2024年读后续写 04 读后续写：人与动物类（故事构造“三大套路”）(word+ppt)

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套路一：可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
1、外貌1. a pair f large watery eyes 一双水汪汪的大眼睛2. tw big rund eyes 两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的 眼睛4. a nse like a small black gem 一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5. lng/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的 腿6. fur is as white as snw 皮毛像雪一样洁白7. a lng little tail 一条长长的小尾巴
2、动作wag the tail 摇尾巴smell/sniff 嗅bark/yap/yelp 狗吠lick 舔put the ears up 把耳朵竖起来shake the whle bdy 抖动全身bite the crner f the cat 咬住衣角rest the nse in its paws 把鼻子搁在爪子里 keep its fre legs dubled up 保持前腿弯曲
2、动作rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部hld it tightly with the paws 用爪子紧紧按住fall n its back 摔得四脚朝天run arund me 围着我跑keep scratching yu with his frnt paws 用前爪不停挠你raise its whle bdy n its hind legs 用后腿支起全身leap t its feet 跳起来
3、高兴1.They were glad t see Pppy cming back t her usual self（他们很高兴看到Pppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dg n daily walks and even intrducing t it her favrite tys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Smiling ever s bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called ut t his parents, wh tugged him in fr a lng hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Her parents watched them playing arund and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Pppy was back t her ld cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
4、常见动物：鹿1. A mther deer with a huge pair f deer hrns （有一对大的鹿角）appeared in frnt f him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying n the dry grund. （202103宁波十校）2. The pr creature, apparently in desperate need f water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tngue（很快用它贝壳粉的舌头舔乾净）.（202103宁波十校）3. The mther deer lwered her head and licked my by’s cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下头舔我的男孩的脸颊，好像在表达感激）. （202103宁波十校）
4、常见动物：马1. At the pen, Gina saw the hrse. It was f medium size. It had a fine, sft blackcat and ne white ft（它的毛细腻柔软,油黑油黑的,有一只脚是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑纹)that ran dwn the center f its face. Gina fell in lve with it at first sight.“Ww! What a hrse.” （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）2. The hrse seemed t feel her kindness, sniffing her（闻了闻她）. （英语周报高三第十期 2020.9.4）
4、常见动物：狗1.They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快乐）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）2. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴开始摆动）ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
4、常见动物：狗3. Pppy apprached with cautin, trying nt t scare the puppy. Sure enugh, it was nly mments later that the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the bx（把它的头伸出盒子） t peek at its new hme and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）4. Hearing his bags unladed n the driveway, Pppy’s ears pricked up（竖起耳朵） and suddenly she was n all furs（四脚着地）. The by was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the frnt dr ppped pen and Pppy darted t his embrace, fllwed by the little ne wh licked his fingers fndly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
1、害怕1.Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Seeing the apprach f the plar bear, I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.My wife Elli grasped my clthes and trembled, swallwing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
1、害怕4.A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）5.Thinking f the wlf’s bldy muth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死） （2017年6月高考浙江卷）6.I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2、求助与获救1. At the sight f it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）2. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt （惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2、求助与获救3. Having pulled the massive bdy ut f the stump, Brian cleaned the wunds （清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt dwn and tended t the wlf（蹲下来照顾狼）tgether with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）4. I went near the inncent ne and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had becme dry. （山东模拟）5. Using a rck as the supprting pint, I unlcked the chain and set the wlf free（放走这只狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
3、常见动物：熊1. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread（嗅着，闻着我们的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs（用他的后腿站起来） and pushed at the wden fence psts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired t tear dwn us（想要撕裂我们） with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃烧）wing t the dreadful spray. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
3、常见动物：熊4. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag（撕开他的帐篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）5. One f Mac’s friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt（对他得到的很满意）, the wlf ran int the wds. （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
3、常见动物：狼1. Pale-yellw eyes narrwed. Black lips tightened. Duble sets f tw-inch sharp teeth were expsed（露出它那两排两英寸宽的利牙）. Suddenly the wlf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a painful cry rse frm its thrat（它的牙齿咔嚓响，从它的喉咙里发出一声痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金华十校）2. The wlf’s head sank t the grund, sad yellw eyes lking at us（黄色的眼睛悲伤地看着我们）. （2020.11金华十校）3. S angry was the wlf that it kept raring（那只狼的太生气了，一直咆哮） and smacking the windw vilently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned ur lessn（学到一个教训）: Be aware f a bear with a tthache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their hme was filled with the warmth f lve and reunin（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving ur farm, just like my by saved a life.（202103宁波十校）4. Appearing t be feeling better, the wlf slwly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss t Becky’s hand as if t express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）