专题01 温暖亲情类 -备战2024年新高考英语读后续写真题逐步解析专练

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（2021·新全国I卷）
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
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真题解析
2.1 整体把握：
2.2逐句写作：
第一段：
父亲的出现对于两孩子来说就像救世主一样。
Father’s appearing was like a savir t the tw children.
了解了事情的经过后，父亲并没有责骂他们，而是鼓励他们再试一次。
Knwing what had happened, instead f sclding his children, the father encuraged them t ck breakfast again.
在父亲的指导下，孩子们收拾了残局，重新开始做早餐。
Under their father's guidance, the kids started t try again and everything was ging smthly.
当他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮助他们调整了火候，这是成功的关键。
While they were frying the bread, father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success.
一切进展顺利，不一会儿，一顿美味的早餐就成形了。
In n time, a delicius breakfast started t take shape.
他们欣喜若狂！迫不及待地想让妈妈品尝他们亲手做的早餐。
Wild with jy, they culdn’t wait t let mm taste their hmemade breakfast.
第二段：
当看到美味和完美的早餐在她面前，妈妈又惊讶又兴奋。
When their mther saw the delicius and perfect breakfast in frnt f her, she was very surprised.
一阵暖流涌上心头。
A warm current welled up in her heart.
不仅是这份早餐，而且孩子们对她的爱也使她感动落泪。
It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much.
孩子们大声说:“母亲节快乐!”
The children said ludly, “Happy Mther’s Day!”
妈妈无法掩饰内心的欣喜，紧紧地拥抱着他们，说:“非常感谢你们，杰夫和詹娜。我相信这将是我一生中最棒的早餐。我为你们感到骄傲！”
Mther hugged them tightly, saying ''Thank yu s much, Jeff and Jenna. I believe it will be the best breakfast in my life. "
听到这话，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。
Hearing this, the twins smiled prudly.
2.3 范文赏析
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.Father’s appearing was like a savir t the tw children. Knwing what had happened, instead f sclding his children, the father encuraged them t ck breakfast again. Under their father's guidance, the kids started t try again and everything was ging smthly. While they were frying the bread, father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key t success. In n time, a delicius breakfast started t take shape. Wild with jy, they culdn’t wait t let mm taste their hmemade breakfast.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. When their mther saw the delicius and perfect breakfast in frnt f her, she was very surprised. A warm current welled up in her heart. It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much. The children said ludly,“Happy Mther’s Day!”Mther hugged them tightly, saying ''Thank yu s much, Jeff and Jenna. I believe it will be the best breakfast in my life. "Hearing this, the twins smiled prudly.
素材积累
3.1 情绪类素材积累
喜悦/高兴
高兴的 delighted/cheerful/jyful 因而高兴 be jyful ver
令某人高兴的是 t ne’s delight 欣喜若狂 be wild with jy
难以形容的开心 be indescribably jyful 极为感动 be verwhelmingly mved
几乎无法掩饰他兴奋的心情 can hardly cnceal his excitement
既兴奋又开心 a mixture f excitement and happiness
惊讶
惊讶的 surprised/shcked/astnished/amazed 令某人惊讶的是 t ne’s surprise
惊讶地 in amazement
张大嘴 with ne’s muth wide pen 惊呆了 be numb with shck
感动
感到温暖 feel warm 特别感动 be mved/tuched prfundly 心被融化 heart melt
感动落泪 be mved t tears 一股暖流涌上心头 a warm current welled up in ne’s mind
3.2 动作类素材积累
笑
开怀大笑 smile bradly
朝微笑 flash a smile at...
表情变得明亮 face lights up/brightens
面露喜色 a wide smile appears n/spreads acrss ne’s face
喜极而泣 shed tears f jy
脸上绽放笑容 face bradens int a smile
哭
眼泪夺眶而出 tears well up XX的泪水流过脸颊 tears f XXX rll dwn
拥抱
紧紧拥抱 hug tightly 温柔地抱着某人 hug sb. gently/tenderly
投入某人的怀抱 thrw neself int ne’s embrace
四、模拟演练
练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jim slumped n the cuch. Mther’s Day was cming up, and he didn’t have a present. “Hw can I buy a present withut any mney?” he thught.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying n the cuch. He nticed a large advertisement n the frnt page. The lcal department stre was spnsring a cntest. “Tell us why yur mm is special and win a shpping spree (购物狂欢) fr her,” said the ad.
