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二、高考必须掌握的3类写作技巧
1. 高考应用文写作高分技巧
类型一 邀请信
(2019·全国卷Ⅲ改编)
假如你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的朋友Allen参加, 内容包括:
1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1. 词数80左右
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I (Li Hua), You(Allen)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达问候
主题段落:此次活动的内容和目的, 并希望Allen表演节目
结尾:再一次真诚邀请
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:aim at, enrich, promote, be involved in, issue the certificate, highlight, confirm
(2)佳句:①Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on.
②I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:音乐节安排在下周的周一到周五, 在礼堂举行。
一般表达:The festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium.
词汇或句式升级:(分词作状语以及定语从句)
旨在丰富学生的学校生活, 促进传统文化, 我们将举办音乐节, 节日安排在下周一到周五的礼堂举行, 届时将组织各种各样的活动。
Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized.
要点2:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。
一般表达:At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners.
升级表达:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。相信您的到场和参与将会成为音乐节最精彩的部分。
At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Allen,
How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Music Festival to be held in our school. I feel honored if you are present.
Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Would you please confirm your participation at your convenience? I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 展览时间、地点;2. 展览内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Henry
I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, whose theme is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
类型二 建议信
(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:
1. 到达时间;2. 合适的礼物;3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
类型
建议信
人称
第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时
要点
①欢迎到中国做客, 愿意提供建议
②到访(朋友家)时间
③餐桌礼仪
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:the time to arrive, the appointed time, the suitable presents, table manners.
(2)佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for a visit.
It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:得知你要来中国朋友家做客, 真是太好了。
一般表达:It’s great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home.
→很高兴得知你将来中国朋友家做客, 并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗。(增加细节)
It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know the Chinese custom about visiting.
→很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国传统与风俗。(高级句型)
It is a great honor to share my experience and introduce the relevant Chinese custom and tradition to you.
要点2:首先, 到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。
一般表达:Firstly, make sure to arrive on time, or a bit earlier.
→根据中国传统, 比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好, 准时到达也可以。(高级句型)
According to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time.
要点3:希望你在中国玩得愉快.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Terry,
It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, according to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. If you’d like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinner table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, it’s OK to let them know you are full.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信, 内容主要包括:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2. 赞赏该报优点:兼顾国内外新闻, 介绍名人成功故事;
3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear editor-in-chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
类型三 道歉信
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ改编)
假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;2. 说明原因;3. 另约时间。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I (Li Hua), You(Bob)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达歉意
主题段落:说明致歉的原因
结尾:再次致歉, 并另约时间
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result
(2)佳句:①I can’t go with you as planned.
②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。
一般表达:I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.
句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)
我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。
I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.
要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。
一般表达:I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.
句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。
I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.
要点3:这个周的周日如何?那时你是否有时间呢?
一般表达:How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?
句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)
Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.
How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.
Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是育才中学的学生李华, 昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了, 你的数学书被英语老师收走了。请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点: 世纪金榜导学号
1. 向老师道歉;
2. 解释上课为什么做数学作业;
3. 提出自己的请求并作出保证。
注意:
1. 词数80左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Cheng,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Cheng,
I sincerely apologize to you for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you could forgive me.
Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I couldn’t finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished.
Anyway doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do need my maths book back.
Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
类型四 感谢信
(2019·浙江高考改编)
假定你是李华, 经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), You(Alex)
时态
一般过去时, 一般现在时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 感谢对方帮助
主题段落:具体指出曾经的帮助
结尾:再次表达感谢, 给出临别祝愿
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous
(2)佳句
①I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.
②It is you who taught me how to learn English well.
③Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:你教给我如何学英语。
一般表达:You taught me how to learn English.
句式升级 (强调句)
是你教给我如何学英语。
It is you who taught me how to learn English.
要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。
一般表达:You helped improve my English and gave me more confidence in learning.
句式升级 (倒装句)
你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。
Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Alex,
I’ve heard that you’re leaving China soon, so I’m writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.
I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for your generous help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华, 梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造, 现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取, 请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。
1. 表示感谢;2. 感谢原因;3. 如何回报。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Professor Liang,
I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.
Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University, but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.
It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.
Yours,
Li Hua
类型五 申请信
(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华, 暑假在伦敦学习, 得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者, 内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:问候并说明写信的原因及目的
主题段落:分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:个人优势;能做的事情
结尾:衷心的祝愿
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:apply for position, be qualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . .
(2)佳句
①I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
②The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
③Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.
④If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。
一般表达:I have some reasons to be qualified for the job.
