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这是一份课件新高考读后续写 专题4 高级句式“扩写模型”，共39页。PPT课件主要包含了常用方式副词强化训练等内容，欢迎下载使用。
读后续写策略：内容&语言
语言：准确，丰富，细腻、生动动作、人物、心理活动、环境等细节描写。 He sat in frnt f them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never mving, his dusty face masking his age. He kept chewing the inside f his lip a lt, frzen int cmplete silence. 他坐在他们面前，穿着一套朴素的，不合身的西装，从不动，尘土飞扬的脸掩盖了他的年龄。 他不停地咀嚼嘴唇的内侧，冻成完全的沉默。
扩句的目的 t make the sentence mre infrmative, specific and vivid
例1：The seal perfrmed. 海豹表演。
1. ---The seal gt ut f water, mved acrss the deck, and made sunds at the audience.
2. ---The seals leaped ut f the water, slid acrss the deck and barked at the audience.
4.---The black, sleek seal leaped eagerly ut f the glistening water, slid quickly acrss a plished, wden deck, and barked nisily at the stunned audience.
3. ---The seals leaped eagerly ut f the water, slid quickly acrss the deck, and barked nisily at the audience.
例2：A man saved up.
A man saved up.
1. 加介词短语 （表时间； 地点）:
A yung man in Teheran saved up fr years.
2. 加动词不定式短语 （表目的）：
A yung man in Teheran saved up fr years t buy a real bed.
3. 加过去分词短语（表原因）：
Tired f sleeping n the flr, a yung man in Teheran saved up fr years t buy a real bed.
例3：He became an wner f a bed.
He became an wner f a bed.
He became a prud wner f a bed.
2.加介词短语 （时间）：
Fr the first time in his life, he became the prud wner f a bed.
Fr the first time in his life, he became the prud wner f a bed which had springs and mattress
例4：The man didn’t wake up.
The man didn’t wake up.
1. 加时间主语从句:
The man didn’t wake up until the bed had struck the grund.
例5：The man was unhurt.
The man was unhurt.
The man was miraculusly unhurt.
Althugh the bed was smashed int pieces, the man was miraculusly unhurt.
例6 The man picked up the mattress.
The man picked up the mattress.
The man sadly picked up the mattress.
2.加并列谓语动词 短语：
The man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
3. 加现在分词短语（表伴随状语)：
Glancing at the bits f wd and metal, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
Glancing at the bits f wd and metal that lay arund him, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
We wn.The children swim in the river.I went int the kitchen.The city has been rebuilt.Jenny sat in a cafe.
Thanks t ur great effrts and amazing teamwrk, we eventually wn the ftball game with a 2-1 hme victry against the Tiger.
We wn the ftball game.
thanks t ur great effrts and amazing teamwrk 介词短语作原因状语2. eventually 副词 作状语with a 2-1 hme victry against the Tiger 介词短语作伴随状语
At a beautiful dusk, the children led by their native leader, G. Dragn swam in the Devil River , a terrifying place where nbdy dared t apprach.
The children swim in the river.
The children swam in the Devil River.
at a beautiful dusk 介词短语作时间状语2. led by their naïve leader 过去分词作定语3. a terrifying place which nbdy dared t apprach 作the Devil River 的同位语4. terrifying 现在分词作形容词修饰名词 place 5. where nbdy dared t apprach 定语从句作定语
Hearing his wife’s scream, he jumped ut f the bathtub immediately and hurried t the kitchen anxiusly, nly t find that the meat his wife had been cking was burnt.
I went t the kitchen.
He jumped ut f the bathtub and hurried t the kitchen.
hearing his wife’s scream 现在分词表伴随2. immediately , anxiusly 副词 修饰动词3. his wife had been cking 定语从句 4. nly t find… 动词不定式短语作状语
Standing n the tp f the muntain, the ld man verlked the brand-new city with mixed feelings because the rebuilt city is nt familiar t him anymre, but meanwhile he was happy fr the develpment f the his hmetwn.