“This is perfect!” thught Jim. He ran t his rm with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece f paper frm his desk, he started t write.
“My mm is the best mther in the wrld. She always makes a lunch fr me t take t schl, and she never frgets my dessert. She reads as many bks t me befre bed as I want. She always remembers t check under the bed fr mnsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in frnt f my friends, wh wuld laugh at me fr hugging my mm.”
Jim liked what he had written. He cpied it neatly and gt an envelpe and a stamp frm his dad. He ran t the mailbx with his entry (参赛作品). “Mm will lve having a shpping spree,” he thught.
Jim checked the mailbx every day fr his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Sn it was the day befre Mther’s Day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything abut the cntest.
“What am I ging t d nw?” he wndered. He didn’t have a present, and he didn’t have a shpping spree. And he still didn’t have any mney. He had t think f smething. Jim clsed his eyes and curled his tes and thught s hard that his ears hurt.
注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly, he has an idea.
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The next mrning Jim handed his present t his mm.
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练习（二）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1945, a 12-year-ld by saw a beautiful brch （胸针）in a shp windw that set his heart racing. But the price—five dllars—was t high fr Reuben Earle. Five dllars wuld buy almst a week's fd fr his family.
Reuben culdn’t ask his father fr the mney. Everything his father made thrugh fishing went t his mther, Dra. Slim and beautiful, she was the center f the hme and the glue that held it tgether. The husewrk was never-ending, and she struggled t feed and clthe their five children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared abut.
Nevertheless, he pened the shp's dr and went inside. Standing prudly and straight in his flur-sack （面粉袋改做的）shirt and washed-ut trusers, he tld the shpkeeper what he wanted, adding, “But I dn't have the mney right nw. Can yu please hld it fr me fr sme time?”
"I'll try,” the shpkeeper smiled. "Peple arund here dn't usually have that kind f mney t spend n things. It shuld keep fr a while."
Reuben respectfully tuched his wrn cap and walked ut. He wuld raise the mney and nt tell anybdy, fr he thught Mum wuld get surprised when she saw that brch. On hearing the sund f hammering （捶打）frm a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he culd raise mney by selling the used nail bags. Peple built their wn hmes in Bay Rberts, using nails bught in bags frm a lcal factry. Smetimes the used bags were thrwn away at the cnstructin site, and Reuben knew he culd sell them back t the factry fr five cents a piece. That day he sld tw nail bags and hid the mney in a rusty sda tin.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan.
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Finally, the time came!
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Micah was a child, I used t d many things with her. Later, I gt prmted and was always n cnstant business hlidays. 3 years' devtin t wrk resulted in my absence frm her life and nw she was a teenage girl. Recently, I eventually managed t have abundant time t accmpany her.
Fr the last few weeks, Micah had watched mckingbirds make a nest in a tree and lay eggs there. Smetimes, I came t accmpany her withut being invited. But whenever I made an attempt t break the ice, “I'm gd” was abut all she said t me. Cde fr “Leave me alne”.
“Why desn't she want t d things with me?”I thught as I set the table fr dinner ne evening, hping fr an emtin bridge t reappear between us. Did she feel hurt with my lng absence r feel ignred ? Lst in thught, I was seeking t mend the relatinship.
“Mm!” Micah yelled suddenly. “Cme quick!”
Surprised, I rushed ut, nly t find a little baby bird n the grund, weak and helpless. My eyes went t the branches abve.
“The wind must have blwn him ut f the nest,”I said.
“N, it was Mr. Whiskers -ur cat. Yu let him g utside!” Micah said, a bit annyed.
