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Yu'd think that after hearing Mm and Dad talk abut The Trip fr a year, I'd be eager t g. But I dn't even want t think abut it. “Aren't yu excited?” asks Dad lking up frm his laptp. “This is the trip f lifetime. I'll bet nne f yur friends will be driving acrss the United States this summer.”Exactly, I think. Nbdy I knw is ging t pile int an ld van, and drive frm Califrnia t New Yrk and back in 58 days. Fifty-eight days! That's practically my whle summer! But I knw it's useless t prtest（抗议）. When Dad was ffered a summer ff fr the first time in his career, he said that he'd always dreamed f driving acrss the cuntry. S nw we're ging. This is Dad's chance. I pick up my cat. Max, and bury my face in his fur. He paws at my ears playfully. Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max. I'm ging t miss this ball f fur. I put him dwn and laugh as he bats a buttn acrss the flr like a sccer player. He is interested in all small bjects. The clser The Trip gets, the harder it is t ignre. Thick envelpes arrive frm places like Indiana, Tennessee, and Arkansas. Night after night, Mm and Dad huddle arund the cmputer, pltting every inch f ur 8,000-mile jurney. Three days after schl gets ut, The Trip is finally here. Everything is packed and ready t g. Mm says that we are suppsed t leave at 9 a.m. But when Dad ntices a wet spt under the van, I realize we wn't be ging anywhere fr a while. Dad crawls under the van. Car parts spring up arund the van like mushrms.Minutes turn int hurs. By the time Dad gives Mm the news, it's late afternn. “I fixed the leak,” says Dad. “But nw I can't find ne f the fan blts（螺栓）.” Mm rganizes a search, but in vain.Paragraph 1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fits this ld van. Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted,“Find Max!”
The Whle Trip
The preparatins fr the Trip
His unwillingness t g n the Trip
The authr's _______emtins abut a trip rganized by his father.
Analyze the passage
_________ t drive acrss the USA this summer
______ t prtest The Trip
_________f driving acrss the cuntry
This was Dad’s chance.
dreamed f diving at the lakedreamed f hanging ut and ding nthing
Smething unexpected happened： ne f the fan blts was missing
unwilling t take the trip
This was MY chance
This was MY chance t _________________________________.
Paragraph 1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fitted this ld van. ______
feelings at first
feelings in the end
It is thrugh____________ and ___________ that I changed my mind t help my father.
cncerned/determined?
Hint：Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max.
Hint：Night after night, Mm and Dad huddle arund the cmputer, pltting every inch f ur 8,000-mile jurney.
t enjy my wn summer vacatin
Tangled emtins:
Paragraph 2: Then it hit me. “Max!” I shuted, “Find Max!” _______________
Did we find blts finally?Hw did I help my father find blts?
Structure f the passage
This was OUR chance t _________________________________.
Directin &Guide
Visins f ____________________________________________marched befre my eyes.
但是那时我看到了我父亲，他倚靠在引擎上，低着头手上沾满了褐色的油渍（grease）（独立主格结构）。
What causes the change?
But then I caught sight f Dad, wh was leaning ver the engine, his head lwered and hands black with grease.
The sight f it reminded me f all the expectatins and excitement earlier he had fr the Trip. But nw, the Trip —The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes.
这一幕使我想到了父亲之前对这次旅行的期待和兴奋。但是现在这旅行———一生之旅——正在他眼前消失。
I culdn’t bear t see Dad s disappinted. “I will have t find that blt fr Dad” I murmuered t myself determinedly.
cncerned determined
Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted, “Find Max!” _______________
我不想看到父亲如此失望，“我必须为他找到螺栓”我坚定地对自己说。
diving at the lake and hanging ut
The change f peple’s feelings
envirnmentthings peple / animals
appearance and actin
I nticed the ___________ in his eyes and the ____________ in his tne.I lked back and saw my Dad, wh was _______________________, head/hands/.. _________________There he was, ding
sth. held me entirely in their pwer.sth. kept me spellbund
the sudden awareness f sme factspast experiences and memriessb’s lve and devtin
I suddenly realized that.. / I became aware f…The sight f it reminded me f…It hit / struck/ ccurred t / dawned n me thatVisins f sth. marched befre my eyes
disappintment
leaning ver the engine
lwered/ black with grease
Para1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fitted this ld van. Maybe we were nt ging n The Trip after all. Visins f diving at the lake and hanging ut with friends happily marched befre my eyes. My sul silently rejiced. But then I caught sight f Dad, wh was leaning ver the engine, his head lwered and hands black with grease. The sight f it reminded me f all the expectatins and excitement earlier he had fr the Trip. But nw, the Trip —The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes. I culdn’t bear t see Dad s disappinted. “I will have t find that blt fr Dad.” I murmured t myself determinedly.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza. It was a lng a trip abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
It was a lng a trip abut furteen hurs.
