10 航空航天 -备战中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点10 航空航天

一、材料作文

1．近期，三名中国宇航员完成了为期六个月的任务，安全返回地球。假如你是阳光中学学生李华，你最钦佩的就是给女儿摘星星的女航天员王亚平大校，请你用英语写一篇短文，向你校英语报投稿，讲述王亚平的故事。要点如下：

1. 王亚平，41岁，再次创造历史，成为在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天员。

2. 王亚平成为中国首位走出太空站的女航天员，迈出了中国女性舱外太空行走第一步。

3. 她站上了“最高讲台”，在太空舱内给学生进行了一场现场直播的科学讲座，成为我国首位在太空上课的女老师。

4. 要继续进行太空探测，还需要几代人的努力。

注意：

1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。

2. 词数90左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

参考词汇：太空站：space station 太空探测：space exploration 讲台：platform 钦佩：admire 探测：exploration 一代（人）：generation

Three Chinese astronauts have completed their six-month mission and returned to the Earth safely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Three Chinese astronauts have completed their six-month mission and returned to the Earth safely. I admire the woman astronaut Wang Yaping most. She kept her promise that she would be back with stars for her daughter.

Wang Yaping, at the age of 41, has made history again as she is now the first Chinese woman to stay in space for more than 100 days. Moreover, she is also the Chinese female who took the first step onto the space, outside of the space station. Believe it or not, she even stood on the highest platform to give students a live science lecture from space. Students consider her as the first female teacher in space.

For space exploration to continue, it requires the efforts of generations. As a result, all the teenagers should study harder to devote to our country like Wang Yaping, our hero.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍王亚平的个人信息；

第二步，介绍王亚平在太空方面取得的成绩；

第三步，表达自己的感悟。

[亮点词汇]

①at the age of在……岁时

②more than多于

③consider sb as把某人看作

[高分句型]

①She kept her promise that she would be back with stars for her daughter.（that引导的定语从句）

②As a result, all the teenagers should study harder to devote to our country like Wang Yaping, our hero（动词不定式作目的状语）

2．假如你是李华，上个月你在“中国航天日”参加了科技馆举行的航天俱乐部活动，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述这次活动，并表达你的想法。

（1）我听了宇航员的故事，学习到了科学精神。

（2）我做了物理实验，增长了科学知识。

（3）我参观了展览，使我对太空旅行更感兴趣了。

（4）我认为……

参考词汇：

科学精神      scientific spirit

太空旅行      space travel

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The activities on Space Day of China

Last month, I _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】：

The activities on Space Day of China

Last month, I took part in the space club activities held by the Science and Technology Museum on Space Day of China. In the Science and Technology Museum, first of all, I heard some stories about astronauts and learned the scientific spirit. Next, we did some physics experiments to increase our knowledge of science. Finally, it also made me more interested in space travel by participating in the exhibition.

I think we should take part in more of these activities. These activities can keep our thirst for space knowledge alive and enhance our enthusiasm for science as well.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。根据要点写一篇短文，描述你参加的这次航天俱乐部活动，并表达你的想法。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。本文可以采用两段式写作，第一段描述这次活动的内容，第二段则表达对此次活动的看法。

3．飞天梦，强国梦！2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞行任务取得圆满成功。航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。习总书记深情寄语航天人：“在航天事业发展的征程上勇攀高峰、不断前行”，“你们是新时代中国航天事业无数奋斗者、攀登者的代表”……

假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。

提示词语：work hard, stick to, dream, difficulty, overcome

提示问题：● Which space hero do you admire most?

● Why do you admire him/her?

【参考范文】

I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. All Chinese people are proud of the three astronauts, Nie Haisheng, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu. Among them, I admire Wang Yaping most.  

Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.