Lking at the nest withut the parents, “I'm srry,”I said and put the bird in my palm cautiusly and gently. She didn't respnd, but did nt refused my ffer t help, either. Deciding t take care f the little baby till it became independent, I placed it in its nest. “What shuld we d next?” I asked. N respnse again. Instead, Micah went inside and hpped n her iPad. “Bird vides?” I asked. “Yes, I'm finding ut what t feed it,” she said seriusly.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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She was mre fcused than ever.
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Befre lng, the bird fd was delivered and we fed the bird "Chance" at nce.
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范文赏析
练习（一）
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, he had an idea. Jim fund his riginal cntest entry. He cpied it with a bright red crayn n his biggest piece f yellw cnstructin paper. Then he decrated the paper with purple glitter and glued a picture f his mm t the bttm with care. He wuld like t use this as a Mther's Day gift fr his dear mther if he culdn't win a shpping spree fr her.
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The next mrning Jim handed his present t his mm. "Happy Mther's Day!" he yelled. Mm read Jim's pster "My mm is the best mther in the wrld...". By the time she finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. "Thank yu," she said, wiping her eyes. "This is the best present I have ever had." Jim smiled. "I have smething else fr yu, t," he said. He checked t make sure n ne was lking, and then he gave his mm a big hug.
练习（二）
Every day after schl, Reuben started his plan. Cld and hungry, Reuben wandered arund, searching fr nail bags carefully frm ne street t anther. T save mre mney, the determined by even decided t deliver papers n the early mrning. Every cin he wn went t a sda tin, his treasured “bank”, and then all the tiredness disappeared magically. Each time he passed by the brch in the shp windw wuld remind him what he did was wrthwhile. Day by day, his sda tin became heavier and heavier. Six weeks passed befre he even knew it. Then apprached the Christmas Eve.
Finally, the time came! Reuben stle int his rm and cautiusly tk ut the sda tin, pured all the cins ut and began t cunt. Five dllars and twenty cents! He cunted it a secnd time, and n mistake. His hard wrk eventually paid ff! Hlding the sda tin firmly, Reuben rushed fr the shp withut a secnd’s delay. Wearing the beautiful brch and knwing the stry behind it, Dra was t verjyed t utter a wrd. She just threw her arms tightly arund her belved sn. “Merry Christmas, mm”, the sn annunced prudly. “Yu t.” the prud mther eched. Well, n dream is ut f reach fr a willing heart.
练习（三）
She was mre fcused than ever. Sn, Micah smiled bradly, “I’ve gt it.” “What d we need?” I asked again. She said the baby bird needed sme special bird fd. Hearing this, I immediately phned t place an rder. While waiting fr delivery, Micah added that we needed t name the bird t build a bnd. “Hw abut Chance? I think it has a gd chance f making it with yur help,” I prpsed. She didn’t say a wrd but ndded with a bright smile.
Befre lng, the bird fd was delivered and we fed the bird “Chance” at nce. T ur relief, the special fd was t its taste. The fllwing weeks, we went t feed and check n Chance every day. One day, Micah shared with me happily her finding that Chance became independent. Lking at her shining face, I was almst mved t tears. I never imagined that the bird Chance became the real chance t rebuild the emtin bridge between us. Frm then, I decided t accmpany her mre, just as what we had dne t Chance. Cmpany is the best lve.主题语境
人与自我--生活与学习--家庭生活
语篇话题
本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为母亲节当天，双胞胎想要做一顿丰盛的早餐作为母亲节礼物，给母亲惊喜。
情节梳理
故事要素
when：n Mther’s Day
where：At hme
wh：The twins -- Jenna and Jeff
what：The twins planned t make a delicius breakfast fr their mther. On Mther’s Day, they gt up early and began t make breakfast. Hwever, everything didn’t g smthly as they wished.
情节走向
通过第一段首句“As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.”可预测，续写思路为：爸爸指导--孩子重新尝试--进展顺利--成功--欣喜若狂。
通过第二段首句“The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.”可预测，续写思路为：孩子们呈现惊喜给妈妈--妈妈喜极而泣--孩子们献上母亲节的祝福--母亲感动至极一家人幸福相拥。