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专题 08 话题分类+人与动物
（人与自然）
目录：
1. 精选名校最新2022年12月-2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题
2. 读后续写话题分类背诵模板
3. 读后续写话题分类写作步骤
4. 读后续写话题分类写作热词
5. 读后续写话题分类高分佳句
1.（2022年江苏常州·高三统考期末）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type? Take my friend Olline, for example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite.
I could find something to worry about every day.
At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I recently tried out to be one of the teachers.
Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(选拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with what?” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled.
“You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s puzzling eyes.
Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello?” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,”
I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.”
I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie. “And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over?” he asked.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?”
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By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
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【答案】
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?”
“Trust me. You’ll love her!” In just a minute Ollie came over with the cutest puppy imaginable!“Her name is Daisy,” he said. “We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.” Of course, Tex and Indi jumped up and down as soon as they saw Daisy, and the four of us spent all afternoon trying to teach her to catch a ball, play chase and sit for doggy treats.
By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
“Hello?” I said excitedly. But that was the end of the excitement. It turned out there was only one opening in the group, and I didn’t get it. “Hey, it’s not so bad,” Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy. “You can try out again next year, right?” I shrugged. “I guess.” Then the sleeping Daisy opened her eyes, picked up her head, and gave me the biggest, wettest lick on my face, and I couldn’t stop laughing.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者申请了他学校空手道老师的职位，但是作者在等待申请结果时，很焦虑，无心干其他的事。这时，作者一直认为不怎么焦虑的朋友Ollie给作者打来电话，他说自己去年等待足球队挑选结果时也很焦虑，他告诉作者这是人之常情，且告诉作者，做其他的事使自己分心是治愈焦虑紧张的好办法。于是他带来了一条名叫Daisy的狗。作者和朋友Ollie一起照顾狗，他们在一起玩得很开心。快晚上的时候，空手道学校打来电话，告诉作者他没有被选中当老师，朋友Ollie安慰了作者，作者于是释怀了。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘嗯’我怀疑地说，‘到底是什么东西？’”可知，第一段可描写Ollie带来了一件使作者开心的东西。
②由第二段首句内容“那天快结束的时候，我们都累坏了，小狗Daisy甚至睡得很熟，突然我妈妈从厨房里喊道，‘Zona!电话响了。’”可知，第二段可描写作者接到了空手道打来的电话，告诉作者录取结果。
第二步：续写线索：
朋友Ollie带来一只狗——作者和Ollie一起照顾狗，玩得很开心——作者接到空手道学校电话——作者没有被录取——朋友安慰作者——作者释怀了
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①信任某人：trust sb./believe in sb.
②照顾：take care of/look after
③递给某人某物：hand sb. sth./pass sth. to sb.
【情绪类】
①兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】
[高分句型1]We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.（运用了while引导的状语从句）
[高分句型2] Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy.（运用了非谓语动词作状语）
2.（2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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【答案】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容（Paul和 Becky勇救Mac，试图赶走狼，但没有成功）以及（越来越多的人加入到救援之中，最后成功地赶跑了狼）。
第一步：段落续写：
根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事，第一段要求续写车上下来两个人帮助Mac，但他们势单力薄，并没能赶走狼，双方陷入僵局；第二段要求续写越来越多的人加入到救援之中，众人合力将狼赶走。时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
第二步：续写线索：
根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； immediately（立即），dangerous（危险的），howl （嚎叫），threat（威胁），join（加入）， bravely（勇敢地）及deadlock（僵局）等。
第三步：整体布局：
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against（对抗），run away（跑掉），get out of (从……中出来)，be ready to do（准备好做某事），dare to do（敢做某事）以及approach to（靠近），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.”，倒装句“Then came the deadlock.”，非谓语动词“At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
3.（2022年江苏徐州·高三校联考期末）
读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk?” “No, honey, Meghan probably did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.
I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.
At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window.
“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.
Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
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I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
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【答案】
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I got it-she wanted me to take her out to the park. I pretended I hadn’t paid attention. She stepped forward, staring at me with her innocent eyes. “Leave me alone for a while, Meghan,” I said without looking at her. After a few seconds, out of the corner of my eye, I saw tears trickling down her cheek. I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said. I had to correct my mistake.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. I turned to her and said, “Sorry, let’s go to see more ‘bib-bibs’!” She was so excited that she smiled through tears. I held her hand as we walked outside. Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky. Seeing her smiley face, I felt much happier than doing my work. I could catch up on it in the evening. Work can always wait, but love cannot.(152 words)
Possible version2
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I knew she would distract me from work as much as possible until she had my full attention. I stood my ground, pretending that I hadn’t noticed her. Minutes later, I heard Meghan’s footsteps as she marched down the hall. Then came a sudden loud from the front door. Scared and worried, I dashed to my daughter’s rescue. In her haste to reach the door knob, she had accidentally knocked over the shoe rack. Shame washed over me as I realized what an irresponsible dad I was being.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. As I helped her put on her socks and shoes, I kept repenting for my earlier actions. Always busy with my teaching plans, I rarely spent enough quality time with my angel. Even when I got this precious chance, I did everything to get rid of her. On our way, I held on to her little hand, and she beamed a smile that was brighter than the sun. I smiled back at her, and vowed to myself that I would watch over my angel for the rest of my life.(179words)
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在工作中的作者一直被自己22月大的孩子Meghan拉着去看小鸟，从而无法认真工作的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，她站在我面前，手里拿着鞋子和袜子。”可知，第一段可描写Meghan想要去公园，但作者拒绝了。
②由第二段首句内容“我最后决定带梅根去公园。”可知，第二段可描写作者最终带上Meghan一起去公园玩耍以及对爱的感悟。
第二步：续写线索：
Meghan要去公园——假装看不到——后悔——去公园——漫步——感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
① 玩的开心：enjoy oneself/ have a good time
② 流泪：burst into tears/burst out crying /tears running down one's face
③ 漫步：stroll/ramble/wander
【情绪类】
① 后悔：regret/remorse/repent
② 激动：be excited/be moved to tears
【点睛】
[高分句型1].I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said.句中，so…that…引导结果状语从句，其意为“如此……以至于……”，表达高级。
[高分句型2].I held her hand as we walked outside. 句中，as引导伴随状语从句，语法表达较高级。
[高分句型3].Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky.句中，现在分词短语作伴随状语从句，表述高级。
4．（2022年重庆一中校考阶段练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路线) when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯宾格猎犬).
They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety.
“I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough? You have to carry a dog too?’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.”
That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says.
Paragraph 1:
The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear.
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Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.”
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【答案】
The group of there got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear. What was worse, it started to drizzle. However, they couldn’t wait for the rain to stop because it was getting dark and the dog was whining and obviously in pain, so they inched their way down the slippery slope while looking for the trail. Fortunately, it wasn’t long before they got back on track and the sky cleared up. “Thank God. It didn’t rain cats and dogs, but a dog,” Kasper said jokingly. “At one point, the thought of giving up crossed my mind. My legs hurt and were shaking but my dad’s jokes and the dog’s watery eyes gave me strength,” Vargas recalls.
Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.” On their way to the vet, she called the owners, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. They had gone hiking together the day before and Boomer had fallen off a cliff. The family rushed down to look for him until dark but in vain. When they found out that Boomer was still alive, they were so blissful that they drove to the vet without delay. To their relief, Boomer only had a dislocated joint and was in a cast. The owners also told Vargas that they were moving to another city because of work and couldn’t take Boomer with them. With a brilliant smile on her face, Vargas stroked Boomer’s head and asked if it would like to go home with her. Boomer licked her hand gently, wagging its tail. This downhill battle turned out to be a blessing in disguise.
【导语】本文以一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬为线索，讲述了Vargas在与父亲远足的途中发现了一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬，Vargas决定扛着狗远足。路途中经历迷路，小雨和疲惫，但Vargas最终战胜了这些困难，在小径尽头发现狗主人的联系方式，联系狗主人，并最终收养Boomer。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这三个人迷路了一次，因为倒下的树木使小径消失了。”可知，第一段可描写远足路上遇到的困难，及Vargas如何战胜困难。
②由第二段首句内容“最后徒步六英里，到达小径的尽头，Vargas发现了一张非常小的纸条，上面写着：“迷路的狗名叫Boomer，请打这个号码。”可知，第二段可描写Vargas带狗去看兽医并联系狗的主人，最终收养Boomer。
第二步：续写线索：
迷路——躲雨——想放弃——继续赶路——发现便条——联系狗的主人——收养Boomer
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①寻找：look for/search for
②抚摸：stroke/pet
③回家：go home/return home
【情绪类】
①开玩笑地：jokingly/playfully
②高兴的：blissful/delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1] On their way to the vet, she called the owners, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. (运用who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When they found out that Boomer was still alive, they were so blissful that they drove to the vet without delay. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句和so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
5．（2022辽宁营口高三模拟）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michael sat on the wooden bench outside the house holding a fourleaf clover. Michael had believed that fourleaf clovers brought good luck, but he started doubting that kind of power.
Michael was eleven. It had been two months since his mum and dad died in an accident. A widow by the name of Jill adopted him. Michael had a dislike for Jill. Her voice was loud. She also made him do her chores. Michael felt not as much as a son to her. He dreamed a lot. He spoke little. He cried secretly. He had even been working on a plan for two weeks to flee the house.
That was, until he heard Jill parking her Honda into the garage.
