2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-概要写作-第17篇

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-概要写作-第17篇，共27页。PPT课件主要包含了CONTENTS，原则方法，写作指导 四个原则，写作指导，四个步骤，说明文，记叙文，议论文，实战演练，概要写作等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Principles and Methds
概要是将原文“浓缩”后产生的新语篇，通过删除原文中的细节,减少例证，简化描述内容来实现语言的简洁性。评分标准要求： 40＜标准词数＜80
涵盖全部要点是概要写作基本要求。
对原文准确理解是概要写作的前提。
概要是用自己的语言对原文内容要点的概括和转述，不是再创作，要忠于原文，绝对不能出现来自于原作者以外的其他观点。
01 速读全文，弄清文体结构
速读全文，了解文章体裁，弄清语篇结构。理解段意和文意(各种文体的大致结构，见下一张PPT)
完全使用自己的语言表达全部的内容要点，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，有效使用语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。
根据文体结构，在文中找到并划出主题句，以及能体现内容要点的关键词。
认真检查、修改、润色，然后规范誊写到答题卡上，做到字迹工整，卷面整洁。
03 根据要点，转换表达
02 根据结构，划出全部要点
04 仔细检查，规范誊写
体裁不同，结构不同，找要点的方法也不同
找出记叙文的6要素：何人(wh)在何时(when)何地(where)因何原因(why)做了何事(what)，结果如何(hw)。其中，最重要的要点是某人做了某事。
1.事物描述类：对象+结构/性质+功用2.问题解决类：问题+(解决的)方法或措施3.社会现象类：现象+原因+后果(+措施或建议)
论点+论据：其关键在于找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，不可漏掉其中任何一方。
Writing Practice
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In the past, mst peple exercised every day. They didn’t exercise n purpse. Instead, they exercised by wrking n the land and by walking everywhere. Nw, hwever, peple d nt take as much exercise. Many peple wrk in ffices r factries where they d nt have t mve arund very much. Nw that cities are s big, few peple walk t wrk. They drive r travel by bus r train. With mdern telecmmunicatins technlgy, they dn’t have t mve arund t get messages delivered.
What they have t d is just t press a few buttns n their phnes r ther devices (设备). Because f this unhealthy mdern lifestyle, many peple try t exercise in ther ways. Jgging and running are very ppular. Ging t the gym is als a ppular way f getting exercise. Many wmen prefer t g t aerbic(有氧的) classes at the gym. In these classes, music is played ludly and an instructr shuts ut instructins fr the exercises.
The peple in the class run, stretch and jump arund fr an hur r mre. Men and wmen als d weight training at the gym. They lift heavy weights t build up their muscles. Althugh thusands f peple d these srts f exercises every day, sme experts believe that they are actually bad fr the bdy.
Running n hard surfaces like rads can damage yur feet and knees, and aerbics and weight training can be dangerus if the instructr is nt prperly trained. It is easy t hurt yurself if yu lift heavy weights r exercise hard fr a lng perid f time.
These experts believe that mre gentle frms f exercise are better. They advise peple t walk mre as it is ne f the best ways t exercise, and des nt damage the bdy at all. They als suggest traditinal Chinese exercises such as Tai Chi because these activities are better fr the bdy than hard, fast activities like running. Tai Chi trains yur flexibility and imprves yur sense f balance. Meanwhile, it has the least harmful effect n yur jints and knees.
Writing Prcess
Step1. 速读全文，弄清文体结构
快速浏览全文，了解文章体裁，弄清语篇结构，理解段意和文意。
“现象+原因+结果或措施”型说明文
现象：Nw, hwever, peple d nt take as much exercise.
原因：With mdern telecmmunicatins technlgy, they dn’t have t mve arund ...
结果或措施： peple try t exercise in ther ways.
段落大意：Paragragh 1：随着科技发展，人们的运动量比以前大幅减少。Paragragh 2：为了保持健康，人们转而采用其他的运动方式。Paragragh 3：一些专家认为那些流行的运动对身体有害，甚至是危险的。长期依此锻炼会伤身。Paragragh 4：专家建议采用对人体几乎没有损害的，更温和及更传统的运动。
文章大意： 本文主要介绍了为了保持健康，现代人采用了一些流行的运动方式。但一些专家对此存疑，有所建议。
要点1. 现象：In the past, mst peple exercised every day. Nw, hwever, peple d nt take as much exercise. 原因：With mdern telecmmunicatins technlgy, they dn’t have t mve arund ...
Step2. 根据结构，划出全部要点
根据文本结构，在文中找到并划出主题句，以及所有能体现内容要点的关键词：说明文跟议论文一样，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾，或转折处(如hwever, but, in fact等)。
要点2. 结果或措施：Because f this unhealthy mdern lifestyle, many peple try t exercise in ther ways.
要点3. 一些专家对此类锻炼方法存疑： (1) experts believe that they are actually bad fr the bdy. (2) be dangerus...要点4. 专家建议更温和无害的锻炼方式： (1) These experts believe that mre gentle frms f exercise are better. (2) Meanwhile, it has the least harmful effect n yur jints and knees.
要点1. In the past, mst peple exercised every day.Nw, hwever, peple d nt take as much exercise.With mdern telecmmunicatins technlgy, they dn’t have t mve arund t get messages delivered. 转换：With the develpment f technlgy, peple d nt exercise as much as they did.
Step3. 根据要点，转换表达
用自己的语言将所有要点一个不漏地表达出来。
要点2.Because f this unhealthy mdern lifestyle, many peple try t exercise in ther ways.转换：As a result, in rder t keep fit, they turn t ther ways f exercise.
要点3. Althugh thusands f peple d these srts f exercises every day, sme experts believe that they are actually bad fr the bdy. be dangerus... It is easy t hurt yurself if yu lift heavy weights r exercise hard fr a lng perid f time.
转换：Sme experts think that sme srts f exercises turn ut t be bad, even dangerus, fr the bdy.
要点4. These experts believe that mre gentle frms f exercise are better. Meanwhile, it has the least harmful effect n yur jints and knees. 转换：Therefre, mre gentle and traditinal exercises are recmmended, fr they d little damage t the human bdy.
写好初稿后，请检查是否包括了所有内容要点，是否准确使用了相应的语法结构和词汇，是否使用了语句间的连接成分，结构是否紧凑，是否是使用自己的语言，在语言表达中是否有语法错误和单词拼写错误，等等。 要检查无误后，就要认真规范地誊写，做到字迹工整，卷面整洁。也要注意计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
Step4. 仔细检查，规范誊写
One pssible versin: With the develpment f technlgy, peple d nt exercise as much as they did. (要点 1) As a result, in rder t keep fit, they turn t ther ways f exercise. (要点 2) Sme experts think that sme srts f exercises turn ut t be bad, even dangerus, fr the bdy. (要点 3) Therefre, mre gentle and traditinal exercises are recmmended, fr they d little damage t the human bdy. (要点 4)
Sample Cmmentary
2. 使用了自己的语言来表达。
3. 使用了相应的语法结构和词汇。如首句如原文用“With”+“ the develpment f technlgy”表示随着科技的发展。
4. 逻辑严密，结构紧凑。也运用了“As a result”和“ Therefre” 等连接词，起到了承上启下的过渡作用，让文章更流畅通顺。
5. 词数为64词，符合词数标准。
1. 涵盖了所有内容要点。