As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题介绍自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍王亚平；第三段介绍自己钦佩王亚平什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

4．神舟十三号顺利返航，宇航员王亚平再次圆梦天宫，凯旋归来。你校正组织以“The hero in my heart”为题的征文活动，请根据以下要点介绍王亚平的事迹并分享你对她的钦佩之情。

注意：1. 词数：100 左右。

2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。

3.参考词汇：the Shenzhou X mission 神舟十号航天任务The hero in my heart

Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

The hero in my heart

     Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space.

     Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.

     As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目为一篇应用文写作。标题和首段已给出，第二段介绍宇航员王亚平的经历与梦想，包括题目中给出的四个要点；第三段写出自己的两个观点并结尾。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态需采用一般过去时和一般现在时，用一般过去进行时描述宇航员王亚平的经历与成就；用一般现在时描述自己的观点。写作过程中需要注意时间逻辑，时态的切换，行文流畅，用词准确，条理清晰。

二、电子邮件

5．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2022年3月23日你和同学们一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课。请你根据下列提示内容给三位航天员发送一封电子邮件，告诉他们你对天宫课堂的感受。

提示：

1.感谢航天员们的精彩授课；

2.观看太空授课后的收获和感想；

3.祝愿祖国越来越强大，并希望自己的梦想将来也能实现。

要求：

1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear astronauts,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear astronauts,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing to express my thanks to you for your wonderful science lecture in the Chinese Space Station on March 23, 2022.

After watching the hour-long televised performance, I have a better knowledge of space science. It will help me study science well at school. What’s more, I’m more interested in our country’s space exploration program. I’m so proud of our country’s advance in science and I hope our country will be stronger and stronger. I will study harder from now on and I hope my dream will come true in the future.

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中对观看太空授课后的收获和感想，注意要点要齐全。

[写作步骤]

第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来对航天员们的精彩授课表达感谢；

第二步，具体描述自己观看太空授课后的收获和感想；

第三步，书写结语。祝愿祖国越来越强大，并希望自己的梦想将来也能实现。

[亮点词汇]

①what’s more除此之外还

②be interested in对……感兴趣

③be proud of对……感到自豪

④from now on从现在起

⑤come true实现

[高分句型]

①I’m so proud of our country’s advance in science and I hope our country will be stronger and stronger.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）

6．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2022年3月23日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员天宫授课，请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员。

内容包括：

1.感谢宇航员们的精彩授课；

2.观看太空授课后的收获和感想；

3.祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear astronauts,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wish you a triumphant return.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear astronauts,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on March 23, 2022.

After watching the hour-long televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science. What’s more, I’m more enthusiastic about our country’s space exploration program. I’m so proud of our country’s advances in science that I’m determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.

Wish you a triumphant return.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封电子邮件。要求根据提示内容给神舟十三号三位宇航员发送一封电子邮件，短文开头和结尾已给出，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上以一般现在时为主。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。

三、书信作文

7．神舟十三号航天员已顺利返回地球，此次载人飞船实验实现了几代科学家的航天梦，彰显了我国的航天科技实力。为欢迎宇航员们回家，请你根据以下要点，以韩磊的名义给宇航员们写一封信。

要点：

1. 表达对宇航员的欢迎和敬佩之情；

2. 谈谈青少年对于航天生活的好奇和想象；

3. 结合实际谈一谈你的梦想和打算。

要求：1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2.词数100左右。

Dear astronauts,

Welcome back to the Earth. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

yours,

Han Lei

【参考范文】

Dear astronauts,

Welcome back to the Earth. Our great heroes! I know you have been in the space for a long time. You must miss the Earth, miss the motherland, and especially your family. So first, I want to express my warm welcome. What’s more, I want to express my admiration for you. You make great effort and make a great contribution to our country’s space dream, and you are the pride of our whole nation.

During your stay in the space, I really care about your work and life. Especially I’m interested in the two space class that you have given us. They are so amazing that they make me take a great interest in physics. Could you tell us more about such interesting experiments? Could you say more about your space life?