Michael stuffed the fourleaf clover in his left pocket. Before he realised it, Jill was standing in front of him, with a small beagle in her hand. She put the beagle down. It ran to Michael and sat on his Nike tennis shoes. Michael knelt down to pet it. After a while, he looked up，“Is the dog for me？”
Jill laughed，“Of course! You are the slowest little boy ever! I've got you a little puppy to make you work faster.”
Michael couldn't see how a beagle would help with his chores, but he thought it would be nice to have a friend. “Give him a name,” Jill said.
Michael thought for a moment. He saw a big, black spot on his back. That's it! Spot！“I'll name him Spot！” Michael announced.
“Spot, Spot, stupid name but it'll do. Now, you'd better clean the bathroom and finish your homework before dinner's ready.”
“Yes, ma'am.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side.
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Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael.
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【答案】
Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side. This time he didn't feel lonely when cleaning, for the little dog was just there accompanying him. It was just a beginning. Now having a friend to play with, Michael didn't even have time to think about his escape plan. Instead, feeding and training Spot became his source of fun. And surprisingly, even Jill's loud voice didn't seem that annoying to him.
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Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael. He was happy again. In the school he performed better and made more friends. After a day filled with pleasure, Michael came back to his room with Spot. “Were it not for Spot, I wouldn't lead such a happy life.” He thought to himself. And then inside his left pocket, he found the fourleaf clover, which was considered as an indicator of good luck. He believed in it again.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两个月前Michael的父母在一次事故中去世，后来他被Jill收养，但他不喜欢Jill，觉得她对他不够好，因此Michael一直郁郁寡欢，甚至想要离家出走。但是Jill带回一只毕格尔犬，它从此改变了Michael对生活的态度。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Michael跑到浴室，Spot在他身边”可知，第一段可描写他们之间发生的细节，Michael和Spot最终成为形影不离的好朋友等内容。
②由第二段首句内容“两个星期过去了，每个人都看到Michael身上发生了变化”可知，第二段可描写Michael的行为变化，如在学校表现好和心理状态发生改变，最后再升华主题呼应第一段的内容，如重新相信四叶草能带来好运和美好生活等。
第二步：续写线索：
Spot陪伴Michael——Michael不觉得寂寞——成为朋友——Michael有了变化——Michael感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
陪伴：accompany/ stay with
被认为：be considered as / be regarded as
充满：be filled with /be full of
【情绪类】
惊讶地：surprisingly/amazingly
快乐：pleasure / joy
【点睛】
[高分句型1] This time he didn't feel lonely when cleaning, for the little dog was just there accompanying him. (运用了时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] And then inside his left pocket, he found the fourleaf clover, which was considered as an indicator of good luck. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．（2022年河北一中阶段练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at least one book for the summer. This was one more way for her to solve my strange problem—inability (没能力)to read.
In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I pulled a few books off the shelf and sat down on the floor. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of dog. I had recently had a dog, the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was the one I could share secrets with, but later he was given away to someone who had space and money to care for him. I never forgot my dog.
On the book’s cover, there was a dog which looked the same as mine. I figured the picture of the dog on the cover. My eyes ran across the little, Amos, the Dog with a Plan. Without opening the book, I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty and got the main ides of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home. At the end of the story, my mind continued the final scene of reunion. When I finished my reading, a stream of tears ran down my cheeks. It was until then that I realized I had begun to overcome my inability to read. Thus, this was the very first book for me which I had read through and deeply immersed myself in the real scene.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答
My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something.
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Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature.
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【答案】
My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something. Books could be incredibly wonderful and I was going to read them. From then on, I kept going to the library. In the library, I was exposed to different types of books: detective stories, love stories, poems and so on. My mother encouraged me to spend time doing my favorite thing. Day by day, I finally succeeded in overcoming my inability to read. Moreover, I began to write some stories. When I went to university, I chose literature as my major.
Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature. I never told my mother about my experience that summer. It was the very first book that made me who I am today. This year, I begin writing my first book on the topic of my dog. I hope writing could be my lifelong career.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一个有阅读障碍的孩子，被妈妈逼着到图书馆去借书。在图书馆，作者因为看到了一本书的封面有一条狗，这条狗与自己曾经的狗很相似，于是被这本书所吸引，从此对阅读产生了兴趣，并最终克服了阅读障碍。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈的电话把我带回了现实世界，我突然意识到一些事情”可知，第一段可描写作者意识到了什么事情，且在不知不觉中爱上了阅读，以及阅读给读者带来的好处。
②由第二段首句内容“去年，我妈妈非常自豪，因为她的儿子获得了文学博士学位”可知，第二段可描写作者为什么取得了这么大的成就。
第二步：续写线索：
意识到书很精彩——一直去图书馆——克服阅读障碍——写故事——获得了文学博士学位——作者感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①接触：be exposed to / have access to
②继续做某事：keep doing sth./ go on doing sth.
