【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 5 课时4 Writing 讲义

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of

知识点01  思路点拨

本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题，围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开。与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。介绍特色产品。本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合。写作此类话题作文时，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”，表达被描述的事物时，有可能要用到被动语态结构，写作时要立足事实，表达真情实感。

“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文

1.总起点明产品的名称；

2.详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能；

3.总结评价。

体裁：说明文

时态：介绍产品用一般现在时

人称：第三人称。

知识点02  必背单词组和句型

词组：

chopstick, fork, blouse, gloves, glass, cotton, steel,handbag, material;produce,process,product,local,heat,be made of, by hand, tun into,cover. . .with,everyday,lively, be known for, soft, strong,interesting,smooth, real,small,cute, useful,helpful

句型：

1. My town/city/country is famous for. . .

2. . . .is becoming more and more popular.

3. It's more convenient for. . .

4. . . .is made of/from/by/in. . .

5. . . .is/are known for. . .

6. . . .is/are used for. . .

7. . . .is/are special because. .

8. China is famous for…  

9.  It’s great that China is so good at...·

10.  …wish that in the future·will …   

11.  These usually try to show....  

12.  They are seen as symbols of ...·

知识点03  话题

假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的加拿大笔友Marcus得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是他给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。

知识点04  范文

Dear Marcus,

       How are you doing these days? I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.

       My city, Weifang in Shandong Province, is famous for its kites. An international kite festival is held here in April every year. Kites are loved by lots of people because they rise into the air with people's wishes for a better life. They are usually made of bamboo, paper or cloth or plastic and string. There are all kinds of kites and they are often painted with colorful drawings. And kites here often have special designs. People used kites to send a message in the old days. Today, they are used for fun and exercise.

Welcome to my city! I hope you will fly a kite here!

Best wishes!

                                                                        Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的马库斯，

你最近怎么样？听到你的消息我很兴奋。我想告诉你一些关于我所在城市风筝的事情。

我所在的山东省潍坊市以风筝闻名。每年4月在这里举行国际风筝节。风筝受到许多人的喜爱，因为它们带着人们对美好生活的愿望升空。它们通常由竹子、纸或布或塑料和绳子制成。有各种各样的风筝，它们经常被画上彩色的图画。这里的风筝通常有特殊的设计。过去人们用风筝来传递信息。今天，它们被用来娱乐和锻炼。

欢迎来到我的城市！我希望你在这里放风筝！

最美好的祝福！

你的

李华

题组A  基础过关练

1．书面表达

在日常生活中，你最喜欢的物品是什么?它是由什么做成的?是在哪里生产的?它有什么特别之处?请写一篇短文介绍一下，词数80左右。

提示词：

shape； favorite；It is made of…；It’s made in…；It’s very special because…

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【答案】I have a nice alarm clock．It is made of wood and glass．It’s in the shape of a lovely Mickey Mouse．It’s made in Fujian and it’s pink．It’s very lovely because it always has a smiling face．My father bought it for me from Beijing and gave it to me as my 12th birthday present．He uses the clock to make me realize that every minute is valuable．

It’s really my good friend．It tells the right time and wakes me up every morning．Whenever I’m with it．I think of my father’s love to me．I love the clock．It’s my favorite thing.

【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如a nice alarm clock，be made of，in the shape of，be made in，be valuable，wake up，every morning，my favorite thing等。而It’s very lovely because it always has a smiling face./ He uses the clock to make me realize that every minute is valuable./ Whenever I’m with it，I think of my father’s love to me.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达：

请以“How is tea produced” 为题写一篇短文介绍你家乡的茶叶的生产情况。

1. 家乡以茶叶闻名；     2. 简述茶叶种植、采摘、生产的过程；     3.茶叶的好处。

How is tea produced

【答案】How is tea produced

Though our hometown is a small town, it is very famous. It’s known for tea. The tea named Anxi is very popular with people in China. But tea producing isn’t so easy. At first tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains by people and are taken good care of. When leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing. After doing that, tea is packed and sent to many other countries and places around China.

Tea   is   good for our health. So it is very popular with people.

【详解】这篇作文要求我们以How is tea produced为题目，写一篇作文介绍自己家乡生产茶叶的情况。题目中给出了短文中的主要内容，应包括三个部分：首先介绍自己的家乡以茶叶闻名，这个内容用一句话点明即可；第二部分简述茶叶种植、采摘、生产的过程，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，进行详细的介绍；最后介绍茶叶的好处，这部分的具体内容也应需要学生自主补充。写作时应注意合理安排三部分内容所占的篇幅，分清主次。通过审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。同时注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，这样的句子结构简单，叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句或复合句，调整文章结构，提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡生产茶叶的情况。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，并对一些细节进行补充，使文章更加丰富、充实。短文从三个方面进行介绍，首先是引出文章的话题；然后重点介绍茶叶从种子到采摘再到生产的过程；最后简单介绍了茶叶的好处。整篇文章的结构很清楚，叙述主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。词汇、短语和句型都符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态等结构，句式富于变化。短文中较好的短语和句型有Though our hometown is a small town, it is very famous.、At first tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains by people and are taken good care of. 、When leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing.、After doing that , tea is packed and sent to many other countries and places around China.等。

