2021版英语全能大一轮复习人教版讲义：写作技法点拨系列十揣摩内涵从容掌控图画作文
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写作技法点拨系列
十、揣摩内涵, 从容掌控图画作文
类型一图画故事类
一、设题要求
要求考生根据所给的图画, 写出一篇故事完整、句子通顺、语意连贯、符合图意的短文。在命题形式上除了图画的提示外, 一般还有中英文提示。着重考查考生的观察能力、分析能力和语言表达能力。作文难点是审题, 切忌遗漏要点。
二、常用句型
1. As is described in the picture, . . .
2. In order to. . . , we made up our minds to. . .
3. At first. . . then. . . five minutes later. . . finally/in the end/at last. . .
4. Some. . . ; some. . . ; others. . .
5. If such measures were not taken, the problem of. . . would be more serious.
6. It hit that. . .
类型二漫画类
一、高考漫画作文主要类型
1. 讽刺型漫画, 引发考生对不良社会现象的思考;
2. 哲理型漫画, 通过形象或抽象的图画, 讲述道理引发哲理性思考。
此类作文首先要描述图画, 然后分析图画所反映的问题或讲述的道理, 最后联系实际发表自己的观点。
二、常用句型
1. From the picture, we can see. . .
2. The picture shows a common phenomenon. . .
3. It seems very ridiculous that. . . However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
4. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/From my point of view. . .
5. It can be seen/concluded from the cartoon that. . .
(2019·北京高考改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文周记, 记述整个过程。
注意: 词数不少于60。
提示词: 西瓜watermelon
文章体裁 | 记叙文 |
中心人称 | 第一人称 |
主要时态 | 一般过去时 |
信息要点 | 1. 宣传动员 2. 准备行李 3. 体验劳动 4. 回家分享 |
1. 词汇
汉语 | 一般词汇 | 高级词汇 |
强调 | emphasize | stress the importance of |
一……就…… | as soon as | on doing/ the moment |
快速地 | quickly | as quickly as possible |
收拾行李 | pack | pack up the baggage |
2. 句式
①在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们那个项目的主题是“劳动最光荣”。
一般表达: At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme, and its theme was “Working is most beautiful”.
高级表达: At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme whose theme was “Working is most beautiful”.
②一到家, 我就赶快收拾行李。
一般表达: As soon as I got home, I packed for the trip quickly.
高级表达: On getting/The moment I got home, I couldn’t help packing up my luggage for the trip as quickly as possible.
③在劳动时, 我意识到烈日下在田野里劳动很辛苦。
一般表达: While I was working, I realized working in the fields was hard under a hot sun.
高级表达: While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme whose theme was “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.
On getting home, I couldn’t help packing up my luggage for the trip as quickly as possible.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.
When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents, who were very proud of me.
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题, 现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画, 按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1. 描述漫画内容;
2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3. 提出你的看法。
注意:
1. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 考生可适当发挥, 使文章内容充实、连贯;
3. 词数100左右;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇: pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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【参考范文】
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
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