③开始：begin / start
【情绪类】
①鼓励：encourage / inspire
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I went to university, I chose literature as my major. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It was the very first book that made me who I am today. (运用了强调句)
7. （2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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【答案】
Shadow’s back fur rose. Down came the group of dogs towards us, roaring angrily. Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it. Luckily it jumped aside. However, more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless. Just then, Jesse went up bravely and threw the thick branches around us, making it difficult for the dogs to move near. Meanwhile, Shadow shouted at the dogs aggressively in an attempt to scare them away.
Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. I was glad to see them disappear. I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back. While he was bigger than those dogs, he was not afraid in face of the mass of dogs. We continued to set off to search for our trail.This time, with Shadow leading the way, we would not get lost and soon we found the right trail. After the adventure, we returned home safe and sound thanks to my brave son and the biggest dog.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，遇到一群狗攻击，在危机时刻，他们的狗Shadow勇敢吓退一群狗，而保护他们的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Shadow的背部毛发立了起来。”可知，第一段可描写他们和Shadow在遇到这一群狗之后的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。”可知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险后的回家以及他们的心理活动。
第二步：续写线索：
徒步旅行——探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
寻找：look for /search/seek
回家：go back home/return home
爬：climb /ascend/mount
【情绪类】
感谢：thank/show our appreciation/show our gratitude/be grateful
害怕的：afraid /dreadful/horrible
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it.（由连接词as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] However，more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back.（由省略that引导的宾语从句）
8.（2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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【答案】
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.
My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.
【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，随后报警的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗狗大黄。
第二步：续写线索：
发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①进入：enter/break into
②打电话：call/ring up/phone
③把……吓跑：scare away/scare off
【情绪类】
①感激的：thankful / grateful
②幸运地：fortunately/luckily
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. (运用了强调句型)
[高分句型2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句)
9.（2022年全国·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I began to lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do? She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare(日托所). One of their customers was leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they asked, might our family be interested in adopting her?
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs.
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When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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【答案】
I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs. With Indigo, our baby dog passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless. The loss of Indigo seemed to deprive me of my love for any cute and lovely dog. What if I suffer the loss again? Out of nowhere, the dog kept flashing through my mind and I was enchanted by that tiny sweet thing. Once again, I set off to the Bed ’n’ Biscuit and adopted that tiny sweet thing named Chloe, fearful but delighted.
When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain. Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity. With days going by, our passion drove her forward and she was willing to embrace us enthusiastically. Every time we returned home from work, happy kisses from Chloe would rain upon our faces and the house would immediately be turned into a sea of happiness. Fortunately, with Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if our Indigo were still here with us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的狗Indigo一直陪伴着作者一家，和作者一起变老，但这只狗最终老死了，作者决定不再养狗。随后作者看到一只可爱的小狗，后来作者得知，这只狗叫Chloe，它的主人要离开了，现在它需要一个家。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我和他们说很抱歉，告诉他们我们不会再领养狗了。”可知，第一段可描写作者失去了心爱的狗Indigo，她害怕失去，所以不想养狗，但是回想起可爱的Chloe，作者最终决定要去收养这只狗。
②由第二段首句内容“当Chloe进入我们家时，她很谨慎，一切对于她来说都是未知的。”可知，第二段可描写Chloe来到作者家很谨慎，但是随着作者一家对Chloe的关爱，它开始和作者一家很亲，作者的生活又开始充满生机。
第二步：续写线索：
告诉日托所不领养狗——解释不再养狗的原因——害怕失去——不断想起可爱的Chloe——决定收养——Chloe很谨慎——关怀Chloe——Chloe和作者一家很亲——生活又开始充满生机
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①出发：set off /start off/start out
②后退：step back /retreat/draw back
③回家：return home /go back home
【情绪类】
①害怕的：fearful /afraid
②高兴的：delighted /happy/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With Indigo, our baby dog passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless.(运用了with复合结构)
[高分句型2] Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity.(运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型3] Fortunately, with Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if our Indigo were still here with us.(运用了as if引导的虚拟语气)
10． （2022年湖南·高三校联考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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【答案】
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month?” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。
第二步：续写线索：
作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
跳跃：skip/jump
返回：return/go back
回答：reply/respond
【情绪类】
焦急地：anxiously/worriedly
快乐的：happy/glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
专题 08 话题分类+人与动物
（人与自然）
目录：
1. 精选名校最新2022年12月-2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题
2. 读后续写话题分类背诵模板
3. 读后续写话题分类写作步骤
4. 读后续写话题分类写作热词
5. 读后续写话题分类高分佳句
1.（2022年江苏常州·高三统考期末）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type? Take my friend Olline, for example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite.
I could find something to worry about every day.
At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I recently tried out to be one of the teachers.
Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(选拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with what?” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled.
“You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s puzzling eyes.
Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello?” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,”
I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.”
I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie. “And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over?” he asked.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?”
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By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
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【答案】
“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?”
“Trust me. You’ll love her!” In just a minute Ollie came over with the cutest puppy imaginable!“Her name is Daisy,” he said. “We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.” Of course, Tex and Indi jumped up and down as soon as they saw Daisy, and the four of us spent all afternoon trying to teach her to catch a ball, play chase and sit for doggy treats.
By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
“Hello?” I said excitedly. But that was the end of the excitement. It turned out there was only one opening in the group, and I didn’t get it. “Hey, it’s not so bad,” Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy. “You can try out again next year, right?” I shrugged. “I guess.” Then the sleeping Daisy opened her eyes, picked up her head, and gave me the biggest, wettest lick on my face, and I couldn’t stop laughing.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者申请了他学校空手道老师的职位，但是作者在等待申请结果时，很焦虑，无心干其他的事。这时，作者一直认为不怎么焦虑的朋友Ollie给作者打来电话，他说自己去年等待足球队挑选结果时也很焦虑，他告诉作者这是人之常情，且告诉作者，做其他的事使自己分心是治愈焦虑紧张的好办法。于是他带来了一条名叫Daisy的狗。作者和朋友Ollie一起照顾狗，他们在一起玩得很开心。快晚上的时候，空手道学校打来电话，告诉作者他没有被选中当老师，朋友Ollie安慰了作者，作者于是释怀了。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘嗯’我怀疑地说，‘到底是什么东西？’”可知，第一段可描写Ollie带来了一件使作者开心的东西。
②由第二段首句内容“那天快结束的时候，我们都累坏了，小狗Daisy甚至睡得很熟，突然我妈妈从厨房里喊道，‘Zona!电话响了。’”可知，第二段可描写作者接到了空手道打来的电话，告诉作者录取结果。
第二步：续写线索：
朋友Ollie带来一只狗——作者和Ollie一起照顾狗，玩得很开心——作者接到空手道学校电话——作者没有被录取——朋友安慰作者——作者释怀了
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①信任某人：trust sb./believe in sb.
②照顾：take care of/look after
③递给某人某物：hand sb. sth./pass sth. to sb.
【情绪类】
①兴奋地：excitedly/with excitement
【点睛】
[高分句型1]We’re taking care of her while her owners are out of town.（运用了while引导的状语从句）
[高分句型2] Ollie said, handing me the sleepy little puppy.（运用了非谓语动词作状语）
2.（2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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【答案】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求续写两段内容（Paul和 Becky勇救Mac，试图赶走狼，但没有成功）以及（越来越多的人加入到救援之中，最后成功地赶跑了狼）。
第一步：段落续写：
根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇读后续写：本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事，第一段要求续写车上下来两个人帮助Mac，但他们势单力薄，并没能赶走狼，双方陷入僵局；第二段要求续写越来越多的人加入到救援之中，众人合力将狼赶走。时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
第二步：续写线索：
根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； immediately（立即），dangerous（危险的），howl （嚎叫），threat（威胁），join（加入）， bravely（勇敢地）及deadlock（僵局）等。
第三步：整体布局：
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有fight against（对抗），run away（跑掉），get out of (从……中出来)，be ready to do（准备好做某事），dare to do（敢做某事）以及approach to（靠近），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.”，倒装句“Then came the deadlock.”，非谓语动词“At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
3.（2022年江苏徐州·高三校联考期末）
读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
“Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk?” “No, honey, Meghan probably did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.
I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.
At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window.
“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.
Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you, Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
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I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
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【答案】
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I got it-she wanted me to take her out to the park. I pretended I hadn’t paid attention. She stepped forward, staring at me with her innocent eyes. “Leave me alone for a while, Meghan,” I said without looking at her. After a few seconds, out of the corner of my eye, I saw tears trickling down her cheek. I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said. I had to correct my mistake.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. I turned to her and said, “Sorry, let’s go to see more ‘bib-bibs’!” She was so excited that she smiled through tears. I held her hand as we walked outside. Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky. Seeing her smiley face, I felt much happier than doing my work. I could catch up on it in the evening. Work can always wait, but love cannot.(152 words)
Possible version2
A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand. I knew she would distract me from work as much as possible until she had my full attention. I stood my ground, pretending that I hadn’t noticed her. Minutes later, I heard Meghan’s footsteps as she marched down the hall. Then came a sudden loud from the front door. Scared and worried, I dashed to my daughter’s rescue. In her haste to reach the door knob, she had accidentally knocked over the shoe rack. Shame washed over me as I realized what an irresponsible dad I was being.
