人教版英语八年级上册unit1 写作课课件PPT
展开Unit 1Section B (3a-Self Check)Where did you go on vacation?Learning ObjectivesTo master some key words: duck, dislike, Tian’anmen Square, the Palace Museum...To learn how to write a travel diaryMalaysiaJane's diary entriesMonday, July 15thI arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting! For lunch, we had something very special---Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious! In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past, I really enjoyed walking around the town.Tuesday, July 16thWhat a difference a day makes! My father and I decided to go to Penang Hill today. We wanted to walk up to the top, but then it started raining a little so we decided to take the train. We waited over an hour for the train because there were too many people. When we got to the top, it was raining really hard. We didn't have an umbrella so we were wet and cold. It was terrible! And because of the bad weather, we couldn't see anything below. My father didn't bring enough money, so we only had one bowl of rice and some fish. The food tasted great because I was so hungry!RevisionBeginningBodyHow many parts are there in a diary entry?Endingtimeplacepartnerweatherfeelingwhat I didhow I feltwhat I atewhat I sawwhat I thoughthow it tasted中间:活动内容结尾:对该活动的个人所感开头:地点以及天气BeginningBodyEndingHow many parts are there in a diary entry?What language can we use to make it beautiful?地点状语时间状语伴随状语比喻修辞同位语所感连词 在右上角写上日期。另起一行,写下想要写的事 情或感想。 注意使用正确的时态,如果 记叙已经发生的事,需用 过去时态。 如果写的是感想 等,就可以用一般现在时。 写日记的格式Do you know these places?Tian’anmenthe Palace Museumthe Great WallDo you know these places?the Summer Palacea Beijing hutongthe old Summer PalaceDo you know these food?Beijing DuckZhaJiangmianLvdagunGroup the words in the box.hot and sunny Beijing duck take some photos buy something special learn something important tired delicious beautiful interesting AugustAugusttake some photos buy something special learn something important Beijing duck tired delicious beautiful interesting hot and sunny TRAVELMy Trip to Beijing{ }Complete the diary about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you. Wednesday, _______20th Today the weather was ____________.I went to _______________________________________________. It was ______________________. We ______________________________________.I liked this place because ___________________________. For dinner we had ______________. It was __________.In the evening, I felt really _______.Augusthot and sunny Tian’anmen Square/the Palace Museum/ a Beijing hutonginteresting/beautifultook some photos/bought something specialBeijing duckdelicioustiredimportant}}开篇点题旅游经历所感所思时间I learned somethingWednesday, August 20th Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to Tian’anmen. It was beautiful. We took some photos. I liked this place because I learned something important. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious. In the evening, I felt really tired.扩充使文章更丰富with my family this morningIt looks like a big garden.There are a lot of special buildings in it. So...,such as the culture and the history of China. I wonder what life was like here in the past.so I ate a lot.Although I felt tired, I really enjoyed walking around the square. Wednesday, August 20thToday the weather was hot and sunny. Iwent to Tian’anmen. It was interesting. Iliked this place because I learnedsomething important. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious. Inthe evening, I felt really tired.What is the format of the diary?DatePerson Tensethe past tensethe first personin the upper right corner Wednesday, August 20thToday the weather was hot and sunny. I went to Tian’anmen. It was interesting. I liked this place because Ilearned something important. For dinner wehad Beijing duck. It was delicious. In the evening, I felt really tired.BeginningBody EndingActivityWeatherPersonPlaceDateReasonFeelingFeelingHow to write a diary entry?You have a chance to have a one-day tour of Beijing. Plan your own trip. Then show your plans.Work in groups and discuss. Peoplesunny rainy cloudy snowyhot cool warm cold ... friend family classmates parents ... Tian’anmen the Summer Palacethe Great Wallthe Palace Museum...In the morning, we went to...by subway.For lunch we had...In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to...In the evening, we walked to...Beijing duckLvdagunZhajiangmian...happy excited terribleboring tired... SummaryAnswer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.3b1. Where did you go? __________________________2. Did you go with anyone? ___________________________3. How was the weather? ____________________________What did you do every day? ___________________________I went to the beach.Yes. I went with my parents.It was sunny and hot. We went swimming every day.5. What food did you eat? ________________________________6. What did you like best? ________________________________7. Did you dislike anything? ________________________________8. How did you feel about the trip? _________________________________We ate sea food. I liked the paragliding best. Yes. I didn’t like the bus ride. It was interesting but tired. 