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    高考读后续写真题汇总(适合新高考卷、浙江卷)TOC \o "1-3" \h \u  HYPERLINK \l _Toc29729 2021年6月浙江卷 (第一份工资)  PAGEREF _Toc29729 \h 1 HYPERLINK \l _Toc20437 2021年6月新高考1卷 (母亲节的惊喜)  PAGEREF _Toc20437 \h 3 HYPERLINK \l _Toc3347 2021年1月八省联考 (好心家庭帮我修车)  PAGEREF _Toc3347 \h 5 HYPERLINK \l _Toc1467 2021年1月浙江卷 (圣诞节的尴尬)  PAGEREF _Toc1467 \h 7 HYPERLINK \l _Toc26186 2020年7月山东卷 (爆米花救助穷人)  PAGEREF _Toc26186 \h 9 HYPERLINK \l _Toc4600 2020年7月浙江卷 (拍照北极熊遇险)  PAGEREF _Toc4600 \h 11 HYPERLINK \l _Toc24586 2020年1月浙江卷 (小狗Ponny的新玩伴)  PAGEREF _Toc24586 \h 12 HYPERLINK \l _Toc5877 2018年6月浙江卷 (山中遇险)  PAGEREF _Toc5877 \h 16 HYPERLINK \l _Toc4482 2017年11月浙江卷 (健忘的妈妈)  PAGEREF _Toc4482 \h 18 HYPERLINK \l _Toc31714 2017年6月浙江卷 (狼口脱险)  PAGEREF _Toc31714 \h 20 HYPERLINK \l _Toc18137 2016年10月浙江卷 (森林遇险)  PAGEREF _Toc18137 \h 23 HYPERLINK \l _Toc16159 浙江卷样题 (银行抢劫)  PAGEREF _Toc16159 \h 252021年6月浙江卷(第一份工资)My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass(超过) anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________题型解读这是一篇记叙文的读后续写,要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写,并且结合划线词,构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时,要求考生读懂文章,然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上,考生必须沿着文章的思路,根据提供的线索,恰当进行发挥,并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。写作分析本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者高中毕业后,参加农场工作,辛辛苦苦挣到的钱,不情愿贡献给家庭,后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后,理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献,终于想通,并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。参考答案Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”发薪日终于到了。我很高兴,在我努力工作了两周后,我终于得到了报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要一个新的足球,因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧克力。走近房子,我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边,悲伤地看着。似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱?”。我妈妈问。300美元,但我们只剩下200美元了。”Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的,我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了,这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车,但买不起。突然,我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前去,说:“爸爸,这是我工作的回报。我想这会对你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶,妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上,在我睡觉之前,我想第二天我会告诉农夫,在我长大了之后,我将继续我的工作。2021年6月新高考全国1卷(母亲节的惊喜)第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents' bedroom.当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼,他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸,他让他们打扫厨房,同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来,照做了。不到一个小时,厨房就打扫干净了,父亲按照孩子们的意愿,成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘,加了一张他们做的卡片,然后前往他们父母的卧室。The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. "Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!"  thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never  tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐,亲爱的妈妈!”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着,双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动,也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘,她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时,他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治,说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光,他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。2021年1月八省联考(好心家庭帮我修车)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.注意:续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possible version 1:When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shook my head and said no, wondering why she asked such a question — was she going to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back to the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some when you are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so surprised and touched that words almost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when I took the bag. