2023年广东省中考写作专题冲刺——学校生活（含答案）

这是一份2023年广东省中考写作专题冲刺——学校生活（含答案），共7页。

【中考高级词汇替换】
一、单词变短语
1.abutas t 关于
2.likecare fr 喜欢be fnd f 喜欢
3.slvesettle 解决deal with 处理
4.usemake use f…利用…make gd/prper use f… 利用好…
5.helpd sb. a favr 给某人帮助give sb a helping hand 向某人伸出援助之手
6.canbe able t d sth. 能够做某事
7.lead tgive rise t 引发...result in 导致...
8.becausefr the reasn that...因为due t sth 由于...
同义句型
1. I think
I take the idea that… 我持有这个观点，那就是.. It seems t me that...在我看来
2.I believe
I am cnvinced that...我相信...
I strngly believed that...我确信...
3.In my pinin
Persnally,… 就我而言...
As far as I am cncerned,…据我所知 speaking, ...就自己而言
4. want t d sth.
plan t d sth. 计划去做某事desire t d sth. 渴望去做某事
lk frward t ding sth 期待做某事
5. We/us
We/us high schl students… 我们高中生… We/us mdern individuals… 我们当代人… We/us English learners… 我们英语学习者…
We/us Chinese yung generatin…我们中国年轻的一代
写作能力提升
命题探索
分析全国近年与"学校生活"话题相关的书面表达来看，通常还有以下命题角度：
1.学生学习生活。
2.学校校园活动及兴趣小组。
3.记录校园活动，或提出合理化建议。
4.学生在学校遇到的问题及解决方案。
典例剖析
假如你是李华，是向阳中学九年级(1)班的一名学生，你的初中生活即将结束，请你以"My Suggestins。为题写一篇80词左右的短文，在学习、生活、校园活动、同学关系这几方面给七年级的新生提几点建议，并提出你的希望和祝愿。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息，否则一律不予评分；
4.开头已给出，不计人总词数。
My Suggestins
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle Schl. 写作思路：
【定人称、定时态】
1.人称介绍自己的建议，应用第一人称
时态：介绍在学习、生活和校园活动方面给新生的建议，应用一般现在时若涉及将来的事情，则用一般将来时。注意时态的穿插使用。
【列提纲、写句子】
【成篇章】
介绍自己的建议时，可用列举的词first,secnd,third,last but nt least等进行衔接，使文章的结构更清楚、更有条理。
My suggestins
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle Schl. Here I'd like t share sme advice n hw t live a meaningful and clrful schl life in middle schl.
First, we shuld make a study plan t keep balance amng subjects. It's a gd idea t listen t teachers carefully in class and finish hmewrk n time after class.
Secnd, it's imprtant t develp gd habits in middle schl. Hw abut ding exercise and practicing playing kinds f balls in rder t keep healthy? Third, why nt take part in schlactivities and make mre friends? Last but nt least, we had better get alng well with classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in truble.
If we fllw the advice, we will be sure t make great prgress in middle schl.
好句积累
【开头句】
1.My three-year life in junir high schl is very busy.
2.As a student in Grade 9, I'd like t share my learning experience with yu.
3.I'm glad/It's my hnr t tell yu smething abut hw we study in class.
【中间句】
学生的学习与生活
1.Listening t the teachers carefully in class is the mst imprtant thing.
2.Besides,yu shuld plan yur time carefully because yu will have much mre hmewrk than befre.
3.My English teacher has given me s much help that I will never frget her kindness.
学校的各种活动
1.Smetimes we g t the English Crner and practice ur ral English.
2.The activity will be held n the playgrund in ur schl and all the teachers and students will attend.
对校园活动或学生行为的看法或建议
1.N matter what kind f activities yu take part in, remember nt t spend t much time n them.
2.N ne has the ability t win a game fr a team. Only if a team wrks tgether des the team win.
3.Yu shuld be plite t whmever yu meet, and get n well with thers.
学生在学校遇到的问题及解决方案
1. Sme students have difficulties in learning English, and then they can ask their teachers fr help.
2.A gd relatinship between teachers and students can help yu imprve yur study. 3.We als need t read mre bks t imprve ur English.
【结尾句】
1.All in all, I've learned mre than I can say.I'll value it frever.
2.As lng as yu fllw the advice abve,I believe yu will have a clrful schl life.
3.If yu make full use f yur free time,yu will have wnderful schl life and learn a lt.
4. If everyne makes a cntributin t ur schl,it will be mre beautiful.
专题练习1
为了学习和弘扬东坡文化，你们学校举办了东坡文化艺术节，请你根据以下写作要点和要求，用英文写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你们学校举办的东坡文化艺术节。
写作要点
1.时间、地点5月23日，星期三，上午9点，学校音乐厅；
2.形式: 东坡文化讲座、东坡诗词诵读、学生才艺表演;
3.感受
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给的信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息,否则一律不予评分;
4.开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Meishan is a great place with clrful and traditinal Dngp Culture.
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Key：
Meishan is a great place with clrful and traditinal Dngp Culture. In rder t learn and develp Dngp Culture, we held the art festival in ur schl. The pening was in the schl music hall n the mrning f Wednesday, May 23rd, at 9:00. First we enjyed the exciting lecture n Dngp Culture. Then there were different kinds f wnderful perfrmances abut Dngp pems, like reading and reciting alud. Finally, we were shcked by the students' fantastic talent shws.
Nt nly did we enjy urselves, but we als learned mre abut Dngp Culture.
专题练习2
假设你是李华，你们学校正在开展环保公益活动。你的英国笔友Tny想了解活动的有关情况。请你用英文给他回复一封邮件。
内容包括：1.周末到社区发表保护环境的演讲；2.到山上植树；3.垃圾分类投放； 4.收集可回收利用的废品。
注意：
1.词数70左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：社区cmmunity发表演讲give speeches保护环境prtect the envirnment 植树plant trees 垃圾rubbish把……分成……divide…int… 收集cllect回收利用recycle废品waste
Dear Tny,
I'm very glad that yu are interested in ur envirnment prtecting activity.Nw let me tell yu smething abut it.
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We cannt hpe fr rapid change，but every little bit helps!
With my best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
Key
Dear Tny,
I'm very glad that yu are interested in ur envirnmentprtecting activity.Nw let me tell yu smething abut it.
We made a speech n envirnmental prtectin in the cmmunity at the weekend s that mre peple culd understand the imprtance f envirnmental prtectin.We went t the hill in grups t plant trees.I think the mre trees there are, the fresher ur air will be.Waste srting plays an imprtant rle in prtecting the envirnment.We started with small things every day t srt waste.In rder t save resurces, we als cllected recyclable waste.
列提纲
写句子
开头点明主题
1)这里我针对如何度过一个有意义并
且丰富多彩的初中生活分享一些建议。(live a meaningful and clrful schl life)
正文具体介绍建议
我们制定一个学习计划来平衡各个学科。 ( keep balance)
我们在中学养成良好的习惯很重要。
(develp gd habits)
我们参加学校的活动并且交更多的朋友。 ( make friends)
我们和老师同学们友好相处。(get n well with)
结尾呼应主题
(6)如果我们采纳这些建议，我们肯定回在初中取得很大进步。（fllw the advice；
make great prgress）