上海高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

应用文

1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

76. 每年4月22日是世界地球日(World Earth Day)。为积极响应世界地球日活动，你校学生会开展了宣传海报的评比活动。现已初评得出如下的前三名海报，并在全校范围评选最佳海报。写封邮件给你校学生会，内容须包括：

你选出的最佳海报及其简介;

你的理由。

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2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华，学校拟举办“汉语文化周”活动，现在向全校师生征集活动策划案。请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件须包括以下内容：

1)介绍具体活动方案；

2)说明理由。

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3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是启明中学的高三学生古月胡，你校计划引入一款人工智能批改系统来辅助教师批改作业与部分试卷。有些同学表示支持，但也有部分同学表示了担忧。因此学校委托学生会征询大家对人工智能批改系统的意见。

给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括：

1)你对人工智能批改系统的看法；2)你的理由。

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4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请就“Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.”这句名言谈谈你的看法。

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5．Nowadays more and more people stress the importance of music education. Some students suggest having one more music class every week. Suppose you were Li Hua from Senior One, write an essay to your school newspaper and express your opinions on the topic “Should students have one more music class every week?”

Dear editor,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。你的学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动，你在学生会参与相关的准备工作，并负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，等等。请就此给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件交流你的想法。你的邮件必须包括：

1.介绍纪念活动的主要内容；

2.描述你所见闻的学校变化；

3.简述你对学校发展的期许。

(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)

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7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学的学生李华，你们学校将组织一次高三学生参观大学的活动，学生可以从“专业及课程介绍 (Major and Course Descriptions)”; “参观图书馆、实验室 (Library & Laboratory Visiting)”; “随班学习体验 (On Spot Studying)” 和 “与教授面对面 (Dialogue with Professors)” 四个活动中选取两个作为主要活动，特此向高三学生征求意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：

1.你最感兴趣的两个活动;

2.你对这两个活动感兴趣的理由。

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8．假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：

描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。

（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）

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9．假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案，请在以下三项活动中选择一项：

一、深入社区宣传环保知识；

二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员；

三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件，内容须包括：

1. 你的选择及理由；

2. 你准备如何做。

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10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假期即将来临，你的朋友李华计划完成一篇调查报告，他对去公共图书馆还是去自习室(self-study room)写报告犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请参考以下信息，写一封邮件，内容需包括：

1. 你的建议；

2. 你建议的理由。

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1．Dear student union,

I like the second picture. From this picture, we can know that originally, the earth has a clear brook, green forest, and the blue sky. Ancient times, how many poets praising the earth beautiful environment! But now the earth is in bad condition. For example, in some places, the air and water pollution is so serious that it causes many deaths. At the same time, many animals and plants are in danger because of the destruction of their habitats.

I think this picture is a reminder of us to protect our earth. I hope we human beings can realize the problem. We should do something good for the earth, such as cleaning up beaches and water, picking up rubbish, and give speeches to call on more people to take action. Today is World Earth Day, and millions of people have contributed to protecting the environment.  But can we save the earth only by one day’s work? The future of our planet depends on our efforts. What we should do is to make every day Earth Day. Only by taking good care of it every day can we hope to live in harmony with nature. Therefore, I hope this picture can be the best one.

【详解】1.词汇积累

干净的：clear→ clearn

同时：At the same time→ Meanwhile

照顾：take good care of→ look after

号召：call on→ call upon

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：At the same time, many animals and plants are in danger because of the destruction of their habitats.

拓展句：At the same time, many animals and plants are in danger because their habitats are destroyed.

【点睛】【高分句型1】we can know that originally, the earth has a clear brook, green forest, the blue sky.（运用了that连接的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】We should do something good for the earth, such as cleaning up beaches and water, picking up rubbish,  and give speeches to call on more people to take action.（运用了动名词短语并列作宾语）

2．Dear Student Union,

I’m writing to share my idea for the upcoming “Chinese Culture Week” event at Mingqi High School. I propose that we host a series of activities highlighting traditional Chinese arts and culture.

Firstly, we could organize a calligraphy workshop where students can learn how to write Chinese characters using brush and ink. This would not only give students a chance to learn a new skill, but also to appreciate the beauty and meaning behind Chinese characters. Secondly. we could hold a screening of an iconic Chinese movie or TV show. Such as “Monkey King” or “Dream of the Red Chamber”. This would provide students with a glimpse into Chinese history and culture, and foster cross-cultural understanding. Finally, we could invite a guest speaker to talk about traditional Chinese medicine, such as acupuncture or herbal remedies. This would allow students to learn about alternative approaches to healthcare and broaden their perspectives on health and wellness.

I believe that hosting these activities during “Chinese Culture Week” would be beneficial for several reasons. Firstly, it would help promote cultural diversity and understanding among our student body. Secondly, it would provide students with an opportunity to learn about Chinese culture and history, which is important in today’s globalized world. Lastly, it would be a fun and engaging way to celebrate our school’s commitment to promoting cultural exchange and education.

