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目录
专题38 读后续写09 脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（解析版） 1
Part 1命题解读 1
Part 2思维导图 2
Part 3 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） 2
Part 4 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负） 3
Part 5 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华） 5
Part 6 模拟演练 5
1． （2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测） 5
2． （2022·广东广东·一模） 8
3． （2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测） 10
4． （2022·湖南·模拟预测） 13
5． （2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模） 15
6． （2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测） 18
7． 读后续写模拟专练01 21
8． 读后续写模拟专练02 25
9． 读后续写模拟专练03 30
Part 7 精讲精练 34
01----野外遇蛇 34
02 ---洞穴探险 37

Part 1命题解读
读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。

Part 2思维导图



Part 3 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.

2、负面情绪：害怕
(1) Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless(无力的) as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.
(2) Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)
(4) Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body (在身体涌动)

Part 4 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1、.挣扎努力
(1) Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)
(2) “We need to think out a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
(3) ...,We swam tooth and nailspared no effort to
tooth and nail
spared no effort to
(全力以赴地).

2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass(像玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the coat became completely wet, it dragged me down(把我拖下水). I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）

3.实施救援的过程
(1) “帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood yelled loudly to her friends, who were left in a panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
(2) 尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervous and anxious, Norwood struggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid to Simmons.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）

4、如释重负
(1) Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge of triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)
(2) Hearing the news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
(3) It thrilled us to hear the good news (听到新消息很高兴).
(4) On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each other.

Part 5 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1、感激
(1) “If I had not been given first aid, I would have dead.” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood, saying “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.” 如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
(2) “Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.” Simmons whispered to Norwood. “谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）

2、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid. It saves lives, and it works.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basic first-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.

Part 6 模拟演练
1． （2022·全国·信宜市信宜中学模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据为内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Aladdin and his mother lived a poor life in Arabia. One day, he got an old lamp under a tree. WHOOSH! When he rubbed it, noise, fire and red smoke came from the lamp, and out of the smoke came a very big jinnee（神仙）. “ I’ am slave of the lamp. What is your wish,master?” Cried the jinnee.
With this magic lamp, Aladdin and his mother became rich and he even married the princess. He owned all the happiness. Meanwhile, he was respected by people around for his kindness to the poor. However, he was envied by Abanazar a magician from Morocco who wanted Aladdin’s magic lamp very much but he didn’t know where the lamp was hidden. So he got out his seven black stones which were magic too, and put them in water. Then he was informed that the lamp was in a palace in Arabia.
Abanazar flew to the palace and plotted his dirty plans. For the next week Abanazar watched Aladdin’s palace until Aladdin and his friends left the palace to go hunting in the hills one day.
Abanazar passed off himself as an old man, selling lamps in the street. “But not for money.” a slave-girl reported to the princess, “the old man said, ‘New lamps for old. Give me an old lamp and you can have a new one’. So every body’s getting a new lamp.”
“Yes, my husband’s old lamp! Go and give it to the old man”, the princess knew nothing about the lamp and its magic, “ Aladdin will be happy to have a nice new lamp!”
The old man(it was Abanazar ,of course) fled into the hills with the magic lamp in such a hurry that his magic stones were left on the floor in front of the palace.
Para 1. Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp.
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Para 2. It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second.
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Abanazar just couldn’t wait to rub the lamp.   Just in a flash, the ginnee appeared, “What’s your wish,my master?”. Envied Aladdin for so long, Abanazar was desperate to take everything from him, including his wealth, the grand palace, his wife and even his life. “But I shall not kill people,” the jinnee refused. With some dissatisfaction, Abanazar ordered the jinnee to carry all back to Morocco. Soon, when Aladdin was back home from hunting, he was too shocked to utter a word at the sight. His happiness was stolen! Annoyed, his mind was in chaos.His tears were welling up and dropped down on the floor,coinciddently on the magic seven black stones. The stones informed Aladdin of the truth and only if he found the magic lamp was he able to get everything back to Arabia. Aladdin got on the journey to Morocco, avenging.（142）
It was many,many miles from Arabia to Morocco,but Aladdin was there in a second. With the help of the seven black stones, Aladdin not only found his palace but also the princess soon. “I apologized for my ignorant, but Abanazar always carries the lamp with himself.”the guilty princess was crying. Aladdin comforted her and gave her some sleeping- powder from the magic stones, telling her to do as she was told and slid to hide in another room. Minutes later, Abanazar   was in. The princess pretended to be happy to see him and suggested a drink with him. Abanazar   accepted it with pleasure and fell into sleep, forever. From Abanazar’s pocket,Aladdin found the magic lamp and rubbed it. Noise, fire and red smoke came out, and happiness came back to Aladdin again. （125）
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了阿拉丁偶然得到了一盏神灯，有了这盏神灯，阿拉丁和他的母亲变得富有，他甚至娶了公主，魔术师阿巴那扎尔想得到这盏神灯，冒充一个老人，欺骗了公主，用一盏新灯骗走了旧灯。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“阿巴那扎尔迫不及待地擦拭着灯。”可知，第一段可描写阿巴那扎尔唤来了神灵，夺走了阿拉丁的一切，阿拉丁踏上复仇之旅。
②由第二段首句内容“从阿拉伯到摩洛哥有很多很多英里，但阿拉丁马上就到了。”可知，第二段可描写阿拉丁如何复仇。
2.续写线索：夺走——命令——眼泪涌出——安慰——回来
3.词汇激活
行为类
①夺走：take...from sb./deprive...of sb.
②命令：order/command
③眼泪涌出：tears well up/tears gush out
④安慰：comfort/console
⑤回来：come back/return
情绪类
①震惊：shocked/astonished
②内疚：guilty/compunctious
③愉快地：with pleasure/delightedly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The stones informed Aladdin of the truth and only if he found the magic lamp was he able to get everything back to Arabia. （由only修饰if引导的条件状语从句，位于句首引起的部分倒装句）
[高分句型2]Aladdin comforted her and gave her some sleeping- powder from the magic stones, telling her to do as she was told and slid to hide in another room.（由现在分词作状语）

