人口与生育 热点05 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点05 人口与生育

一、话题作文

1．上个世纪八十年代，我国开始实施独生子女政策，随着国情的变化，我国国策也发生了变化。继2016年全面放开二胎政策后，我国于2021年开始依法实施三胎生育政策．符合条件的夫妻可以生育三个孩子。作为一个中学生，你对三胎政策有什么看法呢？你是否期待拥有弟弟妹妹呢？请你以 Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters? 为题目写一篇英语短文向《学英语》杂志社投稿。

要点提示：

表明自己的观点，阐述支持自己观点的理由和对未来生活的愿景等。

注意事项：

（1）120词左右，包含上述要点提示，可适当发挥，行文连贯；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名。

Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters?

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【参考范文】

Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters?

I hope to have a brother or sister. I am the only child in my family. When my father and mother are busy working, I have to stay at home alone and often feel very lonely. So having a younger brother or sister is my dream.

Thanks to the two—child policy, each family can have two children now. I think maybe my dream can come true.  

I have talked with my parents about my dream and I’ ve also promised that I will take good care of the new family member. My parents have agreed to consider it carefully. I will also spend more time with my brother or sister. I also take him / her to the park on weekends. If I have something delicious, I will give it to him / her. Now I’ m looking forward to their good news.

【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求以“Do You Want to Have Brothers or Sisters?”为题，针对三胎政策，提出自己的看法，是否期待拥有弟弟妹妹，以及阐述支持自己观点的理由和对未来生活的愿景。写作前可以提前列举出可能使用的到的单词、短语及句型；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达习惯；写作后注意检查。

2.写作指导：这是一篇看法类作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。采取三段式的写作手法：第一段表明自己的想法，想有弟弟妹妹及其原因；第二段提出自己的看法——赞同三胎政策；第三段写对有弟弟妹妹的未来生活的憧憬。

二、材料作文

2．中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后，2021年5月31日中共中央政治局会议，国家现在放开三胎，全社会展开了热烈的讨论。我校也就“是否想要个弟弟或妹妹”对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查。请你根据调查报告结果，结合自身情况阐述你的观点。问卷调查结果如下：

要求：

1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.

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【参考范文】

Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.

About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely anymore. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；

③提示：要求根据表格的调查报告结果，结合自身情况阐述自己的观点。不要遗漏表格中的内容，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先通过介绍“学校做了一项关于你想要一个小弟弟还是妹妹的调查”来引出话题；

第二步，具体阐述调查报告的结果；

第三步，谈谈自己的观点。

[亮点词汇]

①each other互相

②get used to习惯于

③In one’s opinion在某人看来

[高分句型]

①About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or a sister.（宾语从句）

②They think they won’t get used to the change.（宾语从句）

③ In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister.（It的固定句型）

④After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.（定语从句）

3．请根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。

内容提示：

1.中国有很大的人口，超过14亿人口。

2.中国做了巨大的努力来满足人们的日常需求。中国政府制定了很多合理的政策促进发展。中国变得越来越强大，人们生活水平正快速改善。

3.人们相信中国的未来会更加光明。

参考词汇：合理的政策 rational policies；工作机会 job opportunities；接受好的教育 get a good education

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【参考范文】

China is now developing faster and faster, and its population is also growing. China has a large population, more than 1.4 billion people.

China has made great efforts to meet people’s daily needs. The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development. It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.

China is becoming stronger and stronger, and people’s living standards are improving rapidly. People believe that China’s future will be brighter.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；

③提示：题干要求根据材料提示，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。

[写作步骤]

第一步，从总体上介绍中国的发展情况以及人口数量；

第二步，具体阐述政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就；

第三步，总结全文，祝愿中国的未来会更好。

[亮点词汇]

①make great efforts to do努力做某事

②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物

③because of+名词（短语）因为

④faster and faster越来越快

[高分句型]

①The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development.(动词不定式作目的状语)

②It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.(定语从句)

4．请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。80词左右。

提示： 1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3. 人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重的问题（请举例说明）。

The Population Problem

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【参考范文】

The Population Problem

It is reported that the world’s population is growing faster and faster. The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with more than 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. The large population causes lots of problems. There is less living space for each family, and it is difficult for lots of people to find jobs. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier. Natural environments are becoming worse and worse. I think we should take measures to control the population growth.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一以及中国是人口最多的国家等，并介绍因人口增长带来的一些问题，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

5．请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。（80词左右）

提示:

1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；

4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。

The Population Problem

【参考范文】

The Population Problem

The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. We are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.

As far as I am concerned, we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述当今世界上最大的问题——人口问题，并讲述人口过快增长的问题以及解决方法。注意时态的运用，并不能遗漏要点。

2.点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，涉及到题目中所给的要点，第一段讲述人口问题、中国是世界上人口最多的国家以及带来的问题，第二段讲述采取的措施。本文时态运用准确，并运用了许多高级短语以及句型，符合英语国家的语言习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, not only...but also..., for example, be short of, much+比较级，as far as I am concerned等。

句型：It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数,  be short of, much+比较级，It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如not only...but also..., for example, as far as I am concerned等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．Writing.

In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?

Now please write a passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:

1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.

2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.

3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.

【参考范文】

First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.

In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.

If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.

【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

三、书信作文

7．国家修改生育政策后，很多同学面临着即将做哥哥或姐姐的情况。假如你是学生李华，在家是独生之女，国家放开生育政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的三孩政策。你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：

1.简单介绍国家的三孩政策；

2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；

3.征求Peter的看法。

注意：

1.60—80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：

Childbearing policy生育政策；three-child policy三孩政策；two-child policy二胎政策；introduce介绍；explain解释；government政府；allow允许；decision决定；though尽管

Dear Peter,

I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you about the childbearing policy in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you about the childbearing policy in China.

The Chinese government recently plans to change the two-child policy into three-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have three children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给要点提示，写一封信给Peter介绍我国的三胎政策、父母要生二胎后你的想法以及征求Peter的想法。

[写作步骤]

第一步，简单介绍国家的三孩政策；

第二步，介绍得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；

第三步，征求Peter的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①plan to do sth计划做某事

②make a decision决定

③share...with和……分享

[高分句型]

①Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal.（which引导的非限制定语从句）

②Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her.（though引导的让步状语从句）