专题03 单元话题满分范文20篇（期末必考范文）-八年级英语下学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分（人教版）

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人教版八年级下学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(期末必考话题作文)
专题03 单元话题满分范文20篇

1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore

1．冼星海说过：“音乐是人生最大的快乐；音乐是生活中的一股清流。”同学们，音乐在你们的生活中扮演着什么样的角色呢？请以“我和音乐”为话题展开写作，从音乐类型、喜欢的歌手、喜欢的歌曲、以及对音乐的感受等方面进行描述。
要求: 1. 文章段落清晰、语句通顺、语言正确；
2. 卷面整洁，不使用修正带、涂改液；
3. 全文不少于80词。
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【答案】例文：
Music plays an important role in everyone's life. Good music can make people forget their troubles and resonate with the listeners. That’s why I like listening to music.
Among all kinds of music, I like pop music best. Whenever I feel sad or encounter difficulties, it softens my mind with its gentle tone and melodic melody. Angela Chang is my favorite pop singer. Most of her songs are inspirational and encourage us to cheer up from failure. One of my favorite songs of hers is Invisible Wings. When I failed in the exam, I would play this song to encourage myself to continue to work hard.
Music can penetrate to the innermost depths of the human heart with its strongest power. I can find myself by listening to music, it will be the best friend of my life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“我和音乐”展开写作，介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、喜欢的歌手、喜欢的歌曲以及对音乐的感受。结合所给要点，我们在写作时可以分段叙述，第一段点明主旨，引出主题“音乐”；第二段介绍喜欢的音乐类型、歌手及歌曲；最后一段阐述自己对音乐的感受，升华全文。
2.写作指导：本文主题为“音乐”；以第一人称，一般现在时为主进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题；文章需包括四个要点：类型、歌手、歌曲以及感受，以上要点缺一不可；在保证要点齐全的前提下，注意文章的层次性和逻辑性，使读者一目了然。
2．你的朋友Tom由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。
提示：
1. 远离电脑；
2. 每天做眼保健操（do eye exercises）；
3. 多锻炼身体，多参加户外运动；
4. 多读一些好的课外书，比如……
5. 多陪伴家人和朋友，比如……
6. 帮助别人快乐自己，比如……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2－3分；
4. 词数：80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Tom is my friend. He plays computer games for a long time._______________________________________
I hope Tom can follow the advice and get better soon.
【答案】Tom is my friend. He plays computer games for a long time. Now he has a headache, bad eyes, sore back and can’t sleep well. So I give him some advice to keep healthy.
Right now he has to stay away from the computer. He can do eye exercises every day and get more exercise. Don’t sit in the same way for too long without moving. Take part in outdoor sports such as basketball, football and so on. Reading good books is also a good way like The Old Man and the Sea. Besides, try to spend more time with family and friends. He can go to the amusement park or visit the art museum for fun. Finally, he could help others to be happy with himself, such as cleaning up the park, visiting sick children in hospitals and cheering them up.
I hope Tom can follow the advice and get better soon.
【解析】
【详解】
