2022届高三二轮专题卷 英语（十）应用文写作（感谢信、道歉信与邀请信）教师版

【范文解析】

(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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写作思维模板

Step 1 三审定题：审体裁、人称、时态

Step 2 列明要点

Step 3 斟词酌句：列关键词、重点短语和重要句型

Step 4 衔接过渡：

Step 5 润色升级: 仔细推敲, 用词升级

Step 6 完美成篇：认真工整, 誊写在卷

Dear Allen,

You must have heard of the good news that a Music Festival is going to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.

As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday. At that time, seated on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances. Furthermore, we also expect to see you on the stage. And I’d be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful moment with me.

Hopefully you can take this invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Step 5 润色升级

词汇提升

1. approaching/upcoming   2. hold   3. take interest in   4. participate in

5. schedule   6. more than

句子整合

1. will be held  2. Sitting/Seated on the ground

【写作模板】

•感谢信模板与套用句式

Dear _________,

How is everything going? I’m writing to extend/express/deliver my sincere gratitude for _________(感谢的原因).

Everyone agrees that it was you who _________(给出细节). Owing to your help with _________, I’ve made great progress in my work. If it had not been for your assistance in _________(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been _________(没有对方帮助时的后果).

Thank you again for what you’ve done. Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

•道歉信模板与套用句式

Dear _________,

How are you doing with your _________? I am terribly sorry to tell you that _________(道歉的原因).

The reason is that _________(介绍事由).

_________(进一步阐述理由). I hope that you can forgive me for my not keeping a promise. Can we make it another time when it’s convenient to both of us? How about _________(具体时间).

Once again, sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

•邀请信模板与套用句式

Dear _________,

A _________(具体活动名称) will be held at/in _________(地点) on _________(时间). I am writing to invite you to be a part of the members in this activity.

The activity will start at _________(具体时间与详细地址). Present at the activity are _________(其他人员介绍). The details include _________. It will be followed by a _________(进一步的安排).

We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. /We’ll be more than delighted if you could take this invitation.

Looking forward to your earliest reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【模拟演练】

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毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：

1. 感谢的人或事物；

2. 感谢的原因；

3. 你的美好愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右字。2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息

Dear ___________,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Samantha,

I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher. From day one, I enjoyed each and every class of yours. You could always make your lessons informative, educational and enjoyable all at the same time. Every day I looked forward to your class, which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English. It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself. I enjoyed everything you taught us, from the English language to American culture. The smell of the pancakes we made together in your class is still clear in our minds, and it simply makes my mouth water.

You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories. You are a great inspiration to us all!

A big and warm “Thank you!” from your beloved student! May you continue to inspire greatness in all of your students!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封感谢信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式。第一段写需要感谢的人或事情；第二段写原因，也是本文的主体部分；第三段写自己的个人感想及美好愿望。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher.非限制性定语从句中继续使用定语从句：……，which was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English.强调句型的使用：It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my confidence in myself.

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你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 感谢养育之恩；

2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；

3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；

4.爱父亲。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

Dear Father,

With Father’s Day approaching,

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【答案】

Dear Father,

With Father’s Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up from the bottom of my heart.(要点一) Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties(要点二) and the pride in your eyes when I achieved my goals(要点三). Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.

Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you disappointed. I love you, Father(要点四)!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在父亲节这天给父亲写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 感谢养育之恩；

2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；

3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；

4. 爱父亲。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：bringing sb up, be faced with, achieve one’s goal, be determined to do sth等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

本篇范文语言优美，情真意切。其中使用了一些高级句型让人眼前一亮。如：“Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties”否定词位于句首的倒装句，增强语气。“Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.”虚拟语气，渲染气氛。这些句型是使用大大增强了本文的感染力，可供大家借鉴。

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假设你是李明，你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：

1. 向他道歉

2. 解释原因

3. 保证尽快补交作业。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数

Dear Mr.Li,

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Your,

Li Ming

【答案】

Dear Mr. Li,

I am one of your students in Class Two, Grade Three. I m writing to apologize for not handing in my homework on time

I am one of the students who enjoy your class a lot. And I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical. However, I caught a bad cold and had a high fever, which made me have a headache and sleep all day. So bad did I feel that I couldn’t do my homework in time. Thus, I didn’t finish it

I am really sorry for giving you so much trouble. I am feeling better now and I will finish my homework as soon as possible.

