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【例2】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60。 （注意：有环保话题）提示词：游乐园amusement park；垃圾 bin
情景作文写作四“绝杀”绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（景+感情）绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展luckily，unluckily,while，hwever绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
文章结构1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图（时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情）3.总结段：所感所悟
常用模板1.主题段： last weekend, we had a meaningful and entertaining/educatinal spring uting /green actin/mnitr electin/…activity
2.展开段：起 Last Friday, a heated discussin was held in ur class n sth.\ding sth. Several pinins were shared, such as ding A, ding B and ding C befre a final decisin was made that…
承 Early in the mrning, bathed in the warm sunshine, we set ut t d sth, chatting and laughing all the way, feeling rather excited/delighted/jyful/passinate…
转Hardly had we arrived at…when we started t d sth.Wrks were assigned t us, such as ding A, ding B and ding C.
合 Having finished all the wrk, we waved gdbye. Tired as I was/we were, we felt ur time and effrt wrthwhile, in that/cnsidering that…
3. 总结段(突出环保话题） Frm this experience, I learned that we teenagers are suppsed t d sth1 instead f ding sth. Only in this way, can ur sciety/ schl/ cuntry/ earth be flded with a tsunami f harmny and happiness.
【例3】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的班长李华，去年冬天你们班开展了“为西藏希望小学献爱心”的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文短文向某中学生英语报投稿，介绍你们本次献爱心活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。Last winter, we carried ut an activity themed “Helping theChildren in the Hpe Primary Schl in Tibet”.
Last week, we carried ut an activity themed “helping theChildren in the Hpe Primary Schl in Tibet”. In rder t light the lve in ur heart, we held a class-meeting t share ur hpe.During the meeting, we watched a TV prgram psted by CCTV news abut the life in Tibet’s Hpe Primary Schl. Seeing the hard life f thse pr children, we all felt it’s ur duty t change their lives.
T make mre peple participate in this prgram, we wrteurging letters(倡议书） t call fr helps. We put up the pster in the schl exhibit bard and handed ut messages, telling everyne passing by abut the unimaginable situatin.
After weeks f brad ut wrks, we held a dnating party in urschl. It’s really beynd ur imaginatin that nearly everyne in ur schl gave ut part f their effrts. Nt nly did we dnate ur pcket mney, but als a lt f useful gds were dnated, such as schl bags and quilts.
As sn as the dnating party ended, we carried the gds and mney, which embdied ur sincerely lve and hpe fr the pr children t the pst ffice. When I was filling the pst list, I felt s prud f my classmates and me. Thugh the little dnatins frm us wuldn’t cmpletely change the life f the children, I hpe ur actin can bring them hpe t fight against the adversities f life.Fr I knw, lve is such a little thing, but it has the strength t change the wrld.
描写心情1. 喜悦with a brad smile shining n his faceThe brad smiles n my grandparents’ faces delighted me.with enthusiasmmaking me mre than a little delightedMy smile leaped thrugh the bars and generated a smile n his lips.Tears f jy flded her eyes as she prayed silently.2.悲伤、感动I held back the tears welling up in my eyes.Mved beynd wrds, he tried t swallw the rapidly swellinglump in his thrat.Tears came t my eyes as I realized what a fl I had been t judgehim as a failure.
情景作文写作四“绝杀”：绝杀1.主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）绝杀2.矛盾冲突+心理发展绝杀3.联想画面+细节补充绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）学生关爱老师，老师感动学生绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展意外→担心→急迫→感动绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充怎么摔倒的？怎么送医院？说了什么？结局如何？绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
第一段：Last Mnday, ur English teacher Miss Li was giving a class.when she slipped suddenly, fell ff and hurt her right ft badly.第二段： Shcked and wrried as we were that, with Miss Li n my back, we immediately sent her t the schl clinic. The dctr examined her carefully, saying she had t stay in hspital fr at least 2 weeks.第三段： After schl, the whle class went t see her, bringing sme fruits and a bunch f flwers. Miss Li asked us t study hard, and we delivered ur best wishes. We were happy that she wuld cme back t us sn.
第四段(转合可以合为一段） The next day, we were waiting fr the new English teacher when Miss Li came back! Sitting n her wheelchair, she lked s gentle and kind. Shuting and clapping, we welcmed ur belved teacher, wh was s respnsible t us.第五段What a memrable experience and what a great teacher! Withevery ne f us taking ur wn respnsibility, the sciety will be certainly flded with endless harmny and happiness, which is nt nly pssible but als inevitable.