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was overcome with a mixture of respect and gratefulness. In addition to the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it forward. (145) 当我正要说别时,女孩问我是否吃过午饭。我摇摇头,说不,不知道她为什么会问这样一个问题——她会给我吃午饭什么吗?“等一下,”女孩说,然后她回到卡车上。几分钟后,她带着一个纸袋回来了。“这里有一些墨西哥小吃,你饿的时候可以吃一些,”女孩笑着说。我很惊讶,也很感动,那句话几乎让我失望了。我只是说了一声“哇!”而不是一声“谢谢你!”当我拿起包的时候。他们离开后,我上了吉普车,打开了纸袋。当我看到包里有什么东西时,我被一种尊重和感激所征服了。除了这些零食,还有$20的账单。一个多么善良、值得尊敬的家庭啊!它们是善良真正意义的完美例子。我相信我会提前付钱的。Possible version 2: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of course not, for I had been trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word with her parents and went back to their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mommy’s hand-made taco,” explained the girl. “It’s so yummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting work so I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply moved. Then we waved goodbye to each other. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. (163) 当我正要说别时,女孩问我是否吃过午饭。当然不是,因为我已经被困在那里好几个小时了。然后她和父母说了句话,回到了他们的卡车上。几分钟后,她带着一个纸袋回来了。“那是妈妈手工做的墨西哥玉米卷,”女孩解释说。“这太美味了,你一定喜欢它。“在干了那么累的工作之后,我饿死了,所以我吃了墨西哥风味的食物,感激和感动。然后我们互相挥手道别。他们离开后,我上了吉普车,打开了纸袋。袋子里有一个鸡肉玉米饼。接下来的几分钟,我狼吞虎咽地吃了美味的食物。当我在咀嚼时,眼泪涌了起来。虽然很多人倾向于忽视那些有需要的人,但有些善良的人会特意伸出援手,这真是太棒了。这个外国家庭所做的好事永远无法逃避我。我要把它传下来,创造一个更友好的世界。2021年1月浙江卷(圣诞节的尴尬)第二节 读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Pumpkin (南瓜)carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Growing more panic, I began to cry. Fortunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head on the table, so my neck could rest for a while. Then he said to me “Listen, honey. I have to cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had no choice but to keep still with my eyes tightly closed and listening to the knife moving on the pumpkin. Moments later, my head was finally released from this horrible pumpkin cage. Then mom told me she had just filmed me managing to pull my head out of the pumpkin.Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween. Actually my mom had asked whether she could post it on the Internet, because after all I was so embarrassed and looked so silly in it. Anyway, I nodded and supported her idea. It turned out that people liked and forwarded it crazily on the Internet, only to make me an Internet celebrity. (续写152词)第1段我被困了五六分钟,虽然感觉要长得多了。我越来越恐慌,我开始哭了起来。幸运的是,听到我哭了,爸爸过来帮我把头放在桌子上,这样我的脖子就可以休息一会儿了。然后他对我说:“听着,亲爱的。”我得把这个南瓜切成两半。“我别无选择,只能闭上眼睛,听着刀在南瓜上的移动。过了一会儿,我的头终于从这个可怕的南瓜笼子里被释放出来了。然后妈妈告诉我,她刚刚拍下了我设法把头从南瓜里拉出来的照片。第2段那个视频是在万圣节的前一天发布的。实际上,我妈妈问她是否可以把它贴在网上,因为毕竟我很尴尬,看起来很傻。不管怎样,我点了点头,支持她的想法。结果,人们疯狂地喜欢并转发它,却让我成为了网络名人。2020年7月山东卷(爆米花救助穷人)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. 当梅雷迪思太太听到这个想法时,她认为这也是件好事。然后,梅雷迪思太太在网上搜索了一下,订购了一台家用爆米花机。在那之后,梅雷迪思太太和她的三个孩子又去拜访了他们家,并告诉了他们爆米花的计划。不用说,他们非常感动,尤其是伯纳德,他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。几天后,机器被送到了梅雷迪思太太的家门口。没过多久,他们就掌握了用机器做爆米花。一切都准备好了,伯纳德开始了他的新生意。虽然这是一段艰难的时期,事情对每个人来说都很紧张,但伯纳德的生意还是很顺利。他骑着小自行车拿着爆米花,挨家挨户地卖。人们惊讶地看到这样一个衣着不良的小男孩在门口卖爆米花,但最终几乎所有人都买了一两个包。是爱使世界四处运转,伯纳德深深地感受到了他的小心灵深处。2020年7月浙江卷(拍照北极熊遇险)第二节 读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Para 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.Para 2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear! 几分钟后,这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到,浪花只是更激怒了他,因为这次他似乎更凶狠了,而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂,不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻,埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包,扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了!熊阻止了进攻,跑到面包边。