【备战2023高考】英语专题讲与练——专题15《读后续写高级句式升级：主旨句》课件+全能练（含解析）（新高考地区专用）

专题15 高级句式升级--主旨句

（解析版）

读后续写中有些为主旨升华类的文章，即续写的两段内容中，第一段采用故事描写，第二段或整段，或末句采用主旨升华句，从而点明文章的主旨，拔高整篇文章的立意。

本专题包括：

（一）成长型主旨句

（二）助人型主旨句

（三）脱险型主旨句

（四）读后续写练习

（一）成长型主旨句

功能：成长是读后续写的一个重要主题，包括学习知识、克服困难、追逐梦想、战胜自我等子主题。

相关表达积累：

1. 活到老学到老 It's never too late to learn.
2. 克服困难 overcome all the difficulties
3. 完成目标accomplish your goal
4. 实现梦想realize your dreams
5. 追逐梦想 pursue one’s dream
6. 创造奇迹create miracles
7. 充分利用take full advantage of
8. 做出努力make every effort
9. 只要as long as
10. 克服恐惧conquer fear

句子练习：

1.       学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。

It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

2.       只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能一梦想永无止境。

As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible --there's no end to where our dreams can take us.

3.       苦难是磨炼人的好机会。

Adversity is a good discipline.

4.       战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观。

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.

5.       世界总会给有梦想的人开路。

The world makes way for the dreamer.

6. 事实上，每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力。最终，你会创造奇迹。

Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.

（二）助人型主旨句

功能：帮助别人或受到帮助，一直以来是我们读后续写的一个重要主题。

e.g.:

1>From then on, I made up my mind to help someone who needs help.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.

2>When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.

句子练习：

1.       有时候一些小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的改变。

Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.

2.       有时候表达一些小小的关爱也可能融化人们内心的孤单。

Sometimes, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people' s loneliness.

3.       一个小小的善行，无论是对施予者还是接受者，都是一份祝福。

One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver alike.

4.       当别人遭遇尴尬的情况时，我们应该设身处地地为他们着想。

When awkward situations happen to others, we should put ourselves into their shoes.

5.       超级英雄就是当遇到紧急情况的时候，勇气和承诺对他来说比个人利益更重要。

Such is superhero that bravery and commitment matter more than individual interests when he confronts emergencies.

（三）脱险型主旨句

功能：在往年高考真题中，出现过三次脱险型故事：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。

e.g.:

1> That was the most unforgettable day in my life.

2> What a thrilling day!

句子练习：

1.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。

Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.

2.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。

Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.

（四）读后续写练习

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I worked from the time when I was four and raised seven children, all of them college graduates. It seemed I'd done everything I'd ever wanted to do in my life, but I had one regret. I was born in 1898, the oldest of five kids. Papa couldn't spare me to go to school, so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.

Everywhere I went, I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even can't read the alphabet. People cheat you out of wages. They sell you a ticket to one city, take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.

By 1928, I'd been wandering for nine years. I met a woman named Elzenia. We fell in love, married and moved to Dallas, where I got work-fixing roads for the city. When Amelia, the oldest of our seven children, first went to school, I took my wife aside. “Elzenia,” I said, “I don't want the kids to know I can't read or write ”

In 1938, one day my boss called me in. “George,” he said, “no one knows those machines like you do. I'd like to promote you. " But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said, “Fill out this application and we'll get you a raise. ” I couldn't admit the truth. I thanked him and walked out of his office. I did stay right where I was, until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire. But I didn't stop working. For the next 25 years, I lived a happy life, but it still seemed to me like something was missing.

One day, a young fellow handed me a piece of paper. It's information about adult education classes, where people can learn to read and write. Now I'm 98. I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldn't read. After all these years, my secret would be out. But all my life I've wanted to read. It was high time for action.

The young man drove me to where the adult education classes were given.

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I'm still going to school.

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【参考答案】

The young man drove me to where the adult education classes were given., which was crowded with elderly people like me. Through chatting, I learned that they had all been longing to read and write but never had the chance to go to school. As the bell rang, in came the teacher, a woman well past forty. After a warm and brief greeting, we started our lesson. First we learned to read the alphabet and though I made mistakes at times, no one laughed at me. Everyone helped each other with open-hearted enjoyment.

Paragraph 2:

I’m still going to school. Though faced with the most challenging event of my life, I’m full of courage and confidence. With the generous help of my teacher, friends and my children, I have made huge progress in study. Now I’m never shy about admitting the truth that once I was not able to read and write at all. Besides, I’m eager to encourage more elderly people to attend the adult education classes, because it’s never too late to learn.