本题是一篇材料作文。你的朋友Tom由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。本文人称主要是第三称，时态主要是一般现在时和表示建议的句型。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
汤姆是我的朋友。他玩电脑游戏玩了很长时间。现在他头痛，眼睛不好，背部酸痛，睡不好觉。所以我给他一些保持身体健康的建议。
现在他必须远离电脑。他可以每天做眼保健操，多做些运动。不要坐得太久，而不活动。参加户外运动，像篮球、足球等。阅读像《老人与大海》这样的好书也是一个好方法。此外，试着花更多的时间和家人和朋友在一起。他可以去游乐园或参观艺术博物馆。最后，为了使自己感到高兴，他可以去帮助别人，比如打扫公园，去医院探望生病的孩子，并使他们振作起来。
我希望汤姆能听从劝告，早日康复。
【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
3．假如你叫李华，你的朋友Ben想去旅游，但又不知道去哪里，于是给你写信征求意见。请根据下列提示给Ben写一封回信，为他推荐你曾经去过的英国伦敦。词数80左右，内容如下：
1．曾经和父母一起去伦敦旅行；
2．建议乘飞机去；
3．伦敦是一个非常棒的地方。它以其建筑物而著称，那里雨水较多，所以别忘了带上雨具；在城市中心有五个公园，我最喜欢的公园是Hamleys，它又是世界上最大的玩具商城，在那里你可以买到你喜欢的任何东西。
【答案】Dear Ben，
Thanks for your letter. I have been to London with my parents. I think you'd better take a plane, because it is far away from the city that we live in. And you can enjoy the flight.
London is famous for many things. Tourists come from all over the world to visit its famous buildings. If you go to London, don't forget to take your umbrella with you, because it's always rainy there.
There are five parks in the city center. My favorite place is Hamleys, the biggest toy shop in the world. You can buy whatever you like here.
I hope you can have a good trip.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信类提纲作文，相关话题是旅游计划。所给要点比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。因为是推荐去伦敦，要重点介绍要点3的相关内容。写作时不可遗漏要点，并需要适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要用一般现在时态来描述，另外还要用到现在完成时态，需要注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。还要注意书信的格式。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。用到的词组有have been to, had better do, be famous for, if引导的条件状语从句以及There be句型等。
4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lucy想了解有关你故乡的一些情况。请你根据下面的提示，用英文给她写一封邮件，做相关介绍。
要点提示：
1.故乡的名称及地理位置；
2.最佳旅游季节及值得参观的景点；
3.你在故乡居住了多长时间；
4.希望故乡变得更美好。
要求：
1.所写内容应包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数：100词左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
This is Li Hua. I'd like to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is Chongqing, which is in the southwest of China. It’s a beautiful place. The most suitable season for traveling in my hometown is spring. There are many kinds of flowers and the weather is very cool. The most famous scenic spot in my hometown is the Changjiang Ropeway. Many tourists come to visit the place every year. They take a lot of pictures as souvenirs. I have lived in my hometown for ten years.          
I love my hometown very much. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful. Welcome to our hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。以李华的身份给你的笔友Lucy介绍一下你的故乡。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故乡的情况；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先介绍故乡的名称及地理位置；然后介绍最佳旅游季节及值得参观的景点；最后介绍自己在故乡居住的时间及对故乡的希望，同时邀请Lucy来自己的故乡旅游。
5．当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书的益处
获取知识、开阔视野、使人快乐
存在的现象
听音乐、看电视、上网等占用了大部分业余时间
发出倡议
多读书，读经典好书。让读书成为我们生活的一部分。