I finally decided to take Meghan to the park. As I helped her put on her socks and shoes, I kept repenting for my earlier actions. Always busy with my teaching plans, I rarely spent enough quality time with my angel. Even when I got this precious chance, I did everything to get rid of her. On our way, I held on to her little hand, and she beamed a smile that was brighter than the sun. I smiled back at her, and vowed to myself that I would watch over my angel for the rest of my life.(179words)
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在工作中的作者一直被自己22月大的孩子Meghan拉着去看小鸟，从而无法认真工作的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，她站在我面前，手里拿着鞋子和袜子。”可知，第一段可描写Meghan想要去公园，但作者拒绝了。
②由第二段首句内容“我最后决定带梅根去公园。”可知，第二段可描写作者最终带上Meghan一起去公园玩耍以及对爱的感悟。
第二步：续写线索：
Meghan要去公园——假装看不到——后悔——去公园——漫步——感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
① 玩的开心：enjoy oneself/ have a good time
② 流泪：burst into tears/burst out crying /tears running down one's face
③ 漫步：stroll/ramble/wander
【情绪类】
① 后悔：regret/remorse/repent
② 激动：be excited/be moved to tears
【点睛】
[高分句型1].I felt so terrible that I regretted what I had said.句中，so…that…引导结果状语从句，其意为“如此……以至于……”，表达高级。
[高分句型2].I held her hand as we walked outside. 句中，as引导伴随状语从句，语法表达较高级。
[高分句型3].Wandering through the park, Meghan was like a free bird enjoying herself in the wide blue sky.句中，现在分词短语作伴随状语从句，表述高级。
4．（2022年重庆一中校考阶段练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路线) when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯宾格猎犬).
They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety.
“I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough? You have to carry a dog too?’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.”
That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says.
Paragraph 1:
The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear.
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Paragraph 2:
Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.”
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【答案】
The group of there got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear. What was worse, it started to drizzle. However, they couldn’t wait for the rain to stop because it was getting dark and the dog was whining and obviously in pain, so they inched their way down the slippery slope while looking for the trail. Fortunately, it wasn’t long before they got back on track and the sky cleared up. “Thank God. It didn’t rain cats and dogs, but a dog,” Kasper said jokingly. “At one point, the thought of giving up crossed my mind. My legs hurt and were shaking but my dad’s jokes and the dog’s watery eyes gave me strength,” Vargas recalls.
Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said, “Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.” On their way to the vet, she called the owners, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. They had gone hiking together the day before and Boomer had fallen off a cliff. The family rushed down to look for him until dark but in vain. When they found out that Boomer was still alive, they were so blissful that they drove to the vet without delay. To their relief, Boomer only had a dislocated joint and was in a cast. The owners also told Vargas that they were moving to another city because of work and couldn’t take Boomer with them. With a brilliant smile on her face, Vargas stroked Boomer’s head and asked if it would like to go home with her. Boomer licked her hand gently, wagging its tail. This downhill battle turned out to be a blessing in disguise.
【导语】本文以一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬为线索，讲述了Vargas在与父亲远足的途中发现了一只受伤的斯宾格猎犬，Vargas决定扛着狗远足。路途中经历迷路，小雨和疲惫，但Vargas最终战胜了这些困难，在小径尽头发现狗主人的联系方式，联系狗主人，并最终收养Boomer。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这三个人迷路了一次，因为倒下的树木使小径消失了。”可知，第一段可描写远足路上遇到的困难，及Vargas如何战胜困难。
②由第二段首句内容“最后徒步六英里，到达小径的尽头，Vargas发现了一张非常小的纸条，上面写着：“迷路的狗名叫Boomer，请打这个号码。”可知，第二段可描写Vargas带狗去看兽医并联系狗的主人，最终收养Boomer。
第二步：续写线索：
迷路——躲雨——想放弃——继续赶路——发现便条——联系狗的主人——收养Boomer
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①寻找：look for/search for
②抚摸：stroke/pet
③回家：go home/return home
【情绪类】
①开玩笑地：jokingly/playfully
②高兴的：blissful/delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1] On their way to the vet, she called the owners, who thought for sure Boomer was dead. (运用who引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] When they found out that Boomer was still alive, they were so blissful that they drove to the vet without delay. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句和so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
5．（2022辽宁营口高三模拟）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Michael sat on the wooden bench outside the house holding a fourleaf clover. Michael had believed that fourleaf clovers brought good luck, but he started doubting that kind of power.
Michael was eleven. It had been two months since his mum and dad died in an accident. A widow by the name of Jill adopted him. Michael had a dislike for Jill. Her voice was loud. She also made him do her chores. Michael felt not as much as a son to her. He dreamed a lot. He spoke little. He cried secretly. He had even been working on a plan for two weeks to flee the house.
That was, until he heard Jill parking her Honda into the garage.