The city has been rebuilt.
The ld man verlked the brand-new city.
1.standing n the tp f the muntain 现在分词短语作伴随状语with mixed feelings 介词短语作伴随状语3. because the rebuilt city is nt familiar t him anymre, but meanwhile he was happy fr the develpment f the his hmetwn 原因状语从句
Jenny sat pensively in the empty café, sipping the bitter-tasting cffee and waiting fr smene wh might never turn up.
Jenny sat in a café .
Jenny sat pensively in the (empty) café
sipping the (bitter-tasting) cffee and waiting fr smene 现在分词作伴随状语2. wh might never turn up 定语从句修饰 smene
学习建议：1、跟读回顾； 2、限时默写；3、练习演示； 4、练后自查；5、自选好句背诵
对动作的描写自然会用到方式副词。方式副词修饰动词，适当地使用方式副词使得动作描写更加具体，内容更加丰富。方式副词一般放在宾语后，无宾语放动词后，有时放助动词后，实义动词前。有时为了突出动作的方式，将方式副词置于句首。
silently plitely prudly curiusly aimlessly gently sincerely autmatically calmly casually secretly madly blankly generusly immediately cnfidently eagerly gratefully deliberately desperately abruptly cautiuslybravely anxiusly nervusly hurriedly unwillingly gradually impatiently shyly heavily helplessly carelessly cmfrtably painfully kindly determinedly angrily repeatedly enthusiastically sweetly quietly regretfully
骄傲地平静地焦急地突然小心地热情地不慌不忙地感激地兴奋地漫无目的渐渐地
安静地漫不经心遗憾地热切地默默地有礼貌地好奇地甜蜜地不由自主地温柔地真诚地
发疯似地紧张地焦急地绝望地羞怯地沉重地无助地舒舒服服地反复痛苦地奇怪地
断然地气愤地马上茫然地勇敢地偷偷地不情愿地粗心地慷慨地自信地
1. “Next year,” she said __________, “I'm grwing watermelns!”“明年,” 她骄傲地说, “我准备种西瓜!”2. “I checked the messages in yur mbile phne,” admitted the wife __________.“我查看了你的手机信息,” 妻子平静地承认。3. He waited fr his girlfriend _____________, feeling as thugh time were standing still. 他焦急地等待着女友，觉得时间仿佛凝固了。
impatiently
4. We tk ff ur shes and crept _____________ int the huse. 我们脱掉了鞋，在走廊中蹑手蹑脚地小心地进入屋子。5. He stpped ___________and lked at me in disbelief.他突然停下，不相信地看着我。6. She talked ________________ abut her teaching experience and her hpes fr the future f English teaching in China. 她热情地讲了她的教学经历，以及未来中国英语教学的希望。
enthusiastically
7. He packed up his pssessins slwly and______________.他慢慢地、不慌不忙地收拾好自己的物品。8. He walked ____________ alng street after street, head drped and shulders bwed. 他低着头、垂着肩，漫无目的地走过一条条街道。9. “Yu're cming?” he said_____________, “That's fantastic! That's incredible!”“你要来吗?” 他兴奋地说: “太棒了！太不可思议了!”