要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
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【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not only…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．“记录精彩时刻，分享快乐生活”，石家庄外国语教育集团公众号，面向八年级学生征集推文。根据以下提示请你分享自己最喜欢的一首英文歌或一本好书。
1. What is the best song/book that you have known?
2. What is the song/book about?
3. Why do you like it?
注意：
1. 内容应全部涉及，可以适当发挥。
2. 文章中不得出现真实的人名和班级。
3. 80-100词左右。
参考词汇：make me feel ...        full of ...        learn a lot from ...
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【答案】例文
My favorite song is Never Say Never sung by Justin Bieber. This song is about never giving up. When I first listened to this song, I was a little girl who was in a dilemma. This song encouraged me to face the difficulties and move on.
When I listen to this song, I am full of energy. It makes me feel confident. It tells me not to give up. And I've learned a lot from it. So I like it best. I think you should listen to this song especially when facing difficulties.
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示分享自己最喜欢的一首英文歌或一本好书。提示中的三个问题要涉及到，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来写，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。应包括所提供的信息，注意主谓一致问题。本文首先确定要分享的是一首歌。文章分二段，第一段先说明自己的喜欢的歌曲是什么及初次听歌的感觉，第二段重点介绍了我喜欢这首歌的原因及这首歌对我的影响。本文叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通顺。
7．请根据下列提示写一篇80个词左右,题为“Saving the Animals”的英语短文。提示:
1.人类活动:乱砍滥伐树木和猎杀动物。
2.导致的后果:动物生存环境越来越差,动物也越来越少,有的甚至濒临灭绝。
3.请你提出至少两条合理化的建议。
提示词:稀有的rare
Saving the Animals
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【答案】Saving the Animals
As time goes by，there are   fewer and fewer forests.The reason is that people cut too many trees down and hunt too many animals.As a result，the animals are becoming fewer and few，too.Some animals are even dying out.So we should do something to stop these activities of human beings which are destroying the earth.In my opinion，we should protect the forests and save the animals.First，the government should make laws to forbid people to cut down freely or to hunt the animals.Anybody who breaks the law should be punished.Second，we should make people realize the importance of protecting the animals.To save the animals means to save the earth and save ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇关于保护野生动物的短文。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
8．本周是动物保护周，学校广播站要求大家写—篇题为“My ways to protect animals”的小短文向大家宣传保护动物的知识。请根据以下提示和要求，写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
1.描述动物现状；
2.关于保护动物你的方法是什么；
3.呼吁大家保护动物。
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2.100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My ways to protect animals
As we all know, animals are our friends,
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【答案】One possible version:
My ways to protect animals
As we all know, animals are our friends, and they play an important role in our life. But there are many animals in danger now. So it's high time we took measures to protect them. Here are my ways to protect animals.
To begin with, everyone should care for animals. Secondly, read some books about animals to know more about the situation of them so as to protect them better. What's more, we're supposed to be volunteers to protect animals as well as call on people not to kill them.
All in all, if all of us do something to protect animals, they will have a better environment to live in.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求根据所给中文提示，以“My ways to protect animals”为题向大家宣传一下保护动物的知识。
2.写作指导：本文可以分为三段。第一段写下动物的现状；第二段说明具体如何来保护动物；第三段呼吁大家保护动物。人称主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。
9． 根据提示写一段短文，谈谈你和Mary上星期天做的事情, 80词以上，开头已写好，不计入总词数。These days students have a lot of stress from school.They are always busy even on Sundays. Last Sunday, Mary was very busy. What about you?
Last Sunday
Mary
You
9:00~9:30
read English
listen to the English tapes
10:00~11:00
do math homework
watch TV
12:00~1:00
have lunch with Dad
have lunch with Dad
2:00~3:30
have a piano lesson
have a piano lesson
4:00~5:00
visit her friends
do homework.

Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I._____________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Last Sunday, Mary was very busy, and so did I. When Mary was reading English at 9:00, I was listening to the English tapes. At 10:00, while she was doing math homework, I was watching TV, because my favorite program was on at that time. After that I had lunch with my dad . From 2:00 to 3:00 p.m. Mary and I were having a piano lesson together. Both of us like playing the piano. But at 4:00 last Sunday afternoon, while Mary was visiting her friends ,I had to do my homework.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，谈论我和Mary上个星期做的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如busy，so did I，English tapes，while，at that time，have a piano lesson,both of us等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
10．你经历过什么令你印象深刻的事情吗？ 假设在本周的英语口语课上，老师要求每个小组讲述一件记忆深刻的事情。请你以“An Unforgettable Event”为题，写一篇英语短文， 代表小组发言。
写作提示：1. 事件发生的时间和地点；
2. 事件发生的时候你在做什么；
3. 事件的重要意义或令你印象深刻的原因。
写作要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Event
I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文：
An Unforgettable Event
I have a good friend. He is on a basketball team. He had a game last Saturday. I promised to go to cheer him up, but on that day I woke up late. So I made my way to the playground in a hurry. While I was running to the bus stop, I saw a woman and she was lost. She was new here and didn't know the way to the City Hospital, so I took her there. Finally, when I got to the playground, the game almost ended. I said sorry and explained the reason. He said, "It doesn't matter."
I remember this event well because it reminds me of doing what I should do at any time.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“An Unforgettable Event”为题作文，根据所给提示和要求写一件记忆深刻的事情。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时要承接开头，紧紧围绕提示内容，写清楚何时、何地、何事，为什么难忘，必要时可作合理的补充，最后简单总结，照样全文；做到主题突出，结构完整。
11．八、书面表达     
假如今天英语口语课的主题是“My Favorite Story”,请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事，在课上和大家分享。       
要点提示：
1. What is your favorite story?
2. What is it about?
3. What can you learn from it?
要求：
1. 意思连贯，语言通顺；
2. 70词左右。
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【答案】My favorite story is The Fox and the Crow. The fox wanted to get the meat in the crow’s mouth. So he said a lot of beautiful words to the crow. The crow was so happy that he opened his mouth to sing a song. But as soon as he opened his mouth, the meat fell onto the ground and the fox got it. I think the story is interesting and meaningful. It reminds me that we should never believe the person who wants to cheat us.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，写一篇短文讲述你最喜欢的故事。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，注意根据要点提示从三个方面进行描写。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，需要注意人称和谓语动词的搭配问题。讲述故事内容时时态可用一般过去时态，注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。
点睛：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型，考试时就能有所参照，有的放矢。
12．《后羿射日》是一个古老的神话传说。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文，简单介绍一下这个故事。
提示：1.从前，天上只有一个太阳，人们生活得很幸福。
2.突然有一天，天上出现了10个太阳。气候是如此得热以至于庄稼干枯，动物死亡。人们生活得很是艰难。
3.有一个英雄叫后羿。他擅长射箭。于是，人们就请求他把多余的九个太阳射下来。
4.于是，后羿登上海边的一座高山，射掉了九个太阳。
5.人们非常感谢后羿。后来他娶了嫦娥，过上了幸福的生活。
___________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there was only a sun in the sky and people had a happy life. But one day ten suns appeared in the sky. The weather was so hot that all the crops and many animals died. People had a hard life.
There was a young man. His name was Hou Yi. He was good at shooting. So people asked him to shoot nine suns. So he climbed the high mountain beside the sea. He tried to shoot nine suns. Again, there was only a sun in the sky and people were very glad.
At last, Hou Yi married Chang’e and they lived happily.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍《后羿射日》这个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there was……，The weather was……，He was good at……，So people asked him to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了以前天上有一个太阳，人们过着幸福的生活，接下来介绍天上出现十个太阳，人们过着艰难的生活，后羿射掉九个太阳，最后后羿娶了嫦娥，过着幸福的生活。此处once upon a time, have a ……life, in the sky, so……that……,be good at, ask sb to do sth, try to do sth, at last等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
13．书面表达。
良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以How to get on with parents?为题写一篇80词左右的文章。(文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数)
与父母友好相处的要点