2． （2022·广东广东·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once—you had been waiting for a long time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind before the first day at college. I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,I couldn't sleep all night because of being anxious about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter. However,the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.
It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour earlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their business probably didn't pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open. However,I was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving around me as if they hadn't seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.
Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,I realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a result, instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）, I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybody's assistance.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为 150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Luckily,the man didn't seem to be angry.
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Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.
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参考答案：
Luckily, the man didn't seem to be angry. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place. Quite a lot of people had entered the room, so I didn't care about having an unhappy experience with one of my future peers. I was embarrassed, however, when I finally learned that the man to whom I had been rude minutes before was our professor of the first lecture.
Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well. After the class was dismissed, I came to him to apologize for my bad manners earlier in the day. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. The incident helped me realize that I should not let emotional strain and anxiety prevent me from communicating with people openly and pleasantly.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开。作者在大学第一天时很紧张，当天去听讲座时迷了路。一位好心的教授想要帮助他却被作者粗鲁地拒绝了。后来，他发现原来想要帮助他的人就是当天讲座的老师。最后作者向那位教授道了歉并且明白了不应该让情绪紧张和焦虑阻碍自己与人开诚布公、愉快地交流。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，这个男人似乎并不生气。”可知，第一段可描写作者听讲座的时候发现了做讲座的教授正是想要帮助他的人，感到很尴尬。
②由第二段首句内容“马修斯教授是一位出色的演讲者，讲座进行得非常顺利。”可知，第二段可描写作者向教授道歉及自己的感悟。
2.续写线索：进入教室——发现真相——感到尴尬——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.进入：enter/get into
②.意识到：realize/recognize
③.证明：turn out/prove
情绪类
①.生气：angry/filled with anger
②.尴尬：embarrassed/awkward
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place.（由where引导的限制性定语从句 ）
[高分句型2]. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. （由that引导的宾语从句）