但没过多久,他就吃完了所有的面包,又回来了。第2部分:就在那一刻,直升机来了。“谢天谢地,我们得救了!”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落,我们很快就上了飞机,兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时,我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏,向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机,拍摄了这个罕见的场景,我们被一只北极熊抢劫了!2020年1月浙江卷(小狗Ponny的新玩伴)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.” “I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppywelcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意:所续写短文的词数应为150左右;至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2That video was posted the day before Halloween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案1】Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.爸爸打开盒子,一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头,好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋,她不小心撞倒了盒子,试图靠近。盒子翻了过来,小家伙走了出来,他并不害羞,立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久,两人就在房子里玩耍,高高兴兴地互相跑着。A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this?” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155)几周后,这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来,他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时,他冲向狗,弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然,那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦,天哪,这是谁?”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。【参考答案2】Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog? It's for you!" Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.爸爸打开盒子,一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里,眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴,试图爬出盒子,但背部倒了下来,站不起来。一看到这一点,他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来,放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗?”这是给你准备的!”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴,但又有点紧张,不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是,不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样,罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable puppy! Whose is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms.几周后,男孩从大学回家。 波比扑向他,兴奋地舔着他的手和脸,她的眼睛闪闪发光,她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。 男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗,在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。 他立刻弯下腰,抚摸它的头,问:“多么可爱的小狗啊! 是谁的?” 他的父母笑了笑,回答说:“我们给波比买的,因为......”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动,把那个老女孩抱在怀里。 他喃喃地说:“波比,我也想你。” 然后静静地,波比抬起头,看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。【参考答案3】Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. It lifted and lowered its head alternately with caution, its eyes shining out of curiosity."Say hello to your new friend, Poppy." Dad said in an encouraging voice. Poppy gave him a seemingly knowing look, scratching the box with its front paw. The little creature slowly stood up, jumped out with pains-taking efforts and yapped around Poppy. They sniffed each other like old friends. The parents gasped in surprise even with kind of envy. They cannot imagine the two dogs enjoyed each other's company in a blink of an eye.爸爸打开盒子,一只可爱的小狗出现了。它小心地抬起头,眼睛因为好奇而闪闪发光。“跟你的新朋友打招呼,波比。”爸爸用一种鼓舞人心的声音说。波比看了他一个看似知情的样子,用前爪摸着盒子。这个小家伙慢慢地站起来,痛苦地跳出来,绕着罂粟跑。他们像老朋友一样互相嗅嗅。父母们甚至有点嫉妒,也惊讶地喘不过气来。他们无法想象这两只狗只要眨一眨眼就能享受到彼此的陪伴。A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university. He cannot wait to tell his parents about his new friends in the university. Strangely, he wasn't greeted with Poppy's eager barking but an unbelievable scene. The two dogs were tumbling about on the floor. The house was pulsating with life.Parents came up, hugging his son."One has to grow up in his new friends' company. We should get used to it." Mom said half-jokingly, stroking his thin but determined face. It can't be sure enough.几周后,男孩从大学回家。 