· 主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师，同学和学校的事；
·创造机会：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；
·讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。


How to get on with parents?
For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents.What should we do?

【答案】One possible version:
How to get on with parents?
For teenagers, it’s important to get on with parents. What should we do?
Firstly,we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them.
It’s not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题是一篇给提纲作文。要求根据所给的要点提示以“How to get on with parents?”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈如何好人父母友好相处。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：审题可知，文章应采取一般现在时和第三人称进行叙述，文章开头已给出，第二段就如何与父母相处提出详细的建议；第三段简要地概括结尾。第二段中可以用firstly, secondly, thirdly等等引出各要点，让人一目了然。短文要详略得当，中心突出，内容上要保证要点齐全，无单词和语法上的错误。
14．在一堂英语课上, 老师组织全体同学开展有关“做家务活”的小组调查活动。
假设下表是你所做的小组调查记录, 请你根据记录信息, 用英语向全班同学进行汇报。
要求: 1. 将表格信息全部用上。
2. 适当发挥, 谈谈你对做家务活的看法。
3. 词数: 60～80个。(开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)
Name
Chores
Li Ming
Clean up rooms
Lin Mei
Help Mom cook dinner
Wang Jie
Wash clothes
I
Water the flowers

Dear class,
Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group.____________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【答案】Dear class,
Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group. Li Ming cleans up rooms at weekends and Lin Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers.
In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores. By doing chores, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【解析】
【详解】
在一堂英语课上, 老师组织全体同学开展有关“做家务活”的小组调查活动。
假设下表是你所做的小组调查记录, 请你根据记录信息, 用英语向全班同学进行汇报。注意文中使用一般现在时态，第一段主语用第三人称单数，最后一段用第一人称，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】
作者写作时，还使用了较为丰富的句型，如Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family；In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores.这些给文中增色不少。
15． 你看过类似的老人跌倒无人理会的新闻吗？你又听说过最美女教师救她的学生的故事吗？对这两种社会现象，你有什么看法呢？请你以“Would you like to help others?”为题写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 你对上面其中一件事的看法。
2. 如果你遇到了这样的事情会怎样做。
3. 讲述你的一次类似经历。
作文要求：1. 词数80个左右。不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 条理清晰，语句连贯。
Would you like to help others?
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【答案】Would you like to help others?
After hearing these events,I was deeply shocked.Why didn’t they help the old man? The things they did were so terrible! We need to help each other,don’t we? I think,if I were one of the passers-by,I would call the police and try my best to help the old man.Last year,on my way to school,I saw a car accident happen.I stopped,called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured.At last,she was saved.
If we help each other every day,our world will be warmer and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们Would you like to help others?为题，写一篇作文，选择题目中的一件事，表述自己的看法，并假设自己遇到类似的事情该怎样做，并讲述自己类似的一次经历。题目中给列出了大概的写作提纲，而具体的内容和细节都需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。学生们可以从自己的现实生活出发，搜索相关的素材，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，根据表达需要使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，这种句子结构简单，易于掌握，不易出错。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and, but连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，以Would you like to help others?为题，介绍了自己对老人跌倒无人理会这样的事件的看法，假设自己遇到了这样的事情会怎么做，并讲述了自己的一次类似的经历。短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，且对细节进行了想象的描述，使文章内容更加充实、丰富。叙述清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，短文以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词正确形式的变化，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，表达符合英语的习惯。句式以简单句结构为主，也穿插使用了并列句和宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。表达流畅，文意连贯。短文中较好的句型有After hearing these events, I was deeply shocked.、I think, if I were one of the passers-by, I would call the police and try my best to help the old man、I stopped, called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured、If we help each other every day, our world will be warmer and more beautiful等等。
16．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。
你的烦恼

你的做法

个头不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自己

父母不理解，朋友少

学会沟通，友善待人

学习压力大，课外活动少

……（自主发挥，至少两点）


要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.



That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。
写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。
【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。
17．假如你是李佳。Alice是你的美国笔友。在一次MSNI聊天中, 你们谈到了志愿者活动, Alice想了解你们班二月份的志愿者活动安排。请你根据表格提示给Alice写一封电子邮件, 介绍一下具体的活动安排, 可适当发挥。词数：80～100。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
时　间
活　动
Dec.22
为人们修理自行车和电脑
Dec.9
帮助清洁工打扫公园
Dec.30
去附近的小学给孩子们辅导功课、讲英文故事
Dec.15
去当地医院给病人唱歌

Dear Alice,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Do you have anything interesting in your class? Please tell me.
Yours,
Li Jia
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Alice,
How is everything going? I'd like to tell you something about our plans for the volunteer Activities in December. First, we'll help cleaners clean up the park on December 9. On December15, we'll go to the local hospital and sing songs for sick people to cheer them up. We'll fix up bikes and computers for people in need on December 22. On December 30, we'll go to primary school nearby to help children there with their lessons and tell them some English stories. I believe we'll have a meaningful December.
That's all. Do you have anything interesting in your class? Please tell me.
Yours,
Li Jia
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；中间内容是写二月份志愿者活动安排。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述活动内容；时态采用一般将来时为主；描述活动时，场景应描写细致，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
18．假如你的英国朋友Helen要来威海参加一个交换项目，她想顺便了解威海的文化氛围，但由于疫情原因不能成行。请你根据所给信息提示，给她写一封电子邮件，重点向她介绍一下威海城市书房（public library）的情况，并简要陈述城市书房对人们文化生活的影响。
信息提示：
分布
环境
藏书
功能
面向群体
收费
服务人员
影响
遍布全市
安静、整洁
丰富……
读书、学习、借阅……
全体市民
免费
志愿者
……

