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17 直击2022高考热点作文--安慰鼓励、投诉篇

【预测题目】

（一）

假定你是李华，正在你校交换学习的英国朋友Tony没能在你校组织的中国象棋比赛中获奖，有点沮丧。

请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.给予安慰；

2.提出具体建议；

3.表示鼓励。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中国象棋Chinese chess

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【答案】

Dear Tony,

I have heard that you have participated in the Chinese chess contest held in our school without winning a prize, which made you a little depressed. Actually, it is the process rather than the result that makes a difference. So please cheer yourself up. In order to improve yourself, you can take my suggestions as follows.

To begin with, why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy. From those books you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents. Besides, just as a saying goes, practice makes perfect. So you are expected to practice every day to better your skills. Moreover, you may as well compete in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Only if you compete with others can you figure out your shortcomings which can then be improved through efforts.

I’m firmly convinced that you will make great progress soon. Looking forward to your good news.

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求考生对在学校组织的中国象棋比赛中获奖中失败的Tony写信进行安慰，并提出建议。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

参加：join in→ participate in

沮丧的：disappointed → depressed

重要：matter→ make a difference

2.句式拓展

原句：Why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy. From those books you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents in the books.

拓展句：Why not read some books about Chinese chess strategy, from which you can learn a great many effective techniques to defeat your opponents.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I have heard that you have participated in the Chinese chess contest held in our school without winning a prize, which made you a little depressed. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】it is the process rather than the result that makes a difference. (运用了强调句）

【高分句型3】Only if you compete with others can you figure out your shortcomings which can then be improved through efforts. (运用部分倒装句和定语从句）

（二）

假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害，他的家受损严重，他本人也受伤了。请你给他写一封信，要点包括：

1. 安慰和鼓励；

2. 为他提供帮助（如募捐等）。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Joe,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Joe,

I'm so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. I'm writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.

I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can get recovered soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and don't forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.

Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害，他的家受损严重，他本人也受伤了。请你给他写一封信。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

给予：offer→give

影响：destroy→damage

难过的：sad/bad→sorrowful

有用的：useful→helpful

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句：I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well.

拓展句：I know that you are physically hurt and mentally affected because your hometown has been badly destroyed.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I'm so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day. (运用了结果状语从句)

[高分句型2] Meanwhile, never lose heart and don't forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)

（三）

假如你是李华，请你以自己网上购书所遇到的不愉快经历，向中国某家英文报纸生活栏目写一封抱怨信，要点如下：

1. 所购书中有破损，缺页现象：

2.一些书籍价格比实体店书店还要贵。

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a middle school student. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience which happened a few days ago. I bought some books from the Internet. But when I received the books, I was disappointed to find that some of the books are not only poorly printed, but also slightly damaged, and even some pages are missing. In addition, some of the books are more expensive than those in the local bookstores.

Therefore , I am writing to ask you for help, and I hope that you can focus on this matter, which can amuse the attention of the relevant departments. I totally believe that they will improve their service in the future.

I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文，向英文杂志生活版就自己购书所遇到的不开心的事情写一封抱怨信。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

表达：express→convey

购买：buy→purchase

此外：In addition→plus

关注：focus on→fix on

2. 句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：But when I received the books, I was disappointed to find that some of the books are not only poorly printed, but also slightly damaged, and even some pages are missing.

拓展句：But when receiving the books, I was disappointed to find that some of the books are not only poorly printed, but also slightly damaged, and even some pages are missing.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience which happened a few days ago. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Therefore , I am writing to ask you for help, and I hope that you can focus on this matter, which can amuse the attention of the relevant departments. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

（四）

假如你是Tom，在一家商店购得一台劣质电视机，遂与营业员交涉，但营业员态度恶劣，不予受理。为此，你向经理写了一封投诉信。内容主要包括：

(1)自我介绍；

(2)投诉的原因

(3)希望换一台新的电视机，否则全额退款。

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【答案】

Dear manager,

I am Tom, one of your customers. I am writing to lodge a complaint about the poor quality of your product. The experience in your shop is a bitter disappointment to me.

For one thing, the TV I bought the other day from your company turned out to be a fake, which ruined your good reputation. For another, when I went to your shop for an explanation, the salesperson behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear to my requirement.

