2022届高三二轮专题卷 英语（十二）应用文写作（演讲稿与通知）教师版

【范文解析】

(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1. 短片内容：学校的发展；

2. 放映时间、地点；

3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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写作思维模板

Step 1 三审定题

Step 2 列明要点

Step 3 斟词酌句：列关键词、重点短语和重要句型

Step 4 衔接过渡：串词成句，联句成文

Step 5 润色升级：仔细推敲, 用词升级

Step 6 完美成篇：认真工整，誊写在卷

A Notice—A movie to be shown

Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then.

The Students’ Union

【答案】

Step 5 润色升级

词汇升级

1. outstanding  2. be shown  3. relevant details

4. beloved  5. not only...but also...  6. note

7. comment  8. have/hold the belief/confidence that...

句式改造

1. which is about the development of our beloved school

2. It is believed that

3. will be welcome to; having a heated discussion

【写作模板】

•演讲稿模板与套用句式

Topic

Good afternoon. Fellow students/Distinguished guests/Honorable Judges!

My name is _________, from _________. I am so happy to stand here to give a speech to all of you. My topic today is _________.

Everybody knows that it’s important that.... which can _________(意义). Unfortunately, most people _________(反面) because it’s easily to make a decision but hard to put it into practice(原因分析). For example, _________ (事实或现象列举), in which...(后果). Besides, _________(进一步阐述理由). So let’s _________(再次点题).

That’s all. Thank you for your listening/attention.

•书面通知模板与套用句式

Notice (An activity to be held)

Boys and girls,

In order to improve..., an _________(活动) will be held _________(地点和时间).

The activity is _________(详细信息), which will be very interesting/meaningful/significant. At the end of the activity, _________ (who) will do _________(what). What’s more, you’re supposed to _________(要求).

All the students of our class are expected to be present on time. _________ (日期)              _________ (单位).

•口头通知模板与套用句式

An Announcement

Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, May I have your attention? /Attention, please/Be quite, please! I have an announcement to make/something important to tell you.

(正文)_________ (who) will do_________ (what) _________(地点与时间). _________(详细信息). _________ (要求一). _________ (要求二).

That’s all. Thank you. /Thank you for your listening. /Any questions? /Does everyone understand?

【模拟演练】

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你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：

1. 有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；

2. 你的感悟。

注意：

1. 词数120左右.

2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone!

It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.

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【答案】

Good morning, everybody!

It’s a great honour to be here and share something with you. I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me to go to the playground. “You're always the best in my heart,” she comforted me. “There is always a road ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before. I felt much better.

Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a Swedish proverb goes, “Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” Sharing can broaden our horizons. As for me, by doing this, I live a happier and more confident life.

Thanks for your attention!

【解析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。

【亮点说明】

短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It’s a great honour todo sth.、share something with、come up、live a happier and more confident life等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：at that time、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。

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感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。假设你校正在举行一场有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你在“父母、老师、朋友”中选择一个感恩对象，写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。

内容要点如下：

1. 为何感恩；

2. 如何感恩。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．演讲稿中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．演讲稿的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, …”

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【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”

Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife while I highly appreciate her kind consideration. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.

We know the challenging exam to realize dreams is there for me and you. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. Meanwhile, express your love in return in daily life. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her, and her face will light up.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本文根据写作要求应该分成两部分：第一部分选择一个感恩的对象，阐明感恩的原因；第二部分说明感恩的方式。

【亮点说明】

本文第二段的第一句直接指明感恩的对象，并运用短语：like many of you，引起大伙的共鸣。在这一段中同时又运用高级词汇如：be blessed with、a source of unconditional love、keep sb. company、on top of等。这一段最后，用一句话总结了对母亲的感恩之情。最后一段中也同样使用高级短语诸如：appeal to sb. to do、in return等等。这是一篇演讲稿，句子不求多复杂，主要是能够使听众能够理解，产生共鸣。

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假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1. 介绍演讲主题；

2. 说明感恩原因；

3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Being Grateful to Our Parents

Boys and girls,

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【答案】

Boys and girls,

Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It's my great honour to be here and deliver my speech.

The topic of my speech is “Being Grateful to Our Parents”.

First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up. In addition, in order to make us live better, so diligent are they that they keep on working all day long. Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.

So it is high time that we should show our gratitude to them and put it into action. Wish they could always be happy and healthy! Many thanks for your attention.

