15 说明文之人物类 - 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）

15 说明文之人物类

 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）

第一部分 说明文之人物类体裁解读及写法点拨

体裁解读

说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。说明文是以说明为主要表达方式来解释说明事物或阐明事理的文章。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述，考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。

写法点拨

人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。

写人物说明文一般包括以下几点：

1. 出生年月；2. 主要经历；3. 事迹成就；4. 影响、评价。

叙述方法：一般按照时间顺序，从外形到性格，从一般经历到创造性的贡献，最后常有结论性的评语。

语言简洁生动：说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等，因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。

第二部分   说明文之人物类万能黄金模板

第三部分   必备词汇与套用句型

必备亮点词汇

经典套用句型

1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是……

2. He/ She looks like… 他/她看上去像……

3. He used to be/ have … 他过去常常……

4. Her favourite… is… 她最喜欢的……是……

5. She is good at… 她擅长……

第四部分   模板范文演练

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：

注意：

    1. 词数70左右；

    2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

    3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

    4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：

  高大健壮tall and strong      运动do sports     听音乐listen to music

  最喜欢的科目favourite subject  风趣幽默funny and humorous

  乐于做某事be ready to do sth.   相处get on with

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

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I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes

Yours,

 Li Hua

【写作思路】

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16-year-old boy．He has round face ，black  hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征．）He likes doing sports．reading and  listening to music．His  favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 【要点二，介绍同学的性格．】He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His  favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on．【要点三，介绍同学的喜好．】 His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades．【要点四，介绍同学的理想．】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿．）

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

高分句型一

He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑．"

注意like后加doing

高分句型二

He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语spend

some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"．短语take part in "参加"．此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动．"

第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文

A

（2018·湖北咸宁·中考真题）短文写作

“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。

为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang  Xuhua — the  Father  of

China’s Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点：

1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；

2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；

3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止；

4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。

写作要求：

1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；

2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；

3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：

核潜艇 nuke;  国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity

Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes

Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.

We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.

【参考范文】

Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes

Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes.

Do you want to know something about him?

Now I introduce him to you .He was born in a rich family.In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time, he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.

To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesn’t stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)

His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.

We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.

【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。根据要点提示，写一篇人物介绍。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，人称为第三人称。所给出的写作要点比较具体，并给出了作文的开头和结尾，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作中要用到的重点词组有：in order to为了, give up放弃, try to do sth.设法做某事, concentrate on doing sth.专心做某事 used to do sth过去常常做某事, be unknown for不为人所知。

B

（2021·广西桂林·中考真题）

2021年5月22日，“世界杂交水稻之父”袁隆平因病在湖南长沙逝世。巨星陨落，举世皆哀，人们纷纷以各种不同的方式来纪念这位伟大的科学家。请你根据下列表格信息提示，以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，写一篇英文短文简单介绍袁隆平院士的生平事迹。

【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。2、文章词数在90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。

The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping

Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart.                                                     __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping

Yuan Longping is the greatest hero in my heart. Do you want to know something more about him?Now I introduce him to you .He was born in 1930. He started a special study about rice. He often worked on it day and night. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice, Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.

Yuan Longping made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. So he is called the “father of hybrid rice”.

We all love him.I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The greatest hero in my heart—Yuan Longping”为题，根据表格信息来介绍袁隆平院士的生平世界，要包含生平事迹、成就贡献、纪念他的方式三部分。可适当增加细节。

2.       写作指导：写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题并介绍袁隆平的生平，第二段总结袁隆平的贡献，第三段提出为纪念袁隆平，要节约食物。介绍袁隆平的生平以一般过去时为主，写如何纪念要使用一般现在时。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

C

（2021·江苏无锡·中考真题）

今年以来，数位中科院院士相继离世，在社会各界纷纷表达惋惜之余，“谁是真正的偶像”的话题被再度热议。为此，Teens英文报特辟了主题为“Who You Admire Most”的专栏，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。

注意事项：

1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；

2. 词数在90个左右，短文标题已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

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【参考范文】

After learning the English text books of Junior Three,I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among whom, Jackie Chan has impressed me most. He is the person I admire most.

Can you tell us something about Jackie Chan? Do you want to know something more about him?

Now I introduce him to you .He is the person I admire most. He is a Chinese kung fu superstar. He was born in

Hong Kong on Apr. 7th, 1954. He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him.

  He has acted  in nearly 100 films and has won many awards.His movies are very exciting. In order to make the movies real and excellent, he always plays the roles of the movies carefully. So l admire him very much. Sometimes, he can hurt himself.

He does many years of charity work. He helps people in over 30 countries.

We all love him.I should learn strong spirits from him.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己最敬佩的一个人，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

3.        写作指导：写作时要与主题紧密结合，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

D

（2022·河北·迁安市教研训中心模拟预测）

2022北京冬奥会赛场上，中国天才少女谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象，成功收获了众多粉丝的喜爱。谷爱凌曾直言，天分仅仅是一部分，而大部分是努力以及自律的生活方式。请你根据下面的表格，介绍一下这位人气偶像，并谈谈你从她身上学到了什么。

提示: 1.What do you know about Eileen Gu?

2.What can you learn from her?

要求：1. 短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两项要点，可适当发挥。

2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

3. 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：talent天赋 self-discipline自律My idol（偶像） is Eileen Gu. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

My idol（偶像） is Eileen Gu. Can you tell us something about her? Do you want to know something more about her?

Now I introduce her to you .She was born on September 3, 2003. She is 1.75 meters tall. Her father is an American person. Her mother is a Chinese person. She has many hobbies, such as horse riding, piano, skiing and so on. She studied skiing at the age of three and soon showed her talent. When she was 9 years old, she became a champion. In the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, she won two gold medals and one silver medal. She will enter Stanford University in the fall of 2022.

I think Gu Ailing’s achievements and talents are only part of it. Most of them are hard training and self-discipline lifestyle. She is self-conscious and self disciplined. Ambition and love are the wings of Gu Ailing’s success.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求根据所给英文提示介绍中国天才少女谷爱凌，包括她的生日、家庭、爱好以及经历和成就。

2.       写作指导：本文人称以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，用过去时描述经历。同时注意文章的连贯性，保证条理清晰。

E

（2022·山东聊城·三模）

老舍是20世纪中国最伟大的作家之一，请根据以下提示，以 “Lao She”为题，介绍一下老舍的经历和作品。

注意：

1. 短文词数： 80 词左右。

2. 短文必须包括以上要点，但可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。

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【参考范文】

Can you tell us something about Lao She? Do you want to know something more about him?

Now I introduce him to you .Lao She is one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century. He was born in Beijing. His mother sent him to a teacher’s school in 1913. After finishing school in 1918, he became a headmaster of a primary school. In 1924, Lao She left home and went to England and returned to China five years later. He wrote many plays, novels and short stories about people’s lives.

Teahouse is one of Lao She’s most famous plays. The play has three acts and shows the lives of common people in China. It tells us the story of Wang Lifa and the customers of his teahouse in Beijing. It describes the changes in Chinese society.

He was called  “the People’s Artist”.We all love him and his works.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，对老舍进行整体的评价介绍；

第二步，具体介绍老舍的个人经历；

第三步，最后是介绍老舍的作品。

[亮点词汇]

① one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数 “最……之一”

② send sb to sp 把某人送到某地

③ return to 回到

[高分句型]

① Lao She is one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century.（one of的最高级的结构）

② The play has three acts and shows the lives of common people in China.（and并列两个动词短语）