravely.
Thank you for giving me confidence and power to go forward. I will love you forever and accompany you, my dearest mother. I hope you will be happy every day.
Your daughter,
Alice
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求以“A thank-you letter to ________”为题和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态综合运用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：be full of；grow up；as good as；a lot of；give up；go ahead等。
句型：I am going to be a high school student soon, and you are in your forties.
When I was a little girl, you told me that human nature was kind and the world was full of truth, goodness and beauty.
20．（2022·上海·九年级期末）假如你是李华，即将参加你们班主办的“I love you, my dear teachers”英语主题演讲活动，请你写篇演讲稿，内容要点如下：
1. 因为关爱，改变了很多坏习惯；
2. 上课生动有趣，成绩提升了很多：
3. 作业不多，选做自己感兴趣的作业：
4. 重视劳动教育和体育锻炼：
5. 补充一到两点个人想法。
注意：
1. 文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数60-80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头和已给出，不计入总数。
参考词汇：lively adj. 生动 give importance to重视 labor education劳动教育
I Love You, My Dear Teachers
    How time flies! Three years has passed. On this special day, I want to say “I love you, dear teachers!” _______
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    Thank you, my dear teachers and I love you from the bottom of my heart.
【答案】例文：
I Love You, My Dear Teachers
How time flies! Three years has passed. On this special day, I want to say “I love you, dear teachers!”
First, I have given up many bad habits because of your love and concern. Second, the classes are so interesting, lively and funny that I have improved a lot and got better grades than before. Third, there are not much homework, and there are a few optional work. I can choose which I’m interested in. Fourth, teachers pay special attention to and give importance to labor education and exercise, so we have a healthy body and mind. Last but not the least, teachers are always there and are ready to help me when I’m in trouble.
Thank you, my dear teachers and I love you from the bottom of my heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述因为老师的帮助和关爱，自身发生的变化。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，讲述老师对自己的帮助以及自己的变化，要叙述完整，条理清晰。