上海高考英语作文专项训练：应用文

应用文

一、Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

临近毕业，班委准备在高考结束后组织一次毕业旅行，正在筹集方案。请就此活动写一份方案给班长（方案中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的方案需包括：

1. 此次毕业旅行的主旨；

2. 毕业旅行的具体安排

3.   需要同学们做的相关准备（如衣物、节目等）。

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二、Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

当你走进教室，发现黑板上画着一幅形象丑陋的漫画，旁边还写着你的名字。你当时是愤怒谴责还是一笑了之？请你写一篇短文，内容包括:

•根据你的想象简述漫画的内容及见此漫画的心情；

•你当时是选择上述哪一种解决方式并比较说明你选择这种解决方式的理由。

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三、Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学学生王磊，你校下个月将举行中外学生交流活动，现向学生征求活动方案。你主动向校长写信，表达你的想法。你的信包括以下内容：

1. 活动的主题；

2. 你设计的1-2个活动的具体内容；

3. 你设计该活动的理由。

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四、Directions: an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容

• 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：

• 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；

• 希望从中有何收获。

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五、Directions:   Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李青，将在主题为“我的家乡变美了”的班会上发言。请撰写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：

▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；

▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。

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六、Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你们学校正在向学生征询开设选修课（optional course）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。

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范文及解析：

一、In order to leave us a good memory of our high school life, our class organizes a two-day graduation trip. We choose the historic city xi 'an as our destination.

We will arrive in Xi'an at about 9 a.m on July 12, and after a short rest in the reserved hotel, we will visit Shaanxi History Museum and several scenic spots. In the evening, we can go to Huimin street, where a variety of delicious food is waiting for us.

The next day, under the leadership of the local tour group, we will visit the route of Qin Shihuang. Remember since the tour line is relatively compact and the physical requirements are relatively high, you must have a good rest the night before. I believe that the next day's trip will shake everyone's heart.

I truly believe that all of us will have a wonderful trip.

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个毕业旅行方案：临近毕业，班委准备在高考结束后组织一次毕业旅行，正在筹集方案。请就此活动写一份方案给班长（方案中请不要出现真实的校名和人名）。你的方案需包括：1. 此次毕业旅行的主旨；2. 毕业旅行的具体安排；3.   需要同学们做的相关准备（如衣物、节目等）。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； wonderful（美好的），graduation trip（毕业旅行），scenic spots（景点），physical requirement（体力要求）， destination（目的地），memory （回忆），reserved（预订的）及compact（紧凑的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有in order to（为了），wait for（等待），under the leadership of (在……的领导下)，arrive in（到达）以及a variety of（种种），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句 “In the evening, we can go to Huimin street, where a variety of delicious food is waiting for us.”，宾语从句“I truly believe that all of us will have a wonderful trip.”及“I believe that the next day's trip will shake everyone's heart.”，状语从句“Remember since the tour line is relatively compact and the physical requirements are relatively high, you must have a good rest the night before.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

二、Although my name is written next to the ugly picture on the blackboard, I will not be angry. I will keep calm and use humorous language to solve the embarrassment. I will say, "who drew me? Am I so ugly? Remember to draw me better next time " , and then, I will quietly wipe the picture off the blackboard, so as not to affect the normal class. After class, I will have a chat with the student who drew me and ask him about the reasons for the picture. If he is dissatisfied with me in a certain aspect, I will listen patiently. After self-reflection, if it is my reason, I will correct it in time and try to get his approval. If he did it just for fun, I will patiently tell him that such behavior is not correct and I hope that he should respect me and shouldn’t play such an excessive joke on me.

In a word, in such a situation, I will not be angry or denounce him. I will keep calm and use humorous language to resolve the embarrassment.

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求选择一种解决方式并说明理由：当你走进教室，发现黑板上画着一幅形象丑陋的漫画，旁边还写着你的名字。你当时是愤怒谴责还是一笑了之？请你写一篇短文，内容包括:•根据你的想象简述漫画的内容及见此漫画的心情；•你当时是选择上述哪一种解决方式并比较说明你选择这种解决方式的理由。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；denounce （谴责），ugly（丑陋的），humorous（幽默的），embarrassment（尴尬）， calm（冷静的），self-reflection （自我反省），patiently（耐心地），excessive（过分的）及respect（尊重）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有wipe off（擦掉），be dissatisfied with（对某人不满意），in time (及时)，ask sb about sth（询问某人某事）以及play a joke on sb（开某人玩笑），而且还使用了定语从句“After class, I will have a chat with the student who drew me and ask him about the reasons for the picture.”，状语从句“If he is dissatisfied with me in a certain aspect, I will listen patiently. After self-reflection, if it is my reason, I will correct it in time and try to get his approval.”，宾语从句“I will patiently tell him that such behavior is not correct and I hope that he should respect me and shouldn’t play such an excessive joke on me.”，非谓语动词“Remember to draw me better next time”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

三、Dear principal,

I’ m a student in our school. I have learned that there will be an exchange between Chinese and foreign students in our school next month. I have also learned that our school is recruiting organizers from students. I am now writing to make an application for being recruited. I have much erperience in organizing such an activity.