Michael stuffed the fourleaf clover in his left pocket. Before he realised it, Jill was standing in front of him, with a small beagle in her hand. She put the beagle down. It ran to Michael and sat on his Nike tennis shoes. Michael knelt down to pet it. After a while, he looked up，“Is the dog for me？”
Jill laughed，“Of course! You are the slowest little boy ever! I've got you a little puppy to make you work faster.”
Michael couldn't see how a beagle would help with his chores, but he thought it would be nice to have a friend. “Give him a name,” Jill said.
Michael thought for a moment. He saw a big, black spot on his back. That's it! Spot！“I'll name him Spot！” Michael announced.
“Spot, Spot, stupid name but it'll do. Now, you'd better clean the bathroom and finish your homework before dinner's ready.”
“Yes, ma'am.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side.
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Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael.
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【答案】
Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side. This time he didn't feel lonely when cleaning, for the little dog was just there accompanying him. It was just a beginning. Now having a friend to play with, Michael didn't even have time to think about his escape plan. Instead, feeding and training Spot became his source of fun. And surprisingly, even Jill's loud voice didn't seem that annoying to him.
Para 2:
Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael. He was happy again. In the school he performed better and made more friends. After a day filled with pleasure, Michael came back to his room with Spot. “Were it not for Spot, I wouldn't lead such a happy life.” He thought to himself. And then inside his left pocket, he found the fourleaf clover, which was considered as an indicator of good luck. He believed in it again.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两个月前Michael的父母在一次事故中去世，后来他被Jill收养，但他不喜欢Jill，觉得她对他不够好，因此Michael一直郁郁寡欢，甚至想要离家出走。但是Jill带回一只毕格尔犬，它从此改变了Michael对生活的态度。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Michael跑到浴室，Spot在他身边”可知，第一段可描写他们之间发生的细节，Michael和Spot最终成为形影不离的好朋友等内容。
②由第二段首句内容“两个星期过去了，每个人都看到Michael身上发生了变化”可知，第二段可描写Michael的行为变化，如在学校表现好和心理状态发生改变，最后再升华主题呼应第一段的内容，如重新相信四叶草能带来好运和美好生活等。
第二步：续写线索：
Spot陪伴Michael——Michael不觉得寂寞——成为朋友——Michael有了变化——Michael感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
陪伴：accompany/ stay with
被认为：be considered as / be regarded as
充满：be filled with /be full of
【情绪类】
惊讶地：surprisingly/amazingly
快乐：pleasure / joy
【点睛】
[高分句型1] This time he didn't feel lonely when cleaning, for the little dog was just there accompanying him. (运用了时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] And then inside his left pocket, he found the fourleaf clover, which was considered as an indicator of good luck. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．（2022年河北一中阶段练习）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at least one book for the summer. This was one more way for her to solve my strange problem—inability (没能力)to read.
In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I pulled a few books off the shelf and sat down on the floor. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of dog. I had recently had a dog, the first and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was the one I could share secrets with, but later he was given away to someone who had space and money to care for him. I never forgot my dog.
On the book’s cover, there was a dog which looked the same as mine. I figured the picture of the dog on the cover. My eyes ran across the little, Amos, the Dog with a Plan. Without opening the book, I borrowed it from the library for the summer.
Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty and got the main ides of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found his way back home. At the end of the story, my mind continued the final scene of reunion. When I finished my reading, a stream of tears ran down my cheeks. It was until then that I realized I had begun to overcome my inability to read. Thus, this was the very first book for me which I had read through and deeply immersed myself in the real scene.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答
My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something.
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Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature.
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【答案】
My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something. Books could be incredibly wonderful and I was going to read them. From then on, I kept going to the library. In the library, I was exposed to different types of books: detective stories, love stories, poems and so on. My mother encouraged me to spend time doing my favorite thing. Day by day, I finally succeeded in overcoming my inability to read. Moreover, I began to write some stories. When I went to university, I chose literature as my major.
Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature. I never told my mother about my experience that summer. It was the very first book that made me who I am today. This year, I begin writing my first book on the topic of my dog. I hope writing could be my lifelong career.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一个有阅读障碍的孩子，被妈妈逼着到图书馆去借书。在图书馆，作者因为看到了一本书的封面有一条狗，这条狗与自己曾经的狗很相似，于是被这本书所吸引，从此对阅读产生了兴趣，并最终克服了阅读障碍。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈的电话把我带回了现实世界，我突然意识到一些事情”可知，第一段可描写作者意识到了什么事情，且在不知不觉中爱上了阅读，以及阅读给读者带来的好处。
②由第二段首句内容“去年，我妈妈非常自豪，因为她的儿子获得了文学博士学位”可知，第二段可描写作者为什么取得了这么大的成就。
第二步：续写线索：
意识到书很精彩——一直去图书馆——克服阅读障碍——写故事——获得了文学博士学位——作者感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①接触：be exposed to / have access to
②继续做某事：keep doing sth./ go on doing sth.