It is required that I should get a replacement, or I should receive a full refund. Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to your prompt reply.

Sincerely Yours,

Tom

【解析】

本文是一篇投诉信，Tom购买了一台劣质电视机，向服务员申请售后，但遭到服务员的粗劣对待，就此事向经理写一封投诉信。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

购买：buy→purchase

摧毁：ruin→destroy

替换：replacement→substitution

回复：reply→response

2. 句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：The experience in your shop is a bitter disappointment to me.

拓展句：It is the experience in your shop that is a bitter disappointment to me.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] For one thing, the TV I bought the other day from your company turned out to be a fake, which ruined your good reputation. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] For another, when I went to your shop for an explanation, the salesperson behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear to my requirement. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

（五）

假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Jim在国际数学奥林匹克大赛（International Mathematical Olympiad）中失利。请用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 获知消息；2. 安慰他坦然面对挫折；3. 给予鼓励。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I am sorry to learn that you met your waterloo in the International Mathematical Olympiad, which you had prepared for the whole summer vacation.

True, this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time. But please rest assured that failure is just part of life and in fact, without it, countless great men would never have drawn useful lessons from their loss and achieved their ambition. So, please assume a peaceful and calm mindset, meanwhile adjusting your strategy and resuming your hard work.

You have already gone a long way in this Olympiad. In fact, hardly have I seen a more diligent contestant than you. So, pick yourself up and keep up your effort. I am fully convinced success is there for your taking in the next Olympiad.

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在得知英国好友Jim在国际数学奥林匹克大赛中失利后用英语给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：获知消息、劝他坦然面对挫折和给予鼓励。

【详解】

词汇积累

遭遇：meet→ suffer

没错：true→ indeed

事实上：in fact→ as a matter of fact

抱负：ambition→ aspiration

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：True, this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time.

拓展句：It is true that this big defeat might frustrate you for a long time.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I am sorry to learn that you met your waterloo in the International Mathematical Olympiad, which you had prepared for the whole summer vacation.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 In fact, hardly have I seen a more diligent contestant than you.（运用了hardly放句首引起的部分倒装）

（六）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Jim给你发来邮件，提到他申请2022年北京冬奥会志愿者落选，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示安慰；

2.建议以其它方式关注冬奥会。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I'm really sorry to hear that you didn't make it. It is natural to feel disappointed. However, there is no need to worry, as there are various ways to get involved.

Even if you can't come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time. Also you can find reports on everyday life of the athletes in Beijing.

What's more, the audience are encouraged to share their comments on social media while enjoying the games. I think it might be interesting to share your thoughts online and meanwhile interact with both fans and athletes.

I believe you will enjoy yourself, so have fun in a new way!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回邮件安慰他北京冬奥志愿者落选并建议其它方式让他关注冬奥。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

不同的：various→different

参与：get involved → take part in

而且：What's more→besides

与此同时：meanwhile→at the same time

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I'm really sorry to hear that you didn't make it.

拓展句：Hearing that you didn’t make it, I am really sorry.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Even if you can't come in person, you can log onto the official website or apps to enjoy live or recorded broadcasts, which allows you to follow the events almost in real time.（运用了even if引导的让步状语从句；运用which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]What's more, the audience are encouraged to share their comments on social media while enjoying the games.（while引导状语从句使用了省略句）

（七）

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中国诗词非常感兴趣并在他所在的学校加入了中国诗词俱乐部，现在因为太难学而打算放弃。请你发一封电子邮件鼓励他，内容包括：

1. 鼓励；

2. 建议。

注意:

1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加情节, 以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you going these days? I'm delighted that you are fascinated by Chinese poetry and join a poetry club in your school. Knowing that you are having a hard time learning it, I'm writing to give you some suggestions and encouragement.

Even though it is a little bit difficult to understand Chinese poems, it is interesting to read them. I want you to have some patience and follow your ears. Focus on the repeated words, rhymed, and they many lead you to a better understanding of the poem. Besides, remember that you do not have to fully understand a poem to appreciate it.

Hope you enjoy your journey in the world of Chinese poetry!

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter发一封电子邮件鼓励他。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

艰难的：hard→difficult

建议：suggestion→advice

专注于：focus on=concentrate on

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展