3． （2022·广东·深圳外国语学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Even before I reached the tent, I knew there would be trouble. My little brother Andy was following me, with a sleeping bag, a flashlight, and his stuffed bear. My friends Wade and Bred think Andy would ruin everything. He would get scared in the middle of the night and have to be taken back to the house. They complained so much you'd think they were hospital patients instead of kids I'd invited for an outdoor sleepover.
Andy promised that he wouldn't ruin anything. He wormed his way into the tent and settled in the far corner. Night was settling in, too, with the woods around us fading toward black. The house, with its porch light, seemed a long way from us.
“Time for ghost stories!” Brad announced as soon as I'd closed the tent. He told a   story about vampires （吸血鬼）, but it only made us fall over laughing. When it was Wade's turn, he told a story of three guys who were camping in a tent. He described our situation exactly-except for Andy. When he was describing a terrifying creature, somewhere outside, a branch snapped （发出咔嚓声）。The hairs on my arms shot straight up. “These guys were crawling into their sleeping bags, right?” Wade continued. “When out of the darkness rang this terrible cry.” And out of the woods behind us there was a cry! High-pitched, frightening, and strange. The hairs on my head shot straight up!
“What was that?” Bred asked as the cry came again. We all looked at each other in horror, speechless. Wade suggested someone should go out to check, but no one dared. “What if it's something trapped or hurt?” Andy said anxiously. We focused our flashlights on Andy, whom we'd forgotten, sitting in the corner with his arms around his bear. Andy would adopt every lost or hurt animal in the world if Mom would let him.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
“I'm going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness.
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Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama.
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参考答案：
“I’m going to see.” Andy ran out of the tent and disappeared in the darkness. Although filled with fear, I ran after him without hesitation. He was my little brother after all. Andy was headed into the woods, his flashlight beam wobbling along the trail. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with his flashlight aimed at the upper branches of a large   tree. I raised my own light to shine on the same spot. A pair of shining eyes seemed to float in the darkness. My heart pounded harder.
Andy said it was a baby monkey caught between branches, and it was crying for its mama. I knew he was right. I had to admit that Andy was impressive. We helped the little monkey out carefully. Having ensured that the little monkey was in good condition, we let it go. When we walked down back, I could see the guys gathered before the tent. “Are you all right?” They asked. “We’re fine.” I answered with a broad smile, knowing that the guys’ opinion of Andy would change, too.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带着弟弟安迪一起去户外过夜，朋友不想让安迪和他们一起，安迪独自一人搭了个帐篷，在作者和朋友说鬼故事时外面发出了响声，安迪很有勇气的出去帮助了一只夹在树枝的猴子的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““我去看看。”安迪跑出帐篷，消失在黑暗中。”可知，第一段可描写安迪出去找出响声的场面。
②由第二段首句内容“安迪说那是一只夹在树枝间的小猴子，它在哭着找妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写安迪的勇气使作者的朋友的态度改变。
2.续写线索：出去——惊恐——真相大白——救助——回去——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.充满：be filled with/be full of/abound with
②.举起：raise/lift/upborn
情绪类
①.小心翼翼：out carefully/with great care/very cautiously
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Although filled with fear, I ran after him without hesitation.这句话运用了although引导的让步状语从句。
[高分句型2]. Finally I saw him, a few yards ahead, with his flashlight aimed at the upper branches of a large   tree.这句话运用了with的复合结构作伴随状语。

4． （2022·湖南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其情节和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better.
             Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to' the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3)请在答题卡的相应位置作答；
4)字体端正，格式规范，卷面整洁。
Paragraph l:
        But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
       It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment, she felt a little sad, but she wasn’t so frightened. She reminded herself constantly, “Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will return soon! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked, exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly, she spotted a huge flat rock. She managed to climb onto it and waited with patience. The helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse. To her great joy, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly and burst into tears.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了简和她的丈夫汤姆到森林里的一个湖边露营过夜。期间发生了不愉快的事，简独自一人没带手机离开了，后来在森林里迷路了，最后汤姆叫来直升机救简的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是没有更多的直升机来了，天又黑了。”可知，第一段可描写简第一次逃离获救没有成功，鼓励自己汤姆会来救自己。
②由第二段首句内容“当简醒来时，天已破晓。”可知，第二段可描写最终直升机救援简成功，简和汤姆重逢。
2.续写线索：失落——抱有希望——高兴——获救——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①独自：stay alone/by oneself/on one’s own
②发现：spot/find
③设法：manage to do/attempt to do
情绪类
①悲伤的：sad/down/depressed
②筋疲力尽：exhausted/spend oneself/worn out
【点睛】
[高分句型1] She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语的结构)
[高分句型2] The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse. (运用了“the +比较级，the +比较级”结构)

