10 应用文之日记- 研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战中考英语高分作文（通用版）
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研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文（通用版）
第一部分 应用文之日记体裁解读及写法点拨
日记主要用来记录。天所经历的主要事情和过程，并表达自己的感受天文日记的写作，要注意以下三个方面:
1.格式要正确。在写日记正文之前，要依次有日期、星期及当天的天气情况。
2.表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看能否用简洁明了的英语把一天之中发生的事情以及你的感受准确无误地表达出来。日记记录的事情通常是已经发生了的，故常用一般过去时。
3.文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的，其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等，所以用第一人称写， 把该写的东西写清楚即可。
写作样例与常用句式:
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第二部分 应用文之日记万能黄金模板
Day of the week, Date Weather
①Today is .I did some meaningful things .
②In the morning,I_ .（事件一）In the afternoon,I （事件二）After that,I .（事件三）
③What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!/Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because .
注：
①介绍今天是什么日子，引出事件
②详细描写了今天所做的事情
③表达感想
模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
必备亮点词汇
月份
January一月 | February二月 | March三月 | April四月 |
May五月 | June六月 | July七月 | August八月 |
September九月 | October十月 | November十一月 | December十二月 |
天气情况
sunny晴朗的 | cool凉爽的 | cold寒冷的 | rainy下雨的 |
windy大风的 | cloudy多云的 | snowy下雪的 | foggy多雾的 |
描述心情
joyful欢喜的 | excited激动的 | delighted高兴的 | pleased开心的 | satisfied满意的 |
comfortable舒适的 | bright明亮的 | terrible糟糕的 | horrible恐惧的 | frightened害怕的 |
经典套用句型
闪亮篇首句
(1) It was the first day of our winter holiday. 这是我们寒假的第一天。
(2) One of my father' s friends invited me to have a picnic today.今天，我爸爸的一个朋友邀请我去野餐。
(3) On this weekend, my brother and I decided to help my mother with the housework.这个周末，我弟弟和我决定去帮助我妈妈做家务活。
(4 ) Today, I realized that time was a very cruel thing.今天，我意识到时间是非常残忍的一样东西。
(5) Today, our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium.今天，我们学校在学校礼堂举办了开学典礼。
出彩篇中句
(1 ) It seemed to be an easy task for us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.它看起来像是一项容易的任务，但之后我们经历一段艰苦的时期才完成它
(2) I spent the whole day sweeping the floor and washing the clothes.我花了一整天来扫地、洗衣服。
(3 ) Those red buildings and those green trees formed a beautiful picture.那些红色的建筑物和绿色的树木构成了一幅美丽的图画。
(4) The night view was so beautiful that we all didn't want to go home.夜景是如此漂亮，我们都不想回家了
精彩篇尾句
(1) I will be more diligent in this semester.这个学期我准备更加勤奋地学习。
(2) We will treasure it at the bottom of our hearts.我们会把它珍藏在我们的内心深处。
(3) What a nice day! 多么美好的.天!
(4) I was so moved by his speech.我被他的演讲深深感动了。
(5) I did enjoy that game.我非常喜欢那个游戏。
第四部分 模板范文演练
（荆州）今天是6月21日，父亲节。假设你是李明，你早起为爸爸做早餐，煮了一碗鸡蛋面条。现在请你按照下表提示内容，用英语写一则日记。
煮面条的过程 | 水，面条，鸡蛋，佐料······(3-4个步骤） |
爸爸吃面条后的感受 | 美味，高兴，夸奖····· |
你的想法和打算 | 自豪，感恩，祝福，多帮助父母分担家务· |
要求：1.请使用恰当的关联词叙述做面条的过程。
2.可以适当增加内容，但是文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
3.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
4.词数80左右。日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Sunday,June 21 Sunny
Today is Father's Day. I got up early and
万能模板套用分析
首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。→主题
其次，具体描述过程。→过程
最后，表达想法和打算。→想法
满分范文
Sunday,June 21 Sunny
Today is Father's Day.I got up early and decided to cook noodles for my father. To begin with(一二三原则，使用了过渡词。），I boiled the water and then poured the noodles into the pot.① After 5 minutes,according to my father's taste I added some salt, oil and chili sauce. Finally,I cooked a heart shaped egg and covered noodles with it.Although it was the first time that I had cooked, my father said it was delicious.(句式多变原则，although引导让步状语从句，从句中还包含it was the first time that句型。）② Feeling moved and surprised,he gave me a
big hug.③
I felt proud of myself and I decided to help my parents with housework from now on(短语优先原则。）。What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
你也可以这样表达
①At first,I boiled the water and then poured the noodles into the pot.