deliberately
22. curiusly 23. Autmatically24. gently 25. sincerely 26. madly 27. Nervusly 28. anxiusly29. desperately30. shyly 31. heavily 32. helplessly
1. prudly 2. calmly 3. impatiently 4. cautiusly5. abruptly 6. enthusiastically7. deliberately 8. aimlessly 9. excitedly10. gratefully 11. Gradually
12. Carelessly13. cnfidently 14. generusly 15. quietly 16. casually 17. regretfully 18. eagerly19. silently 20. plitely 21. sweetly
33. repeatedly 34. cmfrtably 35. painfully 36. strangely37. determinedly 38. angrily 39. immediately 40. blankly 41. bravely 42. secretly 43. unwillingly
读后续写策略：内容&语言
语言：准确，丰富，细腻、生动动作、人物、心理活动、环境等细节描写。 He sat in frnt f them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never mving, his dusty face masking his age. He kept chewing the inside f his lip a lt, frzen int cmplete silence. 他坐在他们面前，穿着一套朴素的，不合身的西装，从不动，尘土飞扬的脸掩盖了他的年龄。 他不停地咀嚼嘴唇的内侧，冻成完全的沉默。
扩句的目的 t make the sentence mre infrmative, specific and vivid
例1：The seal perfrmed. 海豹表演。
1. ---The seal gt ut f water, mved acrss the deck, and made sunds at the audience.
2. ---The seals leaped ut f the water, slid acrss the deck and barked at the audience.
4.---The black, sleek seal leaped eagerly ut f the glistening water, slid quickly acrss a plished, wden deck, and barked nisily at the stunned audience.
3. ---The seals leaped eagerly ut f the water, slid quickly acrss the deck, and barked nisily at the audience.
例2：A man saved up.
A man saved up.
1. 加介词短语 （表时间； 地点）:
A yung man in Teheran saved up fr years.
2. 加动词不定式短语 （表目的）：
A yung man in Teheran saved up fr years t buy a real bed.
3. 加过去分词短语（表原因）：
Tired f sleeping n the flr, a yung man in Teheran saved up fr years t buy a real bed.
例3：He became an wner f a bed.
He became an wner f a bed.
He became a prud wner f a bed.
2.加介词短语 （时间）：
Fr the first time in his life, he became the prud wner f a bed.
Fr the first time in his life, he became the prud wner f a bed which had springs and mattress
例4：The man didn’t wake up.
The man didn’t wake up.
1. 加时间主语从句:
The man didn’t wake up until the bed had struck the grund.
例5：The man was unhurt.
The man was unhurt.
The man was miraculusly unhurt.
Althugh the bed was smashed int pieces, the man was miraculusly unhurt.
例6 The man picked up the mattress.
The man picked up the mattress.
The man sadly picked up the mattress.
2.加并列谓语动词 短语：
The man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
3. 加现在分词短语（表伴随状语)：
Glancing at the bits f wd and metal, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
Glancing at the bits f wd and metal that lay arund him, the man sadly picked up the mattress and carried it int his huse.
We wn.The children swim in the river.I went int the kitchen.The city has been rebuilt.Jenny sat in a cafe.
Thanks t ur great effrts and amazing teamwrk, we eventually wn the ftball game with a 2-1 hme victry against the Tiger.
We wn the ftball game.
thanks t ur great effrts and amazing teamwrk 介词短语作原因状语2. eventually 副词 作状语with a 2-1 hme victry against the Tiger 介词短语作伴随状语
At a beautiful dusk, the children led by their native leader, G. Dragn swam in the Devil River , a terrifying place where nbdy dared t apprach.
The children swim in the river.
The children swam in the Devil River.
at a beautiful dusk 介词短语作时间状语2. led by their naïve leader 过去分词作定语3. a terrifying place which nbdy dared t apprach 作the Devil River 的同位语4. terrifying 现在分词作形容词修饰名词 place 5. where nbdy dared t apprach 定语从句作定语
Hearing his wife’s scream, he jumped ut f the bathtub immediately and hurried t the kitchen anxiusly, nly t find that the meat his wife had been cking was burnt.
I went t the kitchen.
He jumped ut f the bathtub and hurried t the kitchen.
hearing his wife’s scream 现在分词表伴随2. immediately , anxiusly 副词 修饰动词3. his wife had been cking 定语从句 4. nly t find… 动词不定式短语作状语
Standing n the tp f the muntain, the ld man verlked the brand-new city with mixed feelings because the rebuilt city is nt familiar t him anymre, but meanwhile he was happy fr the develpment f the his hmetwn.
