湖北高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

应用文

1．假如你是高三学生李华，打算毕业后申请去香港大学(Hong Kong University)学习。因此你给该校写了一封电子邮件，咨询相关事宜。要点如下：

1.如何才能被你感兴趣的专业录取；

2.是否需要参加英语考试；

3.该校的学费，食宿安排等情况。

注意：

1.词数为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Senior Three.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一场师生足球友谊赛，参赛人员为高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1. 比赛目的；

2. 比赛过程；

3. 活动反响。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Teacher-Student Football Friendly

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3．针对高中生压力大，同学之间常因鸡毛蒜皮的小事闹矛盾这一问题，你校即将举行一场以“Learn to Forgive”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：

1．原谅他人的意义；

2．如何原谅他人；

3．你的建议。

注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hello, everyone,

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That’s all. Thank you!

4．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Tom，由于父母要求即将期中考试的他暂停社团活动，与父母发生了争吵陷入冷战，因此他写信向你诉苦。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.给予安慰；

2.给出建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1．人物简介；2．你敬佩的原因；3．你的评价或对你的影响。

注意：1．词数应为80左右，开关和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数；2．所写内容应包括以上信息；3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

The Person I Admire Most

Dear fellow students,

There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is

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That’s all. Thank you!

6．假定你是李华，学校英语报记者，你们学校近期举行了一次校体育运动会。请写一篇短文，报道此次校运会。

内容包括：

1.活动简介

2.你的感受

注意：1.词数80左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假如你是一名英语课代表，为了帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率，你用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，内容如下：

1. 倡议目的；

2. 你对晨读的看法和建议；

3. 希望大家积极响应。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My dear fellow students,

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8．假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席，为了发现身边的美，你校计划开展主题为“寻找最美武汉人”的摄影展(photographic exhibition)，请你为此写一则英文通知以鼓励大家踊跃参与。

内容包括：

1. 摄影展的目的和主题。

2. 展出的时间及地点。

3. 具体要求。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．你校近期计划举行一个以创新为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据一下内容写一篇发言稿参赛，介绍一款家用机器人。这款家用机器人主要有以下功能：

1. 可以根据个人需要做饭;

2. 可以陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等;

3. 可以及时处理突发事件。

注意：1.词数 80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

参考词汇：家用机器人 domestic robot

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10．假定你是李华，校学生会主席。现在全国中小学生近视问题日益严峻，这一现象已经引起了国家的高度重视。为此，请你在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。内容包括：问题的严重性；改进和预防措施等。要求：

1. 词数 80 词左右；

2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：近视 nearsightedness

Dear teachers and fellow students;

It’s my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.

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That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!

1．Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua from senior Grade Three. With graduation approaching, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University. Now I’m writing to ask you for some information regarding its admission policy.

To begin with, could you tell me what I am expected to do to gain admission to the major I have the greatest passion for? Still, I’m wondering whether there is any English admission examination upon registration/enrollment? If so, I will get fully prepared ahead of time. Moreover, it would be better if you could offer me some information related to tuition fees, scholarship, living costs and accommodation as well.

Your generous assistance and prompt reply would be highly appreciated.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达为一封询问信。要求学生写一封信，咨询申请去香港大学学习的相关事宜。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

提前：ahead of time→ahead of schedule/in advance

关于：regarding→in regard to/as regards with/with respect to

喜欢：have great passion for→be fascinated by/be enthusiastic about

获得：gain→get/obtain/acquire

首先：to begin with→first and foremost/firstly

2.句式拓展：

同义句

原句：With graduation approaching, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University.

拓展句：As graduation approaches, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Still, I’m wondering whether there is any English admission examination upon registration/enrollment?（运用了whether引导宾语从句）

【高分句型2】

To begin with, could you tell me what I am expected to do to gain admission to the major I have the greatest passion for?（运用了what引导宾语从句）

2．One possible version:

A Teacher-Student Football Friendly

Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.

Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers. Both teams were playing at their best in high spirits. Although the teachers dominated the game at first, the students did not give up and tried to intercept every pass from their op-ponents. The match was filled with great dynamics and interesting plays, ending in a draw of 2: 2.

The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.

【分析】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校组织的师生足球友谊赛写一篇英文报道并写一下活动的反响。

【详解】1.词汇积累

组织：organise →hold

最初：at first → in the beginning

充满了：be filled with →be full of

加强：strengthen →build up

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.

拓展句：Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, which was aimed to enrich students’ school life.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers.（运用了分词作状语和with的复合结构）

【高分句型2】The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.（运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构和分词短语作定语）

3．Hello, everyone.

 It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech here.

Learning to forgive plays a major role in our daily communication. First, tolerance is a virtue which helps us lighten our mood. Second, forgiving others means stopping blaming people because we might lose them if we always focus on their mistakes. The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects. Only in this way can we establish a harmonious relationship with others.

If we develop a forgiving nature, we’ll also receive forgiveness from others. Why not try it now?

That’s all. Thank you!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。针对高中生压力大，同学之间常因鸡毛蒜皮的小事闹矛盾这一问题，你校即将举行一场以“Learn to Forgive”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发表演讲：deliver a speech→address a speech

其次：second→what’s more

集中：focus on→concentrate on

尝试：try→attempt

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects.

拓展句：The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects, which is important to develop the virtue.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, tolerance is a virtue which helps us lighten our mood.（运用了which引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】Second, forgiving others means stopping blaming people because we might lose them if we always focus on their mistakes. （运用了because引导状语从句，if引导条件状语从句）

【高分句型3】Only in this way can we establish a harmonious relationship with others.（运用了倒装句）

4．Dear Tom，

    I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during our daily life, but we should make efforts to get along well with them. My advice is as follows.

    To start with, you should follow your parents’ instructions so that you can make good preparations for the coming exam. Equally importantly, you may as well have a talk with your parents, telling them what you are planning and what levels you can reach. Only when they know your real knowledge ability can they feel at ease. If possible, you can help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to improve your relationship.

    If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。你的好朋友Tom，由于父母要求即将期中考试的他暂停社团活动，与父母发生了争吵陷入冷战，要求考生给好朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，对他表示安慰，同时给出一些建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

了解：know → learn

问题：trouble → problem

建议：advice→ suggestion

即将来临的考试：the coming exam→the exam to come

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： My advice is as follows.

拓展句： My advice is as follows, which I think will be of great use.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

 To start with, you should follow your parents’ instructions so that you can make good preparations for the coming exam. （运用了so that的目的状语从句）

【高分句型2】

 If possible, you can help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to improve your relationships.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

5．One possible version:

There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.

Mrs Wu is kind and considerate towards us students just like our dear mother. Once, one of my classmates got injured accidentally and without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once. What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Also, she is very patient with us and always helps us find solutions to problems when we turn to her for help. With her help, our English has made rapid progress.

In my eyes, Mrs Wu is more than our teacher. She’s also our best friend. That’s why she deserves our respect.

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你根据所给要求，以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful

意外地：accidentally→ unexpectedly

立刻：at once→ immediately

帮助：help→ assistance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Once, one of my classmates got injured accidentally and without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once.

拓展句：Once, when one of my classmates got injured accidentally, without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once.

【点睛】[高分句型1] And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. （运用了what引导的主语从句）

6．Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply. All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness. The playground was crowded with audiences. Every athlete made great efforts to win, the students who stood by the runway let out the most encouraging slogan.Exhausted/Worn out as we were, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.

This activity was of great significance, not only could it help us sense the fun of exercise, but also cultivate the awareness of teamwork, and deepen our friendship.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于短文报道。学校近期举行了一次校体育运动会。要求学校英语报记者李华写一篇短文，报道此次校运会。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感觉：feel→ sense

玩的开心：have a good time→ enjoy oneself

筋疲力尽的：worn→ exhausted

重要性：importance→ significance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness.

