专题9.4 人教（GO FOR IT)七年级英语上册My favorite subject is science Writing知识点+练习题学案

【话题分析】本单元写作要求同学们能谈论学校功课安排，能表达个人对其爱好与否并说明理由。

1. 能准确运用类似at 8：30，from 10：00 to 10：45，on Monday，on Friday afternoon等短语来表述时间；

2. 能结合语境准确使用because，but，and，then，after that等连接词。

【典例】假如你是周娟，请根据下面表格中的内容写一封电子邮件，把你星期五的活动情况告诉你的好朋友Cindy。

要求：1. 语句通顺、条理清楚；

2. 70词左右(不含所给单词)。

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【佳作展示】

Dear Cindy,

I’m busy on Friday. At 8：00 I have Chinese. It’s my favorite subject. Then I have math from 9：00 to 9：50. It’s very difficult. After that I have English. It is fun. The last lesson in the morning is art. Lunch is from 12：00 to 1：00. I have music from 1：00 to 1：50. It’s relaxing. And then I have geography. It’s easy. After school, I play basketball with my classmates.

How about you? What’s your favorite subject?

A

假设你是Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的初中生活。

注意：1. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Tom.

Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I’d like to tell you about my school life. ___________________________________________________________________________________

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Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours,

Mike

B

假如你叫王莉，13岁。请用英语写一篇介绍自己相关情况的书面材料。

内容要点如下：1. 擅长于数学和英语，乐于帮助同学。

2. 喜欢听音乐，打篮球；

3. 喜欢吃健康食品（如：水果、蔬菜、鱼和牛奶）；对身体有好处。

4. 喜欢和同学去购物中心买东西；

5. 喜欢牛仔裤和运动鞋，因为轻便舒适。

注意：1. 词数70左右，书面材料的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

My name is Wang Li. ____________________________________________________________________

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C

假设您的名字是李华,给你新认识的朋友Jim发个e-mail ,介绍您自己的基本情况（年龄，学习的班级，爱好，家庭情况等可适当发挥）

要求：1 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

2 词数不少于60词。

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D

假设你是Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的初中生活。

注意：1. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Tom.

Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I’d like to tell you about my school life. ___________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours,

Mike

A

Dear Tom.

Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I’d like to tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students.

From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. Every week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it is interesting. I have healthy lunch and I seldom eat snacks.

In my free time, I enjoy listening to music. I’m good at playing basketball. At weekends, I sometimes play computer games.

I think my school life is very interesting and colorful!

Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours,

Mike

B

My name is Wang Li and I’m 13 years old. I am good at Maths and English. I like to help my classmates. I jeans and trainers because they are light and comfortable.

【名师点评】

这篇作文要求我们以王莉的身份介绍自己的一些基本情况，如年龄、爱好、饮食习惯、穿着等。题目中给我们列出了需要表达的内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来，当然还需要使整篇短文的意思连贯，这就需要我们写作的时候使用一些连词，和我们平时积累的好的句型和句式，让短文不那么平庸。例如表达喜欢做某事时，我们可以使用like doing sth.，为了避免老是重复使用这一个词，我们可以考虑使用它的同义词如enjoy或love。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们需要使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述，避免出现语法错误，使表达合乎英语的规范。

【写作亮点】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中给我们介绍了王莉的一些基本情况，内容全面，没有遗漏要点。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语句符合英语的表达规范。另外，短文中使用了一些好的句型和句式，如I am good at Maths and English中短语be good at；还有一些表示喜欢做某事的句型如I like to help my classmates、I enjoy listening to music and playing basketball、like having healthy food、I love wearing jeans and trainers等。短文中还用到了一些连词，如并列连词and，从属连词because等。这使得整篇短文的意思非常连贯，表达更加流畅。学*科++网

C

Dear Jim,

I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a student. I am thirteen years old. I am in Class One,

Please write soon.

All the best!

Yours,

Lihua

【名师点评】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【写作亮点】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I would like to tell you something about myself.等，I think等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

D

Dear Tom,

Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I’d like to tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students.

From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. Every week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it

I think my school life is very interesting and colorful!

Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours,

Mike

【名师点评】

这是一篇提纲作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态和时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

文章主要写初中的生活，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多短语，让文章更加出彩，如there are，From Monday to Friday，have five English lessons , like English best，In my free time，enjoy listening to music等。在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活运用。