5． （2022·重庆市天星桥中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The five children in Larrane Leech’s day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes under the dizzy sun. By 10 a. m., it was time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk down to the river.
“We’re going to pick berries now, ” she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they spend as much time as possible outdoors.
Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd (德国牧羊犬). The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the trees. They stopped at the first berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talking excitedly.
A young cougar (美洲狮)cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air. Stepping over the thick carpet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.
Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar, the size of Pal, standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately froze Larrane. Larrane couldn’t tell whether Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side. Instantly, the cougar wheeled toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretched up high and brought its paws down upon the head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to pull down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.
注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane.
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Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground.
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Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane. They picked up branches from the ground and began attacking the cougar. However, their strikes only managed to anger the fierce beast. Letting out a threatening howl, it scratched Larrane head. Blood began to flow down Larrane’s face, but she held tightly onto its neck to prevent its deadly bite. Just then, Pal came to her rescue. He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore open its flesh while dragging it backward. Facing such united enemy, the cougar had to admit defeat and flee.
Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground. He was still breathing. “Thank God! He’s alive.” Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total shock. “We have to run home now. ” She said calmly to the terrified children, “Everything will be all right.” With Mikey on her back and the other children following her, she ran all the way back to the day care center. The other staff helped her put Mikey down on a bed. That was when she finally had time to attend to her wound. Larrane met the greatest challenge of her life head-on and won. Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between life and death.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位日托中心的负责人Larrane有一天带五个孩子到户外活动，先画风景，后采浆果，在采摘浆果这期间出现了一只美洲狮意图伤害他们，此时Larrane思绪混乱但选择了勇敢地与美洲狮搏斗，然而女性力量无法与残忍强壮的美洲狮抗衡，就在危险关头Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现帮忙，打跑了美洲狮，Larrane与孩子们死里逃生。

【详解】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“现在意识到危险，其他四个孩子尖叫着跑在Larrane后面。”可知，本段应描写在发现了美洲狮的威胁之后，Larrane与孩子们跟美洲狮搏斗求生的过程。在千钧一发之际，Larrane的牧羊犬Pal出现，打跑了美洲狮，他们获得安全。
②由第二段首句内容“Larrane冲向Micky，Micky静静地躺在地上。”可知，本段应描写Larrane和Pal将美洲狮打跑后，迅速检查Micky的伤情，并将恐惧的孩子们带回日托中心，最后感悟生死之间可以做的抉择。
2.续写线索：发现美洲狮——迅速出手——尽力相搏——处于劣势——Pal相救——恢复安全——感悟
3.词类激活行为类
①击打：attack/strike/hit
②防止：prevent/stop
③帮助：help/assist/aid
情绪类
①害怕的：threatening/terrifying/scary
②轻松的：released/relaxed

【点睛】
[高分句型1].He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore open its flesh while dragging it backward.（由while引导时间状语从句，省略了主语和be动词)
[高分句型2].Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total shock. (由because引导原因状语从句。)
[高分句型3].Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between life and death.(由what引导同位语从句)