拓展句：Because all the students got actively involved in it, the whole school was alive and full of freshness.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Exhausted out as we were, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）

7．One possible version:

My dear fellow students,

Aimed at helping improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.

As far as I’m concerned, the importance of morning reading can never be emphasized too much. It is an effective way to read aloud, which not only helps us feel the charm of English but also helps us cultivate a good sense of language. Furthermore, it is strongly recommended that we should break down our morning reading tasks and complete them one by one. Only in this way can we memorize what we have learned very well.

I sincerely hope that everyone of us will take action immediately. Let’s work together!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率。

【详解】1.词汇积累

学习：learn →study

在我看来：As far as I’m concerned → In my opinion

方法：way →approach

而且：Furthermore → Moreover/Besides

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Aimed at helping improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.

拓展句：In order to help improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It is an effective way to read aloud, which not only helps us feel the charm of English but also helps us cultivate a good sense of language.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Only in this way can we memorize what we have learned very well.（运用了部分倒装结构和what引导的宾语从句）

8．possible version

Notice

To encourage us to find the beauty around us, our school is going to hold a photographic exhibition whose theme is “Looking for the most beautiful person in Wuhan”.

The exhibition will take place in the library from 10:00 am to 5:00 pm on September 10. Anyone who is interested in photograph is welcome to take part in it, but each one is allowed to submit only one photo. Besides, the top five winners will get prizes.

Look forward to your participation.

The Students’ Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则英文通知以鼓励大家踊跃参与学校计划开展的主题为“寻找最美武汉人”的摄影展。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发现：discover→find

主题：subject→theme

寻找：search for→look for

发生：happen→take place

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, the top five winners will get prizes.

拓展句：Besides, the top five winners will get prizes which are very beautiful.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To encourage us to find the beauty around us, our school is going to hold a photographic exhibition whose theme is “Looking for the most beautiful person in Wuhan”.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语以及whose引导的限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Anyone who is interested in photograph is welcome to take part in it, but each one is allowed to submit only one photo. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

9．参考范文：

Good morning, everyone.

As you know, with the development of the economy, people have to face various pressures. They don’t have enough time to take care of the aged people in their family, which has become a social problem.

To solve this problem, we will launch a domestic robot, which is designed to take care of the old. It can cook according to individual need. It can also accompany old people by having a chat, playing chess, doing exercise and so on. Moreover, it can deal with emergencies in time. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. It would be a great help to you if you own such a robot.

Thank you.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以创新为主题写一篇发言稿，介绍一款家用机器人。

【详解】1.词汇积累

足够的：enough→ sufficient

年老的：old→aged

另外：moreover→besides

生病：fall ill→get sick

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It can cook according to individual need.

拓展句：It can cook meals at a fixed time which can be adjusted according to individual need.

【点睛】[高分句型1]They don’t have enough time to take care of the aged people in their family, which has become a social problem.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. （if引导的条件状语从句）

10．Dear teachers and fellow students;

It’s my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students. Nowadays in China, huge numbers of students are near-sighted, college students included. Worse still, the tendency is still on the rise. So, it is high time we took immediate and proper measures right now.

Here, I do appeal to you all to stick to the practice of eye exercises at least twice a day. Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright. As you know, too much screen time contributes a lot to poor eyesight, so you’d better stay away from digital devices as well. Last of all, please remember to give your eyes a short rest between classes by looking afar outside.

Take good care of the window of your heart, and you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.

That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。内容包括：问题的严重性；改进和预防措施等。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发表演讲：present a speech →give/deliver a speech

在增长：on the rise → increasing

立刻：right now →immediately

此外：Besides → What’s more

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Take good care of the window of your heart, and you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.

拓展句：Taking good care of the window of your heart, you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】As you know, too much screen time contributes a lot to poor eyesight, so you’d better stay away from digital devices as well.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）