专题07 人与动物类-备战2024高考读后续写真题逐步解析专练

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（2020年7月浙江卷）
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal：t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “the plar bear capital f the wrld” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter（相遇）, I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar（吼叫）, the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.
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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.
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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、真题解析
2.1 整体把握：
2.2逐句写作：
第一段：
1. 咆哮和尖叫声以针状的刺耳刺破了寂静。
Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.
2. 噪音把埃利和我吓得脸色发白。我担心巨人会毁掉我们的整个栅栏。
The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr. I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence.
3. 他不停地咆哮，打破了沉默。
He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence.
4. 埃利抓住这个机会给这只熊拍了几张照片。动物的声音在我们周围回荡。
Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear. The animal’s nises eched all arund us.
5. 我们蜷缩在一起，害怕得发抖，这暴露了我们的感觉。
We betrayed ur feelings by huddling tgether, shivering with fear.
6. 在彻底检查了这个地区之后，他小跑了几步。
After thrughly scrutinizing the area, he trtted frward a few steps.
第二段：
7. 当我知道我们很可能得救时，我的心高兴得跳了起来。埃利又用胡椒喷雾为我们争取了足够的时间。
My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper spray again t buy us enugh time.
8. 但这一次，熊变得更加警觉了。他把我们看成是饥饿的无情需求，所以我们扔掉所有的食物。
But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we thrw all the fd we have.
9. 然后他转身走开，开始吞食。当我们爬上绳梯时，埃利祈祷了上千次，以表示对安全和健康的感谢。
He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like thusand times t shw thankfulness f being safe and sund.
2.3 范文赏析
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Rars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The nises turned Elli and I pale with hrrr. I feared that the giant wuld destry ur whle fence. He rared repeatedly, shattering what was left f the silence. Elli seized this pprtunity t take sme pictures f the bear. The animal’s nises eched all arund us. We betrayed ur feelings by huddling tgether, shivering with fear. After thrughly scrutinizing the area, he trtted frward a few steps.
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. My heart leaped with jy as I knew we were likely t be saved. Elli used pepper spray again t buy us enugh time. But this time the bear became mre alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity f hunger, s we thrw all the fd we have. He then turned away and started devuring. As we were climbing the rpe ladder, Elli prayed like thusand times t shw thankfulness f being safe and sund.
素材积累
3.1 情绪类素材积累
惊讶
主题语境
人与自然--人与环境、人与动植物
语篇话题
本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为我和妻子想要给北极熊拍照，旅程中我们食物的味道吸引来了北极熊，让我们与熊面对面的惊险故事。
情节梳理
故事要素
when：ne fall
where：the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada
wh：my wife Elli and I
what：We wanted t take pictures f plar bears, and when we cked, the bear appeared and we met the wild animal face t face.
情节走向
通过第一段首句“A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.”可预测，续写思路为：熊吼叫--我们害怕--趁机拍照--等待救援
通过第二段首句“At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.”可预测，续写思路为：我们兴奋--与熊斗争--最终脱险
惊讶的；惊愕的 astnished/astunded
张大嘴 with ne’s muth wide pen
惊呆了 be numb with shck
惊讶地 in astnishment
令某人惊讶的是 t ne’s astnishment
吓得脸白 face turn pale with fear
怒 愤怒
感到愤怒 feel furius/irritated
眼睛冒火 eyes burning
脸气地通红 flush with anger
怒气冲天 anger bils ver sb.
气地直跺脚 stamp ne’s feet in anger
怒视某人 glare at sb.
脸因为生气而扭曲 face twists with rage
3.2 动作类素材积累
咆哮 rar
尖叫 scream
蜷缩 curl up
逃跑 run away/escape
祈祷 pray
警觉 alert
抓住hld nt/ grabbed/ grasp
大喊一声 let ut a cry
追逐 chase after
冲 dash
逃跑 flee away
前往 head fr/t
一想到狼血淋淋的嘴巴，Mike吓得几乎要死了。
Thinking f the wlf’s bldy muth, Mike was nearly dead with hrrr.
四、模拟演练
练习（一）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
（2020年1月浙江卷）
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins（情绪） get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit. Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried. “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy welcmed them hme as usual but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
Para 1. Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.
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练习（二）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
（2018年6月浙江卷）
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2: We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
（2017年6月浙江卷）
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Pauland Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
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Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
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范文赏析
练习（一）
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Pppy apprached with cautin, trying nt t scare the puppy. Sure enugh, it was nly mments later that the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the bx t peek at its new hme and its new friend. Mm and Dad watched delightedly as the tw made acquaintances. They were glad t see Pppy cming back t her usual self, guiding the little dg n daily walks and even intrducing t it her favrite tys.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. Hearing his bags unladed n the driveway, Pppy’s ears pricked up and suddenly she was n all furs. The by was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the frnt dr ppped pen and Pppy darted t his embrace, fllwed by the little ne wh licked his fingers fndly. Smiling ever s bright, he called ut t his parents, wh tugged him in fr a lng hug. Despite the chill autumn wind, their hme was filled with the warmth f lve and reunin.
练习（二）
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was furry with a cat f grgeus brwn hair. After lking up at me with its pair f red bulbs , it began t scurry ahead. “Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thught, I rde hard t hunt fr it. Dad saw it and had t fllw me. The rabbit was very agile, sn entering a muntain frest. We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinuing the chase and ttally frgetting the track back. Even thugh we tried desperately, the rabbit was ut f sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part f a frest.
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. And dark cluds seemed t be gathering in the sky. Taking ut the cell phne, we sn fund smething was wrng: n signal. And n cmpass. Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him. “Maybe what yu have learned in gegraphy class wrks," he said, pinting t the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the Nrth Star. Sn we fund the right directin. We hurried back finding the hrses. And the river was in sight again. The family was wrried and abut t call the plice. At the sight f us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nthing mre memrable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
练习（三）
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.