6． （2022·辽宁·东北育才学校模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
An Act of Neighborliness
The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard, cutting my face like a sharp knife. Rain fell in big drops and thunder and lightning flashed across the skies. I shook with cold and fear as I walked home, through the streams of muddy water. Some people were rushing by, completely wet in the heavy rain.
Along the way, I saw some schoolchildren holding their heavy schoolbags tightly and rushing home, I also saw that some road repair work had been abandoned by workers. Obviously, the workers had left in a hurry because of the storm. There were few signs and it was hard to see what was on the road. There were pieces of wood and metal and it looked like a hole had been dug and hurriedly covered with boards.
I moved on but suddenly stopped as I heard some sounds. It sounded like children crying. I quickly turned back and went back to the place from where the sounds came. I was frightened! To my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The boards had moved away with the force of the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it was dark all around me. I told he that I was going to look for help. I knew the neighbors well, and they all shared a sense of neighborliness, willing to give a hand.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help.
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参考答案：
Actually, I was not sure of what to do or where to go but decided to go to the nearest house for help. I charged away to knock on the door on end. After a while, an athletic man of medium height opened the door. Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible. While calming me by patting my shoulder, the man reached over to grab the torch on the shoe cabinet near the door. No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out completely. Shortly afterwards, we sent the child to the nearest police station and waited for his parents.
The parents of the child who just arrived from work were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. They were more than grateful and thanked us. With an outpouring of relief, I was also proud of myself, as I had never imagined I would be part of a rescue party and the act of neighborliness could really make such a difference. While the mother and the father were holding the child tightly, I spotted the man beaming at the child with softness gleaming in his eyes. I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father. All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality. I walked to the man and tugged his sleeve, whispering, “Thank you.” I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在回家路上发现有小孩掉进了路上的洞里。作者告诉离他最近的房子房主，他很友好，愿意伸出援助之手。最后他们合力把孩子安全地从水坑里救出，孩子的父母很感谢他们。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我不太确定能做些什么，也不知道要去哪里，但决定去最近的房子寻求帮助。”可知，第一段可描述作者是如何与好心的房主救出孩子并将其送到警察局的。
②由第二段首句内容“刚刚下班到家的孩子父母听到发生的事情很震惊。”可知，第二段可描写孩子们的父母感谢作者和好心房主的善举，以及作者得到的感悟。
2.续写线索：找到好心的房主帮忙——安全救出孩子——孩子的父母表示感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冲向：charge away/rush to
②努力做：attempt to do/try to do
③慢慢移动：inch/crawl
④抓住：seize/get hold of
⑤紧紧抱住：hold tightly/embrace/firmly
情绪类
①震惊的：shocked/astonished
②感激的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Panicked as I was, I attempted to collect my thoughts, trying to explain the situation in the way as concise as possible.（as引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.（No sooner……than……固定句型）
【高分句型3】I was absorbed in my wild thought, wondering whether he was also a tender father.（现在分词作状语）
【高分句型4】All of a sudden, thunder crashed overhead, which brought me back to reality.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

7． 读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane andher husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight bya lake in the forest. Unfortunately ,on the way an unpleasantsubject came up and they started to quarrel .By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“I’m going to find a better spot for usto camp” and walked away.With no path to follow ,Jane just walked onfor quite a long time .After she had climbed to a high place ,sheturned around ,hoping to see the lake .To her surprise ,she saw nothing butforest and ,far beyond ,a  snowcapped mountain top .She suddenly realizedthat she was lost.“Tom! ” she cried. “Help! ”No reply .If only she had not left hermobile phone in that bag with Tom .Jane kept moving ,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became .As night was beginning to fall ,Jane was sotired that she had to stop for the night .Lying awake in the dark ,Jane wantedvery much to be with Tom and her family .She wanted to hold him and tell him howmuch she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry andthirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quicklyshe followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, shealso saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk alongthe stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along thestream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, thetrees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.
Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
But no more helicopters came and it wasgetting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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翻译小练习：
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
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2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
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3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
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4. 她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
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5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
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6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
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7. 她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。
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8. 幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
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9. 在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。
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10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。
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参考答案：
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 

2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance.

3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreledwith Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.”

4. 她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.

5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. 

6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again.

7. 她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention.

8. 幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter.

9. 在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。
There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief.

10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。
As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything.

11. 此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。
Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest. 

参考范文：
But no more helicopters came and it wasgetting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreledwith Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn’t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into the helicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest. 

