热点15 致歉、求助篇-2022年高考英语作文热点押题预测冲刺

15 直击2022高考 热点作文—致歉、求助篇

【预测题目】

（一）

国内某英文报社开设有专门帮助读者解决困惑的求助信箱（letters to Mr. Helper）。假如你是高三学生李华，请就以下学习生活中的烦恼，给Mr. Helper写一封信，寻求他的帮助。

1.自己学习已经很努力，可父母还是不满意;

2.学校几乎每周都安排考试，心理压力大。

注意: 1.为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节;

2.词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Helper,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr. Helper,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.

I spare no effort to study, hoping that I’ll become a university student in the near future. I do make some progress in my studies. However, my parents believe that what I’ve done is far from satisfactory. They expect me to do much better.

Almost every week I have to face endless examinations. Our teachers always say that only when we have made adequate preparation will we be able to succeed in the College Entrance Examination. Tired and helpless, I don’t think I can put up with such great pressure any more. I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封求助信，帮忙解决高三阶段的学习和生活方面的问题。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

寻求：seek → ask for

期望：expect → anticipate

充分的：adequate → abundant

忍受：put up with → bear

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.

拓展句：Since I am faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I spare no effort to study, hoping that I’ll become a university student in the near future.（现在分词作状语）

【高分句型2】Our teachers always say that only when we have made adequate preparation will we be able to succeed in the College Entrance Examination.（that引导的宾语从句；only+时间状语位于句首，句子要用部分倒装）

（二）

假定你是李华，你和留学生Johnson组队报名参加本周末的排球比赛。比赛在即，但自己因故无法参赛。根据以下要点，请你用英语给Johnson写一封邮件：

1．向他致歉；

2．说明原因；

3．提出补救的两种方法。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Johnson,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Johnson,

I am sorry to tell you that I can’t take part in the volleyball game with you this weekend.

This morning I got a stomachache after drinking some milk which was not fresh, and even now I’m still feeling weak. My doctor suggested that I avoid too much exercise and have a good rest. So I can’t play the game with you.

But if you agree, I can invite another classmate who plays volleyball very well to join you. Or I can take part in the volleyball game with you next time. Please consider my suggestion seriously! Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“不能和留学生Johnson一起参加本周末的排球比赛”一事，写一封道歉信，讲明原因和提出补救方法。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

参加：take part in→participate in

建议：suggest→recommend

同意：agree→consent

考虑某事：consider sth.→take sth. into consideration

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：So I can’t play the game with you.

拓展句：So I can’t play the game with you, which I feel very sorry.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】This morning I got a stomachache after drinking some milk which was not fresh, and even now I’m still feeling weak. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】My doctor suggested that I avoid too much exercise and have a good rest. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型3】But if you agree, I can invite another classmate who plays volleyball very well to join you. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

（三）

假设你是高三学生李华，美国哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)正在你校组织招生活动。请你根据以下要点提示给你在美国的笔友Russ写一封求助电子邮件。内容包括以下要点：

1．通过校内选拔考试(selective test)的同学将参加该大学于1月份组织的英语笔试、口试和面试；

2．你本人对此很感兴趣，正在积极备考；

3．希望Russ给出一些有关英语学习的建议。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Russ，

How is everything going？

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Russ，

How is everything going? You know, I am in Grade Three now. Our school has got an opportunity to help us apply for Columbia University. Those who can pass the selective test to be held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers in January. It has long been my dream to study abroad. Now, I am trying my best to get ready for the coming exams. Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华写一封求助信。美国哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)正在学校组织招生活动。请你根据以下要点提示给你在美国的笔友Russ写一封电子邮件，向他介绍此次招生活动并寻求建议。

【详解】

1.词汇积累：

机会：opportunity→chance

参加：take part in→attend/participate in

努力：try one’s best to do→endeavor to do/do one’s utmost to do

有限的：limited→restricted

2.句式拓展：

同义句改写

原句：Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?

拓展句：Since time is limited, could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams?

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Those who can pass the selective test to be held by our school next week will have the chance to take part in the oral and written exams in English as well as the interview by the CU teachers in January. (运用了who引导定语从句)

【高分句型2】Time is limited, so could you give me some advice on how to get well equipped with English knowledge before exams? (运用了“疑问词+to do”结构作宾语)

（四）

假定你是李华，你的美国中学生朋友Peter希望成为2022年北京冬奥会志愿者。他向你写信询问冬奥会相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。请给他回信，要点如下：

1. 北京和张家口两个城市合办；

2. 学好汉语的两条建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to know you are hoping to become a volunteer in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, which will be hosted by Beijing and Zhangjiakou from 4th to 20th February 2022.

