湖北黄石市2022-2021年中考英语一模试题-作文

湖北黄石市2022-2021年中考英语一模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2022·湖北黄石·统考一模）英语课上，大家针对中学生节食减肥这一话题进行了讨论，请你根据以下要点提示写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。

提示：1.健康比漂亮更重要；

2.学生应该以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；

3.可通过多锻炼和改变不良饮食习惯保持健康；

4.保持健康的心态。

注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2.80词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）

参考词汇：dieting节食；appearance外貌；state of mind心态

Quite a few students choose to lose weight by dieting. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

二、材料作文

2．（2022·湖北黄石·统考一模）在第24届北京冬奥会上涌现出了许许多多可歌可泣的动人故事，敢想敢拼的苏翊鸣、多才多艺的谷爱凌、永不放弃的徐梦桃等一大批运动员成为国民偶像。现在学校发出倡议向他们学习，并组织举办一场以“每个人都了不起！(Everyone is excellent!)”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据这一话题发现身边“了不起”的老师、同学或者自己。

提示：

1.介绍“了不起”的你/我/他（她）；

2.你/我/他（她）做了哪些“了不起”的事？

3.作为中学生我们应该……

要求：

1.短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

3.词数：80词左右（短文开头己给出，且不计入总词数）。

Everyone is excellent!

There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too.

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3．（2021·湖北黄石·统考一模）I Have Made Progress

回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如科学知识、生活技能、 人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的经历谈一谈自己的进步。

提示：1. 选取至少两个方面的内容。

2. 结合自身经历，谈一谈过去和现在的不同，如何取得这些进步的。

3. 最后谈谈你的感想。

要求：1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名及其它相关信息；

3. 词数80左右。

参考词汇：

used to do/be;try one’s best to do; it is hard for me to do; make progress in (doing)

become; be pleased with my; be thankful to

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三、讲稿

4．（2021·湖北黄石·统考一模）实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你分别从父母、老师和学生三方的角度，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。

提示：

1. 倾听是一种礼貌行为，要耐心倾听。

2. 倾听有利于增进相互理解，拉近距离，并建立良好关系。

要求：

1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；

2. 词数80左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon, everyone!

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Thank you for your listening!

参考答案：

1．One possible version:

Quite a few students choose to lose weight by dieting.

In my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is always the first thing to consider. Don’t pay much attention to your appearance and don’t let others’ opinions influence your normal life. However, if you really want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits. You should also keep a healthy state of mind. It can not only help with your studies, but also help you overcome difficulties in dieting. So be happy every day, don’t worry too much about weight.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇议论文，要求对中学生节食这一话题谈谈自己的看法；

② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：文章写作提示已经给出，写作时应包含所给提示，另外可以适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步：陈述自己关于健康，学习，锻炼及心态的看法；

第二步：文章最后对自己的观点进行总结。

[亮点词汇]

① in my opinion依我看

② pay attention to关注，注意

③ appearance外表

④ overcome difficulties克服困难

[高分句型]

① However, if you really want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing your unhealthy eating habits.（用if引导条件状语从句）

② It can not only help with your studies, but also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.（并列连词not only...but also的使用，使文章具有连贯性）

2．例文

Everyone is excellent!

There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too.

My friend Tony is tall and thin. He’s good at each subject and always ready to help others. Once I was badly ill and had to be in hospital for several months. Tony gave away all his money to me as soon as he heard the news. And he’s worried that I would fall behind others in my study. So he often went to help me with my lessons after school. I think he’s not only kind-hearted but also excellent.

As students, we should learn from those excellent people and make ourselves excellent.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求以“Everyone is excellent!”为题写自己生活中平凡却了不起的老师、同学或者本人。根据题目要求可知，本文应该写自己周围的人或者自己，所以学生注意不要写成名人事迹。

2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一或第三人称，时态根据具体语境可用现在时或过去时。文章已给出基本思路，首先简单介绍自己要写的人，即个人基本信息；然后介绍这个人做过的“了不起”的事；最后表达自己的感想，即建议向这个人学习。文章应做到层次分明、思路清晰，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态错误。

3．One possible version

I Have Made Progress

How time flies! My junior high school life will be over soon. During the past three years, I’ve made great progress in these two ways.

When I entered the middle school, I felt sleepy in math class because I couldn’t understand the teacher. I was very afraid of exams and always failed exams. With the help of my math teacher, I tried my best to study math and spent a lot of time on it. Now, I can get good grades.

I am an outgoing girl and I get on well with people around me. But I used to be shy to talk with others. It was tough for me to join in the group discussions. My classmates encouraged me a lot, I tried to express my own thoughts and I became active and confident.

Just as the saying goes, “No pain, no again.” I’m pleased with my progress and extremely thankful to my teachers and classmates’ help.

【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“I Have Made Progress”为题，根据写作提示，结合自身的经历谈一谈自己的进步。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主，以第三人称和一般现在时为辅来叙述。写作时结合自身经历，介绍清楚过去和现在的不同，说明是如何取得这些进步的，最后谈一谈自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。

4．例文

Being a Good Listener

Good afternoon, everyone!

Today I’d like to share my ideas of “Be a Good Listener” with you.

It’s polite to listen to others carefully and it helps build good relationships with people.

Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand their children better and trust each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase students’ understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.

Also, be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keep silent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求我们根据所列举的两点提示，分别从父母、老师和学生三方的角度写一篇题为“Be a Good Listener”的演讲稿。

2.写作指导：写作本文时，按照演讲稿的格式，先顶格写称谓语，紧接着下一行空两格写问候语。写正文的时，主要从父母、老师和学生三方的角度写应该倾听的对象以及倾听后的影响，可以使用“主语+should do sth”句型来写，接着写倾听的态度。最后是结束语。写作时，可使用熟悉的句型，同时注意使用适当连词，使文章意思连贯，自然。