The city has been rebuilt.
The ld man verlked the brand-new city.
1.standing n the tp f the muntain 现在分词短语作伴随状语with mixed feelings 介词短语作伴随状语3. because the rebuilt city is nt familiar t him anymre, but meanwhile he was happy fr the develpment f the his hmetwn 原因状语从句
Jenny sat pensively in the empty café, sipping the bitter-tasting cffee and waiting fr smene wh might never turn up.
Jenny sat in a café .
Jenny sat pensively in the (empty) café
sipping the (bitter-tasting) cffee and waiting fr smene 现在分词作伴随状语2. wh might never turn up 定语从句修饰 smene
学习建议：1、跟读回顾； 2、限时默写；3、练习演示； 4、练后自查；5、自选好句背诵
对动作的描写自然会用到方式副词。方式副词修饰动词，适当地使用方式副词使得动作描写更加具体，内容更加丰富。方式副词一般放在宾语后，无宾语放动词后，有时放助动词后，实义动词前。有时为了突出动作的方式，将方式副词置于句首。
silently plitely prudly curiusly aimlessly gently sincerely autmatically calmly casually secretly madly blankly generusly immediately cnfidently eagerly gratefully deliberately desperately abruptly cautiuslybravely anxiusly nervusly hurriedly unwillingly gradually impatiently shyly heavily helplessly carelessly cmfrtably painfully kindly determinedly angrily repeatedly enthusiastically sweetly quietly regretfully
骄傲地平静地焦急地突然小心地热情地不慌不忙地感激地兴奋地漫无目的渐渐地
安静地漫不经心遗憾地热切地默默地有礼貌地好奇地甜蜜地不由自主地温柔地真诚地
发疯似地紧张地焦急地绝望地羞怯地沉重地无助地舒舒服服地反复痛苦地奇怪地
断然地气愤地马上茫然地勇敢地偷偷地不情愿地粗心地慷慨地自信地
1. “Next year,” she said __________, “I'm grwing watermelns!”“明年,” 她骄傲地说, “我准备种西瓜!”2. “I checked the messages in yur mbile phne,” admitted the wife __________.“我查看了你的手机信息,” 妻子平静地承认。3. He waited fr his girlfriend _____________, feeling as thugh time were standing still. 他焦急地等待着女友，觉得时间仿佛凝固了。
impatiently
4. We tk ff ur shes and crept _____________ int the huse. 我们脱掉了鞋，在走廊中蹑手蹑脚地小心地进入屋子。5. He stpped ___________and lked at me in disbelief.他突然停下，不相信地看着我。6. She talked ________________ abut her teaching experience and her hpes fr the future f English teaching in China. 她热情地讲了她的教学经历，以及未来中国英语教学的希望。
enthusiastically
7. He packed up his pssessins slwly and______________.他慢慢地、不慌不忙地收拾好自己的物品。8. He walked ____________ alng street after street, head drped and shulders bwed. 他低着头、垂着肩，漫无目的地走过一条条街道。9. “Yu're cming?” he said_____________, “That's fantastic! That's incredible!”“你要来吗?” 他兴奋地说: “太棒了！太不可思议了!”
deliberately
22. curiusly 23. Autmatically24. gently 25. sincerely 26. madly 27. Nervusly 28. anxiusly29. desperately30. shyly 31. heavily 32. helplessly
1. prudly 2. calmly 3. impatiently 4. cautiusly5. abruptly 6. enthusiastically7. deliberately 8. aimlessly 9. excitedly10. gratefully 11. Gradually
12. Carelessly13. cnfidently 14. generusly 15. quietly 16. casually 17. regretfully 18. eagerly19. silently 20. plitely 21. sweetly
33. repeatedly 34. cmfrtably 35. painfully 36. strangely37. determinedly 38. angrily 39. immediately 40. blankly 41. bravely 42. secretly 43. unwillingly
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