11 三大步，八小步 速成读后续写 词汇必备及真题分析

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【一 三大步】
三步的核心即：审题 构思 润色
审题：审人称 时态 情节 结构 衔接
构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。
润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。过渡词如What’s mre, nt als，persnally等。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。
【二 八小步】
情绪：消极情绪
细节：进一步解释描写
转折：个人的努力或借助外界
转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
总结：点题，呼应前文
读后续写，大部分都是围绕cnflict，slutin来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：
【三 高考真题典例剖析】
第1步 情绪：情绪描写
第2步 细节：进一步解释描写
第3步 转折：个人努力或借助外界 （由“负”变“正”）
_典例分析_
费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家，途中又累又困，于是违章停车，想休息一下，结果被警察逮住，接下来怎么写呢？
Mr. Fairfax lwered his head with a sigh, ready fr a ticket.(费尔法克斯先生叹了口气，低下头，准备接受罚款。) Unexpectedly, the plice added,“But I’ll figure ut sme place fr yu have a gd rest thugh.”(出乎意料的是，警方补充说，“不过我想给你找个地方好好休息。”) Wild with jy, Fairfax accepted his ffer withut hesitatin,fllwing him t drive his car t smewhere warm(费尔法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议，跟着他开车到温暖的地方。)
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。主人公由开始的“焦虑”，原以为会被警察罚款，最后变“感动”：警察帮他找到温暖的地方。
第4步 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
第5步 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题（由“正”变“负”）
_典例分析_
感谢好心人：故事中，主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后，物归原主，想要感谢这位好心人。你怎么继续描写。
I expressed my gratitude and prmised him a well-prepared gift fr thanks.(我表达了感激之情，并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物，以表示感谢。) Hwever, he immediately refused and hung up the phne.(然而，他立刻拒绝了，挂断了电话。) 这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。
第6步 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
第7步 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
第8步总结：点题，呼应前文 主旨升华
第二部分 “八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解
_典例分析1_
故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze(吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn’t be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven(编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
八步法思路
1. A wave f nervusness swept ver me especially when the hrse ran like crazy.
（情绪）
2. My heart punding and my palms sweating, an inner vice tld me that I had t calm dwn.
（细节详述）
3. Thugh in a panic, I plucked my curage t pull n the reigns.
（转折：个人努力）
4. Luckily, it didn’t take lng befre I settled dwn the hrse.
（转机：成功，希望来了）
5. Just at that mment, Dad ran ver, gasping fr air.
（衔接句：新问题来了）
6. “By, we are way ff the track.” He said seriusly, a lk f cncern spreading acrss his face.
Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried t find a way ut but in vain.
(努力，失败)
2. It suddenly dawned n me we culd rde dwn the river nearby.
（突然有了办法）
3. Unexpectedly, the river brught us t the familiar track at last.
（开始做）
4. After what seemed tw hurs, Uncle Paul’s farm huse did cme int sight.
（成功了）
5. My father’s face brightened up, s did mine.
（感受）
6. Upn ur arrival, Uncle Paul culdn’t wait t asked us, “Where have yu been? I am just calling 911.”
（幽默对话）
7. “T Alice’s Wnderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin.
8. What an unfrgettable experience we had!
_典例分析2_
故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp" and walked away.
With n path t fllw,Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place. she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! "she cried. "Help!"
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落）smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy,she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw. Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
Paragraph 1
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2
It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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第一段：But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane wke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
情细节描写∶笑绪描写∶ 笑
smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst int laughter; burst ut laughing; wear a bright/brad smile; give sb a smile
看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。
（1）At the sight f the helicpter，Jane beamed with wild jy.
（2）Seeing the helicpter，Jane beamed with wild jy.
（3）The mment she caught sight f the helicpter，Jane's eyes/face lit up with delight.
情绪描写∶哭
cry; sb; weep; burst int tears; burst ut crying;(ne's eyes)brim with/be full f/be filled with tears
细节描写∶哭
（1）His eyes misted/dimmed with tears.他泪眼模糊。
（2）Her eyes were red frm crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
（3）He is clsed t tears.他快要哭了。
（4）Tears rlled dwn/cursed/trickled/streamed her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
情绪描写∶ 害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cld sweat;be full f fear; be filled with terrr;be rted t the spt; freeze;run away; flee; ne's knees feel weak; (hands) sweat
细节描写∶ 害怕
我感到很害怕。
I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full f fear.
(3)I std rted t the spt,brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I frze with terrr, t scared t mve.
(6)I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr; my palms sweating.