要求：
（1）条理清晰，语言通顺，内容积极，书写规范；
（2）词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Helen,It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Next time when you come to Weihai, I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.
Your friend,
Zhong Hua
【答案】范文1：
Dear Helen,
It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. As you have known, Weihai is one of the most suitable living cities in the world. The cultural atmosphere is very good, especially The Public Library. Located in every corner of the city, the public libraries are quiet and clean, with a lot of different kinds of books in each library. They are free to all the citizens of our city. Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work. Now these public libraries have had great effects on people’s lives. More and more people in Weihai go to the public libraries to borrow books. They are good places for the people to read, study or even to relax in. Thanks to the public libraries, the people’s culture level has developed greatly.
Next time when you come to Weihai, I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.
Yours,
Zhong Hua
范文2：
Dear Helen,
It’s a pity that you can’t come to Weihai. I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the culture of our city. Now let me tell you something about the public libraries in Weihai.
Thanks to the government, many public libraries have been built in the past few years. You can find them in every corner of the city. The public libraries are quiet and clean, with a lot of different kinds of books suitable for different people. They are free to all the people of our city. Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work. Now these public libraries have had great effects on people’s lives. More and more people go to the public libraries to borrow books. They are good places for the people to read, study or even to relax in.
Next time when you come to Weihai. I’d like to show you around and we’ll enjoy the culture here.
Yours,
Zhong Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件的格式来写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据表格中汉语提示的内容，介绍威海城市书房的情况，包括分布、环境、藏书、功能和面向群体等方面。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语言通顺，内容全面，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
19．假设你是张伟，你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)来信告诉你，他因长时间打游戏与父母发生了争吵，他现在很难过。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文回信。
要点：1.长时间打游戏是错的，父母是对的；2．打游戏浪费时间，伤害眼睛，不利于学习；3．理解尊重父母，与他们好好相处；4．向父母道歉，与他们沟通；5．不打游戏，努力学习，帮父母做家务。
要求：1.必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥；2．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Frank,
I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents.
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Please be happy and everything will be better.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I've received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you.I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time.Your parents are right because playing games wastes a lot of time and it's bad for your eyes and study.
You should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. In this way, you can be happy and improve yourself quickly. I also think that you should make an apology to your parents, for you have made them very sad and angry. When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them. Don't play games any more, study hard and never give up. If you're free, you can help them with housework.
Please be happy and everything will be better.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【解析】
1、题干解读：题目要求给你的笔友写一封英文回信，要求根据所给要点解决你的英国笔友弗兰克(Frank)遇到的一些问题。
2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细介绍了处理问题的一些建议；结构清晰；逻辑性强。
3、高分亮点：
短语：worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with。
句型：I think it's wrong for you to play games for a long time；When you meet some trouble, you'd better communicate with them。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如worry about；for a long time；be bad for；get on well with；had better do sth；communicate with等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
20．上周六，英语老师带领同学们到儿童医院做志愿活动，并要求大家写一篇日记描述此次志愿活动的过程。假如你是张娟，请你根据下面的提示，完成日记。
写作提示：
1.为儿童医院的儿童送礼物；
2.帮助那里的儿童洗衣服，打扫房间；
3.做一些有趣的活动，给那里的儿童带去欢乐。
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
March13th　Saturday                                                                                        Sunny
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【答案】One possible version:
March 13th　Saturday                                                                                        Sunny
Last Saturday,our English teacher took our class to Children's Hospital to visit the sick kids. When we arrived there,we gave those sick kids the gifts that we prepared for them. They were very excited and liked the gifts very much. Then,we helped to wash clothes and clean the rooms. We also did some interesting activities with them,such as singing,dancing and telling stories.
I'm glad to take part in such a volunteer activity. Seeing the look of joy on the sick kids' faces,we felt very happy.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记作文。假定你是张娟，根据提示写志愿者活动，记录过程。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据志愿活动的过程，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。