Your，

Li Ming

【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你因生病没能按时上交李老师安排的作业。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信，内容包括：1. 向他道歉；2. 解释原因；3. 保证尽快补交作业。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apologize for（为某事道歉），on time（按时），interesting as well as practical（有趣又实用），have a high fever（发高烧），have a headache（头痛），in time（及时），as soon as possible（尽快）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如“And I like doing my homework which is always very interesting as well as practical.”运用定语从句修饰先行词homework；So bad did I feel that I couldn’t do my homework in time.运用了倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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假定你是李华，你打算国庆节期间去海南三亚市旅游。请你给来自德国的交换生Terry发邮件邀请他与你同游。内容主要包括：

1. 邀请Terry与你同游；

2. 你的旅游计划；

3. 邀请理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Terry,

How are you? I intend to travel to Sanya in Hainan province during the National holiday. I am writing to invite you to join me.

According to my plan, I will stay Sanya for five days. In addition to enjoying the beautiful scenery, I will take part in some activities on the water. Not only can we taste various local snacks, but also we will experience the local life and art.

As far as I know, you greatly enjoy traveling to seaside cities. It will be pleasant to travel with you. Moreover, my spoken English is not very good, so you can help me a lot while we are travelling.

Please take my suggestion into account. Whatever your decision is, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邀请信；假定你是李华，你打算国庆节期间去海南三亚市旅游。请你给来自德国的交换生Terry发邮件邀请他与你同游。内容主要包括：1. 邀请Terry与你同游；2. 你的旅游计划；3. 邀请理由。人称使用第一、二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the National holiday（国庆节），invite you to join me（邀请你和我同游），plan（计划）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如not only…but also结构Not only can we taste various local snacks, but also we will experience the local life and art.；非谓语动词It will be pleasant to travel with you.；时间状语从句Moreover, my spoken English is not very good, so you can help me a lot while we are travelling.；让步状语从句Whatever your decision is, please let me know.

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语according to, in addition to, moreover等的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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假定你是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函，内容包括：

1. 成立俱乐部的目的；

2. 活动时间、地点及安排；

3. 邀请加入。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Smith,

I'm Li Hua, a student in Class 1 Grade 3. To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to practice English, our grade has decided to set up Fans English Club.

We’ll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed, like singing English songs and having debates in English.

I’m very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade. I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.

Hoping to see you every Friday afternoon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文要求给外教Smith老师写封邀请函，邀请他参加你校打算成立的Fans英语俱乐部。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。完整说明题干中给的内容，适当扩展。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目要求我们在邀请信中写出的内容以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍自己以及成立俱乐部的目的（激发英语学习的兴趣，提供练习英语的平台）；第二段：活动时间、地点及安排（让被邀请人清楚的了解活动的基本信息。）；第三段：邀请Smith老师加入（您的出现能激励我们更努力的学习英语）。

【亮点说明】

1. 使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句和将来时的被动语态We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed…；同位语从句的使用I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us……。

2. 使用了过渡词语：therefore等。

3. 使用了重要短语：set up建立；be honored to感到很荣幸；become interested in对…感兴趣。

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假设你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写道歉信，请求原谅。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 信的开头与结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you. Now I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.

Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!

This morning, I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive. However, I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。

提纲作文写作要领：

第一步：审题：审题是关键所在，在整个写作过程中起着决定性作用。

（1）审要求：弄清“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分。而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点。

如本篇作文的情景就是：假设你是李华，你遗失了你的英国籍好友Frank借给你的一本书。要求就是：请用英文给他写道歉信，请求原谅。

（2）审文体。一般有三大类：记叙文、说明文和应用文。文体不同，格式不同。

（3）审人称。即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断。

比如“假设你是李华”，写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华。

4）审时态：根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时。比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时。

第二步：抓中心，列要点，写提纲。作文一定要切题，要抓住中心，紧扣要点。

第三步：选词组句，连句成篇。在这个环节中尽量使用多种句型，多种句式，选择恰当的连词。

【亮点说明】

本篇作文使用了定语从句：I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you。

时间状语从句：I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday

并列句：I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive

感叹句：How angry and guilty I felt!并运用了to my sorrow，tighten my belt等高级词汇。