句式升级(定语从句)
我胜任这份工作的原因如下。
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
要点2:如果你们给我这份工作, 我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。
一般表达:If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors.
句式升级(被动语态, 虚拟语气)
如果我能被选为志愿者, 我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品, 并与他们分享在绘画后面的历史。
If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child. As a result, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the visitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.
If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Thank you for your time.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你校英语协会招聘志愿者, 接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘, 内容包括:
1. 口语能力;
2. 相关经验;
3. 应聘目的。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
类型六 告知信
(2019·全国卷Ⅱ改编)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加的比赛, 内容包括:
1. 比赛信息;2. 赛前准备;3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), You(Chris)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:写明比赛信息, 包括比赛时间和地点
主题段落:赛前准备什么, 是否需要训练
结尾:期待Chris能够积极参加
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:schedule, take an active part in, make full preparations for, adapt to, favourable
(2)佳句
①As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it.
②What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我们计划本周六上午八点在操场上举行比赛。
一般表达:We plan to hold the match at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend.
句式升级(定语从句, 宾语从句)
按照计划, 比赛将于本周六上午八点在学校操场举行, 并且我希望你能积极参加。
As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it.
要点2:你最好带些热水, 以便赛前赛后喝。
一般表达:You’d better carry some hot water so that you can drink it before or after the match.
句式升级(动名词作主语)
并且带些热水是很有必要的, 以便你赛前赛后喝。
What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to tell you some information about volleyball match. As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it. So you should make full preparations for it. Before the match, you should do a lot of preparation exercises. What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. I hope you won’t miss the joyful match.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。你的美国外教David回国时请你帮他找人制作一枚中文名印章(name stamp) 以作纪念。你已找好制作人。给他写封邮件, 告知此事, 并请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。 世纪金榜导学号
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
How is everything going? I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China. When you went back to America last month, you mentioned that you wanted to get a Chinese name stamp made for you, as it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m so glad to tell you that I’ve already found a stamp craftsman who’s experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.
To make a stamp that suits you best, I attach some pictures of various types of characters, designs and materials in the email. You can choose whichever of them you prefer.
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
类型七 发言稿
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在, 他们即将回国, 你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1. 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)
2. 谈谈收获或感想;
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I
时态
一般现在时, 一般过去时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:回顾双方的交流活动
主题段落:细数收获或感想
结尾:表达祝愿与期望
Step 2 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:privilege, highlight, compare with, witness, enthusiasm, have a better understanding of, a whole new level.
(2)佳句
①It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.
②The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.
Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我很荣幸地站在这里。
I am honored to be here.
句式升级(it作形式主语)
我很荣幸地站在这里。
It’s my great privilege to be here.
要点2:我们在成长, 友谊在增进。
We are growing and our friendship is improving.
句式升级(高级词汇)
过去的两周见证了我们的成长和友谊。
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.
Step 4 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear friends,
How time flies! I am Li Jin, President of Student Union of Chenguang High School. It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain. During the two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures. One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us. After the two-week exchange activities, we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level. And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever. Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛, 本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者, 你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言, 请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 说明比赛的意义, 如提高英语听说能力, 养成读书的习惯等;
2. 说明比赛的注意事项, 如每人演讲不超过5分钟, 语言流利, 发音准确等;
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too. There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation. Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!
Thank you!
类型八 通知类
假如你是李华, “全国中学生英语演讲大赛”将在你校举行, 请你根据以下要点, 以校学生会的名义写一则通知:
1. 主题: 未来生活;
2. 时间和地点:3月5日上午8:30-12:00;体育场;
3. 选手:全国各地的20名高中生;
4. 评委:中国和美国的英语教授;
5. 要求:欢迎参与, 积极交流。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
we
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明演讲比赛的时间和地点
主题段落:演讲的参加者和评委及其他要求
结尾:表达希望大家积极参与的愿望
Step 2 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词 gather, deliver, make remarks on, a valuable experience
(2)佳句
①We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th.
②Some famous English professors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the performances of the competitors.
Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我们很高兴地通知你“全国中学生英语演讲大赛” 将于3月5日上午8:30-12:00在体育场举行。
We are glad to inform you that we will hold the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students in our school on March 5th.
句式升级(被动句式)
We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th.
要点2:通过和一些评委及优秀的学习者交流, 你会学到很多。
You will learn a lot by talking with some judges and excellent English learners.
句式升级(it作形式主语以及高级词汇)
和一些评委及优秀的英语学习者交换想法将会是一次珍贵的经历。
It would be a valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners.
Step 4 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Announcement
We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th. It will start at 8:30 am and last about three and a half hours.