【解析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际受你校英语广播站的邀请发表演讲，请以“Being Grateful to Our Parents”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 介绍演讲主题；2. 说明感恩原因；3. 号召大家用实际行动感恩父母。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：deliver speech (发表演讲)；be grateful to sb.(感激某人)；first and foremost(首先)；there is no denying that…(不可否认……)；spare no effort to(不遗余力……)；look after(照顾)；bring up(抚养)；in addition (另外)；in order to(为了)；get into trouble(陷入麻烦)；in desperate need of(迫切需要……)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First and foremost, there is no denying that it is our parents who give us lives, spare no effort to look after us and bring us up.运用了同位语从句和强调句；Most importantly, when we get into trouble and are in desperate need of help, they will always support us and encourage us with constant care and love.运用时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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你班打算在下周日下午举行讲英语故事的比赛。假如你是英语课代表，请你在班上口头通知此事。该口头通知需包括活动益处、具体时间、地点、评委及要求等内容。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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【答案】

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, our class is going to hold an English storytelling competition in the lecture hall in our school. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign English teachers will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit you in many ways. For example, it will give you a good chance to practice your oral English, train your communication skills and improve your ability of expressing yourself. Besides, it will inspire your interest in English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story must be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Third, the story should be interesting. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes.

Any questions? OK. That’s all, thank you.

【解析】本文是一篇口头通知，同学们写作时需要套用口头通知的功能句。本篇写作要求大体上规定了写作方向，没有具体的写作要点，基本上属于开放性写作。所以同学们要在材料内容和谋篇布局上下功夫，可按照“比赛时间、地点→评委→活动益处→要求”的顺序安排写作。具体内容可根据自己的生活体验来想象和发挥，如“活动益处”可从激发对英语的兴趣、提高口语水平和锻炼表达能力等角度去展开。

第一步：确定时态和功能句。本题要求写一则口头通知。因为主要谈论的是将来的计划，故基本时态为一般将来时。口头通知为应用文，需要注意一些固定的套语，如开头的称呼语Boys and girls、提醒语May I have your attention，please和结尾的结束语That’s all，thank you等内容。

第二步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：be invited to act as judges（被邀请做评委）；benefit you in many ways (让你受益很多)；practice your oral English（练习口语）；train your communication skills（训练交际能力）；inspire your interest（激发兴趣）等。

第三步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【范文点评】

文章格式符合口头通知的要求，语言规范，思路清晰，重点突出，详略得当，要点齐全，发挥适度。文章恰到好处地使用了较多的被动语态。作者在文中表现出了较为扎实的英语语言功底，如亮点短语：have one’s attention，take part in，act as，make up，that’s all等；高级结构：be，required to do sth.，give sb. a good chance to do sth.等。

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为庆祝建校100周年，你校将举办学生校园摄影（photography）作品展。假如你是学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则通知，内容包括：

1. 作品要求；

2. 截止日期；

3. 投稿方式。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 通知的格式已给出；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Notice

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The Students’ Union

【答案】

Notice

To celebrate the 100 anniversary of the foundation of our school, we are planning to hold a campus photography exhibition. Every one of you is welcome to submit your photos.

Preference, by all means, will be given to those entries recording the most impressive and memorable moments happening on the campus. Originality is also among the requirements for being included. Plus, the entries are supposed to be inspiring and uplifting, displaying the positive side of the campus life. Should you be interested, email your entries before July 20th to 100thCPE@sina.com.

The Students' Union

【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一则通知。

第1步：根据提示可知，为庆祝建校100周年，你校将举办学生校园摄影（photography）作品展。假如你是学生会主席李华，请用英语写一则通知，内容包括：1. 作品要求；2. 截止日期；3. 投稿方式。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：anniversary (周年)；foundation (创立)；photography exhibition (摄影展)；by all means (一定)；memorable (值得纪念的)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时和一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如To celebrate the 100 anniversary of the foundation of our school, we are planning to hold a campus photography exhibition.非谓语动词的运用；Should you be interested, email your entries before July 20th to 100thCPE@sina.com.运用了虚拟语气倒装。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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假如你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行为期三天的庆祝建校五十周年的摄影展，请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：

1. 举办目的；

2. 时间和地点；

3. 展览内容及活动。

注意：

1. 通知的格式已经为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 总词数：80左右

Notice

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Students’ Union

July 8th, 2019

【答案】

Notice

On behalf of our school Students’ Union, I’m delighted to invite all the students to watch the Photography Show.

The show will be held from 9 to 11 on July in our school hall. It is intended to celebrate the 50th Anniversary of the founding of our school, which will arouse students’ passion and love for campus. In praise of great achievements our school has made in recent decades, we have arranged different kinds of activities, such as poem recitals, dancing, sing and etc., creating a vigorous festival atmosphere.

How eager we are for the early arrival of the day.

Students’ Union

July 8th, 2019

【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一则通知；假如你是学生会主席李华，你校将举行为期三天的庆祝建校五十周年的摄影展，请你用英语写一则通知。内容包括：1. 举办目的；2. 时间和地点；3. 展览内容及活动。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：on behalf of（代表）；be delighted（高兴）；Photography Show（摄影展）；school hall（学校大厅）；be intended to（打算）；in praise of（赞扬）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如It is intended to celebrate the 50th Anniversary of the founding of our school, which will arouse students’ passion and love for campus.运用了非限定性定语从句；In praise of great achievements our school has made in recent decades, we have arranged different kinds of activities, such as poem recitals, dancing, sing and etc., creating a vigorous festival atmosphere.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。