题组B  能力提升练

3．请根据下列提示写一篇短文。词数：80左右。

提示：1.今天是Millie的生日。Millie的妈妈给她买了一件白衬衫、一条粉红色短裙和一双白色的鞋子。

2.衬衫是丝绸的，产自杭州，穿起来很舒服。裙子是棉的，鞋是皮革的，都产自上海。衬衫和鞋很相配。

3.Millie很喜欢它们。穿上它们，她看起来很漂亮、很时髦。

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【答案】例文

Today is Millie’s birthday. Millie’s mom bought her a white blouse, a pink skirt and a pair of white shoes. The blouse is made of silk. It was made in Hangzhou. It’s comfortable to wear. The skirt is made of cotton and the shoes are made of leather. They were both made in Shanghai. The blouse matches the shoes very well. Millie likes them very much. She looks pretty and modern on them.

【详解】1.题干解读：这个一篇提纲作文，介绍了Millie的生日，根据所给材料写出正确的短文。

2.例文点评：这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：buy sb. sth.；be made of；be made in；looks pretty and modern。

句型：It was made in Hangzhou. It’s comfortable to wear.； The skirt is made of cotton and the shoes are made of leather.。

4．假设你是李明，你的外国网友Eric对中国剪纸很感兴趣，他发来邮件想请你介绍一下这一中国传统艺术。请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。不少于90词。

【答案】Dear Eric,

Hello! I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting.

Paper cutting is very popular in different parts of China. Many young and old people are fond of it and can do well in it. It has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do well. The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common patterns are birds, animals, flowers and other things about Chinese history. They are usually put up on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck, a happy new year and happy life.

Best wishes!

Your,

Li Ming

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求用英语写一封电子邮件，介绍中国传统的剪纸艺术，属于书信类写作，第一段点明写信目的tell you something about Chinese paper cutting；第二段介绍中国的剪纸文化：历史、颜色、图案和寓意；第三段是祝福语。

2.例文点评：这篇习作共三个自然段，是“总分式”结构，用第三人称叙述，时态是一般现在时。本文内容丰富，格式正确，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be glad to do、Chinese paper cutting、in different parts of China、be fond of、be difficult to do、be cut with、put up on、good luck

句型：Many young and old people are fond of it and can do well in it.（并列结构）

The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors.（时间状语从句）

They are usually put up on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck, a happy new year and happy life.（复杂被动结构）

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

题组C  培优拔尖练

5．（2021·北京·中考真题）北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。

假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送，现就 “Cultural Symbols of Beijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。

提示词语：show, traditional, love, treasure, important

提示问题：In your opinion, what’s the cultural symbol of Beijing?

Please describe it.

Why do you think it can be a symbol?

I’m Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!

【答案】例文

I’m Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9. I believe that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time-honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.

Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a national treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. That’s why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.

I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!

【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍北京文化标志，根据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志，并叙述原因。注意理由合理，内容符合客观事实。

2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。可使用宾语从句和非谓语动词，为文章增色，上下文多使用连词或副词，使行文流畅。

6．假设你是李明,你的国外网友Eric在网上看到几幅中国剪纸(Chinese paper cutting),Eric对此很感兴趣,给你发来邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息,请你根据下表提示给他回复邮件。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.词数80左右。

Dear Eric,You want to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Eric,

You want to know about Chinese paper cutting. Here I’m glad to tell you something about it.

Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 2,000 years. It can be seen in different parts of China. Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it.

People in northern part of China do well in making paper cuttings. They cut paper into different shapes, like birds, animals, flowers and so on.

I think Chinese paper cuttings are not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them up on doors or windows when they celebrate something happy, especially the Spring Festival. More and more people are interested in it. I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cuttings one day.

Best wishes.

Li Ming

【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下中国剪纸(Chinese paper cutting)。所提供的表格中列举了剪纸的历史，流行程度、形状和寓意四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】I think Chinese paper cuttings are not only beautiful but also very useful. 我认为中国的剪纸不仅漂亮而且很有用。Chinese paper cuttings are not only beautiful but also very useful.做think的宾语。

【高分句型二】I hope you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cuttings one day.我希望有一天你能来中国看中国的剪纸。you’ll come to China to see Chinese paper cuttings one day.做hope的宾语。

【点睛】图表作文写作把握几点：

1. 要认真解读图标，切勿疏漏重要内容信息和细节提示，不必每个内容都涉及，但重要内容必须提到。

2. 对图表中的内容分析、内容说明一定要简明扼要，尽量使用简单句，因为复杂的句式往往起不到清晰表达的效果。

3. 结论性的表达要从图表信息分析或内容归纳而来，这样才能使得语言有说服力，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造。