If I have been recruited. I will make the following arrangements: Hold a reading on the school playground and all teachers and students are invited to attend. Firstly, choose some representatives of foreign students to talk about their culture and their feelings about Chinese culture. Secondly, each student brought his favorite book to the activity and discussed the two cultures with foreign friends around him. Through this activity, on the one hand, students can have a deeper understanding of the cultural differences between China and foreign countries; on the other hand, students can strengthen communication and enhance friendship.

Looking forward to your early reply

yours sincerely

Wang Lei

解析：

根据提示信息，你是明启中学学生王磊，学校下个月将举行中外学生交流活动，现向学生征求活动方案。你主动向校长写信，表达你的想法。1.首先注意时态以现在时为主，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两部分;第一部分指出活动的主题；

第二部分  介绍你设计的1-2个活动的具体内容并说出你设计该活动的理由。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。

本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型1. I have learned that there will be an exchange between Chinese and foreign students in our school next month.   that引导的宾语从句；2. If I have been recruited， I will make the following arrangements.if条件从句，句。这些句式的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高的写作水平。

四．Dear Chris,

I’m        Lihua, a student from Class one, Grade three. I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western art in the cultural week that will be held next week, and I do hope the lecture   is about western drama, as I am very interested in western literature and art, and drama is the perfect combination of the two. As is known to all, a lot of famous literary classics are represented in a drama, such as the giant Shakespeare's "Hamlet", "Othello", "King Lear" and "Macbeth", all of which are excellent drama works. Although I have some knowledge of drama, I still want to have a deep understanding of it. In view of this reason, I hope you can give me a detailed explanation of the history of drama, including its origin, development and evolution.

I am looking forward to your excellent lecture

                                                                                                                   yours truly,

Lihua

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容：• 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：• 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；• 希望从中有何收获。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； culture（文化），drama（戏剧），combination（结合），represent（体现），giant（文豪），detailed（详细的），literary classics （文学经典），origin（起源），development（发展）及evolution（演变）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有give sb a lecture（给某人做演讲），be interested in（对……感兴趣），have some knowledge of (对……有一些了解)，such as（例如），look forward to（期待），in view of（鉴于）以及have a deep understanding of（对……深入理解），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, a lot of famous literary classics are represented in a drama, such as the giant Shakespeare's "Hamlet", "Othello", "King Lear" and "Macbeth", all of which are excellent drama works.”，宾语从句“I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western art in the cultural week that will be held next week”及“I hope you can give me a detailed explanation of the history of drama, including its origin, development and evolution”，让步状语从句“Although I have some knowledge of drama, I still want to have a deep understanding of it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

五、As is known to all, with the deepening of the reform and opening-up policy and the development of the era, earth-shaking changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years, for example, the road becomes wider and wider, a lot of tall buildings have been built, and the government has put up a dozen of big squares and parks, which make people’s amateur life get enriched. In addition, people now pay more attention to environmental protection, leading to the better environment, and, more importantly, people's living standards have been improved, which has greatly increased the people's happiness.

I believe that with the joint efforts of all walks of life, the future of my hometown is sure to become more beautiful

解析：

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。       时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； earth-shaking（翻天覆地的），development（发展），deepening（深入），the reform and opening-up policy（改革开放）， change（变化），improve（提高）及environmental protection（环境保护）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有take place（发生），a dozen of（十几个），lead to (带来、导致)，pay attention to（注重）以及put up（建造），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to all, with the deepening of the reform and opening-up policy and the development of the era, earth-shaking changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years”，“more importantly, people's living standards have been improved, which has greatly increased the people's happiness”及“and the government has put up a dozen of big squares and parks, which make people’s amateur life get enriched.”，宾语从句“I believe that with the joint efforts of all walks of life, the future of my hometown is sure to become more beautiful”，非谓语动词“In addition, people now pay more attention to environmental protection, leading to the better environment”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。

六、Dear headmaster,

I’m Lihua, a student from class one, grade three. I'm very delighted to know that our school is going to offer several optional courses. I hope that the course of Sinology can be offered. As we all know, Sinology is a perfect cognition and summary of nature with the continuous development of China's five thousand years of history. Learning the classics of Sinology can help us gradually find out all kinds of ideological problems that are difficult to solve in life and work from these most simple cognition, Chinese classics are full of the wisdom of the ancients, so learning Sinology can not only increase our knowledge, but also let us cultivate ourselves and shape our personality. Most importantly, learning Sinology plays an important role in inheriting our civilization and increasing cultural confidence. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.

                                                                                                       Yours sincerely,

Lihua

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你们学校正在向学生征询开设选修课（optional course）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； offer（开设），optional course（选修课），Sinology（国学），civilization（文明）， wisdom（智慧），cultivate（修身养性、培养），personality（人格），cultural confidence（文化自信），ideological（思想的、观念的）及inherit（传承）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有all kinds of（各种各样的），be delighted to do（高兴做某事），take sth into consideration（将……纳入考虑之中）以及play an important role in（在……方面起着重要作用），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all know, Sinology is a perfect cognition and summary of nature with the continuous development of China's five thousand years of history.”，宾语从句“I hope that the course of Sinology can be offered.”，形式宾语“I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.”，非谓语动词“Most importantly, learning Sinology plays an important role in inheriting our civilization and increasing cultural confidence.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。