高中英语人教版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 2 Travelling around公开课教案

Section Ⅴ　Writing——给朋友写一封关于旅行计划的信

本单元的写作项目属于说明文体类别中的“说明旅行计划类”的书信，这种题目要求我们针对旅行的地点，时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题；句子结构完整；信息内容准确；篇章结构连贯。

一、基本框架

(一)Para.Ⅰ开头(beginning)——突出重点，开门见山，直接描述旅行的主要目的。

(二)Para.Ⅱ——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。

(三)Para.Ⅲ——交代出行方式及原因。

(四)Para.Ⅳ——总结此次旅行的心得体会。

二、注意事项

(一)明确写作对象

地点介绍类说明文是以介绍地点的基本特征、以说明文为主要表达方式的文章。说明的对象就是说明文介绍的具体事物。一般来说，说明对象可以从题目中确定。说明对象的确定，是写作说明文的第一步。

(二)确定介绍说明的内容和重点

写作地点介绍类说明文既要抓住所介绍地点的基本特征，即命题要求中所列的基本要求，又要选择该地点突出的特征重点介绍，这样才能使文章既要点清晰又重点突出。

(三)合理安排说明顺序

地点介绍类说明文介绍顺序的安排可依据说明对象的特征来决定。一般来说，可采用由外向内、从上到下、由远及近等空间顺序进行说明。只有写作时遵循一定的说明顺序，才能使文章条理清楚，中心突出。

(四)语言运用准确无误

遣词造句不可过分渲染，要简洁明了，尤其要注意方位词的准确运用。在写作过程中，要灵活运用语言，不能机械地翻译命题要求。另外，应尽量选择地道的、高级的表达方式。同时，要尽量避免低级错误的出现。

常见精彩开头

1．I'm writing to share my travel plan to...with you.

2．Over the holiday，my parents and I are planning to go...

3．I'm writing to tell you my travel plan to...

4．You have asked for some information about/concerning my travel to...

5．We are planning to make a trip to...

描述旅行及景点常用句型

1．We are looking forward to...

2．We are anxious to do...

3．It is an amazing sight that I have ever seen.

4．We can't help going...

5．I have heard that...

6．There is no doubt that...

7．We'll go to the destination by train/air/bus...

结尾段常用的句型

1．I think that's all for now.

2．Sp.is really worth your visiting.Looking forward to your coming.

3．I'll never forget the place...

4．I'll travel here again if I have time in the future.

5．I hope you will have a trip with me...

6．In a word，the travel makes me...

假设你是小李，你打算给你的好友Richard写一封电子邮件告诉他你打算今年暑假去伦敦旅行。请用英语给他写一封100词左右的信件。内容如下：

提示词：Greenwich格林尼治 the longitude line 子午线 navigation 航海 Westminster Abbey 威斯敏斯特教堂

Ⅰ.精选单词短语

1．amazing 神奇的

2．statue 雕像

3．sight 景象

4．be useful for 对……有用

5．in memory of 为了纪念

Ⅱ.巧用句式语法

(一)完成句子

1．I've heard there are many amazing sights and I can't wait to see them.

我听说伦敦有许多令人惊奇的景象，我迫不急待地想去看看。

2．What amazes me most is the longitude line.

最让我感到惊奇的就是子午线。

3．It is an amazing line dividing the eastern and western of the world and is useful for navigation.

这是一条把地球分成两半的神奇的线，它对航海有用。

4．It contains statues in memory of the dead poets and writers.

它里面有一些用来纪念已故诗人和作家的雕像。

(二)句式升级

5．I have heard that there are so many amazing sights that I can't wait to see them.

我听说伦敦有很多景象以致我迫不急待想去看看。(用so...that结构)

6．It is very useful for navigation.

→It is of great use for navigation.

它对航行很有用处。(be＋of＋n.)

7．I must keep my eyes open to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.

→I must keep my eyes open if I am going to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.