他迫不及待地告诉父母他在大学里的新朋友。 奇怪的是,他没有受到波比急切的吠叫的欢迎,而是一个令人难以置信的场景。 两只狗在地板上翻滚。 房子里充满了生机。 父母走过来,抱着儿子。 一个人必须在他的新朋友的公司里长大。 我们应该习惯它。” 妈妈半开玩笑地说,抚摸着他瘦削但坚定的脸。 不能确定。2018年6月浙江卷(山中遇险)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it got dark._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possible Version:Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner. 第1段:突然,一只小兔子跳到了我的马面前。爸爸和我发现它太可爱了,我们决定追它。过了一段时间,我们完全迷失在了森林里。除了那些树,我们眼前什么也没有了。“我们可能不能及时回到农场去吃晚饭。我自己想。在一系列徒劳的尝试之后,我们感到饿又累。第2段:我们不知道自己在哪里,天越来越黑了。我们被困在了森林里。一场意想不到的阵雨使我们更难找到回家的路,因为我们留下的所有脚印都因为下雨而消失了。我快要崩溃了,我父亲说:“别担心,儿子。我记得在农舍附近有一条河。找到河,我们就回家。最后,我们找到了河,沿着它回到了房子。不用说,我们的晚餐吃得很晚。2017年11月浙江卷(健忘的妈妈)第二节  读后续写(满分25分) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother — loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possible versions:1.Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping site at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s face. (续写词数163)第二天,我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。但后来我们离旅馆还有半小时的路程了。爸爸建议买一个新的,妈妈坚持要我们回去拿,说“像我这样被遗忘的人可能会反复丢东西,所以放弃帐篷是不明智的。”最后,我们回到帐篷,又上路了。如果妈妈不是那么心不在焉,我们就会省一次又一次回去的麻烦。第2段:我们开车穿过了几个州,沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。一天,傍晚,我们在山脚下发现了一个很棒的露营地。大卫和我帮爸爸搭起了帐篷,妈妈正忙着准备晚饭。当夕阳向山上发出橙色的灯光时,帐篷就搭好了,饭菜也准备好了。我们坐在篝火旁,聊又笑。每次我们提到旅途中有趣的事情,妈妈的脸上都会露出愉快的微笑。2.Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight, Mom gave up the idea of camping in some stranger’s backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the woods by a small lake, where Dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that Mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, Mom’s being absent-minded not only got us into much trouble, but also gave us many funny moments. But luckily, she was not so forgetful as to leave me and David behind in the gas station bathrooms. We all arrived at grandparents’ home safe and sound. (续写词数147)第1段:第二天,我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。让我们高兴的是,妈妈放弃了在一个陌生人的后院露营的想法。相反,我们在野外找到了一个很棒的露营地。那是一个小湖边树林里的一块空地,爸爸可以在那里钓点鱼吃晚饭。我们顺利地搭好了帐篷,但我们失望地发现妈妈忘了收拾枕头。不用说,第二天早上我们醒来都脖子痛。第2段:我们开车穿过了几个州,沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。这是一次美妙的旅行。我们穿过大河和广阔的平原,爬上高山,俯瞰着深深的山谷。在旅途中,妈妈心不在焉不仅给我们惹来了许多麻烦,而且也给了我们很多有趣的时刻。但幸运的是,她并没有健忘到把我和大卫留在加油站的浴室里。我们都平安到达祖父母家。2017年6月浙江卷(狼口脱险)第二节 读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Possible versions:1Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed to the door of the car. But before Mac could open the door, the wolf had caught up and jumped to attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wolf back off, Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man climbed into the car in no time, shutting the door behind him heavily. Becky looked out of the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Soon after, the animal ran off. Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Mac got out of the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thought I was going to die,” said Mac in a shaky voice, tears gathering in his eyes. For him, life could never be more beautiful. After saying goodbye to Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men continued their trip, agreeing never to separate again. (续写词数:158)第1段:汽车突然停在他前面。麦克跳下自行车,冲向车门口。但麦克还没来得及开门,狼就赶上了,跳起来攻击。幸运的是,魔法喷雾剂第三次救了麦克。看到狼回来了,保罗迅速打开了门,那个吓坏了的人立刻爬上了车,在他身后重重地关上了门。贝基从后窗外看,看到狼站在麦克的自行车前,好像是在杀人。不久之后,这只动物就跑掉了。第2段:几分钟后,另外两名骑自行车的人来了。麦克下了车,拥抱了他的朋友们。“这真的是一场噩梦,我还以为我要死了。”麦克用颤抖的声音说,眼睛里充满了泪水。对他来说,生活永远不会如此美好了。在感激地与保罗和贝基道别后,这三个人继续他们的旅行,同意不再分开。2Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac crashed into the car with a loud bang. As a result, he fell off the bicycle and had his left ankle twisted. Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack. Mac was going to die when suddenly the wolf was hit right on the head by a piece of rock. The wolf fell back, howling with pain. It was Paul who did this. Becky helped Mac climb into the car, while Paul kept shouting and throwing stones at the wolf.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked at what they saw and joined Paul. One of Mac’s friends picked out some raw meat and threw it to the wolf. Satisfied with what he got, the wolf ran into the woods. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “How grateful I am that you stopped to save me and I owe it to you that I’m still alive.” As Mac got injured, the three men had to give up the rest of their journey and returned home.(续写词数:175)汽车突然停在他前面。麦克砰的一声撞上了汽车。结果,他从自行车上摔了下来,左脚踝扭伤了。麦克刚站起来,狼就来了,正要再发动一次进攻。麦克正要死,突然狼被一块石头击中头部。狼倒了下来,痛苦地嚎叫着。这是保罗做的。贝基帮助麦克爬上车里,保罗不停地大喊大叫,向狼扔石头。第2段:几分钟后,另外两名骑自行车的人来了。他们对所看到的感到震惊,加入了保罗。麦克的一个朋友挑了一些生肉,扔给了狼身上。狼对他得到的很满意,跑进了树林。麦克感谢保罗和贝基,“我很感激你停下来救我,我欠我还活着。”麦克受伤了,三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家了。2016年10月浙江卷(森林遇险)第二节 读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others' attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest.【解析】首先,在逻辑上,要做到了合理合情:起初,主人公身陷森林,内心充满了悔恨,在面对困难时焦虑、畏惧;之后,主人公努力求生,最终获救,并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事,情节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求,而且还设置了一定的悬念,增强了故事的可读性。文章第一句 "an absolute darkness ruled the forest" 中, "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法,让森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗,同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse…" 一句中,直接将情绪形容词放在句首,使用了非谓语动词的语法,表达精练。此外, "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief." 一句中,使用了几个短句,却包含了两处非谓语动词语法,同时活用了 "wear" 一词,把两个人相见时的场景生动地描绘了出来。【词汇拓展】1) 表示并列关系的过渡词:and, as well as, or ,Not only … but also2) 表示转折关系的过渡词:but, yet, however , although , though …3) 表示时间关系的过渡词:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …浙江卷样题(银行抢劫)【1】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said.【2】“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”【3】“Is there something I can do to help?” Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “ Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.”【4】The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.【5】It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (抢劫)!【6】Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.【7】Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.【8】She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase!She thinks I’m the bank thief!”【9】Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.Paragraph 1. As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2. The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 1:As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” But Arthur ran even faster. Just then, a taxi came along. Arthur stopped it and threw himself into the back seat and asked the driver to go to the Police Station.亚瑟跑的时候,听到年轻人在后面喊:“停下来,停下来!”但亚瑟跑得更快了。就在这时,一辆出租车来了。亚瑟拦住车,倒到后座上,让司机去警察局。Paragraph 2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur ran into it, shouting, “There’s a bank robbery and I know the bank thief.” Quickly after Arthur told his story, the policemen started for the bank without delay. When they arrived at the spot, they were surprised to find that the people who gathered before the bank were now crowding around the young man, who seemed quite worried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake. The loud noise of the alarm was incorrectly made by the bank’s system and nothing happened to the bank, but the young man was worried that someone had robbed his suitcase.出租车停在警察局前,亚瑟跑了进去,喊道:“有银行抢劫,我认识银行小偷。”亚瑟讲完他的故事后,警察很快就开始向银行走去。当他们到达现场时,他们惊讶地发现,聚集在银行前的人现在正挤在这个年轻人周围,他似乎很担心。最后,亚瑟意识到他犯了一个错误。银行的系统错误地发出了警报,银行什么也没发生,但年轻人担心有人抢劫了他的手提箱。
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