高中英语人教版 (2019)必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life优秀教案设计

Section Ⅴ　Writing——建议信

本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。

一、基本框架

1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。

2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。

3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。

二、注意事项

1．开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信 时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。

2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。

3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。

4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。

常见精彩开头

1．I'm sorry you have trouble in...

2．I am writing to share some advice with you.

3．You have asked me for my advice about...

4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning...

5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestion.

提出建议时常用的句型

1．I think it would be a good idea if...

2．In my opinion，it would be wise to...

3．I suggest that you should...

4．In my opinion，you'd better...

5．I advise you to...

6．If I were you，I would...

7．Why not...？/Why don't you...?

8．How about....？/What about...?

结尾段常用的句型

1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful.

2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail.

3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.

4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.

5．I hope you will take my advice into account.

6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.

假定你叫张伟，你的好友王强因不擅长与别人交流，感到非常苦恼。最近，他来信向你求助。请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信。主要内容应包括：

1．劝他不必为此事感到苦恼；

2．告诉他与别人有效地交流是很重要的；

3．就如何改变目前的状况给他提出几点建议。

要求：1.表达要清楚，语言简洁、流畅；

 2.针对问题给出建议，层次清晰。

Ⅰ.精选单词短语

1．upset　　　　　　　　 心烦意乱的

2．be concerned about    关心；挂念

3．add up   增加

4．tip   提示；技巧

Ⅱ.巧用句式语法

(一)完成句子

1．It is because you are not able to communicate with others effectively that you are feeling upset.

你不能有效地与他人交流是你感到难受的原因。(强调句型)

2．With few people knowing how to communicate with others，you haven't got to be concerned about it too much.

因为很少人了解如何与他人交流，因此你没有必要对此太过于担心。(with的复合结构)

3．I find it necessary to give you some tips on how to settle the problem.

我发现提供给你一些如何解决这个问题的方法很有必要。(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)

4．While communicating with others，you should understand them so that you can exchange ideas with them.

在与别人交流时，你应该理解他们以便于你能与他们交换意见。(省略结构)

5．I do hope my tips will be of help to you.

我尤其希望我的建议对你有帮助。(强调谓语动词)

(二)句式升级

6．你没必要太担心此事。(用there be结构)

You haven't got to be concerned about it too much.

→There is no need that you have got to be concerned about it too much.

7．那就是为什么我想要提供给你一些如何解决这个问题技巧的原因。(表语从句及动词升级)

It's the reason why I want to give you some tips on how to settle the problem.

→That is why I want to give you some tips on how to solve the problem.

8．我希望我的建议对你有帮助。(be of＋n.)

I hope my tips will be helpful to you.

→I hope my tips will be of great help to you.

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[参考范文]　

Dear Wang Qiang，

I'm sorry to hear that you are upset about the problem that you can't communicate with others effectively.In fact，there is no need that you have got to be concerned about it too much with few people knowing how to do it well.

I find it necessary to give you some tips on how to settle the problem.First，while communicating with others，you should understand them so that you can exchange ideas with them.Besides，you should not be anxious about it and learn to make more friends with your classmates.

In a word，I do hope my tips will be of great help to you.

Yours，

Zhang Wei

【导读】　《狮子、女巫与魔衣橱》(The Lion，the Witch and the Wardrobe)是英国作家C.S.路易斯所著的《纳尼亚传奇》系列奇幻儿童文学小说的第二部(写作顺序是第一部)。

【节选】

The Lion，the Witch and the Wardrobe

So the children all got close together and walked up to the tree and in behind it，and there，sure enough，they found the Beaver；but it still drew back，saying to them in a hoarse throaty whisper，“Further in，come further in.Right in here.We're not safe in the open！”

Only when it had led them into a dark spot where four trees grew so close together that their boughs met and the brown earth and pine needles could be seen underfoot because no snow had been able to fall there，did it begin to talk to them.

“Are you the Sons of Adam and the Daughters of Eve？”it said.

“We're some of them.”said Peter.