In the future, I also want to do study in science and physics. What you did tells me no pains no gains, so I will make good use of time and make hard effort in order to realize my dream.

yours,

Han Lei

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一封书信，属于书信作文写作；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：书信开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接书信开头，表达对宇航员的欢迎和敬佩之情；

第二步，可以以自己的感受为出发点，谈谈青少年对于航天生活的好奇和想象；

第三步，结合实际谈一谈你的梦想和打算并书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①express one’s admiration for sb向某人表达敬佩之情

②make a great contribution to对……做出巨大贡献

③take a great interest in对……产生极大的兴趣

④make good use of time充分利用时间

[高分句型]

①You make great effort and make a great contribution to our country’s space dream, and you are the pride of our whole nation.（and连接两个并列分句）

②Especially I’m interested in the two space class that you have given us.（that引导限制性定语从句）

③They are so amazing that they make me take a great interest in physics.（so…that引导结果状语从句）

④What you did tells me no pains no gains, so I will make good use of time and make hard effort in order to realize my dream.（what引导主语从句，so连接两个并列分句）

8．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom来信说他十分想要了解你心目中的英雄。请你给他写一封回信。

要点如下：1. 介绍谁是你心目中的英雄。

2. 他/她做过哪些令你印象深刻的事情。

3. 他/她有哪些令你敬佩的优秀品质。

4. 他/她对你产生了什么影响。

写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，用到提示词，可适当拓展，增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。

3. 文章已写好的开头句不计入字数统计，80词左右。

4. 特别注意：文中不得出现英雄人名之外的任何人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know about the hero in my heart. Let me share with you.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How about yours? Please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】：

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. You want to know about the hero in my heart. Let me share with you.

My hero is Yang Liwei. When he was young, he worked so hard that he became an excellent pilot. As a result, he was chosen as an astronaut. In 2003, he took Shenzhou V spaceship to the space and spent more than 20 hours doing experiments in space. Finally, he managed to return to the earth. He is not only smart but also brave. He is the pride of China.

He is a real hero in my heart because he is the first Chinese astronaut who traveled in space. I have learned a lot from him. His experience encourages me to work harder and never give up.

How about yours? Please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，结合所给提示回信给笔友Tom，谈谈自己心目中的英雄，可适当发挥，增加细节。

2. 写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。写作时首先承接开头，具体介绍心目中的英雄是谁，他/她做了哪些让人印象深刻的事情，以及他/她身上的品质；然后谈谈英雄对自己的影响；最后是询问对方英雄的情况。注意时态的正确运用，要点涵盖全面、行文连贯、无拼写和语法错误。

9．中国航天日（Space Day of China），为纪念中国航天事业取得的成就、向宇航员致敬，学校英语社团组织大家用英文写信给他们，请根据以下提示，完成书信。90词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

1. 为他们对太空事业做出的贡献感到骄傲；

2. 询问太空站（space station）上生活和工作的情况（至少两点）；

3. 对天宫课堂（Tiangong Class）非常期待，希望学习到更多的航天知识；

4. 表达关心，祝愿他们顺利返航（return to Earth）、安全着陆（land v.）。

Dear astronauts,

I am writing to you with great excitement. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear astronauts,

I am writing to you with great excitement. I am proud of your remarkable accomplishments made in China’s space expeditions. With my curiosity about your life and work in Tiangong space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation. Have you adapted to the weightless environment? If you miss your family, is it possible for you to make video calls on a regular basis. Additionally, I am looking forward to “Tiangong Class”. I hope we can learn a lot about the knowledge of space by it.

Wish you a successful mission and a comfortable journey! We all hope you will return to Earth smoothly and land safe and sound.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求给宇航员们写一封信；要求包含所有提示内容。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，穿插使用其他时态；采用第一人称和第二人称口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：阐述对宇航员的尊敬、对太空生活的好奇以及对天宫课堂的期待；第二段：表达关心和祝愿。