Twenty high school students from all parts of China will gather in the stadium and deliver their speeches on the given topic——Future Life. Some famous English professors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the performances of the competitors.
Welcome to attend this competition if you have any interest in English speeches or this topic. It would be a valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners. Don’t miss it.
The Students’ Union
假如你叫李华, 是某外语特色高中的学生会主席。下周, 你校将举办以“保护传统文化”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下的内容代表学生会写一则英语通知。
时间:12月16日周三下午4:30-6:00
事件:举办英语演讲比赛
地点:学校礼堂(auditorium)
通知内容:
1. 每班推荐两名选手;
2. 选手提前20分钟到场抽签;
3. 演讲时间3分钟;
4. 英语老师和外教做评委, 当场发奖
注意事项:按时到场, 不要迟到。
选手:contestant, 抽签:draw lots
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
In order to arouse the students’ awareness of protecting the traditional Chinese culture and improve their speaking ability, an English speech contest is to be held on Wednesday afternoon, December 16th. It lasts from 4:30p. m to 6:00 p. m in the school auditorium. Two contestants will be chosen from each class and deliver a speech on how to keep traditional Chinese culture alive within three minutes. The contestants must arrive before 4:10 p. m to draw lots, which will decide on the order of their speech. All English teachers and foreign teachers will act as judges. The winner will be announced on the spot. Please come on time.
The Students’ Union
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二、高考必须掌握的3类写作技巧
1. 高考应用文写作高分技巧
类型一 邀请信
(2019·全国卷Ⅲ改编)
假如你是李华, 你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的朋友Allen参加, 内容包括:
1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1. 词数80左右
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I (Li Hua), You(Allen)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达问候
主题段落:此次活动的内容和目的, 并希望Allen表演节目
结尾:再一次真诚邀请
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:aim at, enrich, promote, be involved in, issue the certificate, highlight, confirm
(2)佳句:①Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on.
②I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:音乐节安排在下周的周一到周五, 在礼堂举行。
一般表达:The festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium.
词汇或句式升级:(分词作状语以及定语从句)
旨在丰富学生的学校生活, 促进传统文化, 我们将举办音乐节, 节日安排在下周一到周五的礼堂举行, 届时将组织各种各样的活动。
Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized.
要点2:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。
一般表达:At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners.
升级表达:音乐节的末尾, 我们希望您能表演节目, 并为获奖者颁发证书。相信您的到场和参与将会成为音乐节最精彩的部分。
At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Allen,
How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to join us in the Music Festival to be held in our school. I feel honored if you are present.
Aiming to enrich the students’ school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. At the end of the festival, we’d like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival.
Would you please confirm your participation at your convenience? I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 展览时间、地点;2. 展览内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Henry
I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, whose theme is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
类型二 建议信
(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华, 你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客, 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:
1. 到达时间;2. 合适的礼物;3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
类型
建议信
人称
第二人称(you)
时态
一般现在时
要点
①欢迎到中国做客, 愿意提供建议
②到访(朋友家)时间
③餐桌礼仪
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:the time to arrive, the appointed time, the suitable presents, table manners.
(2)佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for a visit.
It’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:得知你要来中国朋友家做客, 真是太好了。
一般表达:It’s great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home.
→很高兴得知你将来中国朋友家做客, 并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗。(增加细节)
It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know the Chinese custom about visiting.
→很荣幸可以与你分享我的经历和介绍相关的中国传统与风俗。(高级句型)
It is a great honor to share my experience and introduce the relevant Chinese custom and tradition to you.
要点2:首先, 到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。
一般表达:Firstly, make sure to arrive on time, or a bit earlier.
→根据中国传统, 比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好, 准时到达也可以。(高级句型)
According to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time.
要点3:希望你在中国玩得愉快.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Terry,
It’s so great to hear you’re invited to a Chinese friend’s home and want to know something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, according to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. If you’d like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinner table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, it’s OK to let them know you are full.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信, 内容主要包括:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2. 赞赏该报优点:兼顾国内外新闻, 介绍名人成功故事;
3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear editor-in-chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
类型三 道歉信
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ改编)
假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;2. 说明原因;3. 另约时间。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I (Li Hua), You(Bob)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 并表达歉意
主题段落:说明致歉的原因
结尾:再次致歉, 并另约时间
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result
(2)佳句:①I can’t go with you as planned.
②I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
③How about going to the bookstore this Sunday.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:很抱歉无法跟你一起去书店。
一般表达:I’m sorry that I can’t go with you to the bookstore.
句式升级(高级词汇, 名词性从句, 分词作状语)
我诚挚地向你道歉, 这周五不能按计划和你去书店了。
I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I can’t go with you to the bookstore this Friday as planned.