情绪描写∶ 高兴激动
v. dance;jump/leap with jy; feel a surge f happiness/delight/jy/excitement; whistle; be vercme with happiness/delight/jy/excitement;(ne's eyes) twinkle;(ne's heart) beat/pund wildly
adj. happy; delighted; verjyed; excited; thrilled; wild with jy
细节描写∶高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result f the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew the result f the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3)When she knew the result f the test,her heart was punding with wild jy.
(4))When she knew the result f the test,a wild excitement tk hld f her.
(5)Knwing the result f the test, she felt a surge f excitement.
(6)Knwing the result f the test,she was vercme with excitement.
情绪描写∶伤心痛苦
sad; bitter; srrwful; feel a surge f sadness; (sadness)surge within sb; ne's heart ache; be vercme with sadness
细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。
Sam felt extremely sad.
(2) A sadness came ver her.
(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks.
(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.
(5)Feeling a surge f sadness,she culdn't help crying bitterly.
(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst int tears.
情绪描写∶ 生气愤怒
felt/get angry/furius; feel a surge f anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;strm ut f/int/ff; strm/say angrily; sth makes sb bld bil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp ne's fists/teeth; speechless
细节描写∶ 生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam std rted t the spt, his eyes blazing with anger.
(3) Sam felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm,slamming the dr
furiusly behind him.
(4) Biling with rage,Sam shk his fist at me.
(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable t utter a single wrd.
鼓起勇气; 他人的鼓励
Pluck up/take/gather ne's curage(t d….)
毫不犹豫
sb culd hardly wait t d sth
(2) withut a secnd thught
(3) withut even thinking
(4) withut delay
(5) withut hesitatin
似乎
(1) It was like ding sth
(2) It seemed as if/that
希望
(1) hping that..
(2) see/feel a glimmer f hpe
(3) trying hard t d sth
欣慰
(1)… a sigh f relief-sighed with relief 松了—口气
(2) (a wave f relief flded thrugh/washed ver sb
(3) t ne's relief… 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
不幸的是
(1)but bad luck fr sb,.….(2), but in vain
(3),but withut success (4),but n use
不知道做什么
(1)sb did sth, wndering what t d next.(2)sb did sth,nt knwing what t d next.
(3)sb did sth,unsure f what t d next.(4)sb was at a lss what t d.
(5)sb was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.
某人想到 /明白/有了主意
It suddenly ccurred t sb that+从句
It hit sb that+从句
It struck sb that+从句
It dawned n sb that+从句
（idea，thught..）ccurred/came t sb
int ne's mind- in ne's mind
（7）ne's mind began t race
过了一段时间
(1)nt lng after that, afterwards,….befre lng,….=It
didn't take lng befre+从句=It tk sme time befre+从句(2) fr an instant/mment
事情有了转折
(1)T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that+从句
(2) But n secnd thughts,….
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
直到……才意识到
（1）倒装句∶Nt until+时间状语+did sb realize/ntice that+
从句
（2）强调句∶It was nly+时间状语+that sb realized that+从句
还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中
(1) One's wrds(eched/rang ut) in ne's ears.
(2) One's wrds/vice/sng lingered/whispered in ne's mind/ head.
(3) One's head was still full f..
经历与教训
(1)What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lessn sb taught
me/sb learned frm sb!
(2)What a/an enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/
memrable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!
(3) Dwn deep in ne's heat….在某人的内心深处
读后续写
续写
1.A wave f terrr swept ver her.
一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。
1.情绪
2.Her heart punding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner vice tld her that she had t find a safe place.
她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。
2.细节：详述情绪
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her curage t feel the way.
虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。
3.转折∶ 个人努力
4.Luckily, it didn't take lng befre she fund a cave.
5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer f hpe. saying t herself."Tmrrw is anther day."
4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。
5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。 对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。”
转机：成功、希望来了。
With that, she went t sleep, in whse dream her husband kept her cmpany.
说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。
衔接句
读后续写
续写
1.Hungry and disappinted, she fund nt any helicpter verhead,at a lss what t d.
1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。
再度失望（出现新问题）
2.It suddenly dawned n her that she shuld find a big pen area first.
3. Having gbbling dwn sme blackberries, she can't wait t set ff.
4. After what seemed a century,such an area did cme int sight.
Her face brightened up.
2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。
她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。
4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。
5.她的脸变亮了。
突然有了办法
What a cincidence that meanwhile, a helicpter was flying twards her.
Upn its landing, ut dashed her husband wh hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.
6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。
7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。
结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜
It was at the mment that they decided nt t quarrel any mre but learned t cmprmise.
8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协
（总结）