Thank you for considering my proposal. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on this matter. [241 words]

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的活动策划案。要求考生向学生会写一封邮件，表达自己对于学校拟举办的“汉语文化周”活动所设想的活动策划案。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：firstly→ first of all

机会：chance → opportunity

最后：finally → lastly/last but not least

提高、促进：promote → enhance/improve

考虑：consider → think about

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I propose that we host a series of activities highlighting traditional Chinese arts and culture.

拓展句：I propose that we host a series of activities which will highlight traditional Chinese arts and culture.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, we could organize a calligraphy workshop where students can learn how to write Chinese characters using brush and ink.（运用了where引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】Secondly, it would provide students with an opportunity to learn about Chinese culture and history, which is important in today’s globalized world.（运用了which引导定语从句）

3．Dear President of the Student Union,

    I am fortunate to learn that with the progress of science and technology, our school plans to introduce an artificial intelligence grading system to assist teachers in grading homework and some test papers. Some students support it, while others oppose it.

From my perspective, this kind of grading system is not influenced by subjective emotions, contributing to achieving educational fairness. Moreover, it is not only timely and cost-effective, but can also receive continuous and positive feedback, which is of great help to foreign language learners. What is the most important for us is that the grading system can force us to promote our ability to improve standardized answers.

I sincerely hope that this artificial intelligence grading system can be applied to our school as soon as possible.

Yours,

Gu Yuehu

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封邮件表达对人工智能批改系统的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

进步：progress → improvement

引入：introduce →bring in

帮助：assist →help

支持：support → are in favor of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：From my perspective, this kind of grading system is not influenced by subjective emotions, contributing to achieving educational fairness.

拓展句：From my perspective, this kind of grading system is not influenced by subjective emotions, which contributes to achieving educational fairness.

【点睛】【高分句型1】From my perspective, this kind of grading system is not influenced by subjective emotions, contributing to achieving educational fairness.（运用了现在分词短语contributing to充当结果状语）

【高分句型2】What is the most important for us is that the grading system can force us to promote our ability to improve standardized answers.（运用了What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

4． Recently I read an adage that “Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.” I couldn’t agree more with this saying.

 Many people attribute the success of others to luck and think they can do the same in the circumstances. But is this really the case? For example, when Jack Ma was working on Taobao, there were more than one e-commerce platform with him at the same time, but in the end, we only know Alibaba.

 This example tells us that a person’s success does not depend on the time, place or environment, but on the quality of the person. Indomitable will, the spirit of never say die and other valuable qualities are the key to success.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用写作。要求考生就“Not in time, place, or circumstances, but in the man lies success.”这句名言谈谈看法。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

认为：think→consider

情况：circumstances→situation

最近：recently→lately

依靠：depend on→rely on

2. 句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：This example tells us that a person’s success does not depend on the time, place or environment, but on the quality of the person.

拓展句：This example tells us that a person’s success lies not in time, place, or environment, but in their own qualities.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Many people attribute the success of others to luck and think they can do the same in the circumstances.(省略that的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]For example, when Jack Ma was working on Taobao, there were more than one e-commerce platform with him at the same time, but in the end, we only know Alibaba.(when引导的时间状语从句)

5．Dear editor,

     Writing this letter, I am trying to express my standpoint on whether students should have one more music class every week. I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.

     Since music education is a required subject and is helpful in developing students’ ability in appreciating beauty, It is advisable that the school open more than one music class every week for students to attend. Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves. Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.

     I hope my proposal will be helpful to you!

                                                                Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿，要求考生给校报投稿，表明自己关于“学生是否应每周上一节以上的音乐课？”主题的观点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

培养：develop→ cultivate

试图：try to → attempt to

压力：stress→ pressure

有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial

2.句式拓展

同义句转化

原句：Then, students are having too much stress from their study and they need an appropriate time to relax themselves.

拓展句：Having too much stress from their study, students need an appropriate time to relax themselves.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am strongly for the proposal that students should have one more music class every week.（同位语从句）

【高分句型2】Singing or just enjoying music in a music class is a good way to free them from heavy study and be more concentrated in the following classes.（动名词短语做主语）

6．Dear Alan,

My school is about to hold a commemorative event called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month. I will participate in the relevant preparations as a member of the student union and be responsible for introducing the changes in the school to guests. Because this event is so important, I need some advice from you.

This commemorative event consists of three parts: inviting the principal to give a speech, leading guests to visit the school achievement exhibition and holding a celebration party, which will be significant. As is known, our school has undergone tremendous changes in the past 50 years. State-of-the-art teaching equipment and even artificial intelligence devices to assist in teaching have been equipped in our school. Besides, there are various cultural clubs and communities to enrich our leisure life.