“S­s­s­sh！”said the Beaver，“Not so loud please.We're not safe even here.”

“Why，who are you afraid of？”said Peter.“There's no one here but ourselves.”

“There are the trees.”said the Beaver.“They're always listening. Most of them are on our side，but there are trees that would betray us to her；you know who I mean.”and it nodded its head several times.

“If it comes to talking about sides，”said Edmund，“how do we know you're a friend？”

“Not meaning to be rude，Mr Beaver.”added Peter，“But you see，we're strangers.”

“Quite right，quite right，”said the Beaver.“Here is my token.”With these words it held up to them a little white object.They all looked at it in surprise，till suddenly Lucy said，“Oh，of course.It's my handkerchief—the one I gave to poor Mr Turanus.”

“That's right.”said the Beaver.“Poor fellow，he got wind of the arrest before it actually happened and handed this over to me.He said that if anything happened to him I must meet you here and take you on to...”Here the Beaver's voice sank into silence and it gave one or two very mysterious nods.

狮子、女巫与魔衣橱

于是，孩子们紧靠在一起，朝着那棵树走过去，一直走到树后面，海狸原先站的地方，但海狸却从那里又继续朝后退去了。它压低了嗓门用一种嘶哑的声音对他们说：“往里，再往里，到我这儿来，在外面有危险。”

它把他们一直引到一个非常幽暗的地方。那里有四棵树紧挨在一起，树枝与树枝连成一片，雪落不到下面来，因而地上可以看见褐色的泥土和松针。他们到了这儿以后，海狸才开始和他们说话。

“你们是亚当的儿子和夏娃的女儿吗？”它问。

“是的。”彼得答道。

“嘘！”海狸说，“声音不要太大，即使在这儿，我们还是不够安全。”

“为什么，你怕谁？”彼得说，“这里除了我们以外，再也没别的人了。”

“这里有树。”海狸说，“它们老把耳朵竖着。它们当中绝大多数站在我们一边，但也有背叛我们倒向她那一边的，你们知道我说得是谁。”它接连点了好几下头。

“要是说到两边的话，”爱德蒙说，“我们怎么知道你是朋友而不是敌人？”

“请你别见怪，海狸先生，”彼得解释说，“你看，我们彼此之间还不熟悉呢。”

“对，对，”海狸说，“我这里有一样信物。”说着，它就拿出一件白色的小东西。孩子们都惊讶地注视着。突然，露西说道：“哦，这是我的手帕，是我送给可怜的图姆纳斯先生的。”

“不错，”海狸说，“我可怜的伙伴，他在被捕以前听到了风声，就把这手帕交给我，说如果他有什么意外，我就必须在这个地方与你们会面，并领你们到……”说到这里，海狸的声音低得听不见了。它非常神秘地向孩子们点点头。

[知识积累]

1．hoarse adj.嘶哑的

2．throaty adj.声音低沉的

3．bough n．大树枝

4．token n．信物

[1]该句是only引导的部分倒装句。when引导的状语从句中，spot是先行词，where引导的是定语从句。在定语从句中，含有so...that引导的结果状语从句，because引导的是原因状语从句。

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《纳尼亚传奇》是刘易斯于1950年至1956年间创作的七本系列魔幻故事，分别为《魔法师的外甥》《狮子、女巫与魔衣橱》《能言马与男孩》《凯斯宾王子》《黎明踏浪号》《银椅》和《最后一战》。故事中的“纳尼亚王国”是一个神秘奇幻的世界，在这些故事中，小主人公们或凭借一枚魔法戒指，或通过一扇衣柜大门等各种奇妙方法进入奇幻世界纳尼亚王国。故事以正义与邪恶的斗争为线索展开，他们在伟大的狮王阿斯兰帮助下，通过英勇的冒险和战斗，一次次战胜邪恶，拯救纳尼亚的人们并保卫了这个神奇而充满欢乐的国度。每个故事独立成册，但形散神不散，七个主题构成一部史诗般的整体。