假如你是李明,这个暑假你和你父母一起去了北京,你们在北京游览了很多地方。请你以“My Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,记述你的这次旅行。参考词汇:Tian’anmen Square; the flag-raising ceremony(升旗仪式); the Great Wall; the Palace Museum; the Summer Palace; the Temple of Heaven要求:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名校名 及其他相关信息; 2. 不少于70词。时态:一般过去时人称:第一人称体裁:记叙文It’s time to writeTo learn to write a travel diary常用一般过去时。常用第一人称。日记一般按照时间顺序或事情的经过来写。开篇点题旅行过程表达感想I went to … on vacation with …this summer.First we went to … and watched …Then we visited …The next day, we visited …We took quite a few photos there and we learnt …谋篇布局We were …We enjoyed the trip so … that …Pay attention to the date, person, tense, orderon vacation 度假 the next day 第二天take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉;感受到have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴 have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳积句成篇短语储备句型荟萃开头句:Last …, … went to … on vacation.… had a good time with … in /on …中间句:We visited …Because of …, we …It was time for us to …Everything was excellent there!句型荟萃结尾句:What a pleasant …!I was so … that …经典名句:Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. He who travels far knows much.I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer.First we went to Tian’anmen Square and watched the flag-raising ceremony. How exciting it was! Then we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people there. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven.We took quite a few photos there and we learnt something important about Chinese history.We were very tired but happy. We enjoyed the trip so much that we hoped to visit it again.My trip to Beijing范文欣赏Work in groups and correct each other’s passages.Word choiceHave a clear beginning, middle and ending.Include six main points: places, weather, people, date, route, food.Sentences Use specific words. Use rich expressions and touchthe readers deeply.Handwriting Use beautiful handwriting. OrganizationIdeas DatePerson Tensethe past tensethe first personFormatDetailsBeginningBody EndingActivityWeatherPersonPlaceDateReasonFeelingFeelingSummary1. A: Did __________ go on vacation with you last month? B: Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.2. A: Did your family go to the beach with you last weekend? B: No. __________ from my family went, but my friend went with me.3. A: I didn't bring back anything from Malaysia. B: __________ at all? Why not?4. A: Did you buy __________ in the shopping center? B: No, I didn't. __________ was very expensive.5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday? B: Great! __________ had a fun time!Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box. anything everything nothing anyone everyone no oneanyoneNo oneNothinganythingEverythingEveryone1Last August, our class _______ (do) something very special on our school trip. We _______ (go) to Mount Tai. We _______ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class _______ (take) a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and _______ (find) out we _______ (be, not) anywhere near the top. My legs _______ (be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates _______ (tell) me to keep going, so I _______ (go) on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone _______ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun _______ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we _______ (forget) about the last five hours!Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.didwentstartedtookfoundweren'tstartedwere toldwentjumpedforgot2(太阳或月亮)升起(来来回回)激动so...that... 太……以至于……肯定: =adj. + enough...to...否定: =too...to...so that “以便;为了”,目的状语从句。tell sb. to do sth. 告诉...做...keep doing sth. 继续/重复做keep sb./sth.+adj. 让某人/某物……keep+adj. 保持……Last August, our class did something very special on our school trip. We went to Mount Tai. We started our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class took a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and found out we weren't anywhere near the top. My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates told me to keep going, so I went on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone jumped up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun started to come up. It was so beautiful that we forgot about the last five hours!Falling in love with the diaryPolish your passage according to your group members’ advice.Homework2. Write a diary today.THANKS!