8． 读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enough?”Pa walked to the end of the row of cottonwood seedlings. “No,” he said. “We have to plant trees all the way to that rock over there. We’ll need about twenty more seedlings.”
“I’ll get the seedlings.” offered Rebecca. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the cotton field. “You’d better let me go, Miss Petticoats,” teased her twin brother, William. “There are dangers all over this prairie(牧场/草原）“You may both go,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like to finish before sundown.”
They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew.Gently, they pulled the seedlings from the sand.“There! That’s twenty, with a few to spare.” said Rebecca.“OK，” said William. He led the way to the riverbank, then stopped.
“Look! There’s the dugout(防空壕）we lived in when we moved here last year.” He pointed to a hole in the grassy river bank.“Come on, let’s go inside.”“No，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling what’s in there.”“Then you start back.” said William, handing the seedlings to Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran to the dugout and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings into her long apron(围裙）and began to walk. Suddenly she froze in her tracks.A huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）moved along the river bank.It stopped right in front of the dugout and lay still, coiled up on the warm sunny bank.“William!” Rebecca shouted. “Don’t come out!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout. Rebecca pointed toward the rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway. He turned desperate eyes toward Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there more snakes waiting in the shadowy corners of the dugout?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea poppedinto her head. It was their only hope. It was risky, but it was the only hope.“Don’t move,” she said to William in a soft voice. “When r say NOW, you run out of there as fast as you can.”Rebecca removed the skirt-like petticoat(衬裙）from beneath her dress, then dipped it into the river. She squeezed out some of the water, then climbed to the top of the bank, directly above the  dugout’s opening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:“Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake.
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Paragraph 2: Are you OK?he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded.
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翻译小练习：
1. 丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。
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2. 她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。
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3. 她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。
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4. “现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。
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5. 威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。
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6. 她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。
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7. 丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。
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8. 然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”
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9. 丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。
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参考答案：
1. 丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。
Rebecca opened the dripping petticoat（wet through with water）as much as she could.

2. 她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。
Her hands shook as she leaned over the bank.

3. 她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。
With one swift movement, she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake.

4. “现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。
“NOW！” she shouted to William as the snake began to move under the petticoat.

5. 威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。
William jumped over the covered snake and ran fast before he stopped and turned around. Rebecca was right behind him.

6. 她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。
She was glad they managed to escape. It took them five minutes to catch their breath and calm themselves down.

7. 丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。
Rebecca checked to make sure that the seedlings were still complete.

8. 然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”
Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have done the same for you back there.”

9. 丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。
Rebecca said with a grin. “You couldn’t have, for you don’t wear petticoats！” Laughing, they raced back to the woods.

参考范文：
Paragraph 1:“Get ready to run, William, ”she said,keeping an eye on the motionless snake. Rebecca opened the dripping petticoat（wet through with water）as much as she could. Her hands shook as she leaned over the bank. With one swift movement, she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake.“NOW！” she shouted to William as the snake began to move under the petticoat. William jumped over the covered snake and ran fast before he stopped and turned around. Rebecca was right behind him.
Paragraph 2:“Are you OK？” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded. She was glad they managed to escape. It took them five minutes to catch their breath and calm themselves down. Rebecca checked to make sure that the seedlings were still complete.Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have done the same for you back there.” Rebecca said with a grin. “You couldn’t have, for you don’t wear petticoats！” Laughing, they raced back to the woods.