Hope my school will become better and better !

Yours,

Li Qing

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件介绍你学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动，内容包括纪念活动的主要内容、你所见闻的学校变化和对学校发展的期许。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：participate in→join in

此外：besides→what’s more

希望：hope→wish

帮助：assist→ help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My school is about to hold a commemorative event called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month.

拓展句：My school is about to hold a commemorative event which is called “Looking Back on Fifty Years” at the end of this month.

【点睛】【高分句型1】This commemorative event consists of three parts: inviting the principal to give a speech, leading guests to visit the school achievement exhibition and holding a celebration party, which will be significant.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Because this event is so important, I need some advice from you.（运用了because引导的原因状语）

7．    Hearing that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy. What I want to participate in are the two activities, Major and Course Descriptions and On Spot Studying.

First of all, I am fond of the activity Major and Course Descriptions, which can help me have a deeper understanding of the university's professional courses and clarify the direction for my future study.

Besides, I am deeply interested in the activity On Spot Studying. In the activity, I can truly experience the learning atmosphere of the university. Meanwhile，it offers me an good chance to know more about how the students in the university take courses every day，which will make me decide whether I should change the way that I learn in the middle school.

     All in all, the activity of visiting the university is of great help to our future planning. I am looking forward to the arrival of that day.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给活动组织者写一封信，说明你对学校组织的高三学生参观大学的活动中感兴趣的两个活动以及对这两个活动感兴趣的理由

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：be fond of→ enjoy

高兴的：happy→pleased→delighted

此外：besides → what’s more

机会：chance→opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hearing that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy.

拓展句：BecauseI hear that the school will organize an activity for senior three students to visit the university, I am very excited and happy.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What I want to participate in are the two activities, Major and Course Descriptions and On Spot Studying.（运用了what引导的主语从句）

【高分句型2】Meanwhile, it offers me an good chance to know more about how the students in the university take courses every day，which will make me decide whether I should change the way that I learn in the middle school.（运用了how与whether引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的定语从句）

8．One possible version:

Schools in 50 years

50 years later, the school uses robots to teach students, and students sit in a transparent classroom on all sides to learn. Besides, students’ performance in class and learning feedback are all conducted by AI equipment. The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. The school 50 years later is very intelligent, and students’ needs can be met in an instant. The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so it is so convenient.

Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet. I will be shocked by all modern devices and intelligent functions. It’s great to feel the learning efficiency brought by the infinite power of modern science and technology, feel the friendship between classmates, and carefully taste the magic of knowledge.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

用、利用：use→make use of

此外：besides→what’s more

智能的：intelligent→smart

震惊的：shocked→astonished

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

拓展句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later, which will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

【高分句型1】The construction of the school is no longer what it is now.（运用了what引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so everything is so convenient.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

9．One possible version:

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Our school will hold a volunteer activity, which may be chosen from the following three programmes: publicizing knowledge of environmental protection to communities, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum and conducting interesting lessons to kids in the orphanage. In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.

There are two reasons why I choose the second activity. To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons. Besides, it’s beneficial for students to improve their communication skills especially English speaking because there are many foreigners visiting it.

If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help.

Sincerely

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件在三个志愿者活动策划中选择某一项活动，并阐述选择的理由和要如何做。

【详解】1.词汇积累

项目：programme→project

除此之外：besides→moreover

珍惜：cherish→treasure

寻求某人的帮助：ask sb for help→seek sb’s help

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.

拓展句：In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students, from which students can learn a lot.

【高分句型1】To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons.（运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

10．Dear Li Hua,   

    Knowing that you are in two minds about whether to go to the public library or the self-study room to write your report, I suggest that you go to the public library for the following reasons:

First of all, the public library is free of charge, while going to the self-study room will cost you 20 yuan every 5 hours. Second, although the self-study room is open 24 hours a day, it is enough to write your report from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. Third, it may take you more time to go to the public library than to the self-study room, but you can use the time on the bus to formulate your report. Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources and these resources may be helpful to you in writing your report and they are free; however, you can only enjoy free refreshments in the self-study room.

Hope that my suggestions will be of use to you.

Yours,

...

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友李华写一封邮件，就寒假期间去公共图书馆还是去自习室写调查报告提出建议，并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

犹豫不决：in two minds→hesitant

建议：suggest→advise

丰富的：a wealth of→abundant

对……有帮助：be helpful to→be of help to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources and these resources may be helpful to you in writing your report and they are free.

拓展句：Last but not least, public libraries have a wealth of resources that may be helpful to you in writing your report, and they are free.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, although the self-study room is open 24 hours a day, it is enough to write your report from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）

【高分句型2】Knowing that you are in two minds about whether to go to the public library or the self-study room to write your report, I suggest that you go to the public library for the following reasons.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）