校园欺凌 热点01 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点01 校园欺凌

一、话题作文

1．

近年来校园欺凌事件频频发生，为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力，某中学围绕校园欺凌（bully v.）问题召开主题班会。

假定你是班长李华，以 How to protect ourselves in school 为标题写一篇短文，主要包括如下内容：

1. 校园欺凌对我们的影响。

2. 要求每个学生都学习相关知识。

3. 遇到校园欺凌时要冷静处置；及时告诉老师和家长；在校要友好待人，遵守校规……

4. 请求大家团结起来，校园会变得更美好。

要求：

1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；

3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2—3 分；

4. 80 词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How can we protect ourselves at school?

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.

【参考范文】

How can we protect ourselves at school?

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school. So we will learn how to protect ourselves at school.

Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should keep calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should ask our teachers and parents for help as soon as possible or we can call the police in time. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any rude behavior. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Finally, following school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

Let’s get together and make an effort to stop bullying. I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，呼应短文结尾；要求我们对“校园欺凌”这个事件展开，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点；可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨；同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

2．请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect  Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。

提示：

1. 谨慎交友。

2. 不参与打架斗殴。

3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。

参考词汇：1.  self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌）

3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴）

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?

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【参考范文】

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.

We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?

【详解】这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect  Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

在学校我们如何保护自己？

几乎每个学校都有欺负学校的行为。在我的学校里，我们有时会被欺负，一些学生会受到伤害，所以在学校欺负别人或被欺负对我们来说真的很不好。

当我们遇到校园欺凌的麻烦时，我们应该阻止任何校园欺凌。例如，在发生欺凌行为之前，我们应该保持冷静。与他人交朋友时，我们应该总是友好和乐于助人。以下是我关于制止学校欺负的一些想法。首先，我们将学习如何自我保护，因为我们的人身安全是最重要的。第二，我们要时刻与他人和睦相处，不能有任何暴力行为。最后，遵守校规也是避免学校欺负的一种方式。

我希望将来学校里不会发生欺负学生的事，你这么认为吗？

【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

3．校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。

提示：（1）What can you see in the picture？

（2）What do you think of school bullying?

（3）What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?

要求：1、表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥；

2、词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

3、短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。

参考词汇：mental health problems（心理问题）bullies（仗势欺人者）

In the picture, I can see ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

     In the picture, I can see two girls are bullying one girl. Bullying often occurs in schools.

In my opinion, school bullying is a serious problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying? If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.

【详解】1.题干解读：观察所给图片，根据所给提示和要求写一篇有关校园欺凌方面的短文，文中必须包含所给提示要点，可适当发挥，但短文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。

2.写作指导：本文主要是发表观点，提出处理方法，所以时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。写作时，可先描述图片中的现象，再发表自己的观点以及处理方法。保证内容完整、行文连贯、表达准确、书写规范。

4．在日常生活中，人们会遇到各种安全问题，例如饮食、交通、防疫或校园欺凌（bully v.）等问题。但有些同学不知道如何进行自我保护。基于此，为了提高同学们的自我保护意识，请以“Self Protection”为题， 用英语写一篇短文。

内容包括:

1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。

2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。

写作要求：

1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。

2.词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。

3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。

Self Protection

These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!

【参考范文】

Self Protection

These days, people pay more attention to safety problems.

As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves.

But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves.

In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求结合生活实际讲述自我保护的重要性，讲述自我保护的一些建议。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自我保护的重要性及自我保护的一些建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

二、材料作文

5．为配合扫黑除恶专项整治工作，杜绝校园欺凌，打造和谐安定校园，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。

提示：1.尊敬老师（respect the teachers），努力学习。

2.与同学融洽相处（get on well with），互相帮助。

3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。

4.遵守学校的规章制度（follow the school rules），不下河洗澡，不携带管制刀具（restricted knives）。

5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。

要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。

2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。

3.作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus. It’s good for our life and study. As students, we should do something to create a harmonious and stable campus.

Firstly, we should respect the teachers and study hard. Secondly, we should get on well with our classmates, and we should help each other. Thirdly, we should not fight with others or steal others’ things. What’s more, we must follow the school rules. We can’t swim in the rivers or take restricted knives to school. Lastly, we should not meet the strangers alone. And we should call the police when we are in danger.

It’s our duty to keep our campus harmonious and stable. Let’s start from today.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示，写一篇作文关于解决校园欺凌、打造和谐安定校园。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称行文。写作时涵盖要点，不要遗漏，内容可适当发挥，适当使用连词使文章更加连贯。最后力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

6．近来，校园暴力频发，引起无数人关注。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Build a civilized school”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；

2.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。

4.参考词汇：civilized文明的；psychological education心理教育；buly欺负（动词）.Build a civilized school

Recently, school bullying has become a serious problem.

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【参考范文】例文

Build a civilized school

Recently, school bullying has become a serious problem. 15.6 percent of students are bullied at school and 30.2 of the students see others bullied. 41% of the victims choose to tell the police, teachers and parents about their situation, while 51% of them choose to keep silent. School bullying has a great impact on students. They will become tired of studying and be afraid of anything. And they will also feel inferior.

In order to change the situation, we must take actions. First of all, the government should make laws to punish these people who bully others. What’s more, schools and parents should pay attention to life education and psychological education. The most important is that students should realize the harm of bullying and try to get on well with other. When in trouble, ask the adults for help immediately.

I hope through working together, we will build a civilized school.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“Build a civilized school”为题根据表格内容写一篇有关校园暴力的文章，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。第一段主要描述校园暴力的现状和危害；第二段讲述为阻止校园暴力采取的措施；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

7．请你根据以下提示，以How can we protect ourselves at school为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：

1．谨慎交友；

2．不参与打架斗殴；

3．面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。

注意：

1.词数80～100；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。

参考词汇： self­-protection (自我保护)；bully (n.& v．欺凌)；personal safety (人身安全)；have violent behaviors (打架斗殴)

How can we protect ourselves at school

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【参考范文】

How can we protect ourselves at school

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.

We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self­-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can't have any violent behaviors. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

I'm hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future. Do you think so?

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How can we protect ourselves at school”为题，根据提示要点的内容，从谨慎交友、不参与打架斗殴、面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护等方面写一篇短文；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

三、讲稿

8．近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的帖子后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：

1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？  

2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？ 请提出两点建议。

3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。

Good afternoon , everyone .

Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school._______________________

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That's all . Thank you

【参考范文】

Good afternoon , everyone .

Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school.In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn't be afraid to stop it .First , we should trust ourselves and tell them it's not right to do like that . Second ,we can ask teachers and parents for help.

It's everyone's duty to make schools safe . I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.

That's all . Thank you .

【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Today I am going to……，It makes us hard to……，If someone bullies us……，It's everyone's duty to……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲稿的目的是谈论“校园欺凌”，接下来介绍“校园欺凌”的危害以及如何面对这个问题，最后呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。此处talk about, in one’s opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。