01 写人记叙文 - 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）
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研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文
第一部分 记叙文体裁解读及人物描写点拨
体裁解读
记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外，还要注意以下几点:
1记叙方式。 通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一 种记叙方式，即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述。
2.人称。一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作。第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述;第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙，通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事呈现在读者面前。
3.时态。记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，因此常用一般过去时， 还可根据上下文辅以其他时态。
人物描写点拨
人物描写类的作文， 大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。来出在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (兴趣和爱好)等，会涉及到人物描写。
人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的:外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描写等等，根据文章的需要，确定写哪些，哪些详写，哪些略写。写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。文章时态要根据事情发生的频率而定:经常性的行为多用一般现在时， 一次性的行为多用一般过去时，当然，其他时态也可能会涉及。
在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:
1.简单介绍人物的概况。般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。
2从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。
3.对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。
第二部分 写人记叙文万能模板
①Do you know （引出人物）？She/He ls （人物身份）
②She/He is tall and （身材）Her/His hair is
（头友）She/He always wears （表情）and gives us the impression that
（每人的印象）
is always willing to （性格）She/He is good at （特长）
She/He always helps me out whenever I .Once （引出事列）To my surprise,
（她／他的做法）
③She/He is and I hope （表达愿望）.
模板内容要点
①引出人物
②详细介绍人物
③做出评价，表达感想
注：
模板内客可根据题日要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
必备亮点词汇
beautiful漂亮的 pretty漂亮的
handsome帅气的 strong强壮的
round face圆脸 broad face宽脸
straight hair直发 curly hair卷发
short/long hair短/长发 long nose高鼻梁
ordinary-looking长相普通的 wear glasses戴眼镜
graduate from..毕业于.... get a... degree得到...学位
get further education深造 study abroad出国留学
humorous幽默的 clever/smart聪明的
patient耐心的 hard-working努力的
friendly友好的 warm-hearted热心的
be fond of...喜..... enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事
be crazy about.. .对....着谜 have a git for. ....天赋
be interested in... .对....感兴趣 be in the lead处于领先地位
knowledgeable知识渊博的 famous著名的
well-known知名的 think highly o... .对....评价很高
be remembered as...被后人誉.为.... be regarded as..被当......
be respected by..受....尊微 devote one's lifetime to.倾注毕生精力
live in...居住在.... be born in..出生......
spent one' s childhood in... ...过童年 live a happy busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is.. tall with the weight of..王楠，乒乓球世界冠军，.高.... 体重....
(2) My mother is a rural woman, who..我的母亲是一个农村妇女，她...
.(3) is young beautiful lady. ..是位年轻漂亮的女士。
(4) If you ask me who ....1 will tell you it is. ..at once.如果你问谁是.....我会马上告诉......
(5) ...was from a worker / teacher's family ..生于一个工人/教师家庭。
(6) He/She was born on..(time) in ...(place) 他/地出生在......(时间）......(地点）。
出彩篇中句
(1) Her eyes are very big/bright.她的眼睛很大/很明亮。
(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.他经常穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
( 3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他没怎么上过学，但是他知道
( 4) His/Her family was so poor/ rich that..他/她的家庭是如此的贫穷/富裕以至于....
(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
(6) When at... he..当..... ....
(7) I was about to...when...我正要....突然......
（8）He/She worked hard so as to improve.... 他/她为了提高.... 工作1学习很努力。
(9) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that..他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉以至.....
精彩篇尾句
( 1 ) He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重。
(2 ) Without her help, I will never... 如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法.....
(3) I will respect and love.... forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴.....
( 4 ) She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实，并且乐于助人。
(5) She has set an example for...她给....树立了榜样。
( 6 ) Now I understand my father's love for me. I will never forget my father.现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
第四部分 模板范文演练
（河南）你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如 grandma,teacher或 friend等；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.80词左右。
My special
万能模板套用分析
首先，点明要叙述的人物
其次，对要叙述的人物进行详细的介绍。
最后，发表感受
满分范文
My special friend
Do you know Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.
He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend.① He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.
He has a good sense of humor and likes making friends.②His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes.He likes playing football.He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future.(长短句结合原则，前面是简单句，此句是so...that引导的结果状语从句。）③
He is my special friend who l like very much,and I hope I can keep in touch with him.(句式多变原则，此句为复合句，who又引导定语从句。）
你也可以这样表达
① Treating me as a good friend,he is special to me.
②He is humorous and likes making friends.