【练习】 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。
要点总结：1.搜信息：I searched the Internet fr infrmatin abut the trip t Beidaihe with my grandparents.2.买车票：I went t the train statin and managed t buy tw tickets fr my grandparents.3.收拾行李：I packed int the suitcase the things my grandparents wuld need4.送别： I went t the statin t see them ff.
第一段： On Saturday mrning, tgether with my grandparents, I searched the Internet fr detailed infrmatin abut the trip t Beidaihe(时间人物事件) , such as the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and sme htel infrmatin(细节).第二段： In the afternn, I went t the train statin t buy tickets fr my grandparents(时间地点人物事件). T my great surprise, there was a lng and crwded queue when I arrived there(细节). Having waited fr at least 40 minutes, I finally managed t buy tw tickets(矛盾冲突+具体动作). Just imagine hw excited I felt hlding the tickets in my hand tightly(心情).
第三段： In the evening, I packed int the suitcase the things my grandparents wuld need (时间人物事件), such as sme clthes, glasses, a map as well as ther daily necessities(细节). My grandma ever reminded me t put an umbrella int the suitcase, which shwed hw careful she has always been (合理想象).
第四段：The next mrning, I went t the statin t see themff (时间地点人物事件). Waving gdbye t them nthe platfrm, I felt happy fr them and wished thema safe jurney (动作细节心情).
【图表作文】Study the fllwing drawing carefully and write anessay t1)describe the picture2)deduce the reasns fr thepredictins revealed, and3)put frward yur suggestins.Yu shuld write abut 160—200wrds neatly ANSWER SHEET 2.
Paragraph 1：描图（注意加连接词） As is apparently betrayed in the drawing abve, the average life spans f the wrld ppulatin and China’s ppulatin will reach fifty years and ne hundred years respectively by the year f 2300. And by then the number f peple abve the age f sixty will accunt fr thirty-eight percent f the ttal wrld ppulatin. This is a great change in human histry, which has made us think deeply.
The fremst reasns fr the predictins which are indicated in the drawing abve can be illustrated as fllws. T begin with, the rapid develpment f the wrld ecnmy has cntributed t the predictins.Over these years, the wrld ecnmy is develping at a surprising speed, which has supplied peple all ver the wrld with adequate daily necessities.What’s mre, the develpment f medical science has brught abut the predictins. Over the past years, a number f medical breakthrughs have been made in the field f medical science, which has greatly prtected peple and imprved the quality f peple’s life.With the further grwth f the wrld ecnmy and medical science,the UN predictins will be mre persuasive.
By the way, here are suggestins f mine fr the predictins revealed in the drawing abve. The internatinal cmmunity including China must nw make preparatins fr the cming f the day. Much knwledge cncerning senir citizens shuld be ppularized. Mre public facilities fr senir citizens shuld be set up. Mre prfessinals n senir citizens shuld be strictly trained. Only in this way can we live in a peaceful and harmnius envirnment.
模板一：积极向上主题 （青少年多运动）谚语开头+ The picture abve illustrate that …(描述图画)…. Undubtedly, we can deduce frm the cartn that the painter is trying t shw us that…（主旨） 分析原因T begin with, … In additin, …besides，…（小结）
发起倡议 As far as I am cncerned, it is high time that we highlighted the significance f … and cultivated the citizens’ awareness that …. …is essential t us.Only by enfrcing these measures int practice,can ur sciety be mre harmnius, ur ecnmy be mre prsperus and we, as individuals, embrace mre prmising prspect.
模板二：批判社会现象谚语开头+ The picture abve illustrate that …(描述图画)…. Undubtedly, we can deduce frm the cartn that due attentin has t be paid t the issue f ….The causes f this phenmenn are as fllws: T begin with,…In additin,…Last but nt least,… If we let this situatin cntinue as it is, …The prblem will be wrse and wrse.
As far as I am cncerned, it is imperative fr us t take drastic and effective measures t reverse the disturbing trend revealed in the abve picture. On the ne hand,… n the ther hand,… Only by enfrcing these measures int practice can we curb the current phenmenn/surmunt this difficulty, and we will have a brilliant future.