It was a trip that fr a bird wuld have measured abut twenty-five kilmeters. But n ft the trip was nearly twice that lng and full f steep climbs and descents. It tk abut furteen hurs.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza. It was a lng a trip that tk abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
He’d fall t the grund curling up ver his wunded tes, struggling nt t cry, and then wuld get up and g n, hurrying after the thers, sniffling until the pain subsided.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza, a trip that fr a bird wuld have measured abut twenty-five kilmeters. But n ft the trip was nearly twice that lng and full f steep climbs and descents. It tk abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten and many years f ging bareft lay befre him. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d fall t the grund curling up ver his wunded tes, struggling nt t cry, and then wuld get up and g n, hurrying after the thers, sniffling until the pain subsided.
Paragraph 2: Then it hits me.“Max!” I shut,“Find Max!”
Hw did they search fr Max?Where was he and what was he ding? And was the blt fund?Hw did the authr feel after finding the blt?
下水作文： Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fit this ld van. The blt was gne magically. Father leaned against the van with his face and hands black with grease. He shrugged his shulder and frced a smile, “The trip wuld be a bubble!” Cntrary t what I had expected, smething sft inside tuched me.Their busy figures and hpeful expressins appeared befre my eyes cnstantly, which drve me t mve twards him. “Maybe it’s nly a jke!” I cmfrted him. But where was Max? He was right near the van while Dad was repairing it. Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted,“Find Max!” “Max, Max...” but the ball was nwhere t be fund. Suddenly, the sund in the crner f the backyard caught my attentin. I crept quietly twards the directin. The little ball was pawing the earth carefully, trying t hide smething in it- the very blt! Oh, my Gd! At the sight f me, Max pricked up his ears and miawed at me prudly as if t annunce his victry. All f us laughed in relief. Gdbye my summer vacatin! Hell, The Trip f a lifetime!
Yu'd think that after hearing Mm and Dad talk abut The Trip fr a year, I'd be eager t g. But I dn't even want t think abut it. “Aren't yu excited?” asks Dad lking up frm his laptp. “This is the trip f lifetime. I'll bet nne f yur friends will be driving acrss the United States this summer.”Exactly, I think. Nbdy I knw is ging t pile int an ld van, and drive frm Califrnia t New Yrk and back in 58 days. Fifty-eight days! That's practically my whle summer! But I knw it's useless t prtest（抗议）. When Dad was ffered a summer ff fr the first time in his career, he said that he'd always dreamed f driving acrss the cuntry. S nw we're ging. This is Dad's chance. I pick up my cat. Max, and bury my face in his fur. He paws at my ears playfully. Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max. I'm ging t miss this ball f fur. I put him dwn and laugh as he bats a buttn acrss the flr like a sccer player. He is interested in all small bjects. The clser The Trip gets, the harder it is t ignre. Thick envelpes arrive frm places like Indiana, Tennessee, and Arkansas. Night after night, Mm and Dad huddle arund the cmputer, pltting every inch f ur 8,000-mile jurney. Three days after schl gets ut, The Trip is finally here. Everything is packed and ready t g. Mm says that we are suppsed t leave at 9 a.m. But when Dad ntices a wet spt under the van, I realize we wn't be ging anywhere fr a while. Dad crawls under the van. Car parts spring up arund the van like mushrms.Minutes turn int hurs. By the time Dad gives Mm the news, it's late afternn. “I fixed the leak,” says Dad. “But nw I can't find ne f the fan blts（螺栓）.” Mm rganizes a search, but in vain.Paragraph 1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fits this ld van. Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted,“Find Max!”
The Whle Trip
The preparatins fr the Trip
His unwillingness t g n the Trip
The authr's _______emtins abut a trip rganized by his father.
Analyze the passage
_________ t drive acrss the USA this summer
______ t prtest The Trip
_________f driving acrss the cuntry
This was Dad’s chance.
dreamed f diving at the lakedreamed f hanging ut and ding nthing
Smething unexpected happened： ne f the fan blts was missing
unwilling t take the trip
This was MY chance
This was MY chance t _________________________________.
Paragraph 1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fitted this ld van. ______
feelings at first
feelings in the end
It is thrugh____________ and ___________ that I changed my mind t help my father.
cncerned/determined?
Hint：Gd-bye, summer vacatin. Gd-bye, diving at the lake. Gd-bye t hanging ut and ding abslutely nthing. Gd-bye, Max.