我一定留心观察让我的伦敦之旅不虚此行又有意义。(用if条件句改写)

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[参考范文]　

Dear Richard，

With the summer holiday coming，my parents and I are planning to have to travel in London，I've heard there are so many amazing sights there that I can't wait to see them.We are going to visit Greenwich，where we can see its old ships and famous clock that sets the world time，because both my father and I are interested in geography.What amazes me most is the longitude line.It is an amazing line dividing the eastern and western halves of the world.

We are also planning to visit Westminster Abbey.It contains statues in memory of the dead poets and writers，because my mother loves one of the poets and his poems.We are also going to see London Tower and a few other famous sights.

We are going to London by plane.Leaving on the July 10th，we're arriving at London next day.

I think I must keep my eyes open if I'm going to make my trip to London enjoyable and worthwhile.

【导读】　《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说。它以格列佛的口气描述了在小人国、大人国、飞岛国和慧国的奇迹，反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶。

【节选】

Gulliver's Travels

I was born in Nottinghamshire and was the third of five sons.My father was not a rich man，but he was able to send me to Cambridge University，where I studied for three years.When I left college，I continued my studies and became a doctor.But I always wanted to travel，and so I made several voyages as a ship's doctor.When I married my wife Mary，however，I planned to stay at home for a while.But after a few years I discovered I was not earning enough money from my patients.I decided to go to sea again，and this time I joined a ship sailing to the islands in the South Pacific Ocean.We started our journey from Bristol on May 4th,1699.

At first our voyage went well.We sailed across the Atlantic，round the coast of Africa and into the Indian Ocean.But before we could reach the Pacific，a violent storm hit us and drove us to the north­west of Tasmania.The wind drove our ship on to a rock，which broke the ship in half.Some of the sailors and I managed to get a boat into the water，and we rowed away to look for land.But when we were too tired to row any more，a great wave hit our small boat，and we all fell into the sea.I do not know what happened to my companions，but I suppose they were all drowned[1]．

The wind and waves pushed me along as I struggled to keep my head above water[2]．I became very tired and soon felt I could not swim any more.Luckily，just then my feet touched the ground.I walked out of the sea and on to a beach，where there was no sign of any people or houses.I was so exhausted that I lay down and went to sleep.

《格列佛游记》

我出生在诺丁汉郡，在五个孩子中排行第三。父亲并不富裕，不过还是能送我上剑桥大学，在那儿我学了三年。我离开大学后继续学习，当了名医生。可是我总想去旅行，就当了船医，出海旅行了好几次。我娶了妻子玛丽后，决定在家待一段时间。没过几年，我发现从病人身上赚不了多少钱。我决定再次出海，这次登上的是开往南太平洋的轮船。我们于1699年5月4日从布里斯托尔启程。

起初航行很顺利。我们穿过大西洋，绕过非洲海岸，进入印度洋。可是到达太平洋以前，暴风击中我们，我们被刮到塔斯马尼亚的西北。暴风使我们的船撞上了礁石，把船劈为两半。我和一些水手把救生艇放下水，划着去寻找陆地。我们累得再也划不动时，一个巨浪打中了我们的小船，我们都落入海水里。我不清楚我的同伴怎么样了，不过我猜他们都淹死了。

我挣扎着把头露出水面，而风浪推动着我漂流。我精疲力竭，觉得再也游不动了。幸亏那时我的脚刚好踩到了陆地。我从海里走上海岸，四处没有任何有人烟的迹象。我已累到极点，躺下就睡着了。

[知识积累]

1．violent adj.　　　 (风，爆炸等)猛烈的

2．row vt.   划船

3．companion n.   同伴

4．drown vt.   淹死；浸没

5．touch vt.   触摸

6．exhausted adj.   精疲力竭的

[1]该句为but连接的并列句，what引导宾语从句，而“they were all drowned”为省掉that的宾语从句。

[2]此句为主从复合句。as引导时间状语从句。

[文化链接]

格列佛历经千辛万苦回到他的祖国，他打算真实详细地记录他的旅程，却遭到了那些别有企图的旅行者的反对。