9． 读后续写模拟专练03
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A young man went to visit the oldest and wisest man in the village for some advice on how he could become rich.
“Treasure is yours to be had at the top of Yonder Mountain,” advised the wise old man as he pointed to a tall mountain in the distance. “You must travel on foot to the top of the mountain. There you will find riches beyond your belief. Once you leave the top of the mountain, whatever remains will be lost forever.”
The young man could hardly wait until the morning when he was to meet with the wise old man for final instructions. When he arrived at thewise old man's home, he saw a long, thick log lying on the ground in front of the house.
“You must carry this log on your journey to the top of the mountain, and it is a necessary part of your journey. Youmust take it with you to the top of the mountain to claim your treasure,”explained the wise old man.
The young man was not pleased with this sudden surprise, but he respected the wise old man and as he lifted the long, heavy log onto his shoulders and struggled down the road towards themountain, he realized that the trip would not be as easy as he thought.
After he was walking for a while, a woodsman cameup to him and said, “It looks like that log is pretty heavy. Would you like meto cut some of it off to make it lighter?”
The young man was exhausted, so he said, “Isuppose that a little bit cut off the end wouldn't hurt.” And the woods man cut two inches off the end.
A while later the young man met a farmer on hisway back from the fields. And the farmer helped him cut two inches off the end.
At the bottom of the mountain, the young man metup with a trapper who helped him cut four more inches off the log.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The young man continued tostruggle to climb the mountain.
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The excited young man laythe log across the gap and discoveredthat it.   
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翻译小练习：
1. 原木仍然很重，但他觉得轻松多了。幸运的是，当他几乎筋疲力尽时，他看到了山顶。
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2. 围绕着山顶，宝藏闪闪发光。
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3. 他喜出望外，跑向宝藏。
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4. 但走近一点，他发现路的尽头有一个巨大的缺口，越过缺口似乎是找到宝藏的唯一途径。
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5. “我怎么能到那里？”他看了看日志，想起了那位睿智的老人所说的话。
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6. 兴奋的年轻人把原木放在缺口上，发现它太短了，走不过去。
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7. 他看到了无法够到的宝藏，多么后悔让原木被砍掉！
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8. 经过多次徒劳的尝试，他不得不离开顶端。
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9. 他真后悔！他明白了这位聪明的老人想教给他什么，那就是，当我们努力取得成功时，决不应耍花招欺骗自己。
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参考答案：
1. 原木仍然很重，但他觉得轻松多了。幸运的是，当他几乎筋疲力尽时，他看到了山顶。
The log was still heavy, but he felt much easier. Luckily, when he was nearly tired out, he saw the top of the hill.

2. 围绕着山顶，宝藏闪闪发光。
Surrounding the top of the hill, the treasure was glittering.

3. 他喜出望外，跑向宝藏。
Being overjoyed, he ran to the treasure.

4. 但走近一点，他发现路的尽头有一个巨大的缺口，越过缺口似乎是找到宝藏的唯一途径。
But when got closer, he found a huge gap at the end of the road, and getting across the gap seemed to be the only way to get to the treasure.

5. “我怎么能到那里？”他看了看日志，想起了那位睿智的老人所说的话。
“How could I get there?”Looking at the log, he thought of what the wise old man had said.

6. 兴奋的年轻人把原木放在缺口上，发现它太短了，走不过去。
The excited young man lay the log across the gap and discovered that it was too short to cover the distance.

7. 他看到了无法够到的宝藏，多么后悔让原木被砍掉！
Seeing the treasure that couldn't be reached, how he regretted allowing the log to be cut!

8. 经过多次徒劳的尝试，他不得不离开顶端。
After many vain tries, he had to leave the top.

9. 他真后悔！他明白了这位聪明的老人想教给他什么，那就是，当我们努力取得成功时，决不应耍花招欺骗自己。
How regretful he was! Heunderstood what the wise old man wanted to teach him, that is, when we are struggling to success, we should never play tricks to cheat ourselves.

参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
The young man continued tostruggle to climb the mountain. The log was still heavy, but he felt much easier. Luckily, when he was nearly tired out, he saw the top of the hill. Surrounding the top of the hill, the treasure was glittering. Being overjoyed, he ran to the treasure. But when got closer, he found a huge gap at the end of the road, and getting across the gap seemed to be the only way to get to the treasure. “How could I get there?”Looking at the log, he thought of what the wise old man had said.
Paragraph 2:
The excited young man lay the log across the gap and discovered that it was too short to cover the distance. Seeing the treasure that couldn't be reached, how he regretted allowing the log to be cut! After many vain tries, he had to leave the top. How regretful he was! He understood what the wise old man wanted to teach him, that is, when we are struggling to success, we should never play tricks to cheat ourselves.

