李华带你去中考 热点08 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点08 李华带你去中考

一、材料作文

1．“少年强则国强”，安徽省正在围绕这个主题举行“好少年”评比活动。假设你是李华，请根据下面的信息，为自己写一篇自荐信，标题为 “I am an outstanding student”。

要求：

1. 词数80~100；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。I am an outstanding student

I am Li Hua in Grade Nine from No. 5 Middle School.

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【参考范文】

I am an outstanding student

I am Li Hua in Grade Nine from No.5 Middle School. I am the tallest student in my class with glasses. I am humorous, kind and friendly. I am a monitor of my class. I like to do something helpful to our teachers and classmates. So, I am not only hard-working but also get along well with my classmates. And I am always strict with myself in order to set a good example. I am good at all my subjects.

Above all, I have some hobbies, like climbing and traveling. I hope to travel to many different places with my parents. And I want to be a math teacher because I like math and I am ready to help children in poor areas.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍自己的基本信息、外表、性格等；

第二步，介绍校园生活；

第三步，介绍自己的爱好。

[亮点词汇]

①not only…but also不仅……而且……

②be strict with对……严格

③get along well with与……相处融洽

[高分句型]

①And I want to be a math teacher because I like math and I am ready to help children in poor areas.（原因状语从句）

二、电子邮件

2．假设你是某国际学校的学生李华，你们班将于近日举办汉语名著阅读分享活动 (Chinese Classics Sharing Activity)，请你根据表格要点提示及要求，给在你校学习的交换生Mike写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，并告诉他时间、地点、目的、活动安排等。

要求：

1. 电子邮件应包括表格中的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2. 电子邮件中不得出现真实的人名和地名；

3. 词数80~120；电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese Classics Sharing Activity.

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Mike,

How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese Classics Sharing Activity. It will be held in the school art center from 8:00 pm to 10:00 pm on September 1.

This activity, which faces everyone who is interested, aims to make more people read Chinese classics as well as to give people a way to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. During the activity, each student will talk about a Chinese classic they read first, and then we can have a discussion and share our ideas about it. I know you are interested in reading Chinese classics, so this will be a great chance for you to talk about your favorite Chinese classic.

I am sure you will have much fun then if you come!

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；

③ 提示：写作要点以及开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明要邀请Mike参加活动；

第二步，具体介绍活动时间、地点以及活动等信息；

第三步，书写结语，表达对Mike的祝愿。

[亮点词汇]

①as well as以及

②learn about了解

③talk about讨论

④be interested in对……感兴趣

[高分句型]

①This activity, which faces everyone who is interested, aims to make more people read Chinese classics as well as to give people a way to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. （定语从句）

②I am sure you will have much fun then if you come!（宾语从句）

3．假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。

注意：

1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

3. 词数100左右；邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Frank,I am glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear Frank,

I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.

First of all, you need to get some notebooks and dictionaries ready, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.

And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.

I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，为应用文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，欢迎对方来中国学习并引入主题；

第二步，根据表格提示详细说明来中国学习需要注意的事项；

第三步，表达自己的希望。

[亮点词汇]

①first of all首先

②work hard努力工作

③look forward to期待

[高分句型]

①Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates.（if引导条件状语从句）

②Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语；动词不定式作目的状语）

4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda想了解你们学校英语节的情况，请你根据表格提示给她写一封e-mail。

要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；

4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）

Dear Linda,We had an unforgettable English festival last week.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Linda,

We had an unforgettable English festival last week. It was really fun to enjoy such wonderful shows in our school hall. All the teachers and students took part in the activities. Some parents were also invited to watch our performances. As you can imagine, all the performers tried their best to show themselves. Some sang English songs. Some played English plays. And others read English poems. My favorite was to tell Chinese stories in English. I was very glad to tell a traditional Chinese story freely in English. And I was excited to know I won the first.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题，介绍上周度过了一个难忘的英语节；

第二步，介绍英语节举行时间、地点、参加的人员以及活动；

第三步，谈谈自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

① take part in 参加

② try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事

③ in English 用英语

④ be excited to do sth. 兴奋地做某事

[高分句型]

 ① It was really fun to enjoy such wonderful shows in our school hall.（It is+名词+to do sth. 做某事……）

② Some parents were also invited to watch our performances.（含一般过去时的被动语态）

三、书信作文

5．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Luke的学校即将开设特色选修课程，他正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给他写封回信。内容提示：

注意：(1)内容必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。其中“How to learn”需拓展，结合自身经验，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法；

(2)文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称；

(3)词数100左右。

Dear Luke,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Luke,

I’m so glad to hear from you. I suggest you choose the Chinese course.

With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Leaning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.

As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求根据提示内容，针对学习汉语给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，建议对方选择汉语课；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“重要性、如何学习”两个方面重点介绍；

第三步，书写结语，希望建议能帮到对方。

[亮点词汇]

①hear from收到……的信

②with the development of随着……发展

③in my opinion在我看来

④be supposed to应该

[高分句型]

①With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular.（形容词比较级结构）

②I hope my advice can help you.（省略that的宾语从句）

6．假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生，请结合自己在初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，给Frank写一封100词左右的回信。（可能用到的词汇：respect尊重）

1.需要用到的学习用品；

2.对待学习、生活的态度；

3.如何与老师、同学相处；

4.需要注意的其它方面。

Dear Frank.

I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Frank,

I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share with you.

To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. Please remember no matter what happens, stay active, even when you fail.

Please respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colorful.

I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接开头，表明写信缘由；

第二步，就初中生活，在学习、生活等方面给出建议；

第三步，最后表达希望见到对方。

[亮点词汇]

①share with sb与某人分享

②To begin with开始

③get on well with sb与某人相处得很好

[高分句型]

①Please respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition.（as引导的原因状语从句）

②it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colorful.（动词不定式作定语和作目的状语）

7．光明中学最近举行了“学校年度榜样学生”评选，需要征集同学的自我简介。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示写一篇介绍自己的文章，向学校校报投稿。80词左右，短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

要点提示：

1. 你的特长爱好（至少两点）；

2. 日常生活习惯（至少两点）；

3. 你的校园生活，参加的社团以及收获。

要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2. 须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；

Dear students,

I’m Li Hua from Grade 7. I’m glad to introduce myself to you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear students,

I’m Li Hua from Grade 7. I’m glad to introduce myself to you.

I like playing basketball very much, and I play it very well. Besides, I like drawing, too. Every morning, I get up at six. I usually go to school by bike. I have lunch at twelve o’clock. I get home at five. After dinner, I will do my homework. I have many friends at school. We often play games between classes. What’s more, I join the basketball club. From the club I learn the importance of teamwork.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍你的特长爱好；

第二步，介绍你的日常生活习惯；

第三步，最后简单介绍你的校园生活，参加的社团以及收获。

[亮点词汇]

①like doing sth喜欢做某事

②get up起床

③what’s more此外

[高分句型]

I like playing basketball very much, and I play it very well.（and连接并列结构）