要点2:我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛。
一般表达:I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition.
句式升级(定语从句, for引导的并列句)
我入选代表我校参加英语辩论赛, 这对我非常重要, 因为我一直梦想有这样的机会代表我校参赛, 展示我们的实力。
I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school.
要点3:这个周的周日如何?那时你是否有时间呢?
一般表达:How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?
句式升级(高级词汇, 意趣盎然)
Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Bob,
How are you doing? I’m indeed very sorry that I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned.
How I wish I could go with you! However, I’m chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment.
Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是育才中学的学生李华, 昨天你在英语课上做数学作业被英语老师Miss Cheng发现了, 你的数学书被英语老师收走了。请用英语给英语老师写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点: 世纪金榜导学号
1. 向老师道歉;
2. 解释上课为什么做数学作业;
3. 提出自己的请求并作出保证。
注意:
1. 词数80左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Cheng,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Cheng,
I sincerely apologize to you for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you could forgive me.
Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I couldn’t finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished.
Anyway doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do need my maths book back.
Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
类型四 感谢信
(2019·浙江高考改编)
假定你是李华, 经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), You(Alex)
时态
一般过去时, 一般现在时
段落布局
开头点题:点明写作目的, 感谢对方帮助
主题段落:具体指出曾经的帮助
结尾:再次表达感谢, 给出临别祝愿
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous
(2)佳句
①I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English.
②It is you who taught me how to learn English well.
③Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:你教给我如何学英语。
一般表达:You taught me how to learn English.
句式升级 (强调句)
是你教给我如何学英语。
It is you who taught me how to learn English.
要点2:你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。
一般表达:You helped improve my English and gave me more confidence in learning.
句式升级 (倒装句)
你不但帮助我提高了英语, 并且给了我更多学习的自信。
Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Alex,
I’ve heard that you’re leaving China soon, so I’m writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks.
I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for your generous help.
Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华, 梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造, 现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取, 请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。
1. 表示感谢;2. 感谢原因;3. 如何回报。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Professor Liang,
I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.
Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University, but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.
It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.
Yours,
Li Hua
类型五 申请信
(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)
假定你是李华, 暑假在伦敦学习, 得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者, 内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:问候并说明写信的原因及目的
主题段落:分两点阐述为什么申请做志愿者:个人优势;能做的事情
结尾:衷心的祝愿
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:apply for position, be qualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . .
(2)佳句
①I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
②The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
③Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.
④If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我有一些胜任这份工作的原因。
一般表达:I have some reasons to be qualified for the job.
句式升级(定语从句)
我胜任这份工作的原因如下。
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows.
要点2:如果你们给我这份工作, 我将尽最大努力去帮助参观者。
一般表达:If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors.
句式升级(被动语态, 虚拟语气)
如果我能被选为志愿者, 我有能力去帮助参观者理解绘画作品, 并与他们分享在绘画后面的历史。
If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and I’m writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position.
The reasons why I’m qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child. As a result, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the visitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world.
If I’m chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Thank you for your time.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你校英语协会招聘志愿者, 接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘, 内容包括:
1. 口语能力;
2. 相关经验;
3. 应聘目的。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
类型六 告知信
(2019·全国卷Ⅱ改编)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加的比赛, 内容包括:
1. 比赛信息;2. 赛前准备;3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I(Li Hua), You(Chris)
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:写明比赛信息, 包括比赛时间和地点
主题段落:赛前准备什么, 是否需要训练
结尾:期待Chris能够积极参加
Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:schedule, take an active part in, make full preparations for, adapt to, favourable
(2)佳句
①As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it.
②What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我们计划本周六上午八点在操场上举行比赛。
一般表达:We plan to hold the match at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend.
句式升级(定语从句, 宾语从句)
按照计划, 比赛将于本周六上午八点在学校操场举行, 并且我希望你能积极参加。
As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it.
要点2:你最好带些热水, 以便赛前赛后喝。
一般表达:You’d better carry some hot water so that you can drink it before or after the match.
句式升级(动名词作主语)
并且带些热水是很有必要的, 以便你赛前赛后喝。
What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to tell you some information about volleyball match. As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it. So you should make full preparations for it. Before the match, you should do a lot of preparation exercises. What’s more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. I hope you won’t miss the joyful match.
Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。你的美国外教David回国时请你帮他找人制作一枚中文名印章(name stamp) 以作纪念。你已找好制作人。给他写封邮件, 告知此事, 并请他从所附图片中挑选字体、图案及材料。 世纪金榜导学号
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
How is everything going? I can still remember the days we spent together when you taught in China. When you went back to America last month, you mentioned that you wanted to get a Chinese name stamp made for you, as it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m so glad to tell you that I’ve already found a stamp craftsman who’s experienced and skilled at making Chinese traditional name stamps.
To make a stamp that suits you best, I attach some pictures of various types of characters, designs and materials in the email. You can choose whichever of them you prefer.
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
类型七 发言稿
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在, 他们即将回国, 你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1. 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)
2. 谈谈收获或感想;
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
I
时态
一般现在时, 一般过去时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:回顾双方的交流活动
主题段落:细数收获或感想
结尾:表达祝愿与期望
Step 2 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:privilege, highlight, compare with, witness, enthusiasm, have a better understanding of, a whole new level.
(2)佳句
①It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.
②The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.
Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我很荣幸地站在这里。
I am honored to be here.
句式升级(it作形式主语)
我很荣幸地站在这里。
It’s my great privilege to be here.
要点2:我们在成长, 友谊在增进。
We are growing and our friendship is improving.
句式升级(高级词汇)
过去的两周见证了我们的成长和友谊。
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship.
Step 4 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear friends,
How time flies! I am Li Jin, President of Student Union of Chenguang High School. It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing my moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain. During the two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures. One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us. After the two-week exchange activities, we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level. And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever. Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛, 本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者, 你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言, 请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 说明比赛的意义, 如提高英语听说能力, 养成读书的习惯等;
2. 说明比赛的注意事项, 如每人演讲不超过5分钟, 语言流利, 发音准确等;
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too. There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation. Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!
Thank you!
类型八 通知类
假如你是李华, “全国中学生英语演讲大赛”将在你校举行, 请你根据以下要点, 以校学生会的名义写一则通知:
1. 主题: 未来生活;
2. 时间和地点:3月5日上午8:30-12:00;体育场;
3. 选手:全国各地的20名高中生;
4. 评委:中国和美国的英语教授;
5. 要求:欢迎参与, 积极交流。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
练考场审题
Step 1 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称
we
时态
一般现在时, 一般将来时
段落布局
开头点题:点明演讲比赛的时间和地点
主题段落:演讲的参加者和评委及其他要求
结尾:表达希望大家积极参与的愿望
Step 2 头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词 gather, deliver, make remarks on, a valuable experience
(2)佳句
①We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th.
②Some famous English professors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the performances of the competitors.
Step 3 斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我们很高兴地通知你“全国中学生英语演讲大赛” 将于3月5日上午8:30-12:00在体育场举行。
We are glad to inform you that we will hold the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students in our school on March 5th.
句式升级(被动句式)
We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th.
要点2:通过和一些评委及优秀的学习者交流, 你会学到很多。
You will learn a lot by talking with some judges and excellent English learners.
句式升级(it作形式主语以及高级词汇)
和一些评委及优秀的英语学习者交换想法将会是一次珍贵的经历。
It would be a valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners.
Step 4 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Announcement
We are glad to inform you that the National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students is to be held in our school on March 5th. It will start at 8:30 am and last about three and a half hours.
Twenty high school students from all parts of China will gather in the stadium and deliver their speeches on the given topic——Future Life. Some famous English professors from the USA and China will be invited to be judges and make remarks on the performances of the competitors.
Welcome to attend this competition if you have any interest in English speeches or this topic. It would be a valuable experience to exchange ideas with some judges and excellent English learners. Don’t miss it.
The Students’ Union
假如你叫李华, 是某外语特色高中的学生会主席。下周, 你校将举办以“保护传统文化”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下的内容代表学生会写一则英语通知。
时间:12月16日周三下午4:30-6:00
事件:举办英语演讲比赛
地点:学校礼堂(auditorium)
通知内容:
1. 每班推荐两名选手;
2. 选手提前20分钟到场抽签;
3. 演讲时间3分钟;
4. 英语老师和外教做评委, 当场发奖
注意事项:按时到场, 不要迟到。
选手:contestant, 抽签:draw lots
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
In order to arouse the students’ awareness of protecting the traditional Chinese culture and improve their speaking ability, an English speech contest is to be held on Wednesday afternoon, December 16th. It lasts from 4:30p. m to 6:00 p. m in the school auditorium. Two contestants will be chosen from each class and deliver a speech on how to keep traditional Chinese culture alive within three minutes. The contestants must arrive before 4:10 p. m to draw lots, which will decide on the order of their speech. All English teachers and foreign teachers will act as judges. The winner will be announced on the spot. Please come on time.
The Students’ Union
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