【例2】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于60。 （注意：有环保话题）提示词：游乐园amusement park；垃圾 bin
情景作文写作四“绝杀”绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（景+感情）绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展luckily，unluckily,while，hwever绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
文章结构1.主题段：一句话概括这个故事2.展开段：按顺序描述四幅图（时间地点、天气人物、工具事件、动作心情）3.总结段：所感所悟
常用模板1.主题段： last weekend, we had a meaningful and entertaining/educatinal spring uting /green actin/mnitr electin/…activity
2.展开段：起 Last Friday, a heated discussin was held in ur class n sth.\ding sth. Several pinins were shared, such as ding A, ding B and ding C befre a final decisin was made that…
承 Early in the mrning, bathed in the warm sunshine, we set ut t d sth, chatting and laughing all the way, feeling rather excited/delighted/jyful/passinate…
转Hardly had we arrived at…when we started t d sth.Wrks were assigned t us, such as ding A, ding B and ding C.
合 Having finished all the wrk, we waved gdbye. Tired as I was/we were, we felt ur time and effrt wrthwhile, in that/cnsidering that…
3. 总结段(突出环保话题） Frm this experience, I learned that we teenagers are suppsed t d sth1 instead f ding sth. Only in this way, can ur sciety/ schl/ cuntry/ earth be flded with a tsunami f harmny and happiness.
【例3】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的班长李华，去年冬天你们班开展了“为西藏希望小学献爱心”的活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文短文向某中学生英语报投稿，介绍你们本次献爱心活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。Last winter, we carried ut an activity themed “Helping theChildren in the Hpe Primary Schl in Tibet”.
Last week, we carried ut an activity themed “helping theChildren in the Hpe Primary Schl in Tibet”. In rder t light the lve in ur heart, we held a class-meeting t share ur hpe.During the meeting, we watched a TV prgram psted by CCTV news abut the life in Tibet’s Hpe Primary Schl. Seeing the hard life f thse pr children, we all felt it’s ur duty t change their lives.
T make mre peple participate in this prgram, we wrteurging letters(倡议书） t call fr helps. We put up the pster in the schl exhibit bard and handed ut messages, telling everyne passing by abut the unimaginable situatin.
After weeks f brad ut wrks, we held a dnating party in urschl. It’s really beynd ur imaginatin that nearly everyne in ur schl gave ut part f their effrts. Nt nly did we dnate ur pcket mney, but als a lt f useful gds were dnated, such as schl bags and quilts.
As sn as the dnating party ended, we carried the gds and mney, which embdied ur sincerely lve and hpe fr the pr children t the pst ffice. When I was filling the pst list, I felt s prud f my classmates and me. Thugh the little dnatins frm us wuldn’t cmpletely change the life f the children, I hpe ur actin can bring them hpe t fight against the adversities f life.Fr I knw, lve is such a little thing, but it has the strength t change the wrld.
描写心情1. 喜悦with a brad smile shining n his faceThe brad smiles n my grandparents’ faces delighted me.with enthusiasmmaking me mre than a little delightedMy smile leaped thrugh the bars and generated a smile n his lips.Tears f jy flded her eyes as she prayed silently.2.悲伤、感动I held back the tears welling up in my eyes.Mved beynd wrds, he tried t swallw the rapidly swellinglump in his thrat.Tears came t my eyes as I realized what a fl I had been t judgehim as a failure.
情景作文写作四“绝杀”：绝杀1.主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）绝杀2.矛盾冲突+心理发展绝杀3.联想画面+细节补充绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
绝杀1. 主题先行+双线并行（动作+感情）学生关爱老师，老师感动学生绝杀2. 矛盾冲突+心理发展意外→担心→急迫→感动绝杀3. 联想画面+细节补充怎么摔倒的？怎么送医院？说了什么？结局如何？绝杀4. 起承转合+合理分段
第一段：Last Mnday, ur English teacher Miss Li was giving a class.when she slipped suddenly, fell ff and hurt her right ft badly.第二段： Shcked and wrried as we were that, with Miss Li n my back, we immediately sent her t the schl clinic. The dctr examined her carefully, saying she had t stay in hspital fr at least 2 weeks.第三段： After schl, the whle class went t see her, bringing sme fruits and a bunch f flwers. Miss Li asked us t study hard, and we delivered ur best wishes. We were happy that she wuld cme back t us sn.
