加强对中小学生的劳动教育 热点07 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点07 加强对中小学生的劳动教育

一、材料作文

1．国家提出了将劳动教育（Labor Education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

写作要点：

1.劳动教育的意义（学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……）

2.校内劳动教育建议（开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……）

3.……

写作要求：

1.内容必须包含给出的所有信息；

2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；

3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；

4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；

5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。

Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School

It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools.

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【参考范文】

Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School

It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools. I think it’s important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.

As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.

I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文；

②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；

③提示：写作提示已经给出，校内劳动教育的建议是本文的写作重点，需要细化，且可以适当补充。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表达劳动教育的意义；

第二步，表达校内劳动教育建议，这是写作重点，细化具体建议；

第三步，表达自己的愿望。

[亮点词汇]

①as for至于

②offer classes to teach us how to... 提供课程教我们如何……

③make our school life more colorful and meaningful让我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩和有意义

④look forward to期盼

[高分句型]

The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.（宾语从句）

2．劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此，青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期，育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历，以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

要求如下：

1.请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动；

2.重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议；

3.文中不得出现真实个人信息。

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【参考范文】

Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities

Labor is the source of all happiness. Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students’ all-round development. And I think it is good to do housework.

Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. I used to be lazy at home. Seeing this, my mother came up with an idea—I have to earn my pocket money by doing housework. It changed me a lot. For example, when I can’t work out a math problem, I prefer to sweep the floor or tidy up my room to clear my mind. Once my mother told me to buy some fruit. I quickly made a list, compared prices and bought fresh fruit. I now have a habit of managing money and I know it’s great of my mother to look after my family so well!

This is how I learn to do housework—it’s a skill that lasts a lifetime.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍经常参加的劳动以及参加劳动的收获并提出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3．“双减”活动开展以来，学生有更多的时间去参加校内、校外以及家庭的各种劳动了。比如参好加学校、街道清洁卫生、到敬老院开展志愿服务、以及在家里当小厨师等等。你校英语社团以“我（们）劳动, 我（们）快乐”为主题向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

要点提示：

（1）分享一次你难忘的劳动经历；

（2）谈谈你的劳动感受；

（3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。

要求：1. 必须包含所给要点, 可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 语法正确, 书写规范；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；

4. 词数 80 左右。

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【参考范文】

Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil.

It was the first time for me to cook for them. A little tired but happy. I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.

I think it’s our duty to share some housework. As teenagers, we should take action to help around the house!

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写作要点提示已经给出；

②时态：时态是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意用适当的逻辑词语连接，使得行文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，结合要点提示，分享自己一次劳动经历；

第二步，就这次劳动经历谈及自己的感受；

第三步，最后总结自己的观点，并发表倡议。

[亮点词汇]

①get up early早起

②feel proud of为……自豪

③take care of照顾

④take action采取行动

[高分句型]

①It was the first time for me to cook for them. （句型It was the first time for sb to do sth表示“某人第一次做某事”）

②I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.（because引导的原因状语从句）

4．日前，中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》(A guideline on hardworking spirit education)，提出了中学生应该树立“劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽”的劳动精神。校英文报社以此为主题，举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面提示，写一篇短文投稿。谈谈你对劳动教育的看法，并提出建议。

写作要点：

1.你认为培养劳动精神重要吗？至少给出两条理由。

2.从以下几个方面谈谈你参加的有助于培养劳动精神的活动：

a. What housework do you usually do at home?

b. What out-of-class activities do you take part in at school?

3.就“如何培养劳动精神”给出你的建议。

要求：

1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.

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【参考范文】

  A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. The hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.

  I usually do housework at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. I also take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich my real-world work experience.

  In order to develop hardworking spirit, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. We should try to form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍自己对于培养劳动精神的看法；

第二步，谈谈自己通常在家做什么家务以及参加什么课后活动；

第三步，就“如何培养劳动精神”给出建议。

[亮点词汇]

①come out出现

②build up增进

③take part in参加

④such as例如

⑤try to do sth尽力做某事

[高分句型]

A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.（动词不定式作目的状语）

5．近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括：

1.上劳动课，学习生活技能；

2.参加实践活动，如：植树、洗菜等；

3.学做家务，如整理房间、学做菜等；

4.养成良好的劳动习惯。

注意：

1.词数不少于80；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加词汇，使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：a hardworking spirit class劳动课，life skills生活技能，guideline指导方针

A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

     A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.