Hint：Night after night, Mm and Dad huddle arund the cmputer, pltting every inch f ur 8,000-mile jurney.
t enjy my wn summer vacatin
Tangled emtins:
Paragraph 2: Then it hit me. “Max!” I shuted, “Find Max!” _______________
Did we find blts finally?Hw did I help my father find blts?
Structure f the passage
This was OUR chance t _________________________________.
Directin &Guide
Visins f ____________________________________________marched befre my eyes.
但是那时我看到了我父亲，他倚靠在引擎上，低着头手上沾满了褐色的油渍（grease）（独立主格结构）。
What causes the change?
But then I caught sight f Dad, wh was leaning ver the engine, his head lwered and hands black with grease.
The sight f it reminded me f all the expectatins and excitement earlier he had fr the Trip. But nw, the Trip —The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes.
这一幕使我想到了父亲之前对这次旅行的期待和兴奋。但是现在这旅行———一生之旅——正在他眼前消失。
I culdn’t bear t see Dad s disappinted. “I will have t find that blt fr Dad” I murmuered t myself determinedly.
cncerned determined
Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted, “Find Max!” _______________
我不想看到父亲如此失望，“我必须为他找到螺栓”我坚定地对自己说。
diving at the lake and hanging ut
The change f peple’s feelings
envirnmentthings peple / animals
appearance and actin
I nticed the ___________ in his eyes and the ____________ in his tne.I lked back and saw my Dad, wh was _______________________, head/hands/.. _________________There he was, ding
sth. held me entirely in their pwer.sth. kept me spellbund
the sudden awareness f sme factspast experiences and memriessb’s lve and devtin
I suddenly realized that.. / I became aware f…The sight f it reminded me f…It hit / struck/ ccurred t / dawned n me thatVisins f sth. marched befre my eyes
disappintment
leaning ver the engine
lwered/ black with grease
Para1: Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fitted this ld van. Maybe we were nt ging n The Trip after all. Visins f diving at the lake and hanging ut with friends happily marched befre my eyes. My sul silently rejiced. But then I caught sight f Dad, wh was leaning ver the engine, his head lwered and hands black with grease. The sight f it reminded me f all the expectatins and excitement earlier he had fr the Trip. But nw, the Trip —The Trip f a Lifetime—was vanishing befre his eyes. I culdn’t bear t see Dad s disappinted. “I will have t find that blt fr Dad.” I murmured t myself determinedly.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza. It was a lng a trip abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
It was a lng a trip abut furteen hurs.
It was a trip that fr a bird wuld have measured abut twenty-five kilmeters. But n ft the trip was nearly twice that lng and full f steep climbs and descents. It tk abut furteen hurs.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza. It was a lng a trip that tk abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
He’d suffer great pain and try hard nt t cry.
He’d fall t the grund curling up ver his wunded tes, struggling nt t cry, and then wuld get up and g n, hurrying after the thers, sniffling until the pain subsided.
Mst f the fd raised by the lake was fr the family and had t be carried t Butanza, a trip that fr a bird wuld have measured abut twenty-five kilmeters. But n ft the trip was nearly twice that lng and full f steep climbs and descents. It tk abut furteen hurs. De made it fr the first time when he was abut ten and many years f ging bareft lay befre him. They wuld set ut befre dawn, and he sn learned t feel relieved when they left in mnlight and he culd make ut stnes and rts n the paths. Inevitably, when there was n mn, he stubbed his tes. He knew by then that crying alud was nt acceptable. He’d fall t the grund curling up ver his wunded tes, struggling nt t cry, and then wuld get up and g n, hurrying after the thers, sniffling until the pain subsided.
Paragraph 2: Then it hits me.“Max!” I shut,“Find Max!”
Hw did they search fr Max?Where was he and what was he ding? And was the blt fund?Hw did the authr feel after finding the blt?
下水作文： Dad called the stres but nne carried the blt that fit this ld van. The blt was gne magically. Father leaned against the van with his face and hands black with grease. He shrugged his shulder and frced a smile, “The trip wuld be a bubble!” Cntrary t what I had expected, smething sft inside tuched me.Their busy figures and hpeful expressins appeared befre my eyes cnstantly, which drve me t mve twards him. “Maybe it’s nly a jke!” I cmfrted him. But where was Max? He was right near the van while Dad was repairing it. Then it hit me.“Max!” I shuted,“Find Max!” “Max, Max...” but the ball was nwhere t be fund. Suddenly, the sund in the crner f the backyard caught my attentin. I crept quietly twards the directin. The little ball was pawing the earth carefully, trying t hide smething in it- the very blt! Oh, my Gd! At the sight f me, Max pricked up his ears and miawed at me prudly as if t annunce his victry. All f us laughed in relief. Gdbye my summer vacatin! Hell, The Trip f a lifetime!
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