第四段(转合可以合为一段） The next day, we were waiting fr the new English teacher when Miss Li came back! Sitting n her wheelchair, she lked s gentle and kind. Shuting and clapping, we welcmed ur belved teacher, wh was s respnsible t us.第五段What a memrable experience and what a great teacher! Withevery ne f us taking ur wn respnsibility, the sciety will be certainly flded with endless harmny and happiness, which is nt nly pssible but als inevitable.
【练习】 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。
要点总结：1.搜信息：I searched the Internet fr infrmatin abut the trip t Beidaihe with my grandparents.2.买车票：I went t the train statin and managed t buy tw tickets fr my grandparents.3.收拾行李：I packed int the suitcase the things my grandparents wuld need4.送别： I went t the statin t see them ff.
第一段： On Saturday mrning, tgether with my grandparents, I searched the Internet fr detailed infrmatin abut the trip t Beidaihe(时间人物事件) , such as the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and sme htel infrmatin(细节).第二段： In the afternn, I went t the train statin t buy tickets fr my grandparents(时间地点人物事件). T my great surprise, there was a lng and crwded queue when I arrived there(细节). Having waited fr at least 40 minutes, I finally managed t buy tw tickets(矛盾冲突+具体动作). Just imagine hw excited I felt hlding the tickets in my hand tightly(心情).
第三段： In the evening, I packed int the suitcase the things my grandparents wuld need (时间人物事件), such as sme clthes, glasses, a map as well as ther daily necessities(细节). My grandma ever reminded me t put an umbrella int the suitcase, which shwed hw careful she has always been (合理想象).
第四段：The next mrning, I went t the statin t see themff (时间地点人物事件). Waving gdbye t them nthe platfrm, I felt happy fr them and wished thema safe jurney (动作细节心情).
【图表作文】Study the fllwing drawing carefully and write anessay t1)describe the picture2)deduce the reasns fr thepredictins revealed, and3)put frward yur suggestins.Yu shuld write abut 160—200wrds neatly ANSWER SHEET 2.
Paragraph 1：描图（注意加连接词） As is apparently betrayed in the drawing abve, the average life spans f the wrld ppulatin and China’s ppulatin will reach fifty years and ne hundred years respectively by the year f 2300. And by then the number f peple abve the age f sixty will accunt fr thirty-eight percent f the ttal wrld ppulatin. This is a great change in human histry, which has made us think deeply.
The fremst reasns fr the predictins which are indicated in the drawing abve can be illustrated as fllws. T begin with, the rapid develpment f the wrld ecnmy has cntributed t the predictins.Over these years, the wrld ecnmy is develping at a surprising speed, which has supplied peple all ver the wrld with adequate daily necessities.What’s mre, the develpment f medical science has brught abut the predictins. Over the past years, a number f medical breakthrughs have been made in the field f medical science, which has greatly prtected peple and imprved the quality f peple’s life.With the further grwth f the wrld ecnmy and medical science,the UN predictins will be mre persuasive.
By the way, here are suggestins f mine fr the predictins revealed in the drawing abve. The internatinal cmmunity including China must nw make preparatins fr the cming f the day. Much knwledge cncerning senir citizens shuld be ppularized. Mre public facilities fr senir citizens shuld be set up. Mre prfessinals n senir citizens shuld be strictly trained. Only in this way can we live in a peaceful and harmnius envirnment.
模板一：积极向上主题 （青少年多运动）谚语开头+ The picture abve illustrate that …(描述图画)…. Undubtedly, we can deduce frm the cartn that the painter is trying t shw us that…（主旨） 分析原因T begin with, … In additin, …besides，…（小结）
发起倡议 As far as I am cncerned, it is high time that we highlighted the significance f … and cultivated the citizens’ awareness that …. …is essential t us.Only by enfrcing these measures int practice,can ur sciety be mre harmnius, ur ecnmy be mre prsperus and we, as individuals, embrace mre prmising prspect.
模板二：批判社会现象谚语开头+ The picture abve illustrate that …(描述图画)…. Undubtedly, we can deduce frm the cartn that due attentin has t be paid t the issue f ….The causes f this phenmenn are as fllws: T begin with,…In additin,…Last but nt least,… If we let this situatin cntinue as it is, …The prblem will be wrse and wrse.
As far as I am cncerned, it is imperative fr us t take drastic and effective measures t reverse the disturbing trend revealed in the abve picture. On the ne hand,… n the ther hand,… Only by enfrcing these measures int practice can we curb the current phenmenn/surmunt this difficulty, and we will have a brilliant future.
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