③开始：begin / start
【情绪类】
①鼓励：encourage / inspire
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When I went to university, I chose literature as my major. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It was the very first book that made me who I am today. (运用了强调句)
7. （2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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【答案】
Shadow’s back fur rose. Down came the group of dogs towards us, roaring angrily. Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it. Luckily it jumped aside. However, more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless. Just then, Jesse went up bravely and threw the thick branches around us, making it difficult for the dogs to move near. Meanwhile, Shadow shouted at the dogs aggressively in an attempt to scare them away.
Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled. I was glad to see them disappear. I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back. While he was bigger than those dogs, he was not afraid in face of the mass of dogs. We continued to set off to search for our trail.This time, with Shadow leading the way, we would not get lost and soon we found the right trail. After the adventure, we returned home safe and sound thanks to my brave son and the biggest dog.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，遇到一群狗攻击，在危机时刻，他们的狗Shadow勇敢吓退一群狗，而保护他们的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Shadow的背部毛发立了起来。”可知，第一段可描写他们和Shadow在遇到这一群狗之后的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。”可知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险后的回家以及他们的心理活动。
第二步：续写线索：
徒步旅行——探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
寻找：look for /search/seek
回家：go back home/return home
爬：climb /ascend/mount
【情绪类】
感谢：thank/show our appreciation/show our gratitude/be grateful
害怕的：afraid /dreadful/horrible
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Just as one of them approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to it.（由连接词as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] However，more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back.（由省略that引导的宾语从句）
8.（2023年全国·高三专题练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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【答案】
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.
My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.
【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约4岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保护了作者一家的财物的故事。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。”可知，第一段可描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯入，随后报警的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我的钱包就在门边。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家发现并没有丢失财物，更加感激狗狗大黄。
第二步：续写线索：
发现有人闯入——报警——警员查看——财物没有丢失——对大黄充满感激
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①进入：enter/break into
②打电话：call/ring up/phone
③把……吓跑：scare away/scare off
【情绪类】
①感激的：thankful / grateful
②幸运地：fortunately/luckily
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage. (运用了强调句型)
[高分句型2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak dinner. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句)
9.（2022年全国·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I began to lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do? She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare(日托所). One of their customers was leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they asked, might our family be interested in adopting her?
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs.
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When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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【答案】
I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs. With Indigo, our baby dog passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless. The loss of Indigo seemed to deprive me of my love for any cute and lovely dog. What if I suffer the loss again? Out of nowhere, the dog kept flashing through my mind and I was enchanted by that tiny sweet thing. Once again, I set off to the Bed ’n’ Biscuit and adopted that tiny sweet thing named Chloe, fearful but delighted.
When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain. Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity. With days going by, our passion drove her forward and she was willing to embrace us enthusiastically. Every time we returned home from work, happy kisses from Chloe would rain upon our faces and the house would immediately be turned into a sea of happiness. Fortunately, with Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if our Indigo were still here with us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的狗Indigo一直陪伴着作者一家，和作者一起变老，但这只狗最终老死了，作者决定不再养狗。随后作者看到一只可爱的小狗，后来作者得知，这只狗叫Chloe，它的主人要离开了，现在它需要一个家。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我和他们说很抱歉，告诉他们我们不会再领养狗了。”可知，第一段可描写作者失去了心爱的狗Indigo，她害怕失去，所以不想养狗，但是回想起可爱的Chloe，作者最终决定要去收养这只狗。
②由第二段首句内容“当Chloe进入我们家时，她很谨慎，一切对于她来说都是未知的。”可知，第二段可描写Chloe来到作者家很谨慎，但是随着作者一家对Chloe的关爱，它开始和作者一家很亲，作者的生活又开始充满生机。
第二步：续写线索：
告诉日托所不领养狗——解释不再养狗的原因——害怕失去——不断想起可爱的Chloe——决定收养——Chloe很谨慎——关怀Chloe——Chloe和作者一家很亲——生活又开始充满生机
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
①出发：set off /start off/start out
②后退：step back /retreat/draw back
③回家：return home /go back home
【情绪类】
①害怕的：fearful /afraid
②高兴的：delighted /happy/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With Indigo, our baby dog passing away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless.(运用了with复合结构)
[高分句型2] Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity.(运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型3] Fortunately, with Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if our Indigo were still here with us.(运用了as if引导的虚拟语气)
10． （2022年湖南·高三校联考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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【答案】
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again. The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily. I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month?” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。
第二步：续写线索：
作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟
第三步：词汇激活：
【行为类】
跳跃：skip/jump
返回：return/go back
回答：reply/respond
【情绪类】
焦急地：anxiously/worriedly
快乐的：happy/glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
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