②My father said what I cooked was delicious though it was the first time that l had cooked.
③He was so moved and surprised that he gave me a big hug.
范文译文
6月21日 星期天 晴
今天是父亲节。我早早起床，决定为我父亲煮面条。首先，我把水煮沸，然后把面条倒入锅中。5分钟后，根据我父亲的口味我加了一些盐、油和辣椒酱。最后，我做了心形的鸡蛋，并把它盖在面条上。虽然这是我第一次做饭，但是我父亲说非常美味。他既感动又惊讶，给了我一个大大的拥抱。
我为自己感到自豪，决定从现在起帮助父母做家务。这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天。
第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文
A
（2018·湖南长沙·中考真题）
假如你是李华，于4月13日星期五这一天参加了学校组织的郊游活动.请你以 school trip 为主题，写一则英文日记，内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等.
要求:(1)80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名.
Friday， April 13th
It was sunny today.We went on a school trip.
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【参考范文】
Friday， April 13th sunny
It was sunny today.We went on a school trip.We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.
In the morning,All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m， and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there， we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm， where we learned a lot about farming.
At noon， we had a picnic， during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine， singing， dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures. Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didn’t want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份写一篇日记，记叙自己在4月13日，星期五这一天参加学校组织的郊游活动。内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。题目中并未规定具体的写作内容，因此学生们应发挥自己的主观能动性和想象力，充分调动自己所学的语言知识储备，根据提示归纳出写作要点，自主确定写作内容，不能遗漏要点，这是写作中的一个难点。另外，写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语的思维写汉语式的句子，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的句式，并用完整的句子结构。正确使用be动词、实意动词、名词单复数以及形容词和副词等，可以用简单句为主，使文章简洁、明了。穿插使用较长、较复杂的句子，提升文章档次。还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，增强文章的连贯性。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求记叙了自己的一次郊游活动。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，如参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等，没有遗漏要点。文章中作者按照时间的顺序记叙这一天的活动，内容安排条理、清晰，结构清楚。其次短文中语法规范，语言得体。文章以一般过去时态为主，动词都变成了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式。句子结构以简单句为主，叙述简洁、明了，也使用了一些较复杂的句式，如并列句、复合句、非谓语动词等。文章中较好的句型有We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.、All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a， m， and went to the farm by bus.、 On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers、At noon, we had a picnic, during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine, singing, dancing and flying the kites、It was time for us to leave though we didn’t want to. 、It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.等等。
B
（2018·湖北孝感·中考真题）
本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点：
1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们团队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……
3.感想：Tony……，我……
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；
3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.
【参考范文】
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.
In the morning,I invited Tony to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park,because He has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
In the afternoon,I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival after the competition, . We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
试题分析：本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态，用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
C
（2018·浙江宁波·中考真题）
今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
导图一 导图二
注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip.
【参考范文】
Friday,May11th sunny
Today I had a school trip. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
【详解】
写作分析：
首先要确定文章的体裁，这是一篇日记，这就决定了文章的人称。其次要看到要求是“根据你所选择的实践活动”进行写作，所以要在两个导图中挑选一个进行描述，不需要都写。在完全明白题目含义后就要根据导图中的要点（包括人物、交通方式、感受、活动）进行作文，使用恰当的语句进行连接、保证作文连贯得体即可。
写作亮点：
本文首先用首段点明了前往的地点，参与的实践活动的名称，补充介绍了天气。第二段介绍了在农场的活动，有相关细节的补充，如“took a walk around the farm”。对于“喂鸡”这一活动也进行了较为细致的描写“When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends.”文章还重视简单句、并列句、复杂句的交替使用，还在第二段末尾运用了感叹句，使得文章句式变化多样。在最后一段通常可以表达自己的综合感受和对下次活动的期待，这样的文章就能够结构完整，细节丰富，连贯得体了。
D
（2019·天津·中考真题）
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为…．
参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit
挤向座位push towards the seat
争吵havea quarrel
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed
【参考范文】
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.
As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily.
From my perspective,I wish we all can help each other when someone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better.
【详解】
这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为…。写出自己的想法。这几个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not only…but also…：不但……而且……。
【高分句型三】Only in this way can our world become better and better.只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。这句话是由only引起的倒装句。
