河北省秦皇岛市海港区2021-2023年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达+

河北省秦皇岛市海港区

2021-2023年中考一模英语试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

书面表达（满分15分）

86. 随着一天天长大，我们学会了感恩。我们感激父母的养育、老师的教诲、同学的帮助、朋友的陪伴或者陌生人的一次援手。请你以“I'll say thanks to __________.”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文，向他、她或者他们表达你的感激之情。

提示：（1）Who do you want to say thanks to?

（2）Why do you want to say thanks to him/her/them?

（3）What will you do to express your feelings?

注意：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

I'll say thanks to ___________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2022年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

七、材料作文

56．2021年教育部颁布的《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》实施以来，大多数中小学生有了更多自主学习、参加体育锻炼和享受家庭生活的时间了。请根据你自己的切身体会，以The “Double Reduction” Policy Has Changed Me 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）

参考词汇：the “Double Reduction” policy（“双减”政策）put into effect（实施）

要点：

1.What do you think of the “Double Reduction” policy?

2. What changes has the policy brought you in study, physical training and family life?

3. Give some advice to your teacher or school.

注意：

1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

The “Double Reduction” Policy Has Changed Me

The “Double Reduction” policy was put into effect last year.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

十六、材料作文

86．行为养成习惯，习惯形成性格，性格决定命运。良好的行为习惯在一个人成长过程中能起到非常重要的作用。请你根据所给提示要点，以“Good Habits Make Me…”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）

提示：

1. Complete the title of your passage.

2. What are your good habits?

3. What did you do to develop your good habits?

4. How do the habits influence you?

要求：

1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

Good Habits Make Me ________

Good habits are important in our lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：

2023年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

56．例文

I’ll say thanks to my mother

The person I want to say thanks to is my mother.

My mother is the best mother in the world. She is not only the person who gives me my life and brings me up, but also my teacher and my best friend. Like a teacher, my mother does anything she can to help me grow up healthily. As my best friend, she always shares her thoughts and feelings with me. I really enjoy the moments we spend together.

With my mother, I have a wonderful life. To show my thanks to my mother, I’ll try my best to realize her wish—do well in everything now and become a useful person for the society in the future.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意不要忘了补全题目。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，介绍想要感谢的人是谁；

第二步，介绍感谢的原因；

第三步，表达将怎么做来表达感激之情。

[亮点词汇]

①bring up抚养

②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事

③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事

[高分句型]

①She is not only the person who gives me my life and brings me up, but also my teacher and my best friend.（who引导的定语从句）

②To show my thanks to my mother, I’ll try my best to realize her wish—do well in everything now and become a useful person for the society in the future.（动词不定式作目的状语）

2022年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

56．例文：

                                                                                The “Double Reduction” Policy Has Changed Me.

     The “Double Reduction” policy was put into effect last year. As a student, I support this policy. I feel great for our students. It has had a great impact on my life. The pressure from school has been reduced. I don’t have to attend after-school classes. I also have more time to control myself. For example, I can do more physical exercise. It will make me happier. In addition, I can also spend more time at home to help my parents do some housework. If the school gives us another half an hour of sports time every day, I believe our body and mind will be healthier and we will make much progress.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以The “Double Reduction” Policy Has Changed Me为题，写一篇短文，字数在80词左右。短文必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，但文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

2.写作指导：本文要求写双减政策对自己的改变。写作中注意时态的灵活运用，涉及到对双减政策的评价以及介绍时，时态可用一般现在时，当然写作中也会穿插一些现在完成时的句子以及一般将来时的句子。做到写出的句子符合英文表达习惯，不遗漏提示的要点即可。

2021年河北省秦皇岛市海港区中考一模英语试题

86．例文：

Good Habits Make Me Healthier

Good habits are important in our lives. Exercising and sleeping early are my good habits.

In order to develop these good habits, I came up with some ways. First of all, I made a schedule of study and rest. I have to run from 7: 00 to 7: 30 in the morning. In the evening, I have to finish my homework before 10 o’clock and then I go to bed at 10: 10. Besides, my family members and my friends were asked to make sure that I acted according to the schedule. Last but not least, I kept a diary to record whether I had stuck to the schedule or not.

In a word, after I have formed the good habits of exercising and sleeping early, I feel more energetic in the day and my body becomes much healthier.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以“Good Habits Make Me…”为题，根据提示的要点写一篇短文，其内容包括：你的好习惯、你做了什么去养成这些好习惯以及这些好习惯怎样影响你。

2. 写作指导：首先先构思文章，结合文章中心思想把题目补全，根据短语“make sb./sth. adj.（使某人或某物怎样）”可知，此空应填形容词，其首字母应大写；本文内容主要采用第一人称进行写作；陈述观点和事实时时态应用一般现在时，描述做法时时态可用一般过去时；文章可根据要点的顺序进行写作，重点可放在要点3的“做法”中，可根据文章篇幅写2-3个做法即可；最后写作完成时应保证文章要点齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。