新目标九年级 英语 Unit 11 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材
展开写作指导
叙述一件令人……的经历
写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)
假如明天英语课上的duty report该你发言了，请你用英语写一篇短文为发言做准备，给大家讲述你的一次开心的 / 难过的 / ……的经历。
【审清题目】
内容：你的一次……的经历
文体：记叙文
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
时态：以一般过去时为主
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
语块
What | How | Why |
winning a competition | happy, excited, jump up and down with / for joy, be on cloud nine (极其快乐；乐不可支), walk on air (欢天喜地；得意扬扬), be over the moon (欣喜若狂) | make me confident |
helping others | take pride in being a(n) ... person, one of the greatest things in life | |
getting good grades on an exam | inspire (激励) me to keep studying hard | |
your first trip outside your hometown | increase my knowledge, open up my eyes | |
your first volunteer work | spend time with the children | |
your first cooking | help Mom with the housework | |
losing a competition | sad, unhappy, down, blue, heartbroken, break sb.’s heart (使某人很难过；使心碎) | make me embarrassed (尴尬的) |
getting bad grades on an exam | make my parents angry | |
getting into a fight / arguing with your best friend | lose my best friend |
句型
1. ... makes me (feel) ... 2. I feel ... when I ...
3. This experience taught me that ... 4. From the experience, I learned that ...
5. It helps me realize / understand that ...
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【点评范文】
1. 内容：该短文记叙了作者所做的一件好事——捡到物品后主动联系失主归还物品，是典型的记叙文，因此作者将记叙文的六要素(时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果)交代得很清楚，使得故事完整、具体。
2. 语言：在叙述事情的经过时，作者使用了表示时间的词语at about 9:00 a.m., then和about 20 minutes later来连接上下文，将整个故事的过程清晰地呈现在了读者面前；文章简单句居多，如果多些复合句则会使文章更加精彩，如第二段中的... I was taking a walk in the park near my home和Suddenly I saw a purse lying on a bench，可以将这两句合并为含有时间状语从句的复合句，即... I was taking a walk in the park near my home when I found a purse lying on a bench。
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