Here are two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well. First, you’d better attend a Chinese class or discussion group so that you can practice Chinese every day. Then learning Chinese songs is very useful and practical. After all, the best way to learn any new language is just to use it.

Hope you’ll find them beneficial.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国中学生朋友Peter希望成为2022年北京冬奥会志愿者，他向你写信询问冬奥会的相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语。请你给他回信。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy→glad

建议：advice→suggestion

上课：take a Chinese class→attend a Chinese class

有益的：helpful→beneficial

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.

拓展句：Here are two suggestions on how to learn Chinese well, which will be of benefit to you.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I’m glad to know you are hoping to become a volunteer in the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, which will be hosted by Beijing and Zhangjiakou from 4th to 20th February 2022. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] First, you’d better attend a Chinese class or discussion group so that you can practice Chinese every day. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)

（五）

假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信，要点如下：

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意；

2. 提出解决的办法；

3. 再次请求原谅。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Bob,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you, for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.

I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文，就将房东Bob的光盘带走一事写一封道歉信。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

相信：believe→ensure

购买：buy→purchase

发现：find→spot

解决办法：solution→settlement

2. 句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

拓展句：So sorry am I that you cannot listen to it at present.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I am writing to make an apology to you, for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

（六）

假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封求助邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：

1.剧情简介；

2.指导内容；

3.商定时间、地点。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.结束语已为你写好。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Miss Evans,

I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts.

The text tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who makes up her mind to help protect the environment. I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8:00 a.m. this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope you can do us a favour and help improve our performance.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

决定：make up one’s mind to do→be determined to do

给予：give→offer

指导：guidance→instruction

帮助：do sb. a favour→give a helping hand

2.句式拓展

同义句转化

原句：I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on.

拓展句：I would appreciate it if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I'm writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I wonder if you can give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, plot, setting and so on. (运用了if引导宾语从句)

（七）

假定你是李华，近期将参加“Sports make me happy”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请给外教Mr. Smith写封求助信，请他帮你修改你的演讲稿。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

This is Li Hua, one of the students in your class.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr. Smith,

This is Li Hua, one of the students in your class. I’m writing to seek for your help.

I’m going to participate in an English Speech Contest with the theme of “Sports make me happy”. I have just completed my speech draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory. I’m not sure of the proper expressions of some English vocabularies. And there may also be some mistakes concerning grammar and sentence structures. Could you please kindly look through my draft and revise accordingly?

I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这个书面表达属于书信。假定你是李华，近期将参加“Sports make me happy”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请给外教Mr. Smith写信，请他帮你修改你的演讲稿。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

寻求：ask for→ seek for

参加：take part in→ participate in

不满意的：unsatisfactory→ far from satisfactory

关于：about→ concerning

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m going to participate in an English Speech Contest with the theme of “Sports make me happy”.

拓展句：I’m going to participate in an English Speech Contest whose theme is “Sports make me happy”.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] This is Li Hua, one of the students in your writing class. (运用了名词作同位语)

[高分句型2]I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.(运用固定句型I’d appreciate it if... ）

(八)

假如你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike 约好了本周末去博物馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“美丽市容，从我做起”的志愿活动，而不能同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。

1.表达歉意；2.简介活动内容和意义；3. 另约时间。

注意：字数100词左右

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【答案】

Dear Mike,

Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday. Therefore, I’ writing to express my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused all of sudden.

As you know, I’ve been waiting for a chance to devote myself to raising public awareness of environmental protection. Consequently, when the opportunity to volunteer came, I seized it without hesitation. On that day, all the volunteers will put up posters about how to lead a low-carbon lifestyle and pick up the trash along the roads, which will take a whole day. Considering that, I am afraid that I won’t keep my word. It is possible for us to fixed another date when you are available.

Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike 约好了本周末去博物馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“美丽市容，从我做起”的志愿活动，而不能同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

参观：visit→tour

非常：awfully→terribly

提高：promote→raise

机会：opportunity→chance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.

拓展句：I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday because I have signed up for a voluntary activity.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology. (运用了that引导宾语从句)