09 书面表达五年(2016-2020)中考英语分项研究专题(河南专用)原卷版
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（一）
爱思考的人善于提出问题，而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1、要点：
1)你提出的问题是什么；
2)你为什么会提出这个问题；
3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
2、要求：
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
A question I asked
【答案】例文：
A question I asked
When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless.
One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remember words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.”
I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述自己遇到的学习问题；第二段讲述向老师求助以后，老师给出学习建议；第三段讲述采纳了老师的建议以后自己的收获。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。
3.高分亮点：
短语：begin to do sth.；ask sb. sth.；give up；try to do sth.；to one’s surprise；not…any more。
句型：Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. even though引导的让步状语从句；One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up. before引导的时间状语从句。
（二）
书面表达
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I've ever made”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1．要点：1)变化是什么；
2)变化是如何发生的；
3)变化后有何感受。
2．要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数80左右。
The biggest personal change I've ever made
【答案】One possible version：
The biggest personal change I've ever mad
The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time. Books are my friends. And they have and will benefit me a lot.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的个人变化。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The biggest personal change I've ever made is that...，When I was …，my mother always read...，Gradually I began to...，Books are...，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的变化就是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我是如何喜欢上读书的，主要是母亲的影响，最后介绍喜欢读书的感受，受益很多。此处fall in love with, not....at all, begin to do sth, feel like doing sth, benefit sb a lot,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
（三）
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
1）这个名人是谁；
2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；
3）你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
【答案】例文
I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I’m expecting this lunch already.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子who always has everything mapped out ahead.是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If time permits, I’ll ask for his advice for us teenagers today. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits, 是由if 引导的条件状语从句。
（四）
书面表达
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。
1.要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境；
2）你喜欢这个环境的什么；
3）你对这个环境有何期望。
2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
What I like about where I live
【答案】What I like about where I live
I live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.
However, my city has her problems. She has no high speed train. I hope she will soon have high speed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily!
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文，要求以“What I like about where I live”为题，根据所给出的要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。本文时态以一般现在时为主要时态，人称主要为第一、第三人称。写作时首先要仔细阅读有关提示要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境；2）你喜欢这个环境的什么；3）你对这个环境有何期望。然后，根据要点提示，紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以提高文章的档次；可以穿插一些过渡性词语，尽量避免使用没有把握的单词和句子；不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一；最后必须要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（五）
我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以"I did it"为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情。
1．要点：1)你做了什么事情；
2)你是如何做那件事情的；
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
2．要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数80左右。
I did it
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【答案】I did it
How time flies!I'm fifteen years now．There was one thing that I will never forget．Gone through that matter，I seem to grow up a lot．That was New Year's Eve last year，the students send each other greeting cards．Cards with their own wishes and sent to good friends．I have also been infected by this atmosphere and ready to join the crowd．Suddenly，I saw a student sitting there alone．That is not the famous"naughty King"Liu Kai do？But now，he seems like a changed man．How he got it？I looked at him puzzled．Suddenly，I wake up．Certainly because no one sent him a greeting card，and no one said to him words of wish． I could not help feeling sad for him．So I handed him a greeting card，and said to him："happy holiday!"He looked at me then looked at the cards，said happily："Thank you!"His eyes filled with happiness．He stood up and said："I also have a beautiful card．"Looked at him，and I smiled．How important Group is!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以"I did it"为题，用英语写一篇短文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情。
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm……；There was……；I seem to…..；That is……；I saw……；I could not help……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我做了什么事情；接下来介绍我是如何做那件事情的；最后表达我做完那件事情后的感受。此处go through, seem to do sth, stand up, each other, wake up, couldn’t help doing sth, hand sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