Part 7 精讲精练
01----野外遇蛇
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enough?” Pa walked to the end of the row of cottonwood seedlings. “No,” he said. “We have to plant trees all the way to that rock over there. We’ll need about twenty more seedlings.”
“I’ll get the seedlings.” offered Rebecca. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the cotton field. “You’d better let me go, Miss Petticoats,” teased her twin brother, William. “There are dangers all over this prairie(牧场/草原）“You may both go,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like to finish before sundown.”
They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew. Gently, they pulled the seedlings from the sand. “There! That’s twenty, with a few to spare.” said Rebecca. “OK，” said William. He led the way to the riverbank, then stopped.
“Look! There’s the dugout(防空壕）we lived in when we moved here last year.” He pointed to a hole in the grassy river bank. “Come on, let’s go inside.” “No，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling what’s in there.” “Then you start back.” said William, handing the seedlings to Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran to the dugout and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings into her long apron(围裙）and began to walk. Suddenly she froze in her tracks. A huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）moved along the river bank. It stopped right in front of the dugout and lay still, coiled up on the warm sunny bank. “William!” Rebecca shouted. “Don’t come out!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout. Rebecca pointed toward the rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway. He turned desperate eyes toward Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there more snakes waiting in the shadowy corners of the dugout?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea popped into her head. It was their only hope. It was risky, but it was the only hope. “Don’t move,” she said to William in a soft voice. “When r say NOW, you run out of there as fast as you can.” Rebecca removed the skirt-like petticoat(衬裙）from beneath her dress, then dipped it into the river. She squeezed out some of the water, then climbed to the top of the bank, directly above the dugout’s opening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1:“Get ready to run, William,” she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake.
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Paragraph 2: Are you OK? he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(她渴望在浅水中凉快一下) running through the cotton field.
2. ______________________________(他们穿过那条浅河) to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew.
3. Suddenly ______________________________(她在路上僵住了).
4. “Huh?” ______________________________(威廉姆斯的脸出现在一扇小窗户前) beside the door of the dugout.
5. ______________________________(威廉脸色苍白) when he saw the snake blocking the doorway.
6. ______________________________(丽贝卡的大脑飞速转动), trying to think of a way to get William out of there. ______________________________(她突然想到一个主意).
7. ______________________________(迅速地), she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake.
8. It took them five minutes to _____________________________(找到呼吸，让自己冷静下来).

参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
“Get ready to run, William, ”she said, keeping an eye on the motionless snake. Rebecca opened the dripping petticoat（wet through with water）as much as she could. Her hands shook as she leaned over the bank. With one swift movement, she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake. “NOW！” she shouted to William as the snake began to move under the petticoat. William jumped over the covered snake and ran fast before he stopped and turned around. Rebecca was right behind him.
Paragraph 2:
“Are you OK？” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca nodded. She was glad they managed to escape. It took them five minutes to catch their breath and calm themselves down. Rebecca checked to make sure that the seedlings were still complete. Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have done the same for you back there.” Rebecca said with a grin. “You couldn’t have, for you don’t wear petticoats！” Laughing, they raced back to the woods.

【写作特训答案】
1. She longed to cool her feet in the shallow river running through the cotton field.
2. They went across the shallow river to a sandbar where small cottonwood seedlings grew.
3. Suddenly she froze in her tracks.
4. “Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny window beside the door of the dugout.
5. William's face paled when he saw the snake blocking the doorway.
6. Rebecca’s mind raced, trying to think of a way to get William out of there. An idea popped into her head.
7. With one swift movement, she dropped the heavy garment on top of the rattlesnake.
8. It took them five minutes to catch their breath and calm themselves down.


02 ---洞穴探险
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s Vancouver Island.
It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep, Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason, Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins.
Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger！
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(他们的路被前照灯照亮了) , they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks.
2. ______________________________(沉默被打破了) a drip-drip-drip from above.
3. Four streams met here, and indeed, ______________________________(水流得更快了).
4. ______________________________(当他们最终接近Crawl的顶端时), there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe.
5. The water kept rising, and ______________________________(没有营救的希望).
6. They dozed off and then ______________________________(猛然醒来).
7. Over the next 90 minutes, ______________________________(他们朝入口走去), at times in chest-high water.
8. _____________________________(杰森的情绪控制了他) and tears trickled down his cheeks.

参考范文：
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The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the ­water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.

【写作特训答案】
1. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks.
2. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above.
3. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly.
4. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe.
5. The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
6. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake.
7. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water.
8. Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.









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