③He has so much deep love for China that he is planning to live in China in the future
范文译文
我的特殊朋友
你知道史密斯先生吗？他是我的英语老师。
他对我来说很特殊，因为他把我当成好朋友。他总是面带微笑，给我留下一种无论我何
时遇到困难，他总会帮助我的印象。
他很幽默，喜欢交朋友。他的课非常有趣。下课后，他经常帮我学习英语。他从不抽烟。
他喜欢踢足球。他如此喜欢中国，以至于计划将来在中国定居。
他是我特殊的朋友，我非常喜欢他，我希望我们以后能保持联系。
第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文
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（2022·四川·宜宾市教科所中考真题）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多感慨。在此之际，请你以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。
内容包括：
1. 最喜欢的老师；
2. 简单介绍该老师（外貌或性格）；
3. 喜欢他（她）的理由（两个）；
4. 最想对老师说的话。
注意：
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名（只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓；学科）；
3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year junior middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers.
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【参考范文】
My Favorite Teacher
How time flies! My three-year Middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers.
Do you know who is my favorite teacher？She ls Ms. Li, our English teacher.
She is tall and a bit thin but very beautiful, with a pair of thick glasses.She always wears seriousness and gives us the impression that she is strict with her students.
In fact,she is always willing to get along with us and she is good at English teaching.she often makes her classes so interesting and lively that we all enjoy her lessons. When we are tired in class, she often tells jokes to make us relaxed. With the help of her, we have made great progress in English.
She always helps me out whenever I have difficulties.Once I was sick in hospital ,she accompany me all through the night.Though she was very tired,she stuck to going to school and giving the lesson for students.
She is full of love and I hope she will have a happy life in her life long journey.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，介绍自己喜欢的老师。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给。第二段阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因。最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
B
（2022·湖北湖北·中考真题）在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学……他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：1. 他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格……）？
2. 他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？
3. 你想怎样感谢他/她？
写作要求：1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：be grateful to对……心存感激；have an influence on对……有影响；
care about关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot.
Do you know who is the person I want to express my thanks most?She is my English teacher Mr. Lee.
She is tall and thin. She has short black hair and wears glasses.
She always wears smile and gives us the impression that He is always friendly and patient with us.
When I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest. He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you”. With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.
She has a great influence on me, I am grateful to him. I hope I can work hard to become better. I think that’s the best gift for my dear teacher.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作，介绍你最想感谢的人，可适当增加细节。
3.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点；第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事；第三段讲述你会如何感谢他。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
C
（2022·辽宁沈阳·中考真题）榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样——李想。
内容包括：
1. 人物描写；
2. 说明理由；
3. 表达希望。
【注意】
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
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Thanks for your listening!
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
Do you know him？He is my good friend in our school.
He is tall and thin .His black hair is short.He always wears smile and gives us the impression that He is very kind and caring. He is always willing to study hard and help others .He is good at studying.he often gets good scores in exams.However, I don’t do well in studying.
He always helps me out whenever I have difficulties in studying.he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up others. With Li Xiang’s help, I made great progress and I thank him very much.I think I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
He is so excellent and always be ready to help others, From now on, I must learn from him .I will do my best to study better and better. And help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，要求根据提示问题，介绍自己心中的榜样。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称，一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁，为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
D
（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【参考范文】
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But one person is I want to thank most .Do you know who she is？He is my English teacher Miss Lee.
She is tall and thin .She is beautiful with long hair.She always wears smile and gives us the impression that she is kind.
She is always willing to help others.She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble,he always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
She is very helpful to me and has a great influence on me, and I hope I can learn from him,study hard from now on ,and try my best to help others.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
E
（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。
内容包括：
1.你对这位老师的印象；
2.你感谢他（她）的原因；
3.你对他（她）的祝福。
注意：
1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当举例或拓展；
3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to a person.Do you know who he is？He is my English teacher Mr. Zhang.
He is tall and handsome His hair is short and black.He always wears smile and gives us the impression that he is very kind and patient.He is always willing to help others.He has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, he used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. He came and cheered me up. He told me some good ways to improve my English. With his help, I have made great progress in English.
He is helpful for me and I hope I can work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope he will become better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
F
（2022·江西·中考真题）学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Personal information ●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province
●Hobby: sports
2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Your plans ①________
②________
…
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Do you know about her？She is a 2-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.
She is tall and beautiful.She always wears smile and gives us the impression that she is relaxed.In fact she is busy in hard training. Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up.
She is hardworking and successful and I hope to learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off.
Thank you!
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。
2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