     As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.

     In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，根据提示介绍如何培养劳动精神；

第二步，介绍参加劳动的好处；

第三步，最后做总结。

[亮点词汇]

①take part in参加

②try to do sth尝试做某事

③above all首先

④in a word总而言之

[高分句型]

we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.（and连接两个并列句）

6．日前，加强中小学生劳动教育这一话题受到社会各界广泛关注。为积极响应国家政策，今年3月1日起，全国各地不少中小学开设诸如插秧、种地、烹饪等劳动课程。同学们也通过这样的课程感受到了劳动的乐趣与满足感。校刊英语专栏以“Labor is the most glorious (劳动最光荣)”为主题，向全校学生征稿。请你结合自己一次劳动经历，写一篇英文征文。

参考要点：

1.自己的一次劳动经历（过程、感受）

2.你对劳动教育的看法（观点、原因）

3. ……

要求：1.80-120 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 提示：labor    v.  劳动    n. 劳动

Labor is the most glorious

Primary and secondary schools in many cities have set up at least one labor class every week starting from March 1.

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【参考范文】

Labor is the most glorious

Primary and secondary schools in many cities have set up at least one labor class every week starting from March 1.

As for me, I have learned some cooking skills in the school. Last weekend, I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First, I boiled some water. Then I put some noodles into the pot. About five or six minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me. Therefore, I felt happy and was proud of myself.

I think labor education is very important. Through labor lessons, we can not only learn some life skills but also help our parents do some housework. At the same time, our school life will become more colorful and meaningful.

I love labor lessons!

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中对劳动教育的看法，注意要点要齐全。注意动词时态的转换。

[写作步骤]

第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己的一次劳动经历和感受；

第二步，介绍自己对劳动教育的看法；

第三步，书写结语。表达自己对劳动教育的喜爱。

[亮点词汇]

①as for sb.就某人而言

②be proud of对……感到自豪

③not only...but also...不仅……而且……

④at the same time同时

[高分句型]

①When my parents got up, they were surprised and praised me.（when引导时间状语从句）

②I think labor education is very important.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）

二、电子邮件

7．为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Linda 对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给 Linda 回一封邮件。

要点:

1.劳动教育的目的：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；

2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；

3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)

要求:

1.80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;

3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。

参考词汇：劳动教育 the labor education 劳动课the labor lesson/course  手工课 the manual training lesson/course

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】:

 Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you. You say you are interested in our labor course. I would like to share something about it with you.

As we know, the labor course is set to educate students to respect and honor hard work, and form good working habits. In our school, we are offered various Chinese traditional manual training courses, such as paper-cutting. We learn to do housework as well. Some teachers teach us to cook several kinds of simple dishes.

In my view, through the labor education, we students can acquire some life skills. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colorful and meaningful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；

第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；

第三步，表达自己的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①be interested in对……感兴趣

②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物

③form good working habits养成良好的工作习惯

④teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事

[高分句型]

You say you are interested in our labor course.（省略that的宾语从句）

三、讲稿

8．劳动课即将走进我们的课程中，你作为一名即将完成义务教育阶段学习任务的学生，请你为在校同学写一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你对新课程方案的看法和建议。词数80左右。

内容包括：

1. 初中学生的学习任务应该有哪些?（写2点）

2. 课程方案规定，初中学生能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。对此你有何想法?（2点）

3. 你对在校同学的倡议（2点）

作文要求：

1. 文章的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；

2. 语句连贯，书写工整；不得出现单位或个人真实名称。

参考词汇：

课程方案： curriculum plan； 设计食谱design recipes；

A new subject will be carried out in school

The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.

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【参考范文】

A new subject will be carried out in school

The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.

According to the new curriculum plan, students should learn the basic subjects well, such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. Besides that, students should also have labor classes so that students can keep healthy.

The new curriculum plan also says that students can design recipes for three meals a day and make 3-4 dishes for lunch or dinner independently. I think it not only helps to develop students’ independence, but also it can make students better understand their parents.

As students, we should take an active part in labor classes and learn some useful life skills.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“A new subject will be carried out in school”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要谈论初中学生的学习任务有哪些；第三段谈论对中学生设计食谱以及做饭的看法；第四段讲述对学生的倡议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。