2024年读后续写 09 读后续写：脱离困境型（故事构造七大绝招）(word+ppt)

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第一绝招：环境描写（恶劣）
——波涛汹涌：1.As I flated n, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and apprached us.2. The big wind rared thrugh ur ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away frm the shre farther and farther.3. All my senses tld me that a big wave was abut t cme.(即将来临)4. A pwerful-lking(看似猛烈的)wave was cming twards us.  (靠近我们)
——鲨鱼的可怕：It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming arund, nt far away frm her.The shark’s jaws pened wide, shwing rws f sharp teeth.
——陆地上的水：Splashing raindrps hit the windshield frantically and the skies were verhung with a blanket f grey,.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。The water kept rising, as if it wuld engulf me alive.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Unfrtunately, the water pured in and crept upn my waist. 在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）
——推荐句型：1. The wind blws/whistles/hwls/picks up/whips thrugh sth/sweeps acrss sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……2. They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。3. The heavy rain was vilently beating against the windw.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。4. The rain drummed n the rf f the building.雨不停地击打着房预。5. The furius strm is grumbling utside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。6. The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
——推荐句型：7. A flash f lightning lit up the whle sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8. The sharp claps f thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。9. The blt f lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the cean melt int each ther 
第二绝招：情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——疲倦/寒冷1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.2. Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and  as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stp. Gritting ur teeth, we kept swimming. 4. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard t keep myself aflat(漂浮着的).
——疲倦/寒冷5. He was huddled int his cat, his face blue with cld.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。6. Fingers numbed by the chilly water, thrat chked by icy wind, I felt n the verge f cllapsing.7. She clasped the baby t her bsm in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。8. The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。9. Her teeth were chattering with cld.她冷得牙齿直打颤。
——害怕1. I tk a deep breath and swallwed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).2. A chill feeling crept up her spine.3. Exhausted and cld, the thught that we might die here flashed acrss my mind, which made me quiver with an uncntrllable terrr/hrrr/fright (难以控制地发抖).4. Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy.(在身体涌动)
——害怕5. As time ticked by, fear crept upn my heart(爬上我心头) and I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd plugh n (前行).6.  The thught f hpelessness sent shivers dwn my spine(让我后脊背发凉).7.  I was flded with a sense f hrrr(被恐惧感淹没).8. Seeing this, I felt my fear grwing/increasing(剧增) inside.9. I felt a wave f anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept ver my bdy (袭来).10. Tears f frustratin and hrrr gushing frm my eyes, I felt I had sunk int hpelessness.11. A sense f terrr sweeping thrugh my bdy, I shuted in panic, “Help! Help!”
——描写挣扎努力1. Tm lked thughtful (若有所思)2. “We need t think ut a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)3. ...,We swam tth and nail(全力以赴地).4. We spared n effrt t(不遗余力地) t swim twards the shre.5. We exchanged a determined lk(互换了坚定的神情) , then plughed n (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
第三绝招：转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. A distant sund reached ur ears.(传入耳朵)2. Just then, my mind raced – why nt call 911 and Je?3. The sund f the bat eched in ur ears.(在我们耳内回响)4. At that mment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空).5. When we were at a lss f what t d, there were rasping (刺耳的) shuts(喊叫声)rising frm the distance (从远处升起).
6. Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jasn shuted ut.7. In sheer desperatin(在绝望中), I finally caught sight f sme bats with lifeguards n them heading twards us in the distance.8. After a lng time, a light spt appeared in the distance! We waved ur hands and yelled ut fr help.
第四绝招：情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负1. As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.2. Hearing the cmfrting news, I culdn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)3. His wrds reignited the flame f hpe in my heart4. On hearing the gd news, Tm and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each ther.
——描写如释重负5.Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush f pride(感到一阵自豪).6. Overjyed(狂喜) t see a bat cming t ur rescue, Tm and I breathed a sigh f relief(如释重负地松了口气)7. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies.
1.The bat finally reached us and tk all f us back t the shre.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。2.Yelling at the tp f his lung, Je tried t sthe me and cnvince me that it was the best way t escape the danger.乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。
第六绝招：情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
1.When we pictured what the merry scene wuld be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written n my face.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。2.Sighing in relief, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the whle event. I knew they wuld have died if they had been in the sea fr any lnger.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。
1. It ccurred t me that helping thers was priceless and everyne shuld be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。2. Fr the first time since…, ne’s emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。3. Only then did I realize that it was Je wh had been caring fr me thrugh thick and thin.直到那时，我才意识到是乔一直在照顾我。
4. Sbbing in relief, I was verwhelmed by waves f guilt and remrse. I murmured srry, reflecting that I shuld have taken his warning seriusly.我如释重负，被内疚和悔恨所淹没。我喃喃地说，想着我应该认真对待他的警告。5. All this tk nly a few minutes, but Betty wuld never frget the frightening experience.这一切只花了几分钟，但贝蒂永远不会忘记那段可怕的经历。