01 双减政策与课后延时服务 中考英语满分作文赏析
展开01 双减政策与课后延时服务
NO.1
（2022·湖北随州·中考真题）“双减”之后，为了引导学生合理利用周末时间，最近你校开展了“如何让周末生活更有意义”的征文活动。请你从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面，用英语写一篇短文投稿，提出你的建议和看法。
写作要求：1.短文必须包含以上三方面的内容，并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
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In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【满分作文赏析】
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we can take part in many sports activities. Boys can play basketball, football and so on. Girls can go swimming, skating, or mountain climbing. These sports are good for our health. Secondly, when we are at home on weekends, we can help our parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing dishes. Finally, we can also join in some useful social activities. For example, we can go to the nursing home to help the old do things and clean the park.
In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面写一篇作文关于如何让周末生活更有意义。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文。人称以第一人称为主。写作时可用过渡词Firstly，Secondly，Finally连接三个要点。最后确保行文连贯，语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.2
（2022·山西·中考真题）有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
Students’ Favorite Kinds of English Homework
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
WORD BANK |
arouse interest 微发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养 |
A possible version:A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.
As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information on the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.3
（2022·江苏宿迁·中考真题）实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life | |
校园 | 1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等； 2.多做运动，有益健康； 3.……（补充一点） |
家庭 | 1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼； 2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能； 3.……（补充一点） |
注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
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In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【满分作文赏析】
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them.
At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Enjoy study, enjoy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.4
（2022·湖南衡阳·中考真题）随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。
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【满分作文赏析】
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy. As a student, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.
It’s necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball. Also, we should be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the most important for us is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.5
（2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.6
（2022·云南昆明·中考真题）Me after the “double reduction” policy
“双减”政策(the “double reduction” policy)实施之后，同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。同时，大部分学校围绕文娱、体育、户外等主题开展了丰富多彩的活动，给大家的生活增添了生机与活力。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以”双减”为主题的征文活动，请用所给题目写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述一下”双减”后你的变化及感受。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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【满分作文赏析】
Dear Editor,
I’m a middle school student. Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot.
I used to do my homework till midnight and have no time for my hobbies. At the same time, I always attended many training courses at weekends. So I had less time for exercise and felt very tired all the time.
However, with the support of the “double reduction” policy, though I go home late, I have more interesting activities I like. I feel very excited when I join in these activities. Moreover, I can have more time to communicate with my parents because I have little homework after school. I have more time to develop my hobbies.
I think the “double reduction” policy is very good. I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”之后自己的变化及感受等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
NO.7
（2022·湖北荆州·中考真题） “双减”政策（double-reduction policy）实施后，你们学校开展了丰富多彩的课外活动。假设你是李华，请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信，谈谈你参加课外活动的情况。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你们学校开展的课外活动；
2. 叙述你的一次课外活动经历；
3. 说说你的体会。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。文中不得出现真实的学校名称和人名；
2. 词数：80 词左右（书信开头已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? Let me tell you something about our after-school activities.
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Your friend,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Tom,
How’s it going? Let me tell you something about our after-school activities.
There are over 20 students’ clubs in our school. There are art clubs, basketball clubs, calligraphy clubs, etc. I am in the basketball and chess clubs. We often have a basketball match on Friday. Last week, our basketball match was really exciting. All the players tried their best to score. Finally, we won the game only by one point, but we were quite happy.
The activities not only build up my body and mind but also provide a perfect platform and rich choices for my future development. Besides, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Your friend,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：在“双减”政策下，学校的课外活动日益丰富。要求给美国笔友Tom写一封信，内容包括：1. 介绍开展的活动；2. 叙述一次活动经历；3. 说说体会。
2. 写作指导：本文应使用第一人称进行写作。文章第一部分描述学校开展的活动，应使用一般现在时。第二部分应使用一般过去时来描述曾经的某次活动经历。第三部分的体会应使用一般现在时。需要注意的是，第一部分描述的活动类型应尽可能丰富，体现词汇的多样性。在第二部分在描述活动经历的过程中应使用恰当的形容词和副词。
NO.8
（2022·江苏徐州·中考真题）你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①运动（Sports） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY） ④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟） |
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Me and my after-class courseIn my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ |
【满分作文赏析】
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness. I made a word Fu into color. It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
